Kimagure Orange Road "The Panic Kid!" Volume 5, Story 6 WB Volume 3, Story 8 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Albert Nakano (proofed by Hitoshi Doi) Additional translation by : Craig H. Nishida Compilation by : Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Jerry Lee Matthew Klippenstein Jordan Lampe Last revision : 02-07-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 159 (115) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 159 (115)--TITLE PAGE [Head-and-shoulders shot of a bare-shouldered Madoka, who reclines on her side on sheets.] MAIN TITLE (at top) The Panic Kid! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) Her Skin--Like Sad, Dark Glass--Shines with a Slight Fever of Love. Sorry. I'd Like to Be Mysterious Now... --------------------------------------------------- p 160 (116) 1 [Kyousuke enters an exhibition hall, flanked by his pretty girlfriends.] narration: Dad's photography exhibit opens today. 2 [Their pov of Takashi, who smiles at them.] narration: Ayukawa and Hikaru-chan were invited because they modeled for him. 3 Takashi: [in suit and tie] Hi, I'm glad you came. 4 Hikaru: [ecstatically] Otoosama!! Hikaru FX: 5 Hikaru: It's a pleasure to see you again. Thank you very much for the invitation. Takashi: [embarrassed] U-uh... Likewise. --------------------------------------------------- p 161 (117) 1 [Hikaru fixes his tie, and a crowd gathers in the background.] Hikaru: Oh, otoosama. Your necktie... Takashi: [sweating] Th-thank you. woman: Did you hear her say, "otoosama"? man 1: I thought I heard his son was still in junior high... crowd FX: 2 man 2: [beaming] Sensei, this too must give you peace of mind. At this rate, you'll be able to enjoy the faces of your grandchildren. Kyousuke: EH?! 3 Kyousuke: [enraged] Th-that's not it...! man 2: [patting Takashi on the back] Yahhh... Ha ha ha. Hikaru: [tickled] Eh-heh! 4 Kyousuke FX: 5 [His pov of Madoka, who stands alone, studying a large portrait of herself.] 6 Kyousuke: [smiling] Ah, this picture is... 7 Madoka: [miffed] I can recognize my own picture! 8 [She marches off.] Madoka primness FX: narration: Looks like it's a little impossible for all three of us to do something together... --------------------------------------------------- p 162 (118) 1 [Isolated shot of two landscape/country portraits hanging on the wall.] Takashi: [off] By the way, Kyousuke, your aunt also came by a little while ago. 2 Takashi: The cousin that we took care of last time... 3 [Kazuya comes up behind Madoka and grabs her on the waist.] Kazuya: BOO! Madoka: KYA! 4 Kazuya: [smiling] Oneechan. 5 [She recognizes the dear little boy.] Madoka: Oh! 6 Takashi: [to Kyousuke] He seems to have taken a fancy to you and says he wants to play with all of you again, so we've taken charge of him... 7 Takashi: [patting Kyousuke's shoulder] Well, he's all yours... Takashi hand FX: Kyousuke: [bug-eyed] Wha?! --------------------------------------------------- p 163 (119) 1 [Kazuya, smiling, races across the room to Kyousuke.] Kazuya: Kyousuke-niichaaan. 2 Kyousuke: [gripping his forehead] (My head hurts...) [Hikaru watches the approaching Kazuya with eyes wide...] 3 [...and her jaw drops.] 4 [Tears well in her eyes.] Hikaru tears FX: Kyousuke: ? 5 Hikaru: [turning her back on Kyousuke] I-it can't be...! A-although I had faith in you, Sempai... 6 Hikaru: ...y-you had a child like this! Hikaru FX: 7 Kyousuke: [horrified] AAAA! --------------------------------------------------- p 164 (120) 1 Hikaru: [off] Ohhhh!! 2 Hikaru: [embarrassed] So he's your cousin. The two of you look so much alike that... I thought he was your son... Kyousuke: Y-you dummy. 3 Hikaru: But... You really do look alike... 4 [She clasps Kazuya by his arms.] Hikaru: You're like Sempai! Cute! 5 [Kazuya gives her a hug.] Kazuya: Oneechan, you're cute too, so I like you! [Kyousuke watches with eyes wide.] narration: In the end, to say that they're both cute, is entirely... 6 narration: ...like me. I can't stand myself! 7 [Kazuya looks back-and-forth between Madoka and Hikaru.] --------------------------------------------------- p 165 (121) 1 Kazuya: Hey, hey, oniichan. Which one's your girlfriend? Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 2 [Madoka portrait--wide-eyed.] 3 Kyousuke: [aghast] Wha? 4 [Hikaru portrait--mild surprise.] 5 Hikaru: [blushing] Oh no! That's so embarrassing! Kyousuke: [patting Kazuya on the head] O-oh yeah. Aren't you hungry? How would you like it if oniichan got you something good to eat? 6 [Exterior shot of a coffee shop.] --------------------------------------------------- p 166 (122) 1 [Isolated shot of an empty table.] 2 [View of the four seated at a table. Kyousuke and Hikaru face Madoka and Kazuya. Kazuya works on a plate of noodles as the rest sip at their drinks.] Madoka: Taste good? 3 Kazuya: [to Madoka & Kyousuke] Oneechan, oniichan. Thanks for playing with me last time! 4 Kazuya: You two are awfully good friends, aren't you? [Madoka, drinking through a straw, turns a bright red... Well, if this were a color manga, that is... Kyousuke sweats and stares.] Kyousuke/Madoka heartbeat FX: 5 [Hikaru looks at Kazuya in apparent shock, eyes wide.] 6 [Madoka portrait--she looks over at Hikaru, eyes wide.] 7 [Kyousuke portrait--he sits frozen with eyes wide.] 8 Hikaru: [looking a bit unhappy] Wha... --------------------------------------------------- p 167 (123) 1 Hikaru: [smiling] Whaaat? Say what? The speaker next to my seat's noisy! [Both Madoka and Kyousuke look relieved.] Kyousuke: Whew! speaker FX: 2 FX: [off] 3 [Kazuya has spilled his drink on his shirt.] Kazuya: Oh, I spilled... 4 Madoka: [rising] I-I'll wash it for you! Come with me! 5 [Madoka tows him away, and as he passes, Kazuya gives Kyousuke a wink.] 6 [Kyousuke's pov of Madoka and Kazuya.] 7 Hikaru: [looking pensive and melancholy] How nice... --------------------------------------------------- p 168 (124) 1 Hikaru: I'm an only child, so... I bet it'd be fun to have a brother about that age... 2 Hikaru: [looking at Kyousuke] You and Madoka-san have sisters... Kyousuke: Hikaru-chan... 3 [Her pov of a surprised Kyousuke.] Hikaru: [off] To tell you the truth, I get lonely easily. Maybe the reason I'm so unusually cheerful is because I'm turning my loneliness inside-out. 4 [His pov of Hikaru, who looks straight ahead, slightly sad.] narration: Hikaru-chan, how sweet... 5 [Isolated shot of his hand as he reaches out to take hers.] 6 [Hikaru breaks out of her reverie to look at him in surprise.] Kyousuke: I... narration: I'm here! --------------------------------------------------- p 169 (125) 1 Kazuya: [off] We're back! [Kyousuke uses his free hand to pull back the betraying one. Hikaru blushes and smiles with emotion.] Kyousuke FX: Hikaru FX: 2 [Madoka and Kazuya stand there looking in puzzlement.] Madoka: ? Kyousuke: [off] Th-that was quick. 3 [At a train station, Kazuya, Hikaru and Kyousuke prepare to enter a train. Madoka trails behind, standing and looking distracted.] 4 [Kazuya pulls Hikaru aboard.] Kazuya: Oneechan, hurry, hurry! 5 [Kazuya uses the Power.] 6 [The doors close, leaving Kyousuke and Madoka on the platform. Madoka has gotten the elbow of her blouse caught on the edge of a post-mounted ashbin.] Madoka: ! door FX: Madoka blouse FX: sign on post: Put cigarette ashes in the wastecan. --------------------------------------------------- p 170 (126) 1 Madoka: [tugging at her sleeve] Wait a sec! Kyousuke: [looking at the departing train] Oh! train FX: 2 [Kyousuke's pov of Kazuya at the window.] Kazuya FX: 3 Kyousuke: Huh? 4 narration: I have a feeling he winked last time, too... train FX: train sign: Express Train 02A narration: Is he trying to tell me something? 5 [Having boarded the next train, Kyousuke and Madoka find themselves squished together by the press of the crowd.] sign: Beware of Door!! headband: White Tiger --------------------------------------------------- p 171 (127) 1 train FX: [Madoka lurches into Kyousuke.] 2 [She clings close to him. Both blush.] 3 [Isolated shot of their closely pressed torsos.] Kyousuke/Madoka FX: narration: It's warm... And soft... 4 [Closeup of Kyousuke's face.] crows-in-background FX: narration: ...and it's driving me crazy! heartbeat FX: 5 [Behind Madoka, a guy presses his back up against her back. He sorta leers at her over his shoulder.] Madoka/guy FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 172 (128) 1 [Kyousuke hugs her tightly, taking Madoka by surprise.] Kyousuke/Madoka FX: 2 Madoka heartbeat FX: 3 [He turns, placing her back against the closed door, and shielding her from the others with his body.] narration: I don't want to let any other guy touch her! [A woman looks at him in annoyance and Kyousuke looks back in apology.] Kyousuke: Ah, excuse me! Madoka FX: 4 [Isolated shot of Madoka as she smiles.] 5 [He places his hands against the door, and stares into her eyes.] Madoka: You're forceful... narration: I want her in my arms only! --------------------------------------------------- p 173 (129) 1 Madoka: Well, where shall we get off? 2 narration: I want to stay like this forever! 3 [Exterior night shot of a rail crossing.] narration: Somehow, I don't feel like getting off... 4 [Night shot of a train as it goes by.] narration: I know. Maybe we should go somewhere, just the two of us. 5 Kyousuke: Say, let's... 6 Kyousuke: ...go... --------------------------------------------------- p 174 (130) 1 [The door opens next to the entranced pair and Hikaru stands there, looking in.] door opening FX: 2 [Kyousuke leaps back. Madoka blushes and studies an intriguing spot on the train's ceiling.] Kyousuke FX: Hikaru: [finally seeing Kyousuke] Sempai! 3 Hikaru: Great! Kazuya-kun told me we should wait at the next station! Kyousuke: [forced smile] W-well, that's good! 4 [Kyousuke glares at Kazuya.] Kazuya FX: 5 Kyousuke: (Always interfering at a good moment... Does he have a grudge against me?) Kazuya: [indignant] Nothing like that! 6 [Realizing that Kazuya just replied to a thought of his, Kyousuke flashes with insight.] Kyousuke: ! 7 [His pov of an innocent-looking Kazuya.] narration: M-maybe he... I get it! That time at the park with Ayukawa, and today... It's all his doing... --------------------------------------------------- p 175 (131) 1 [On the street...] Kazuya: Thank you very much, oneechans! 2 [Hikaru pats Kazuya on the head and Kazuya smiles with joy.] Kazuya: Kyousuke-niichan's unreliable, but since he's a nice oniichan, please be friends with him. Hikaru: Wow, you really are Sempai's cousin! [Kyousuke winces.] 3 Kazuya: But, oneechans... 4 Kazuya: ...is it really okay like this? [All three freeze with surprise.] billboard: [only extreme left side showing] West... ... Delicious! --------------------------------------------------- p 176 (132) 1 Hikaru: [perplexed] What? "Like this?" 2 [Kyousuke portrait--he flashes with shock.] 3 [Madoka portrait--Kazuya has hit a chord.] 4 Kyousuke: [racing off, Kazuya in tow] I-it's nothing! G'bye! Kyousuke FX: narration: What's he talking about all of a sudden?! 5 [Madoka stands unsmiling, deep in thought.] 6 Madoka: Is it okay like this...? Hmm... [Hikaru looks at Madoka's back, uncomprehendingly.] --------------------------------------------------- p 177 (133) 1 Hikaru: [beaming] What are you saying? Of course it's not okay like this! Let's go and play somewhere! 2 [Her pov of Madoka's back. Madoka stands silent.] 3 Madoka: [still with back to Hikaru] Hikaru... Hikaru FX: 4 Hikaru: [brightly] Yes? 5 Madoka: [turning, with a smile] Then you're paying today! 6 [They walk off down the sidewalk, toward the bright city lights.] Madoka: You started it! Hikaru: No problem! --------------------------------------------------- p 178 (134) 1 [Meanwhile Kazuya and Kyousuke walk home. Kyousuke is steamed.] Kyousuke: You're a telepath! How dare you read people's feelings! 2 Kazuya: [exploding] Oniichan, it's because you can't decide! 3 Kyousuke: [taken aback] Wha? 4 Kazuya: [smiling] But... I understand now! Your true feelings... 5 Kazuya: I made all those opportunities so that you could clearly show your feelings for those two... Kyousuke: ! 6 Kazuya: [clenching his teeth] ...but it was useless! You lech! Kyousuke pratfall FX: 7 Kazuya: [pointing] You're a guy, aren't you?! You indecisive person! Kyousuke: [sweating] B-but... --------------------------------------------------- p 179 (135) 1 Kazuya: [confronting him] But, niichan... 2 [Panels 2-4 show, from right-to-left, Hikaru, Kyousuke and Madoka, each in their own panel, and each as they stand at that moment. Of the three, only Hikaru is smiling.] narration: ...is it really... 3 narration: ...okay like this? ---------------------------------------------------