kkjch28Kamikaze Kaitou Jeanne
by: Tanemura Arina
translation by: Emi-chan

Chapter 28 -- Promise
(Yakusoku)
Emi chan's note :
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo *sob sob sob* KKJ will end in the next, next 
issue!!!!
*gaaaaahhhhhhh* And I sooooooo need to get that issue *sigh* Well, my KKJ
translating days will be over soon.... ^_^;; And no more pretty cover
inserts *wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh* Save me!! Save meeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!! *bawls
under bed sheets*

But this issue's cover made me fall in love with Noin...... Although, I liked
Noin before... sorta.. (even though I was burning Shikaidou dolls to warm my
hands.. -_-;;) I just can't stay away from evil male characters!!!! *arrrhhh*
Even though Noin doesn't end up being too evil.... Nevertheless, I think he's
still categorised as an evil character... right?

note :
text in [] are actions



(Cover text)
Fin's monologue : If I could see you once again, I would overcome anything. Yes,
even falling
into the darkness can be a condition of happiness.

[Maron stares at Fin]
(Flashback) Fin : Nagoya Chiaki has ceased to exist. He's dead.
Maron : That's a lie.
[Fin falls over with a sweatdrop]
Fin : Wha.... Wh..wh...
Maron : As if the devil is going to do something that mild. Losing Chiaki is the
biggest shock
to me. If the devil's aim is to hurt me, then instead of making him disappear,
wouldn't it be natural to shooting Chiaki's body right in front of me?
Fin : [in shock] Don't say such cruel things in such a calm manner!
Maron : Thanks to a series of incidents, instead of becoming weaker, Maron
chan's heart is
becoming more strong... Fin! Aren't you going too far with your prank jokes?
Fin : ......
Maron : Give back Chiaki! [smiles] And for you, I want you to come back..
[Fin stares, then looks a little sad]
Fin : It's impossible Maron. I am a banished angel. My life was forgiven because
I have to
follow devil-sama's orders. As devil-sama orders.....
[Fin gets out a sword]
Fin : [jumps towards Maron] Kill Kusakabe Maron!!
[The sword just misses Maron]
Fin : While I'm drawing your attention, devil-sama is gaining more and more of
God's power!
Maron : !?
Fin : If I get hold of your power right now, God can be eliminated!
Maron : [thinks] No...!!
Voice : Fin!
[Fin is startled]
Fin : [turning] Acce... !
[Access, Celcia and Toki are behind her]
Fin : Celcia... Toki... It can't be... How....?
Access : These two were alive! They were frozen into the ice alive! Fin, listen
carefully!
At that time, Sagami was possessed by an evil spirit!
Celcia : Fin, I'm so sorry! Because we were careless, something like that
happened....
Toki : Fin san! The one who pushed you into exile from heaven was the devil! But
then the devil
pretended to save you and got you in his hands! Do you want to be used by such a
terrible
person!?
Fin : [frowns] Don't speak ill of devil-sama!!
[Toki, Access and Celcia are taken aback]
Fin : I heard about Sagami from devil-sama so I know... I knew and I chose the
path of
banishment... The person responsible for that incident was me. My heart was
disrupted and I
couldn't hold back my poer.... It's all my fault.
Access : I'm dissappointed in you Fin!
[Fin feels slightly hurt]
Access : You were the one who vowed the most devotion to God out of any of us
and then you
go and work for the devil of your own free will! That's the stupidest thing to
do as an angel!
What does it accomplish, living such a miserable life!!
[Fin starts to hurt more and more]
Maron : Stop it Access!!
[Fin gets her sword]
Fin : Hmph... You noisy angel... If you don't understand then.... I shall let
you know this
feeling!!!
[Fin lunges at him with the sword]
Celcia : Fin, no!
Toki : Fin san!
[Maron holds them off with a stern look]
[Access is shocked]
[There is a loud clang of metal against rock]
[Fin has stuck the sword in the rock, right next to Access' head]
[Access stares at her]
Fin : Access... Have you forgotten..?
[Maron watches]
Fin : You said... that when I came back, you had something to talk to me about.
[Access realises]
Fin : I.... promised to listen... That's what I came back for...
[Access stares]

(flashback)
Access : And when you get back, I've got something to say to you! Will you
listen to it?
Fin : If I feel like it [giggles] I'm kidding. Sure I'll listen to you!

Fin : I knew it was bad to take the hand of the devil.... But.. If I could just
meet Access
once more.... If I could keep my promise... then anything was all right...
Monologue : Even if I did the worst thing an angel could do... Even if I threw
away my morals
or my pride..
Fin : I wanted to see you...
[Fin starts to cry]
Access : Fin..
Fin : ...nted to... I've loved you for a long time!
Maron : [teary] Fin...
[Celcia is crying]
Fin : But it's okay now..
[Fin takes out the sword from the ground and throws it away]
Fin : If I have such a body that can only hurt you...
[Fin glows and her clothes disintegrate]
Maron : !
Fin : [smiles] I shall follow the regulation given to me. Fin will disappear.
Access : ! Fin!!
Fin : To be have relationships with an angel is a total betrayal to
devil-sama.... Now my last
place to belong has gone....
Maron : No! Fin!!
[Maron holds her hand out, but as soon as she touches the glowing light, Maron
gets blown
away]
Maron : ...aghh!
Fin : [smiles] I'm sorry Maron. It's not true that I hate you. I decided this
since the time
I got the order to kill you Maron. Because Fin can't do that to you. I love you
Maron.
Please believe me.
[Maron cries]
Access : [thinks] Fin will disappear? How can I let that happen!!
[Access grabs Fin's sword]
Celcia : Access...!
Toki : !
[Access cuts off his hair]
Access : Fin, I'll give you my power. Even though you're empty, Fin's body is
still an angel!
I'll fill you up with my power!
[Access gives Fin his power and a surge of enegery glows]
Fin : I'm no different.... And my symbol of banishment won't disappear... Is it
impossible?
Access : No! There's lots of way to do it!!
[Access grabs Fin and hugs her, his body burning]
Fin : Access, no! You'll die if you do that!
Access : If Fin's going to be all right, I don't care! I'm sorry I said such
horrible things
before.. I can tell you the words I promised now... I love you Fin! I love you!
[Fin cries]
Fin : [thinks] Access....
[A hand is placed on Fin's hair]
Fin : [thinks] Toki...
Fin : !
Toki : After melting the ice, we drew in a lot of holy power. I don't mind
however much you take!
Celcia : We returned Natsuki san to the soil! Don't worry!
Fin : [thinks] Celcia...
Maron : I'll always believe you.. I'll always believe you, so be honest..
Fin : [thinks] Maron...
Maron : I love you Fin..
Fin monologue : I want to return... I actually want to return once more...
[Fin glows and transforms into a new appearance]
Fin monologue : I want to live with the wind --------...
Maron : Fin, you're beautiful...
Fin : I... Was I able to become a True Angel?
Celcia, Toki, Access : It appears so...
[The three of them are depressed, and have shrunk in size and have their black
wings back]
Fin : Aaah!! You've all turned back to Black Angels---!! I'm sorry...
Celcia : No, no, Fin [smiles] It's not "sorry"!
Fin : [smiles] Thank you
Toki : But with just the holy power revived, your appearance can not be changed
so that means
God helped you! You were forgiven, Fin!
Fin : But I... even if God forgave me... I can't go back to the heavens... I
have nowhere..
Maron : Fin, your place is right here.
[Maron holds her hand out]
Maron : Come, Fin Fish.
[Fin stares, then becomes teary]
[She trembles, then changes back to her normal small angel appearance]
Fin : [cries] Maron!
Maron : [smiles] Fin! Welcome home!
Fin : [cries] I'm sorry!
Access : [slightly annoyed] Isn't she a little happier than when she was with
me!?
Toki : I won't be jealous... I won't...
Celcia : Don't.... Don't... [pats Toki on the back]
Maron : Fin! Where's Chiaki!?
Fin : He got sent to devil-sama's palace.
Maron : !
Fin : I'm sorry, I can't get him back with Fin's power. But it's okay, Maron has
Fin! [giggles]
Maron : Noooo----!! (small print) You're still unfriendly with him!
[The ground suddenly starts shaking violently]
Maron : ! What!? An earthquake!?
Access : No, this shaking... It's when God's power is weakening and can't hold
the balance of
the earth.
Maron : It can't be... Has it gone that far... [thinks] Because I've been so
slow!!
[Maron gets teary]
Maron : [thinks] Don't cry, stupid Maron! Think of something instead of crying!!
Miyako and
Minazuki kun, Mother and Father are here!!
[SD Noin asks "What about me?"]
[Suddenly, a light glows at Maron's feet]
Maron : What? This is....
[All of them disappear]

[They all land in a palace]
Maron : Aaaah! Ouch.. Ohhh what is going on..?
[Then Maron sees something and is amazed]
Maron : !? I can see Earth!? So that means...
[Maron turns pale]
Riru : [appears] This is the heavens... The place where God has his presence.
Welcome, the chosen
maiden...
Access, Celcia, Toki : Riru sama!
Maron : [whispers] Fin, who is it?
Fin : Great Angel Riru sama. (small print) A very important person
Riru : Come, this way... God awaits you. Oh, Fin, you too.
[Fin regains her True Angel appearance]
Riru : God has worried greatly over you. He used the last of his little strength
to turn you
into a True Angel. We shall show him how you look.
Fin : Yes..
Maron : [thinks] God.. I wonder what kind of person he is.. I'm so nervous..
[They all follow Riru]
Riru : I have brought them.
Voice : Over here...
[In a large hallway, on a flat-topped pyramid is a large glow of light]
Maron : [thinks] What? This is God? [stares]
God : Maron... Thank you for coming... It has been the first time meeting you in
that form..
But now we can not celebrate our meeting. The power of the devil is stronger
than assumed
and an unbelievable amount of humans have been posessed and my power has been
drawn out. All
we have left is the power inside you. However, the devil can not gain your power
so easily.
That is why I would like to request you to fight the decisive battle. If you
refuse, Nagoya
Chiaki's life will cease. For both, it is a battle of life and death that we
must use all of our
power for. Will you fight that battle?
V-chan note: God gets his own color. :o)

----- END OF CHAPTER 28 -----