Kodomo no Omocha, Child's Toy Volume 7, Chapter 1 Written and Illustrated by Miho Obana Ribon Mascot Comics/Shueisha/Angel Comics (Chinese Version) Translation of Chinese version of Kodomo no Omocha: ISBN #: 957-25-3374-6. Translation and editing by: Albert Ng Additional editing by: Jocelyn Chen Note: Translation is done with the meaning behind the actual literal words. []denotes either a thought or much lower voice/whisper. <>includes description. XYZ represent names that we couldn't translate. ()editorial comments Last Revision: September 9, 2000. Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: albert_k_ng@yahoo.com skyeblu@iname.com http://www.geocities.com/zenskye.geo/anime/kodocha.html ------------------------------------------------------------ p3 [1] Preview: Hayama & Sana in Hallway Hayama: Please...tell me the truth... Sana: ... [2] S: ...so... [3] S: Hayama...you tell the truth too! [4] S: You said you liked me, is that true? H: ... ------------------------------------------------------------ Child's Toy, Volume 7 p.7 [1] S: Naozumi said...maybe you liked me all along...He did say this... [2] H: Naozumi...this guy...What is he doing...[yesterday on television too...] [3] S: We're...friends...'though we have cut off our ties...When we were out shooting...he said he liked me...but...I...turned him down... ------------------------------------------------------------ p.8 [1] S: Because...I...I like you... [2] Close up of Hayama's face. [3] Close up of Sana's face. [4] H: ... S: [5] H: ... S: [6] H: You...take that out! [7] S: Huh? Which? H: That thing that you whip out so suddenly all the time... S: Hey... ------------------------------------------------------------ p.9 [1] S: Ah...this one? H: Give it to me! [2] H: Yikes... [3] S: Ahhhhhh!!! [4] S: You...just...used your whole strength... H: You... [5] H: You...like me? Who're you kidding? S: Huh? H: I said stop kidding around! [6] S: You...why are you so mad? I'm telling the truth... H: Why are you saying this now? S: Be...because...I just realized this when we were out shooting... H: Ahhhhhh...You... ------------------------------------------------------------ p.10 [1] H: You're so...so retarded...It's all your fault...not seeing my feelings... [2] S: How would I know your feelings!? H: That's why I called you retarded! [3] H: I've always...liked you... [4] H: You... S: [5] H: never...saw it... [6] Sana's eye wide open [7] S: You...really...me...? H: ... -------------------------------------------------------------- p.11 [1] S: Well... [2] S: Why didn't you tell me!? [what is happening?] H: I couldn't say it! S: But...but you just said it? H: Oh! It slipped out of my mouth! [this is embarrassing] [3] S: If you didn't say it, how would I know? H: Everybody...everybody knew! [except you, but everyone else knew] S: Oh...okay, so I'm not a person now! H: Yeah! That's right, you're a freak! S: Hmm...Alright, so I'm a tofu-brained stupid woman now! H: I didn't say that! [4] S: ... H: ... [5] Sana's profile staring at Hayama, . [6] Hayama's profile staring at Sana, . -------------------------------------------------------------- p.12 [1] S: Goodbye... H: Hey! [2] H: Wait! I... S: I didn't finish yet. [3] S: Hayama...Your "I liked you" is in the past tense...And now...Fuka is the one you like, right? [4] H: ... [5] Sudden noise heard nearby H: Ahh... S: Ahh... [6] Nurse: What are you guys doing? Nurse: You are noisy! What are you fighting over? If you have so much energy, get back to the classroom! [7] Nurse: Okay! On the double! [8] Nurse: Hey, girl over there, you should go back too! S: [what girl over there?] -------------------------------------------------------------- p.13 [1] S: Nurse: Hey you two...The nurse's station is not the place to hang out when you're cutting class! You know that? [2] Profile of Fuka standing around the corner with her back to the wall. [3] S: Fu..Fuka... [4] Fuka: You hurt your finger...I was wondering why it took so long...so...I came to check on you...to see what's wrong... [5] S: Ahh... [6] F: S: Fuka!! -------------------------------------------------------------- p.14 [1] S: Wait! [Fuka, she, she...Hayama already has Fuka...] [2] S: [I should have never said it!] [3] S: [I should have never said it!] Fuka! [4] S: I'm so sorry...Please don't mind what I said... F: Not mind? How can I not mind? He...actually likes you! [5] S: Fuka...[she heard everything...] F: Didn't you...didn't you not want him at all...Why now... [6] S: I'm so sorry...I...It doesn't matter to me anymore! F: What!? S: Because...Hayama...is in my past... H: ------------------------------------------------------------- p.15 [1] S: That's right, I...He and I...are "in the past"! [2] H: S: When I was shooting on the mountain... [I realized I still liked him...] I thought my feelings for him were dead, but they weren't! [they came back fast!?] But...but all this is in the past! [3] S: When I was on the mountain top, I was burning up... [Yeah...that's it...Why did I say it? I'm so dumb!] [4] S: So...please forgive me! I'm so sorry... F: That's impossible...Even if I don't mind...Hayama... [5] F: ... H: Fuka... S: ... ----------------------------------------------------------- p.16 [1] Hayama sneezes into his hand. [2] F: Why are you sneezing!? [He sneezes like an old man] S: H: Well, I had to sneeze, I had no choice! [3] Bell tolls overhead, everyone is distracted. [4] F: I...I won't let you go! [5] F: S: Fu...! [6] Sana and Hayama face in different directions looking guilty. -------------------------------------------------------------- p.17 [1] Hayama's Profile [2] Shot of Hayama's back walking away from Sana in the midst of bell tolls. [3] Side shot of Hayama walking away from Sana who is up against a pole facing us. [4] S: [My head hurts...I can't last much longer...] [5] S: [I...I...can't go on...] ------------------------------------------------------------- p.18 [1] S: Rei... R: Yeah? S: Lately...did any jobs turn up? [2] S: I've been saying no, maybe there aren't any more... R: There are! There are! After the movie shoot was over, there were many people knocking on your door... [3] R: But, you said you didn't want to be too swamped... S: If any job came up can you tell me. R: Really? [4] R: First let's go over the ads...Ponds had a youth foundation cream...[they don't have many candidates so they really want you a lot]. And the series on the FJN network. [this is not bad too, it comes on Monday nights at 9pm.] And many variety shows have invited you...and hosting shows on the radio...and more on the movies side...and other hosting jobs, many... S: Oh...[wonderful!] R: Yeah...there are many decent jobs...yeah...[since you've been refusing them, we've just been talking right now...] ------------------------------------------------------ p.19 [1] S: I...will take them all!! R: Yeah! All of them... [2] R: What!? [3] S: [I...can't face those two...I want to leave them behind...if I concentrate on work, I guess I can forget them!] [4] S: [When I...decided I'm going to work...Rei naively became so ecstatic...and Mama would say, "It's up to you! But if you say yes, don't quit in the middle!" ] [5] S: I feel very slimy...but, this is all I can do now... ------------------------------------------------------------- p.20 [1] S: [The next day...Rei and I discussed a lot of things...I decided to leave komawari, and join a bigger acting agency, XYZ Agency, and Rei is also joining it. ] Head of Agency: Haha! Sana, you're finally here. I'm glad you've joined us. S: [In the past, they've contacted me a lot, so I signed the contract really quickly.] [2] Head: You've got talent and you're popular...All of us welcome you here. From now on, I think you'll be really swamped for awhile, do your best! S: Yes. [3] Classmate: Sana Kurata and her mom are in the principal's office...I see her on t.v. once in awhile. Classmates: Wow! [4] Naru: This is great! Hahaha! Teacher: [Sana's mother's got face...](meaning I think that she has power to get principal's audience) Mama: Yeah! Hahaha! Naru: Sana, do you want some buns? S: Thank you. [5] Tsuyoshi: Sana, what did you and the principal talk about? S: Yeah! Just now? [6] S: From this point on...I'll rarely come to school, so...I...discussed this with the principal, we agreed that even if my class hours are not enough, as long as I passed the test then it's okay...I will hire private tutors before my exams. [7] T: But... ------------------------------------------------------------ p.21 [1] Close up of Hayama with his hand on his chin. [2] Aya: Sana she... [3] Profile of Fuka with sweatdrop. [4] R: Ponds decided to give you their ad. And FJN show is also yours...This is wonderful! This is a lot of work! [5] Naozumi's manager: Naozumi, I heard Sana is joining Agency XYZ! Is she formally beginning her acting career!? ------------------------------------------------------------ P.22 [1] [He joined a variety show.] Naozumi is dressed in a funny looking dog costume. Naozumi: Eh? Really!? N's manager: Ha! [Seeing him makes me laugh...] [2] N: [Why suddenly...did something happen to her in school? Did something happen?] [3] N: [Let me call her and see...] [4] N: No, we've cut off our relationship! [sigh] N's manager: You shouldn't...aggravate yourself over a girl who turned you down! [I told you so...] [5] N: ... Announcement: Naozumi Kamura, "Trumpeting Little Q" is up next, please get ready. [6] N: You're right. [I'll deal with it later.] I look like a moron. [I got to go] N's agent: [Naozumi is growing up...he's got to go] p.23 [1] School bell tolls. [2] F: Afterwards...Sana...never came anymore... H: ... [3] F: [He's been avoiding this topic...] Is it...because of me? [Yes, of course...] [4] H: It's her own decision, it's got nothing to do with you...don't worry about it. [5] F: You...can let it not bother you? Can you...? [6] H: Yeah... F: ... [7] F: If you can...then I can too. H: OK ---------------------------------------------------------------------- p.24 [1] F: I'm begging you. [2] F: Be a little more energetic. H: ... F: [And you consider yourself a young person?] Come to the gym to practice backward flips. H: Whatever... [3] F: Want to come to my house? [Don't worry...] I'm not introducing you to my parents! [They're not home anyway.] H: ... F: Ok, you can eat this now! After you eat, you'll have energy! Ooh, this is hot, even though...it is still summer. [4] F: I want to get a dog...but most buildings don't let you have dogs...so I call it "Dog-dog". It is a parrot! It knows how to talk a lot! Parrot: Woof! Woof! Dog dog! I am Dog dog! Woof! What? What? H: Hey! F: What's so funny? [5] F: Dig up some energy... [6] End of flashback. School bell tolls as Hayama looks off pensively. ----------------------------------------------------------- p.25 [1] Hayama is walking home and sees someone . [2] Sana is standing in front of his gate looking at him approaching . [3] S: You're done with karate practice. [4] S: Do your best! [5] H: ... S: [Well...] I'm sorry...I said some strange things last time...[I didn't think about your feelings...] ----------------------------------------------------------------------- p.26 [1] S: I think...for now we shouldn't see each other...I came to say goodbye... [2] S: From now on...I'll focus on my acting career...[then] maybe I will meet new people... [3] S: I...then...[umm...] will find a good boyfriend ASAP. Ha! It's...because you...you are in my past... [4] H: ...In the past... [5] S: Yes...[in the past...] [6] S: So...please forget about this...and also...please tell Fuka...tell her I'm sorry... [7] Shot of Hayama - his back to us - facing Sana who is half turned from him not looking at him. [8] H: I... -------------------------------------------------------------------------- p.27 [1] H: I still...can't...hurt Fuka... [2] S: Yes...Of course! [3] S: Goodbye. And...take care now! [4] Profile of Hayama looking at Sana [5] View of Hayama's hands grabbing Sana by the shoulders - her back is to us. [6] Side shot of Hayama hugging Sana. ---------------------------------------------------------------- p.28 [1] Close up of Hayama hugging Sana, he's facing us, eyes closed. [2] Close up of Hayama hugging Sana, she's facing us, eyes closed. [3] S: Hayama... [4] Close up side shot of Sana's face on Hayama's chest, eyes opened. [5] Side shot of just Sana's arms pushing Hayama away from her, his arms are still around her. [6] S: ...Bye bye! [7] Medium shot of Hayama looking at Sana (you only see the top of her head) walk away. ----------------------------------------------------------------- p.29 [1] Hayama's point of view (POV) of Sana running away (her back is to him) [2] Close up of Hayama's face. [3] Hayama turns to go into his house. [4] Close up side shot of Sana with tears falling from her open eyes. [5] Close up side shot of Sana'a head lowered, eyes now closed, tears falling. [6] Side shot of Sana lifting her head, eyes opened, looking determined. [7] Medium shot of Sana walking away, her back is to us. [8] Camera clicking sound. Partial photo of Sana's face with make-up. ------------------------------------------------------------- p.30 [1] Camera sounds. Medium shot of Rei smiling. [2] R: [Because of Agency XYZ...Sana is booked solid. TV series, commercials, broadcasts, movies, variety shows...] [3] Magazine article talking about Sana's whereabouts and her talents. [4] Press release - Sana endorses new product: Pond's youth foundation cream. [5] Press conference - FJN network series. Mondays 9pm " Song Composer" [6] R: [This is no longer a "child actor's" or a "teen idol's" schedule...] Interviewer: You look younger lately. And a lot cleaner too. S: Ah! Was I dirty before? Ah! I've also started using XYZ product! [7] Press release - Sana's feature film "Water Palace" to be released. Premiere already sold out! [8] R: [Sana joined a variety show!] S: I do...everything. [9] R: [This is a schedule for an "A-list" actor.] -------------------------------------------------------------- p.31 [1] View of treetops and sky. [2] Classroom sign stating "1-1" [3] Sengoku-Sensei: This guy sleeps a lot... [4] Sengoku-Sensei: And he grows so fast...lately he's gotten taller and stronger... H: Classmate: [Hayama!] [5] Sengoku-Sensei rolled up a book. [6] T: [Argh! Did you have to hit him so hard...] [7] Close up side shot of Hayama looking up at Sengoku-Sensei . --------------------------------------------------------------- p.32 [1] Sengoku-Sensei: You...still want to be in class? H: ...not at all. [2] Sengoku-Sensei: ...then get out. [3] Close up of Hayama's eye. [4] Side shot of Hayama slamming the desk with the Sengoku-Sensei looking on. [5] T: Akito, say sorry quick! Sengoku-Sensei: ... [6] Yunchi: Hayama's like that, but his grades are very good...if I was like that I'd be finished. Haha! Classmate: If you were like that then it would be hopeless for you. Aya: [Hayama's still acting like that] Sengoku-Sensei: Be quiet, let's continue! p.33 [1] T: Akito, you can't act like you did today! [2] H: [But...] That bastard has me lined up in his sight...[pisses me off!] F: What? He did it again in class...He can't help it. T: That's because your attitude sucks! But Sengoku-Sensei has a dark side. [3] Aya: Hey hey!? AhAhAhAh!? Look over there! [That billboard] [4] Close up of Sana on a billboard endorsing her new product line. ------------------------------------------------------------- p.34 [1] Close up of both Sana's face on the billboard and Hayama's face looking at it. [2] Aya: It's Sana! It's huge... T: Ah...it's beautiful! Is Sana that beautiful? [3] H: It's the make up and good photography! Aya: Don't say that! [That's just Hayama!] T: But...sometimes entertainers become prettier all of a sudden...[maybe since we've looked at her awhile] [4] Aya: Sana's on a roll! [She's on tv all the time] I feel like she's very distant from us. T: She still comes to school once in awhile? Fuka? F: Ah... --------------------------------------------------------------- p.35 [1] F: Yeah...but...once in awhile and always late...probably only here for 2-3 hours before leaving...don't get to talk to her. [2] T: Oh really? So she would even have less time to see us. [Our classes are further apart.] H: Tsuyoshi... [3] T: Yeah? [4] H: Forget about her! [5] Aya: Why? [What do you mean...] [6] H: ... Aya: Very strange, something must have happened...lately those two have been acting strangely...[like they have been fighting...] T: ... ----------------------------------------------------------- p.36 [1] T: [Before...Akito's eyes...scared me...] [2] T: [Like how they were when we were kids...] [3] T: [That can't be!] Aya: I'm really worried! Tsuyoshi, find a chance to ask what's going on! [Yeah!] Find a chance... [4] F: I'm one day early...but...here's your birthday present... H: Oh! Tomorrow I ... [have to go to the cemetery] F: I know, I just heard. [So I'm giving it to you today] [5] H: What's this? F: It's an electronic toy. [I spent all my allowance on this - sighs] H: Yeah...thank you! [6] H: When ...is your birthday? F: Mine? December 24! [Christmas Eve.] [7] F: Ah! Why did you drop it!? -------------------------------------------------------------- p.37 [1] F: My birthday is on Christmas Eve. Is there something wrong? H: No...nothing... [2] S: If we can have a middle birthday party next year, it'll be great! [3] Close up of Hayama's face. [4] S: ...bye bye! [5] Close up of Hayama's eyes. --------------------------------- Chapter 2 p.39 [1] Girl1: Did you see "Song Composer" [Monday nights 9pm] Girl2: Yes! I did! Girl1: Sana was great! Girl2: Ah, she's only 12!? But she was acting as a 15 year old. Magazine: Min Min Magazine - Very popular actors - No. 2 (meaning Sana is ranked no.2 in popularity) - Sana - Unexpected, her popularity is going through the roof. [2] Girl1: Yeah, her acting is really good! Girl2: She was always good. [She's a dramatic actress.] But now she's even cuter. Wow, I'm going to buy "Sana"! It looks pretty good. R: Cashier: 500 yen. [3] R: Thanks for waiting. Sana, I just bought this, on the cover... [4] R: [After she finished all these jobs...Sana became really hot.] ------------------------------------------------------------------------ p.40 [1] Kids: Sana! [2] R: [Let's skip these people] Kids: Wow! Sana! She's really skinny! She's really cute!! [3] R: [Aside from her acting ability...her appearance...sometimes she even fools me.] If we don't go to make up we won't make it on time. S: Ok. [4] R: Before you know it...she has grown...slender arms and legs...even though...she's not the beautiful type, but, she has very nice facial features. Besides, her natural attitude makes everyone very comfortable. That's why all the kids her age idolize her... S: Good morning everyone! [5] Director: Sana, you said the wrong line here! S: I feel that the line here should be like this! I think character XYZ would never say this! I don't want to say it! -------------------------------------------------------------------------- p.41 [1] Director: Just follow what's on the script. Don't be ridiculous... S: Don't treat me like a ridiculous little kid! [I wasn't kidding.] Please accept the opinion of your female actor. Crew: [oh this is starting again] Crew2: [Haha] Crew3: Director, why does it matter? Every time Sana ad libs it turns out good! [2] Director: Why don't you try it then...[oh brother] Alright, you win. S: I win! [3] Shot of Camera lens. [4] Shot of Sana and co-star acting. [5] S: What's next? R: Broadcast, broadcast! [6] R: Sana, you're really energetic and you don't sleep much... S: Right! Rei is really energetic too! R: I guess so... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- p.42 [1] R: Sometimes...when you're not working, you look out of it, I'm really worried... S: Oh... [2] S: When I said goodbye Hayama... [3] S: I did an "emotional switch"! [Like Mama, I changed my mood.] [4] S: When I...whenever something happens, a lot of people are worried, or they encourage me. Even when we are out shooting a film...Rei and Character XYZ support me...Mama even flew in...Nazoumi also...[our friendship is off now.] When I want to work, then I can throw myself into it...and there are lots of fans...I feel really blessed. [5] S: I am really blessed! Right? R: ... [6] R: Do you feel...like your arm is being twisted? [Is this a concern?] [7] S: Why? No one's twisting my arm! Whatever is in the past, I don't think about it! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- p.43 [1] R: What you call "in the past"...was only two months ago...[just two months ago...] S: Feels like just one second ago! [2] S: Yeah! It's in the past. [3] S: [I'm happier at work anyway, and I can lose myself in it. If I keep this up, I will forget him. If those two don't have me around, things will go smoother.] [4] S: [I'm sure I will forget him.] Good morning! Good morning everyone! [I will forget him.] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- p.44 [1] School bell tolls. [2] F: Good morning. H: Morning! [3] Kids: Good morning! [4] H: Today, I have to go back, got to go to karate practice. F: [Why are we talking about what we're doing later so soon!] Oh, you have to practice karate today? [5] H: Finals are coming up so...this is self training... F: Oh! Really? Do your best! [6] Inside the school through the window, Sengoku-Sensei sees Fuka and Hayama walking together outside. [7] Sengoku-Sensei: Hmph! --------------------------------------------------------------------------- p.45 [1] Sengoku-Sensei: Eh?... [2] Sengoku-Sensei: [Oh darn! Got to go to bathroom!] [3] Sengoku-Sensei: [Good, no one's here. Let me fix it quick...] [4] H: Got to go to bathroom. [Why don't you go first?] F: That's for teachers only... H: The bathroom doesn't care. F: You go first! [5] Close up of Hayama opening bathroom door. [6] Extreme close up of Hayama seeing something while opening the door. [7] Side shot of Sengoku-Sensei fixing his wig and combing it. ------------------------------------------------------------------ p.46 [1] H: [I'll go upstairs! Yeah, that's it!] [2] H: [Why do I come upon a strange moment for the teacher...if I had a camera, I would have taken a photo!] [3] H: [...but...I feel sorry for him! I won't mention it! I can still laugh alone though.] [4] Yunchi: Classmate Hayama, did you see this month's issue? [5] H: Yukihiro...you don't have to start with "Classmate"! [should have told him long ago]. T: Yeah, that sounds strange. Y: Uh, ... [6] Y: Uh...then... H: You can just call me Hayama! Y: Um...then...can I? H: Yeah! ----------------------------------------------------------------------- p.47 [1] Y: Then...this ... Hayama! Did you read this issue? [2] H: Now I'm mad... Y: Ah...see! I'm sorry! [3] H: I was just kidding! It's a joke! [This guy can't take a joke]. Y: Really? T: Yunchi, just call him Hayama! Komori: um... [4] K: The next class...is in the physics classroom [everyone's left...] Y: Oh, we have to change classrooms? H: This is a drag...I'm not going. T: No way! Sengoku-Sensei will yell at you again! Let's go! [5] T: Hurry! Hurry! H: Ah...I'm beat! I forgot to wear white clothes. Y: Our uniform is white but it doesn't matter! H: Really? ------------------------------------------------------------------------ p.48 [1] Sengoku-Sensei: [Remember!] Just follow this procedure in the experiment, then each group write your own report. And use alcohol carefully. Don't drink the red wine. [2] Aya: Is the flame high enough? [Ooh, it looks scary...] T: No problem. Akito, you track the temperature! [every minute] H: Huh? Me? T: Yeah. [3] H: Hmm...what's the use of tracking the temperature change? [what is it good for in life?] T: Akito, you shouldn't say that! [4] H: Out of all the sciences, I like biology better...[totally 2 different zones] Y: Yeah! I feel that way too. H: Sengoku-Sensei: [5] Sengoku-Sensei: Be serious! Don't drink the red wine! Y: Oh no, he heard us. H: [Ah, now my nose is drinking it.] ------------------------------------------------------------------- p.49 [1] Aya: He's getting yelled at! Y: How come this teacher likes to pick on you? [And he hits only you...what's going on?] H: Mind your own business! [2] T: Darn it...you two are a pain in the ass, why can't you get along! H: Don't be stupid... T: Did you write the temperature change down? H: Yeah, I did. [Nag]. [3] Y: Ah, Hayama! She's jogging! [Come look fast!] [4] Y: Your girlfriend's really cute. [5] Y: How are things going now? H: What things? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ p.50 [1] Y: You guys move so fast, you should have had one or two kisses by now. Aya: Stupid. T: Hahaha. [2] H: ...why don't I teach you? [3] Y: What!? About sex? H: Yeah, I'll whisper into your ear. [4] Y: Ouch! [5] H: Y: I'm sorry! [I won't ask anymore. Ow, this is painful, gonna break something]. [6] Sengoku-Sensei: What the hell are you doing!? ---------------------------------------------------------------------- p.51 [1] Sengoku-Sensei: Dammit...you guys are talking about sex! H: [What sex...Yunchi looks cute with a test tube in his ear!] Y: Hayama, you have a girlfriend, that makes you look great! [2] Kids: Hayama has a girlfiend! Really - the girl from Class 8 - wow! [3] Sengoku-Sensei: Showing off your girlfriend all over the place in school...your classmates will be jealous! [4] Shot of Tsuyoshi and other classmates looking at Sengoku-Sensei. [5] Close up of Hayama. -------------------------------------------------------------------- p.52 [1] H: Sengoku-Sensei, your wig is off center. [2] Kids: What? Wig!? Kid1: Wig...really? Kid2: What? Kid3: You moron! Shut up! Kid4: Yeah, the hair on his forehead never looked right... Kid5: Shhh! [3] Sengoku-Sensei: Sil...silence! Kid1: Really? Hayama... H: Yeah! I saw it. [4] Sengoku-Sensei: Hayama...you ...you...why did you tell my secret...why did you... Kids: Why? Really... [5] H: You said it first. You said someone else's secret first! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- p.53 [1] H: So, a teacher can spill his student's secrets? [I left you alone awhile but you just kept it on.] Sengoku-Sensei: Shut...shut up! You... Kid: Sensei! [2] T: I believe our teacher shouldn't have said it either! Aya: Tsuyoshi! Y: Yeah! That's sneaky! [I've always thought that] [3] T: Take me for example...I have a girlfriend too... Y: You just want to mention your girlfriend...[wow, we've really done it this time]. [4] Sengoku-Sensei: Silence... Kids: Wow! A wig...so he's been fooling us for awhile...cracks me up...wow! Shut up everyone! Sengoku-Sensei doesn't like to be bald! Haha! Hahaha! Yeah! Time to go Sengoku-Sensei: Everyone...pack up your stuff. [5] Sengoku-Sensei: Hayama, come to the teacher's room when you're done. Kids: Wow wow wow [6] Profile of Sengoku-Sensei [7] Sign that says Preparation room. ----------------------------------------------------------------------- p.54 [1] Close up of Sengoku-Sensei's fist. [2] Side shot of Sengoku-Sensei's fist going into Hayama's stomach. [3] Shot of Sengoku-Sensei hitting Hayama on the head. [4] H: ... [5] H: You're hitting students...if they find out, you'll be in deep trouble. [6] Sengoku-Sensei: That's bullshit! -------------------------------------------------------------------------- p.55 [1] Sengoku-Sensei: I'm your instructor...I can change your behavior grade and report card. [2] Close up of Hayama's eye. [3] H: You think if you do this...it'll scare me? [4] H: You should be more scared than I am! [Your eyes tell me your scared] You did something serious! [5] Sengoku-Sensei: This...I... [6] Sengoku-Sensei: I... [7] Sengoku-Sensei: Ever since you came here...you've been...you've been ticking me off... --------------------------------------------------------------------- p.56 [1] Sengoku-Sensei: I hate the way your eyes say that you are cooler than everyone! Like when I was in high school...just like that person! [2] Sengoku-Sensei: Thought I was dirt...made me bow to money... H: [What the hell is he talking about? Is he losing it?] [3] Sengoku-Sensei: You look just like him! The first time I saw you, I was startled... [4] Sengoku-Sensei: Despicable...someone like you...I won't let you slide! [5] H: Oh really? Did he pick on you? [Now you turn it around and hate me.] [6] Shot of Sengoku-Sensei starting a punch. [7] Close up side shot of fist inches from Hayama's face. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- p.57 [1] Side shot of Hayama blocking an arm. [2] H: Ah! [Got him!] [3] H: [Got him good! But it wasn't hard...] Good... [4] Sengoku-Sensei: ... ---------------------------------------------------------------- p.58 [1] H: The bells ringing...I gotta go. Let's call it even! [2] H: This time your wig is really off center. Bye! [3] Shot of Sengoku-Sensei's eyes. [4] Sengoku-Sensei: [I'll remember this...] [5] T: Ah! Akito! You're back. [6] T: Well, how was it? Did he yell at you a lot!? H: Yeah! And I got hit! [It happened too fast I couldn't dodge it]. [7] T: Really...[got hit!?] H: But then I hit back after that! T: What!? [8] T: You...it's probably not kosher to hit the teacher. H: Why? [9] T: Why? That's the way the world works! H: ... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- p.59 [1] H: Fuck him! [2] Sign. [3] Teacher B: Sengoku-Sensei, your face!? Sengoku-Sensei: Oh...a student hit me. [4] Teacher B: What? [5] Teacher C: Um...Did you hit Sengoku-Sensei? [6] H: I did...but, he hit me first! Teacher C: What!? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- p.60 [1] Sengoku-Sensei: No, I did not do that. I gave him a warning, because Hayama's attitude is not good. [2] H: You piece of crap! [3] Teacher C: Hey! Don't talk to a teacher like that! Sengoku-Sensei: This is the type of student he is. [4] Teacher A: This is crazy. Teacher B: What should we do? The principal is out. Teacher C: He will just say "it's alright" and then end this and then forget about it. Teacher A: Let whoever's in charge of discipline handle it. Teacher B: Um... [5] Bulletin: Class 1 student Hayama Akito is suspended 10 days for hitting a teacher. Signed the Disciplinary Dept. T: Oh no...look, Akito, look... -------------------------------------------------------------------------- p.61 [1] H: I'll go home first. [Bye!] F: [haven't seen Akito in awhile] H: Now I can rest for 10 days, I'm so lucky! [It's like a vacation] F: Akito! [You stupid!] [2] F: Akito!! [3] F: How come you got suspended!? H: ... F: Can you explain this to me step by step! [4] H: Ahh...this... [5] H: Forget it...it's too complicated. F: Hey... [6] F: Wait a second! What's wrong with you! ------------------------------------------------------------------------ p. 62 [1] F: I'm your girlfriend, right? [2] H: ...that's right! [3] F: So no matter what is it, you got to tell me! H: ...really? F: Yeah really! [4] H: Umm...this...before...there was a ... [5] H: Forget it...too complicated. Go ask Tsuyoshi! F: Ah! [6] Medium shot of Fuka with a frown. ------------------------------------------------------ p.63 [1] Mr.H: Suspended!? Natsumi: Right! The school just called. [2] Natsumi: They said he hit a teacher. I don't believe it! [He's in deep trouble now!] Mr. H: ... Natsumi: And then he went to karate, and just got back! Dad, why don't you talk to him! [3] H: The teacher hit me first...[maybe you won't believe me!] Mr. H: What!? [4] Mr. H: Did he really? [5] H: Natsumi: [Why is he standing on the chair?] Mr. H: He hit you on the body... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- p.64 [1] Mr. H: Did you show that to the teachers? H: No, but it doesn't matter! I earned a vacation anyway. [2] Mr. H: Really? [You earned it?] H: Yeah. [A vacation] [3] Mr. H: Akito...I... [4] Mr. H: Used to be bad also. I was always suspended. [5] Natsumi: Dad, you're lying! Weren't you always one of the elites? [I hate this, this is causing me emotional distress!] Mr. H: No, not really [I'm sorry] H: [What could be so bad in that day and age? And what did he mean by bad...] [6] Mr. H: So I cannot stand on a pedestal and lecture you. H: You don't need to say anymore! -------------------------------------------------------------------------- p.65 [1] Mr. H: But you have to introspect, you can't use violence. That I can say... Natsumi: Dad... Mr. H: I feel sorry for him, to wear a wig...[going bald at such a young age...lately I've been...] [2] View of window from outside. [3] H: [An unexpected holiday...boring...] [4] TV: Our host...Sana! S: Hi! Good evening everyone! [5] Close up of Hayama's hand shutting off the tv with remote. [6] Remote bouncing off tv. ----------------------------------------------------------------- p.66 [1] H: Hmmph...really! I don't want to think about her, but... [2] H: She's so spoiled. [3] H: Makes me...very, very angry! [4] H: She's so retarded! She would say she likes me...then calls us "in the past"...then disappears in a flash. But now she's everywhere I look, I see her everywhere...I don't want that kind of spoiled girl! [5] H: Fuka is so much better than her! Fuka is a...good girl. [6] H: From now on...I'll just let it go! I'm going to sleep! Forget it...I don't want to think about this anymore! ------------------------------------------------------------------ p.67 [1] H: ...Ah! But...if what she said about being "in the past" was actually a lie...and I could tell from her tone that she was lying...think about it, it's possible... [2] H: If she knew...if she knew I was suspended, she would get really mad! S: Come on! What the hell were you doing? I can't stand this anymore! [3] H: I told myself... [4] H: ...not to think about this... [5] Top: Shot of Hayama running out of his house. Middle: Hayama's profile, eyes closed. Bottom: Shot of Hayama running, his back is to us. ------------------------------------------------------------------- p.68 [1] Treetops. [2] Shot of Hayama's feet walking. [3] Profile of Hayama's face dripping with sweat. [4] Shot of Hayama falling through the entrance door. [5] Mr. H: Hey? Akito!? H: I'm so drained... [6] Sister: Good morn...Ah! What happened? [why is he like this?] [7] Mr. H: He looks like he ran all night...[maybe even crossed state line] Umm...why did he do it? Sister: He said he couldn't sleep. ------------------------------------------------------------ p.69 [1] Mr. H: Well, the way he ran...he won't have trouble sleeping now...umm...[how come we didn't notice he was gone] [2] Mr. H: My own son...he's a character...[ha ha ha!] Sister: It's not funny... [3] Mr. H: It's better than hanging out on the streets. Sister: I suppose... H: Sa... [4] Mr. H: What did he say? Sister: Huh? Did he say something? [5] H: ...na... [6] Hayama lying in bed, eyes closed, tears coming out. -------------------------------------------------------------- p.71 [1] H: [The winter during my 13th year...I know there are times you want to see each other but you can't...but now we've reached the point where we don't want to see each other anymore...] [2] H: [Why did things turn out this way? I don't understand...I just feel very anxious.] [3] Hayama, his back to us, looking up at the billboard with Sana on it. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 3 p.73 [1] F: It's the fourth day of his suspension. Why is Hayama acting like this? [2] T: Last night I called him, his father said he went out. He also said, Akito goes out jogging every night. Aya: Jogging? T: And he runs until he's ragged. [3] T: Fuka, have you seen Akito? F: No. And we haven't talked on the phone either. ------------------------------------------------- p.74 [1] T: You look...angry? F: He doesn't tell me anything at all... [2] F: Does he still consider me his girlfriend? [3] [4] Aya: Oh yeah, isn't today the exam day for the karate people? [He must be practicing karate.] T: That's right! Let's go watch it! I'm sure Akito will pass, let's congratulate him! Let's go together, Fuka? [5] F: Umm...this... ------------------------------------------------------ p.75 [1] Karate teacher: We can't let you take the exam. H: What... [2] Karate teacher: I heard you got suspended from using violence. Why didn't you report this to me? [3] H: Please...please let me take this exam. Karate teacher: No you can't, take your place and sit until we're finished! [4] H: Karate kids: Hyaa! [5] H: [6] H: ------------------------------------------------------- p.76 [1] Karate kids: Thank you sensei... [2] Aya: Here he is! T: Hi...how are you? [3] T: I knew you would be practicing karate, even when you were suspended. [Haha] How did your exam go? [4] T: What's that? What did you say? Aya: How did your exam go? [Did you pass?] [5] H: They didn't let me take the exam! T: What? Why not? H: Because I was suspended! T: Oh that's why. H: Any other questions? T: Uh...no! --------------------------------------- p.77 [1] F: [He started practicing for the exam, but now...] T: This...is too bad... [2] T: Ahhh... [3] H: Ah...I'm really pissed... Aya: A fierce animal just escaped. T: Alert! Be careful. [4] F: Why don't we go play! [Let's have some fun!] H: What? Can we! I'm still suspended. [I can't even practice karate]. F: It doesn't matter. [5] F: Yeah! Let's go play! [6] Close up of Hayama. [7] Close up of Hayama kind of smiling. [8] T: [Smile! He's smiling! That was horrifying!] Aya: [Fuka, run away now!] --------------------------------------------------------- p.78 [1] H: You're a good person! [2] H: Let's go! [3] Close up of Tsuyoshi and Aya shocked. [4] F: I said go play, but I didn't bring money! [Not even a dime.] H: I have some. [5] T: Akito...he's so strange? [I've never seen Akito like this.] Aya: Freaky! Freaky! [I feel really spooked!] [6] Shot of Arcade entrance. --------------------------------------------------------- p.79 [1] Shot of Game Over video screen. [2] H: Fuka, go get change. F: Ok...we already spent a lot! H: Just go! T: ... [3] F: He's not himself. He's strangely gentle...[kind of scary...he's so lovey-dovey when he talks, there must be a problem.] [4] F: Huh? [5] F: [There's 200 yen here...who forgot to take it? Let me return it to the storekeeper!] [6] Boy1: Hey...it's gone. Boy2: Look! That girl over there! ----------------------------- p.80 [1] Boy1: Wasn't there 200 yen here? I was breaking 1000 yen and only took 800 in a rush. Fuka: Yes. [2] F: [Is this yours?] Here it is, take it. Boy1: Ah, found it. [3] Boy1: That was close, almost got robbed! Boy2: Yeah, that was close... F: Huh... [4] F: What are you talking about? I was just bringing it in to the storekeeper... Boy1: Yeah! Bullshit! Boy2: You're lying, you were trying to steal it! [5] F: Did not! You forgot and left it there! Boy1: This girl's too much! [6] H: What's going on? F: They just called me a thief. Boy1: But you just tried to steal. ---------------------------------------------------- p.81 [1] F: That's such a lie! Now I'm really mad, if I knew this would happen, I would have taken the money and just left. H: How much money are you talking about? F: 200 yen! [2] H: Stupid...just ignore them! [Just give me my 1000 yen!] F: But... [3] H: You two just goofed and forgot to take it! If it was anyone else, someone would have just taken the money. You should be grateful to get it back! F: I said I didn't steal it! [4] Close up of 2 boys. [5] Close up of leg kicking. [6] Side shot of boy kicking Hayama from behind with Fuka and Tsuyoshi looking on. ------------------------------------------ p.82 [1] T: Akito! [2] F: What are you doing!? Boy1: You piss me off! [He's acting all cool!] Boy2: Piece of shit...[Let's go!] [3] T: Ah...Akito? [4] T: Did he kick you hard? Does it hurt? But you can't fight! Aya: [That's right!] Absolutely can't fight when you're suspended. [Or they may kick you out of school!] [5] H: [Be tolerant, be tolerant.] -------------------------------------------------------- p.83 [1] T: He got away! [2] Hayama in mid air with some type of furniture raised in his hand. [3] Hayama kicking a boy in the head. [4] Boy2: You!! ------------------------------------------------------- p.84 [1] T: Akito! [2] T: Stop! [3] F: Hayama...he got a lot stronger! Aya: He turned into "Super Hayama"! T: [They're fighting...] This isn't funny. [4] Hayama kicking a boy in the stomach. [5] Boy2: This...dweeb...knows karate? Shit. ------------------------------------------------------------ p.85 [1] Hayama punching a boy. [2] H: Stop...I'm...sorry... [3] Hayama punching. [4] F: Ah...Akito! Stop!! [5] F: Akito!! [6] Boy2: There's a fight! T: Oh no! Shit! Hey! Let's run! Akito, please! --------------------------------------------------------------- p.86 [1] T: Akito! Let's get out of here! [2] Boy2: They're gone... [3] Shot of feet running away. [4] Side shot of Tsuyoshi, Hayama, Fuka and Aya running. [5] T: I guess...we're clear... [6] T: Here's your jacket and your bag... ---------------------------------------------------------------- p.87 [1] Fuka's profile. [2] Shot of feet facing each other. [3] Fuka slaps Hayama. [4] F: You...how could you do that! Did you have to do that! H: What...aren't you angry too? -------------------------------------------------------------- p.88 [1] F: Did I tell you to pick a fight? You already got them on the ground! You can't do that! You can't do these things! [2] Close up of Hayama's eyes. [3] F: You're still suspended... [4] H: You...don't order me around! [5] F: [Scary...] -------------------------------------------------------------- p.89 [1] Shot of Hayama's feet turning away from Fuka. [2] Shot of Fuka, Tsuyoshi and Aya looking at Hayama (only see top of his head) walk away. [3] F: Those...eyes... [4] F: Did you see that? T: Yeah...I wonder! Why aren't you scared? Scares the hell out of me! F: Huh? Because... [5] T: He used to have that face a lot...but lately I haven't seen it much... [6] F: I...have never seen him like that! He's so gentle... [7] F: ...so understanding... T: [...really...] ----------------------------------------------------------------- p.90 [1] T: [Fuka...doesn't know about Hayama's past...things he did in elementary school...and the relationship he has... the unspoken things he has with Sana...etc.....Fuka doesn't know about it...I guess she can go out with him...only because she doesn't know these things?] [2] T: Let's go home...for the day... Aya: Ok... T: About what happened today...don't let the school find out. Aya: Hope nothing comes out of this... [3] School bell tolls. [4] Aya: Tsuyoshi... ---------------------------------------------------------------------- p.91 [1] Aya: Listen...Sengoku-Sensei just told me to see him. F: He said if you know about Hayama's past, tell me everything. When he said that, I was shocked. T: Huh? This... [2] Aya: Sengoku-Sensei ...I think he's been asking around about Hayama...He even went to his elementary school...freaky, right? [So I didn't say anything...] T: ... [3] T: [Our peaceful days...are starting to fall apart now.] [4] T: [It's a bit...scary...] -------------------------------------------------------------------------- p.92 [1] Aya: Fuka looks so down today. T: Yeah... [2] T: Hey? Did something happen? [3] T: Is someone shooting a scene? Aya: Really? What are they shooting? [Let's go look!] [4] Director: Please come over here. [5] Rei taking Sana's coat off for her. [6] Tsuyoshi and Aya with their mouths open. [7] S: Please do... T: It's Sana! ------------------------------------------------- p.93 [1] Director: I'm sorry, we're going to start shooting now, please be quiet. Girls: Wow! Cute! [2] Director: I'm sorry, please be quiet. A/T: Sana! [3] A/T: Sana... S: [There are lots of people here...] [4] S: [It's Tsuyoshi and Aya!] [5] A/T: [Ah! Did she see us?] [6] Asst.Director: Ready! Action! S: Big brother, are you still going? Big bro: It's too late...ok! [7] Aya: She saw us...but she's so busy... T: Can't get to talk to her... [8] R: You guys come here! Shh... T: Ah! R: Wait in the trailer. [I'll tell Sana to come in a moment]. -------------------------------------------------- p.94 [1] S: Hi! How are you guys? Aya: Sana!! [2] Aya: Long time no see! [Even though I see you on tv a lot.] You're prettier, and also taller... S: Yeah! Feels like I got taller all of a sudden. [But I have been growing really fast.] The pretty part is just from the makeup. T: Just like that, you turned into a superstar...I thought you wouldn't talk to us... [3] S: Tsuyoshi, really, what are you talking about! I didn't change a bit! Aya: ... [4] S: ...How's everyone? T: Ah...umm... [5] S: Is anyone sick? T: It's not a health problem. [Everyone's fine. Sana didn't change a bit.] [6] T: But...lately...he's turned scary. -------------------------------------------------- p.95 [1] T: Akito...he's acting up a lot... S: What!? [2] T: Right now...he's suspended for hitting a teacher... S: What!? [3] Aya: Sana, you're too loud. S: What is this about!? What is this? T: I'm not sure. [4] S: So...how's Fuka? T: Ah... -------------------------------------------------- p.96 [1] T: Them two...I don't think they are getting along together too well... [2] T: What happened yesterday, they didn't look too happy. I think...things are...not too good... [3] S: Really... [4] T: I'm sorry, we haven't seen each other for so long, but I keep talking about crappy things...you're so busy, but I make you worry more... S: Don't worry about it. [It's ok.] [5] T: Umm...Akito doesn't tell me anything anymore. [6] T: I guess...you and Fuka ...did something happen? [7] S: Yes. -------------------------------------------------- p.97 [1] S: Yes. I'm sorry...please don't ask me. [2] T: [There are more and more things we can't talk about anymore.] [3] T: So...you won't be coming to school yet? [You almost never show anymore]. S: Um...I'll still come and check things out. Aya: You've got to come! Sana. S: Actually...I've still got time to go to school, I just choose not to... [4] S: [He's acting up a lot...and got suspended...how did things turn out like this...why...] [5] S: [Their relationship isn't too good and the reason...their relationship is not good...is it me...?] [6] S: [...I...] ------------------------------------------------------ p.98 [1] S: [Could it be that everything I did...was all useless...I've been thinking...] [2] S: [That if I leave them, then things will be smooth for them... I thought if I leave, then I can start to forget...so I chose to leave...but...is this working...] [3] S: [Because...I didn't forget anything.] [4] S: [Not only that, the longer it's been...the more I think about him.] [5] S: [I want to see him...want to see him!] -------------------------------------------------------- p.99 [1] S: [He's been acting up...Hayama...how exactly are you!?] [2] Hayama lying face up in bed with eyes open and hand on forehead. Close up of Hayama's face eyes closed and hand in a fist on forehead. [3] Shot of Hayama running - his back to us. --------------------------------------------------------- p.100 [1] R: Huh? Go to school? S: Yeah...if I don't go now I don't know when I can go... [2] R: What? Even when you can go, you find reasons to not go anyway. S: I'm just...worried about something. [3] R: Yeah? But it's hard to do this at the last minute and squeeze it into your schedule...maybe later I can play with your schedule a bit. S: Yeah. [4] S: [Actually I don't have to go to school...if I want to see him, I can just show up at his house...or I could call him...] [5] S: [But when I said goodbye on that day...and now...Bye bye!] ----------------------------------------------------------- p.101 [1] S: [I will need to be pretty thick skinned to see him now...?] [2] Close up of Sana's face looking at something off panel. [3] Shot of Hayama's back running through crowd of people. [4] S: [That's impossible? I must be seeing things. Why would he be jogging now...] [5] S: [But, maybe...] [6] S: Stop the car!! R: What!? ------------------------------------------------------------ p.102 [1] R: [Hey...] Sana...!? [2] Shot of Sana's feet. [3] S: Where did he run off to!? [4] Shot of Sana's back as she looks around for Hayama (off panel). [5] Fan: Hey? Isn't that Sana? [It really looks like her!] Fan2: No way really!? S: Oh God! [6] S: [I must have imagined it! Go back! We have to record a broadcast anyway.] [7] S: [Where's the car?] [8] S: [I'm so silly...even if I see him, I can't do anything anyway! But...] ----------------------------------------------------------- p.103 [1] S: I still want to see him... [2] Close up of Sana. [3] Close up of Sana's eye. [4] Side shot of Hayama sitting on a building curb out of breath. [5] Shot of Hayama sitting on the curb face looking down, out of breath. He senses someone is standing there. [6] Shot of Sana facing Hayama (see only top of back of his head). ----------------------------------------------------------- p.104 [1] Close up of Hayama, out of breath, looking at Sana (off panel). [2] Side shot of Sana facing Hayama who is now looking at her. [3] H: ...You're "a spoiled girl". [4] S: ...? [5] Side shot of Sana kneeling in front of Hayama sitting on the curb. ----------------------------------------------------------- p.105 [1] S: You...what are you doing? H: Running a marathon..."lap around the city". [2] S: ...How are you? H: What do you want? [3] S: Why...are you looking at me like that? [4] S: How are you...? [5] Close up of Hayama's eyes. [6] Side shot of Sana's arm reaching out to touch Hayama's face. ------------------------------------------------------------ p.106 [1] Close up side shot of Hayama with Sana's arms around him. [2] Side shot of Sana hugging Hayama, his face in her chest, his arms at his side. [3] Close up of Hayama's eye, his face in Sana's chest. [4] Closer up of Hayama's eye, his face in Sana's chest. [5] Even closer up of Hayama's eye, his face in Sana's chest. [6] Shot of Sana's back with Hayama's arms around her, his head in her chest. ------------------------------------------------------------ p.107 [1] S/H: Sana and Hayama's arms around each other, eyes closed. [2] S: I heard when you were suspended you got into a fight? [3] S: Tsuyoshi is really worried...how are you really? [4] H: ...I don't know either...why... am I like this? ------------------------------------------------------------ p.108 [1] S: [I don't understand either...] H: It's because of you! [2] S: Why? H: It's all because of classmate Sana... [3] S: What do you mean by classmate Sana? H: I don't want you to get angry, so I added the word classmate! She got mad anyway, I knew she was so spoiled! [4] S: That's disgusting! Stop saying that! H: Don't you have a lot of disgusting names you call me! S: That's... different! H: You're a spoiled girl! [5] H: [That's right!] Why are we hugging and fighting? S: How would I know! We look like fools! H: Yeah! ------------------------------------------------------------- p.109 [1] S: Oh! It's my cell phone...That's right, it's Rei... [I forgot about him]. [2] S: Hello? I'm sorry, now... [right away]. Ok... [3] S: Maybe later...now? But... [4] S: Ah! Hayama! [5] H: You still have to work...why don't you go! [6] H: I'm okay...you don't have to worry. ------------------------------------------------------------- p.110 [1] Sana looking at Hayama walk away (see his arm only). [2] S: [I...how can I not worry.] [3] S: [Already...can't stop worrying!] -------------------------------------------------------------- p.111 [1] T: It's scary...Akito...he's acting up... H: You don't have to worry. S: [No! I...how can I not worry...] [2] S: I really can't wait inside but... [3] S: [There's so much work. What am I saying!] Girl: Oh no! We just finished your makeup. Director: Ok, let's go... ---------------------------------------------------------------- p.112 [1] S: Thank you very much everyone...[Tsuyoshi says Hayama can go back to school today but when he sees the teacher that he hit...will it matter? He and Fuka...and the reactions of everyone around them...] [2] S: Ah! I'm really worried! Director: [Sana? You...we have to start shooting now...] [3] [4] Student1: I heard...he hit a teacher. Student2: He looks really scary... Student3: That's him...? Hmmm... ------------------------------------------------------------------- p.113 [1] Y: Ah! Hayama...long time no see! It must be tough to be doing nothing! Classmate2: Hi. Heard you hit Sengoku-Sensei? Good job. [2] Y: What's wrong? Hayama! [3] H: I want to sleep...[I've been sleeping everyday...] Y: You still want to sleep? What were you doing when you were suspended? H: I went jogging...[I jogged at night, and I slept in the day.] I jogged until I threw up. Y: Why? H: I had too much time! [4] Y: That's right, it looks like you lost weight. [He looks broken down?] H: Is that right? . [5] Y: How is the air in Japan today? H: Hmmm...yeah it's very bad! Give me another bowl. Classmate2: Ah! That brand name is bird head. Hahaha. ------------------------------------------------------------------ p.114 [1] Girl1: Morning! Fuka! F: Good morning! [2] Girl1: Isn't that boy there your boyfriend? [He can come to school now?] Why don't you say hi? F: Hmmm...that's alright, he's with his friends anyway. Girl2: Did you see it yesterday? [3] H: I...I am...don't order me around. F: [I am understanding him less and less...maybe I never understood him...] [4] F: [I want to talk to someone about this...but I can't trust anyone. If rumors come out...maybe I have rumor phobia.] [5] F: [I wish I could find someone to talk to but who...] [6] F: [Who can I...] ------------------------------------------------------- p.115 [1] Sengoku-Sensei doing roll call. [2] Sengoku-Sensei: Hayama! H: Here! [3] Students turning around in their seats to look at Hayama, off panel. [4] Sengoku-Sensei continues roll call. [5] Sengoku-Sensei: The student on duty has to collect today's surveys before going home, class dismissed. ----------------------------------------------------- p.116 [1] Classmate2: Wow...that was a tense moment! Classmate: Hayama, how did you hit him? H: ... [this is no fun.] T: Ok we can stop talking about this now! [2] T: Akito, this is today's survey...fill it out before you go home. [3] H: What is this? [Pain in the ass.] Looks like a survey on my everyday life. [We did this in elementary school.] Probably wants to know which high school you want to go to...hmph. [4] H: My good friends from school...only Tsuyoshi and ... is this it? It's a bit lonely. [But I'm happy.] I'll write in Yunchi too! [5] T: Hey...Akito... H: Yeah... ------------------------------------------------------ p.117 [1] T: Me, I'm a peace advocate. [2] H: ...yeah...so what? [3] T: So...I hope you won't have more problems.... Be more tolerant... [4] T: So...what do you say? If you have any...any concerns at all...you can talk to me, ok? [5] H: ...really... T: Right, you got it? [6] H: What are you trying to say? T: [Oh god...he didn't get it!] Classmate: Tsuyoshi, my survey's ready, where should I put it? [7] H: [Hmm? How old is my dad?] Mr. H: [My own son...doesn't know my age...] Komori: Um...Hayama... ---------------------------------------------------- p.118 [1] K: On this line...can I write your name? [2] H: What... [3] Close up of form : "List your good friends from school." [4] K: ...yeah...over here...your... [5] H: Why? [6] K: Um...because... [7] H: Why my name? You should write your true friends' names. [8] H: I don't even remember your name... [9] Aya: Hayama! ---------------------------------------------------------- p.119 [1] Aya: If you don't know the name of your classmate, it's not too cool! H: Really? [But I never spoke to him...] Aya: His name is XYZ (actually the wrong name). [2] H: I'm sorry XYZ (wrong name). K: My name is Komori... [3] H: You screwed up! Aya: Hey? [4] Close up of Tsuyoshi's eye. [5] T: Akito...? Did you just kick Aya? H: Ah! Very lightly! Aya: He kicked me! Tsuyoshi... [kicked me right here!] H: Aya, stop! ------------------------------------------------------- p.120 [1] T: You dare kick...my girlfriend... [2] T: You think you're tough! Bastard! Classmates: What's going on? Let's get out of here! [3] H: [And he calls himself a peace advocate!] [4] T: Hey! Don't run away! [5] Classmates: Somebody stop him! Use karate quick! Ok here I come! Ow! I'm going to chop you up! [6] Classmates: Did he stop yet? Not yet! ------------------------------------------------------ p.121 [1] Reporter: Ok! Water Palace is a blockbuster. S: Yes it is. Reporter: Your t.v. series also got great reviews...your work is really impressive! [2] Reporter: All of us are saying, it's rare for an actor to have become so hot so fast. S: Oh, really? The credit goes to the producers. Reporter: Aw, come on, you're too nice... S: What I just said is 20 percent out of respect, 70 percent real truth and 10 percent other. Reporter: I want to know what makes up the other portion. S: Let's not go there. Cameraman: Hahaha [3] Reporter: What's your schedule like from now on? S: Hmm...it's really full. Reporter: Haha! Let's be serious for a moment...last question, are you in love now? [4] Shot of Sana sitting. [5] S: I...am... [6] Medium shot of Sana being serious. ---------------------------------------------------------------- p.122 [1] Reporter: You mean... Rei: That'll be all, thanks to everyone. I'm sorry. Reporter: Damn! S: ... [2] Rei: Sana, you're free tomorrow morning. S: Really? Rei: Will you be going to school? [3] S: [School...everyone is in school...why don't I go?] [4] Treetops. [5] Dog Barking. [6] Mama: Ooh! Uniform! S: Good morning! Mama! ------------------------------------------------------------ p.123 [1] Mama: You're not going to say no to school anymore? [2] S: Ah! When did I say no to school? Mama: It must have been love that made you not want to go to school, therefore you escaped into your acting world... [3] Mama: Why do you want to go to school all of a sudden now? [4] S: Because...I'm worried...about something... Mama: Huh worried? [5] S: Yeah...worried...[Because...I heard Hayama is acting up again...so that worries me...] [6] S: [...wait a minute...] [7] S: Wait a minute...wait a minute... ------------------------------------------------------------ p.124 [1] S: [That's not it, I...have decided I wouldn't see him anymore...because when I see him...] I...really want to see him! I don't want to lie anymore! [2] S: I want to see him...is anyone against this? [Step right out if you are!] Mama: Ah, she finally admits it. S: Then again, I really am worried. [3] S: I know he has a girlfriend, but I still want to see him, I really want to see him! Mama: Ok...what you mean is you don't need to fool around with him! [4] S: Don't say it like that! [What's crazy mama talking about now!] Mama: Speaking of fooling around did you know this? The wife from next door... S: What? [5] S: Really? Really? Wife... Rei: Sana, you're going to be late? ------------------------------------------------------------- p.125 [1] S: Ok, got to go. Mama: Sana, don't you have to go to school? Be careful on the road. [2] Mama: [She...is still very strong after showing her feelings...] [3] Mama: Oh! It stopped. Onda, give me a hundred yen. [4] School. ----------------------------------------------------------- p.126 [1] Classmate1: Oh...Sana Kurata? Haven't seen her for awhile. Classmate2: Wow, she's really here... [2] Rei: From now on, people around you will react very differently from before, you be careful! You'll be alright once you get used to it. S: [So that's the way people act now.] [3] S: [If you want to see me you can just stare at me! I am Sana Kurata!] [4] S: Oh! [5] S: [Why is Sana Kurata hiding?] Classmate1: Hey it's Sana. Classmate2: She's still so strange. [6] S: [It's Fuka...I haven't spoken to her since that time...] [7] S: [The things that happened...they feel like they are from a long time ago.] ------------------------------------------------------ p.127 [1] S: Fuka. [2] Close up of Fuka. [3] S: Good morning! [4] S: Why are you laughing...[it was hard for me to put a smile on my face...] F: Because you make me laugh! [Look into this!] [5] S: Oh no! [How come I look like this!] [6] Close up of Fuka. [7] F: Long time no see, you don't have to work today? S: Only in the afternoon. F: You are hotter and hotter now. S: I guess! --------------------------------------------------------------- p.128 [1] Sana opening her locker, Fuka next to her. [2] Shot of Hayama walking by and seeing Sana and Fuka off panel. [3] Shot of Sana and Fuka looking back at Hayama (see only top of head). [4] H: ... [5] Hayama moving on, sweatdrop, eyes closed. [6] F: His emotions must be going crazy now. But he's still pretending nothing is happening. S: Yeah...[I feel the same...] F: He deserves it, he kept playing me like a fool... [7] S: He...I heard...he has been acting up? ---------------------------------------------------------------- p.129 [1] Close up of Fuka looking angrily at Sana (see back of Sana's head). [2] F: That's right...I'm in a fog too! Why don't you listen to what I have to say...this...you have known him longer... S: Wait! Wait! Slow down! [3] F: After he said that, he's been ignoring me. [4] F: "Stupid! Don't order me around!" [5] F: How are you feeling? [I'm really scared!] [6] S: "Don't order me around!" Just from hearing this, you can still see his wild monkey personality! F: He's a wild monkey!? S: Oh! No, he's a Persian monkey! F: What!? [7] S: If you face him now, you shouldn't be too serious...because he's like a cobra that is so mad, his hair is standing up. F: Cobras don't have hair! If they did they would be even scarier. Ooh! Scary. S: Oh not really... [8] F: Got to go to class! S: Oh! Why don't we cut first period! ----------------------------------------------------------- p.130 [1] S/F: ... [2] S: The first time we met was in a bathroom too. F: That's right... [3] S: Maybe stinky smells attract. F: Corny... S: ... [4] F: I've been thinking all along, next time I see you...who knew what would happen... S: We're seeing each other now, it should be ok! F: Yeah...that's right. [5] F: Tell you the truth, when you came back from shooting...I thought you were like someone else. [6] S: ...you're so honest. [7] F: I'm sorry, because I could never speak my true feelings...it makes me very tired. ----------------------------------------------------------------- p.131 [1] F: I've been thinking maybe the third wheel...is me...but I didn't know... [2] S: Am I really...a ... [3] F: Third wheel? [4] S/F: ... [5] S/F: Yes! That's right... [6] S: Yeah... I won't lie anymore... F: That's right! Don't lie anymore! [7] S: Seriously, we are each other's third wheel? F: Yeah! The third wheel. --------------------------------------------------------------------- p.132 [1] F: You said it's in the past, was that a lie? S: It's not really a lie. I was working to make everything into my past, but I couldn't do it. [2] S: I may as well confess I saw Hayama a few days ago! [3] S: I bumped into him running a marathon...so I went to see him... [4] S: Because...he didn't look really stable...I was really worried...Fuka, why don't you...if you know your boyfriend's like this why did you ignore him? [5] F: Why...because I...didn't get along with him...he never...valued me... [6] S: I don't think so...I don't think he would go out with someone he doesn't like...I think... --------------------------------------------------------------------- p.133 [1] F: ... [2] F: He and I...have nothing to say anymore... [3] F: There are so many things we never talked about. S: Really, why don't you go talk then? F: But the mood is so heavy...[then I am not in the mood to talk anymore]. [4] S: If you're going to be so...wishy-washy... [5] S: I'm going to steal him from you! [6] F: You finally said it... [7] S: Yeah I said it. --------------------------------------------------------------- p.134 [1] F: You came today to declare war? S: No I came to class... F: Bullshit! [2] S: Before...I just wanted to be a good kid...but now I feel that... [3] S: It's ok to be bad! I'm going to go for it! I won't hesitate anymore! [4] F: Really? Then I won't hesitate either. [5] F: I won't let you win. [6] S/F: ... ---------------------------------------------------------------- p.135 [1] F: Ok...let's go! S: Go where? F: Stupid, go to class! [You did come to go to class?] S: Yeah...yeah... [2] Close up of Sana's eye. [3] F: I...got to talk to him first... [4] S: [Although we have become like this...but ...we can still be friends right?] [5] S: [I really can't...say this kind of stuff...] [6] S: [It's just a pretty lie]. Classmate1: Hi! Sana, long time no see. [7] Classmate1: Yeah, we got this survey yesterday. You can still hand it in, just give it to the teacher after you complete it. S: Ok. [8] Side shot of Sana looking at the survey. --------------------------------------------------------- p. 136 [1] S: [Hmm...There's Aya and Tsuyoshi...Hayama...is a friend too. And Mami and Hisae...] [2] S: ... [3] S: Suzuki-Sensei, I brought the survey. Suzuki-Sensei: Oh! Long time no see! Sana! How are you? [4] Suzuki-Sensei: So what's happening? The semester's almost over! S: I'm fine. [I have a tutor at home.] Suzuki-Sensei: Oh right, can you sneak me an autograph? My relative wants it. [5] Suzuki-Sensei: Wait a minute! [6] Sana sees Fuka's survey where Fuka listed Sana as a close friend. ------------------------------------------------------------------ p.137 [1] Close up of Sana. [2] S: [Maybe...it's ok if it's a lie...] Suzuki-Sensei here's my survey. Suzuki-Sensei: Oh, put it here. [3] Suzuki-Sensei: I'm sorry, can you please sign this. S: Ok. [4] Mrs. K: Pardon me, please tell me where class 1-1 is? [5] Mrs. K: Where is it!? -------------------------------------------------------------------------- p.138 [1] S: What!? Over here! Over there! Over here! Maybe over there! [2] S: Sensei, how do we get there from here? Mrs. K: Please tell me fast. Suzuki-Sensei: Oh! You're the mother of one of the students? I am the teacher for class 8. [3] Mrs. K: Please hurry and bring me to the classroom. In class 1, there's a kid called Hayama, right? S: What!? [4] Suzuki-Sensei: Um, there is. What's the matter? [5] S: Oh the police!? [6] Mrs. K: My son has been missing since last night! ------------------------------------------------------------ p.139 [1] Mrs. K: I just found a letter he left for me...he wrote that he has been hurt by Hayama...so he's going to commit suicide! [2] Suzuki-Sensei: What's going on here... [3] Suzuki-Sensei: Let's cool it a little bit, come to this side first... [4] Mrs. K: How can I cool it now!! [5] S: How could it!? [6] Sign - "1-8". [7] S: Fuka!? ----------------------------------------------------------- p.140 [1] S: Come, come over here! F: What? S: Just come for a little bit! F: What for? S: Let's have a truce! A truce... F: What's wrong? [2] S: He's a really questionable being! F: What happened? They know he got into a fight in the arcade? S: That's not it! Don't ask! Just come over! [3] Side shot of Sana's arm pulling Fuka's arm. [4] Sign - "1-1" [5] S: Hayama! -------------------------------------------------------------- p.141 [1] Shot of Hayama turned around in his seat. [2] Sengoku-Sensei: Come here for a moment. [3] Classmate1: Are they going to fight? Classmate2: What's happening... Classmate3: Don't ask, just come over. [4] Shot of Tsuyoshi and Aya looking at something off panel. [5] Medium shot of Hayama. --------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 4 p. 143 [1] S: Did you know someone called Komori in class 1? You know him? Is he good friends with Hayama? F: No I don't, never heard of him. What about him? S: He wants to commit suicide because of Hayama! [2] F: Suicide...!? Suicide...? Why... S: Hurry up! We could peek in from the waiting room outside of the office! [3] F: Ah...damn...I can't figure things out anymore! S: Fuka! Calm down! [4] --------------------------------------------------------------- p.144 [1] Medium shot of woman turning to look at someone entering the room (see top of person's head - probably Hayama). [2] Mrs. K: You are Hayama, right? What did you do to our XYZ (first name)? Suzuki-sensei: Mrs. Komori , please be calm, our normal procedures say... Mrs. K: I told you I can't be calm now! [3] H: [What a loud old hag...] Sengoku-Sensei: Sit down. [4] T: Oh! Sana! You're here. S: Tsuyoshi. [5] S: I don't show up at school much, but as soon as I come all hell breaks loose. T: I don't know how this happened. S: So many people are watching this with us! T: Well! Everyone thinks the duel between Hayama and Sengoku-Sensei is very interesting. Classmate: I see it. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- p. 145 [1] Suzuki-sensei: Hayama, Komori left this letter, and then he disappeared last night, the police is looking for him. [2] Letter: Hayama hurt me, I am very sad. I want to die because I'm so sad. I want to commit suicide tomorrow. Mom, Dad, I'm sorry. Goodbye, XYZ. H: [...what is this...] Suzuki-sensei: What's on your mind? [3] H: Nothing...I just found out yesterday that his last name is Komori ...[and I just found out his first name today.] I never spoke to him before yesterday... Suzuki-sensei: Oh...so what did you talk about yesterday? [4] H: Yesterday...out of the blue he started talking to me...asked me if he could write my name in the survey, where it asks your good friend's names...since I never spoke to him before I thought it was very strange. K: Can I write your name here? Suzuki-sensei: And then? H: I said, I can't even remember your name, besides, isn't it better if you write your real good friends' names? Suzuki-sensei: Umm...this is it? H: Yeah. [5] Mrs. K: It's impossible he would want to commit suicide because of this! You must have done something else, right? What else was there!? ----------------------------------------------------------------- p. 146 [1] H: Nothing. And...I could be wrong here...someone who really wants to die, wouldn't warn other people, they would just go out and do it. If you just ignore him, he will come back. Mrs. K: You...what did you say!? [2] S: Um... Mrs. K: How can we just ignore him! What kind of attitude is that? Aya: Is there a mistake! I really don't remember Komori ...[I barely remember his name...] He's got nothing to do with Hayama... [3] Suzuki-sensei: Hayama, you really don't know where Komori would go? H: Yeah, I don't know. [4] Suzuki-sensei: Why don't we do this? Since we already asked Hayama...you guys go back to your classrooms, the rest of us will... Sengoku-Sensei: Hold on. [5] Sengoku-Sensei: I can't believe Hayama so easily... because Hayama is a student who has done bad things. [6] Close up of Tsuyoshi's face above the windowsill of the classroom. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- p.147 [1] Mrs. K: Ha! I knew he was a bad kid! And his attitude, he's so rude when he talks...what kind of child is he!? [2] Sengoku-Sensei: Since his suspension, I heard a lot of his elementary school stories. [3] T: [He went to dig that up himself, and now he's phrasing it this way...!!] [4] Sengoku-Sensei: For example, 2 years ago...there were a bunch of fifth grade boys from ABC elementary school, who were arrested for burglary...and in the end, the store and the parents settled the case... [5] Sengoku-Sensei: And I guess there was a leader using them, hiding behind them...I don't know if these kids were afraid of their leader? Or were just loyal to him....no one spilled the leader's name. [6] H: ... Sengoku-Sensei: Also...those boys always got into fights... [7] Sengoku-Sensei: Once, kids from other junior high schools, wanted to scare these boys, so they had a huge fight... --------------------------------------------------------------- p. 148 [1] Sengoku-Sensei: All told, one of the boys from the elementary school gang, ruthlessly knocked out some teeth and broke some noses. But, since the junior high school kids used knives, they were also at fault, so they both lost, and this ended. And no one figured out whose fist broke someone's noses... [2] Sengoku-Sensei: This boy was...very slick...both were you, Hayama? [3] H: ...Yes, that's right. [4] Woman: Ah... [5] T: [Sengoku-Sensei ...he didn't have to spill all this, right at this moment! I think he wanted to let all the eavesdroppers hear that!?] Aya: [That's terrible! Hayama is in a tough spot...] [6] S: I knew it...he did so many bad things I didn't know about...I should have guessed... [I wish I didn't have to hear that.] [7] S: [But I can still...accept these things. But...look!] F: [Stealing as a group...broken nose...] S: Ah! I knew it... ------------------------------------------------------------ p. 149 [1] Sengoku-Sensei: In 6th grade, you caused the other boys to interfere with the classroom. And someone got pushed into the pond, some people resisted you but you beat them up really bad but you didn't do any of this yourself, you just made your people do it...you're too slick! T: That's wrong! [2] T: Things did happen...but not like that! Sengoku-Sensei: Tsuyoshi Sasaki, what are you doing there...[and what are you saying!?] T: Hayama never ordered anyone to do this or do that! [3] H: Tsuyoshi... T: It's all because...he fought a lot and he was strong...so everyone...how do you say this? Everyone idolized Hayama... [4] T: Unconsciously, he became their leader...everyone was acting like a mob, thinking "if I do something big, Hayama would like it"...these were all things that they wanted to do themselves! And everyone wanted Hayama to do bad things with them. --------------------------------------------------------------- p.150 [1] T: It's true! I'm sure of it! [2] Sengoku-Sensei: But, he watched everyone do these things... T: Ah...ah... Sengoku-Sensei: Since he was in the leader's spot, everyone who got picked on by his minions, they must have all hated the leader! [3] Sengoku-Sensei: And all the kids who did bad things just to make Hayama happy, they regret it now, and they would hate Hayama for not stopping them earlier! The scars on their bodies may heal, but a lot of people will continue to carry scars on their hearts...there must be many people who still hate you! Hayama! [4] Sengoku-Sensei: You can't see these scars because they are inside them...and since you are a kid, you get away with it...but you're guilty! Hayama! ------------------------------------------------------------------ p.151 [1] Suzuki-sensei: Sengoku-Sensei, what you said has gone a little far? Besides, now is not the time to uncover Hayama's bad deeds, it's the time for Komori ... Sengoku-Sensei: That's right, because he's this type of student...what I want to say is, maybe he unknowingly, did something to hurt Komori . [2] Mrs. K: Right, this horrible little boy...must have done something to XYZ. I say we bring him to the police station and interrogate him! [3] S: Wait... [4] S: [Whoops?] Suzuki-sensei: Please wait a minute! Mrs. Komori ! H: [Sana!] [5] Suzuki-sensei: Hayama just admitted his past so we know he is not lying...I believe him when he said "I don't know!" [6] Suzuki-sensei: Hayama and Komori are both valuable students in our school...now...let's think about what is important. First question is...the whereabouts of Komori . You're his mother, you should know where he is likely to go? Mrs. K: Well...I already went to look for him near his tutors... Suzuki-sensei: Near his tutors... ------------------------------------------------------------------ p.152 [1] Suzuki-sensei: Hayama, please go back to your classroom...no, just go home. If possible, tell your parents the situation, and let them accompany you. If something changes, I will contact you. Just wait at home! H: Ok. [2] H: So long. T: [Suzuki-sensei is so nice...but some teachers are...but this jerk Sengoku-Sensei ...] Suzuki-sensei: You contacted his friends? Mrs. K: Not yet... [3] S: Why don't we go too? [4] S: I think Sengoku-Sensei went overboard when he called him guilty, but...I can't deny it. Maybe a lot of people hate Hayama... [5] S: Komori ...is he like that too? [6] Classmate1: I think Hayama is really that bad. Classmate2: I heard Komori disappeared and he talked about committing suicide. Classamte3: What!? Classmate4: Sounded like Hayama has done something. -------------------------------------------------- p. 153 [1] Locker: Hayama [2] T: Akito. If you go back can you contact your father? [Any problem?] H: ... [3] H: Ah! [4] H: Huh! [5] H: ? [6] Hayama is looking at a book that belongs to Komori . H: [Komori !!] ------------------------------------------------------------- p.154 [1] T: Akito? H: Ah...it's ok. [2] H: Before...thanks, Tsuyoshi! T: Huh? You're welcome... [3] Medium shot of Tsuyoshi, shot of Hayama's back walking away. [4] S: Tsuyoshi! [5] S: Where's Hayama? T: Oh...he just went home. F: How's he feeling? T: Just like always. [6] F: ...Tsuyoshi [7] F: Can you tell me, things in Hayama's past? You should know them the best? [8] T: Now? F: Yeah. [9] T: [I can't believe Fuka wants to hear this stuff now.] ---------------------------------------------------------------- p.155 [1] T: I think it's because of his family...his is a family that didn't communicate... S: [I wish I had something to plug my ears...close my eyes...close up all my pores, how do you close them?] T: The craziest time was when Akito was in fifth, sixth grade, and his sister was in eighth or ninth grade. [His sister is very smart, she already got in XYZ High School]. [2] T: His sister has always been very strict, there was a stretch...when she was preparing for the exam, she was at her moodiest. You can say she's mean...once Akito said, "Looking back maybe she had exam hysteria"... [3] T: Because his family was so strung up, Akito's behavior also became very strange. I didn't know what to do... [4] Shot of Sana's back and telephone sounds. [5] S: I'm sorry...it's Rei. I have to work this afternoon. [My time is up...] T: Oh...[Scared me...] [6] S: I'm in no mood to work...but I must go...I will give you my cell phone number, if anything changes, can you please contact me right away? T: Yeah. [7] S: Goodbye. F: [She never went to the classroom...] ----------------------------------------------------------------- p. 156 [1] F: Tsuyoshi...please continue. When I met Hayama in junior high school, he didn't look so bad? [2] F: So what really happened? T: ... [3] T: Well...Sana... [4] F: Sana? S: I'll be right there, wait for me by the door. T: Sana...stopped him...Akito... [5] F: Tsuyoshi...Akito and Sana, how did they get along in elementary school? Can you tell me in detail? [6] T: [In detail?] You'll find out faster by reading... F: Stop kidding around, can you tell me seriously? [7] T: [Can I really say this...I know I may think...] ----------------------------------------------------------- p.157 [1] T: [I'll just tell Fuka. I'm talking a lot...] Back then...Sana took on Hayama by herself...all the things that happened... knew about his family...<"Daughter and I" book> When the book came out Akito just and then... [2] T: [Fuka's face...got grimmer and grimmer...] [3] T: [And I told her everything] [4] Close up of Fuka with her eyes closed. ---------------------------------------------------------- p.158 [1] Director: Sana, make sure you stay in front of the two cameras... S: Yes. [What I'm doing today, is a rehearsal for tomorrow's live broadcast of a two hour special.] [2] S: [We got a lot of elementary and junior high school kids into the audience, to discuss today's society from a child's point of view. It's a kid's show performed by kids. I suppose.] This is your cue to talk. [I'm the host, my co-host is a fifth grader who's new in show business. Her name is Lana.] Lana: Hey? I'm sorry! What did you say... [3] Director: Now your guest Naozumi Kamura will come in. S: Allow me to introduce our guest, a seventh grader who's also a famous actor Naozumi Kamura. Director: That's right, that's the feeling I want to give. Naozumi can't come to rehearsal, he's got a schedule conflict. But he'll only be on the show for 20 minutes, so be enthusiastic when you chat with him! Sana. Sana: Ok. [4] S: [The guest is Naozumi...we haven't spoken since our relationship died...once I saw him at a press conference.] S: Hi. Naozumi: [Is the relationship still off...] S: [Guess it doesn't matter...we can still work well together...] [5] Director: Ok! That's great! Tomorrow's show time, let's go knock them dead. Let me say again, it's a live broadcast! So don't be late! ----------------------------------------------------------- p. 159 [1] Network exec: Haha...Sana, with Naozumi as our special guest, the ratings are going to be very good! Thanks! Sana! S: Sure! I'll give it my best! Network exec: Sana, knock them dead tomorrow. Lana: [This is my first time, I'm so excited.] S: Yeah, we'll do our best! [2] Crew: Knock them dead Sana! Thanks... [3] R: Rehearsal went well, Sana...do your best tomorrow! S: Yeah... [4] S: [Wonder how Hayama is? Other people blame him. What would he think, when people talk about him like that...?] [5] S: [Hayama, no matter how bad you are...I...] [6] R: Hey? The cell phone? Besides sensei and I, does anyone know this number? S: Oh! I just told Tsuyoshi and Fuka today. Is this the one? R: Yeah! ----------------------------------------------------------------------- p. 160 [1] S: This is Sana. Tsuyoshi? Fuka? Who is this? ...what's going on? [2] S: Hello, hello? H: ... [3] H: It's me... [4] S: [Hayama!?] Ah! How's it going? Is anything... H: Tsuyoshi was just here...he told me the number. S: Oh...[It scared me.] So... [5] H: I want to...see you now. [6] Close up of Sana on the cell phone. ------------------------------------------------------ p. 161 [1] S: Ok...where are you? My work? Just finished. [2] Shot of Sana's back approaching Hayama. [3] Shot of Sana approaching Hayama . [4] Close up of Hayama watching Sana approach . [5] S: What's up? H: I have to...go away. S: Mmmm? To where? ------------------------------------------------------- p. 162 [1] H: To find Komori ...and bring him back. S: What... [2] S: You know where Komori is? H: I don't know...but probably... [3] S: What's this? H: This was left inside my drawer. [4] S: Komori's...journal!? Oh! It looks like a diary! Can I read it? I want to read it! [5] Journal: X month X date: This morning I ran into Hayama near the shoe racks, I said to him, "Morning", he said to me, "Hi!" I feel like we have gotten close. Yesterday I left school late, mom yelled at me so I rushed home today. Today mom didn't yell at me. [6] S: ? ---------------------------------------------- p.163 [1] Journal: Went hiking today, on the bus I sat in the second spot behind Hayama, very near him, I was really happy. The girls in class wanted to take pictures with him, but he turned them down, I thought that was real cool. I didn't finish my lunch, my mom yelled at me. Journal: Today at the restaurant, I ate lunch near Hayama, I feel like we are pretty good friends, makes me happy. I got a hundred in the mock exam during tutoring. I think mom can sleep better after she sees this. Journal: Sengoku-Sensei said to Hayama, "You still want to come to class?" Hayama said, "Not at all" and then left the classroom. Can't believe he could talk like that to the scary Sengoku-Sensei. I'm proud he's my friend. Journal: Today I went to physics classroom with Hayama. Hayama said, "Forgot to wear my white clothes." H: I'm beat! Forgot to wear my white clothes. Y: Your uniform is white too, it doesn't matter! Journal: Today Hayama slept the whole day... Journal: Hayama got suspended... Journal: Looks like he hit... Journal: Hayama totally... S: ...? [2] S: All he wrote about was you...and his mother...[His mother must be called Old Hag Komori ...] Are you guys good friends? [3] H: No, truthfully I only remember speaking to him yesterday. Maybe he said "morning" to me, and I said "hi" back! [I didn't see his face.] ----------------------------------------------------------- p. 164 [1] H: Is he gay? [What should I do if he tells me he loves me?] S: No! This is not the same as being gay...maybe... [2] S: I can...understand. Don't you have a posse that idolizes you? He's the type. He...really idolizes you. [3] S: People like you...act like simple animals, you do what you want, and you say what you want. Those people who can't do that, they hope to be like you... H: Are you picking a fight with me? S: But...he does act kind of strange. He always thought you guys were friends. [4] Journal: Hayama betrayed me. This has really hurt me and made me really sad, I want to disappear. I want to die! Why don't I go to the Lake F and Forest that we went to on that trip in tutoring class? That's a good spot. I got to prepare and not let mom know. S: Ah! He said, "Lake F and Forest"! Where is this...!? [5] H: I want to try there! S: But...but...He said, "Want to commit suicide"... he wants to die... [6] H: I don't think so...he was acting like a girl, putting his journal in my drawer...I don't think he will kill himself. He will be there waiting for me. What a pain in the ass... ------------------------------------------------------- p. 165 [1] S: ...oh...so...why did you call me? [2] H: I don't have money to buy a train ticket. Lend it to me? [3] S: You...[borrow money!] H: Don't tell the adults, I'm going by myself...[stay cool]. I used all my change in the arcade...[Tsuyoshi has no money and Fuka has no money]. I thought you probably would have some money... [4] S: Alright! But, I don't always carry money. But at least I have train money...about you leaving, did you tell Fuka yet? H: I didn't tell anyone... [5] S: You should tell her first. Fuka said you guys don't talk much...is this enough money? [6] H: That's enough... --------------------------------------------------- p. 166 [1] H: I...did too many bad things. S: Yeah...that's right! [2] H: He...what Sengoku-Sensei said, can really tick people off, but he spoke the truth...and I'm...someone who has been hurt before...I think...a lot of... [3] S: Yeah... [4] H: Even if I feel sorry...it's too...I can't change it now...there's nothing I can do. [5] S: Yeah... [6] H: So...now I will do what I can. I really don't know Komori ...he's so strange, and he got mad...but, looks like he really needs me...so I'm going to go. --------------------------------------------------------------- p. 167 [1] S: Really...so that's the story... [2] S: ...Hayama...? [3] S: Why don't I go with you! [4] H: [5] S: Mmmm...[maybe I should stop him...maybe an adult should go...but, he will go himself...] [6] S: [So, I won't stop him.] [7] H: Train's here. PA: The train will arrive at platform 3. Passengers should stay behind the red line. H: Oh. --------------------------------------------------------------- p. 168 [1] H: I'm sorry...lend me your watch also... S: You forgot to bring it? It's a woman's watch! H: Doesn't matter. [2] S: Wait a second. [3] H: [The train's here...express train going to F province...] S: Oh! Ok! [4] H: Sana... [5] S: Yes? H: ...I still... ------------------------------------------------------------------- p. 169 [1] H: I...still...like you... [2] H: Please...wait for me...I will... [3] Close up of Sana. --------------------------------------------------------------------- p. 170 [1] S: [Will...what?] [2] S: Haya... [3] The train on platform 3 is moving. [4] S: ...Hayama... ----------------------------------------------------------------------- p. 171 [1] S: [I like you.] [2] S: [Like you...] [3] S: [Like you...I really want to cry!] ----------------------------------------------------------------------- p. 171 [1] Shot of Sana suddenly noticing the journal. [2] Journal: Hayama betrayed me. Hayama betrayed me. Akito Hayama. Akito Hayama. Akito Hayama, I will die in front of you. Akito Hayama, I will kill you. I will kill you. [3] S: [Hayama...I have a bad feeling about this.] [4] S: [Take care...Hayama...] ------------------------------------------------------------------------- p. 172 [1] S: [I'll wait for you...] [2] Shot of woods. [3] Komori : ...ma... [4] Komori : ...Hayama... ------------------------------------------------------------------------- End of Volume 7