Kimagure Orange Road "Robot Kyou-chan II" Volume 17, Story 8 WB Volume 10, Story 6 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation & compilation by : Craig H. Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Matthew Akira Klippenstein Last revision : 09-09-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 105 (145) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 105 (145)--TITLE PAGE [Madoka kneels, dressed in a kimono and with her hair braided and bow-tied.] MAIN TITLE (at top) Robot Kyou-chan II SUB-TITLE (at bottom) Fresh from the Bath with a Touch of Pink... --------------------------------------------------- p 106 (146) 1 [Madoka stands at the entryway, wearing her ABCB shirt.] Kyousuke: Eh? Something important to tell me? 2 Kyousuke: [blankly] What do you mean, "something important to tell me?" 3 [Madoka looks back with a touch of sadness.] Madoka: ...... Me and... 4 [Beaming, he takes her by the hand and pulls her in.] Kyousuke: Well anyway, come in, come in! C'mon, come in! Kyousuke FX: Madoka: ! 5 [He leaves her sitting in his room and exits.] Kyousuke: Wait here just a minute, 'kay? Something to drink? A cola? Oolong tea? Madoka: .......... Oolong tea. 6 Kyousuke: (What could this "important thing" be about, Ayukawa? "Me and...?") suspense FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 107 (147) 1 narration: Before long, it'll be the last summer vacation of high school life, so... "Go somewhere with me, just the two of us..." 2 [He walks into the kitchen, a smile on his face.] Kyousuke: (I wish! Perhaps that's the important thing she has to tell me...!) door FX: 3 [He looks in the refrigerator.] Kyousuke: Huh? Don't we have any oolong tea? Kurumi: [off] I drank it. 4 [Kurumi is lying on the floor, watching TV.] Kyousuke: [off] Sorry, but could you go and buy some for me? Kurumi: When this show's over... 5 Kyousuke: [angrily] You're making someone wait. Hurry, hurry!! Can't you obey your older brother's command?! [Kurumi sits up, irked.] Kurumi: You think you're so important! If you want me to obey... 6 Kurumi: [beaming] Then hypnotize me. Kurumi FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 108 (148) 1 Kyousuke: What do I do to hypnotize you? Kurumi: Do this! 2 [She reaches over and touches his forehead with her index finger. The air crackles with the Power.] Kurumi: Obey whatever anyone commands, unconditionally!! Kurumi FX: 3 Kyousuke: [blankly] ...... Yes. Kurumi: All right. Then go buy oolong tea yourself. 4 Kurumi: [smiling] After that, pay me for ice cream. Kyousuke: ...... Yes. 5 [Madoka stares at the ground, in thought.] 6 [View pans back. She's seated on the edge of his bed.] --------------------------------------------------- p 109 (149) 1 [She looks across the room, at his desk...] 2 [...at a picture of Kyousuke, Hikaru and herself. Hikaru is in the middle, clinging to and smiling at Kyousuke. Kyousuke has a smile, himself. Madoka has a soft smile.] 3 [Madoka picks up and studies the framed picture.] 4 [She focuses in on Kyousuke and Hikaru.] 5 [Madoka profile.] 6 [Tight shot of her hands holding the framed picture.] 7 [Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.] breaking glass FX: [off] --------------------------------------------------- p 110 (150) 1 [Madoka looks up.] 2 [A view of the closed bedroom door.] Kurumi: [off] Oh no-o-o! You broke a cup, oniichan. Get another one. Hurry, hurry! 3 [Madoka stands, still holding the framed picture in her hands.] 4 [She sets it gently back down.] picture FX: 5 [She looks down at it, with a tiny smile.] 6 [Smiling, Kurumi sticks her head in the door.] Kurumi: Welco-o-ome! door FX: 7 [Still smiling, Kurumi sets a tray down on a low table. Madoka kneels on the floor on the other side.] Kurumi: Here you go! Manami-chan is over at a friend's place right now. Sorry for the racket! Madoka: .......... Thank you. --------------------------------------------------- p 111 (151) 1 [Kyousuke sits at the table, eyes vacant. Madoka turns towards him. Kurumi parks herself at the table and watches.] Madoka: [to Kyousuke] Umm... Actually... 2 [Madoka glances at Kurumi, who smiles.] Madoka FX: Kurumi: Eh heh! 3 [Madoka grabs his wrist and pulls him out of the room.] Madoka: .......... Umm... Not here. 4 [Looking concerned, Kurumi holds up a hand.] door FX: Kurumi: Yikes... Wait! Right now, oniichan's...! 5 [View of a park near the Kasuga apartment building.] --------------------------------------------------- p 112 (152) 1 [They stand in the park across the street, near some benches and a public phone.] Madoka: What I have to say... Isn't important. 2 [Madoka smiles up at the sky.] Madoka: Hikaru told me... I was kind... Still, I wonder if I'm a kind big sister to Hikaru. 3 [She turns to him.] Madoka: Hey, do you think so, too, Kasuga-kun? 4 [Kyousuke portrait. Blank as ever.] 5 Kyousuke: ...... Yes. Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 113 (153) 1 [His pov of Madoka. She looks back without expression.] 2 [She drops her gaze.] 3 Madoka: [smiling] ALL RIGHT! 4 [She motions towards a park bench.] Madoka: Then, sit here for a bit! Kyousuke: ...... Yes. 5 [View of the entryway to a movie theater.] sign: Now Playing!!! --------------------------------------------------- p 114 (154) 1 [Inside, Hikaru watches the movie raptly. She holds an open bag in her hands and munches on sembei. Flanking her are Yuusaku and Shin'ichi. But they're busy glaring at each other, around the oblivious Hikaru.] Hikaru FX: 2/3 [Closer views of the two. They think the same thought bubble.] Yuusaku/Shin'ichi: (Shi-i-it! Why am I here with this guy...? Hikaru-chan is too nice.) 4 [Hikaru is engrossed in the movie.] Hikaru FX: 5 [Her pov of the screen. A well-dressed couple stare into each other's eyes.] actor: You... Are the one I want to run off with. 6 [Hikaru blushes and looks dreamily down at the ground.] Hikaru: I'm so weak when it comes to words like these. Hikaru FX: [The two boys are surprised.] bag: Souka Sembei --------------------------------------------------- p 115 (155) 1 [Both look towards Hikaru.] Yuusaku: .......... 2 Shin'ichi: .......... 3 [View of some stairs near the park. No one is about.] Madoka: [off] Hikaru... Seems troubled now. 4 [The two sit on the bench and look straight ahead.] Madoka: You know about Yuu-kun and Harada-kun, don't you. 5 Madoka: [off] She was invited by the two of them to a movie tonight, and said it was wrong to refuse, so it seems she went anyway... But Kasuga-kun... Is that okay? 6 voice: [off] Is that... What you really feel? [Madoka turns towards Kyousuke.] Madoka heartbeat FX: Madoka: HUH?! --------------------------------------------------- p 116 (156) 1 [Madoka realizes that another couple is talking on a bench nearby. You may recognize the guy. The blonde girl, Nekomi, is new. The couple clasp hands and stare into each other's eyes.] Nekomi: Umao-san... You have a wife and kids... So we shouldn't take our relationship any further than this. 2 [He embraces her tightly.] Umao: Nekomi-san!! Umao/Nekomi hug FX: 3 [Eyes drawn wide, Kyousuke and Madoka look back over their shoulders at the couple.] 4 [Blushing, Madoka gets to her feet.] Madoka: .......... Hey, let's go somewhere else. Madoka stand-up FX: 5 Nekomi: [off] Ahh, you mustn't! But, hug me tighter!! [Kyousuke's face registers the command.] 6 [Kyousuke grabs Madoka by the wrist and pulls her down next to him.] Kyousuke FX: Madoka: Ah! Kyousuke: Yes! --------------------------------------------------- p 117 (157) 1 [Kyousuke takes the surprised Madoka by the arms.] 2 [She looks up into his (blank) eyes.] Madoka: .......... Kasuga-kun. Kyousuke: ...... Yes. 3 [Kyousuke and Madoka remain in a loose embrace.] Umao: [off] Even I know it isn't good to go on like this forever. But... 4 Nekomi: [off] Do you like me more? --------------------------------------------------- p 118 (158) 1 Kyousuke: ...... Yes. [Madoka looks up at him in surprise.] Madoka heartbeat FX: Madoka: Huh?! 2 [Looking totally flustered, Madoka looks to the side.] Madoka: Th-that just now was the next bench!! 3 Kurumi: [off] Oniichan! [Madoka looks off-panel, wide-eyed.] Madoka: Ah! 4 Madoka: [off] A-anyway, if you're careless, Hikaru will be taken away!! Go and rescue her!! --------------------------------------------------- p 119 (159) 1 [Madoka shouts after Kyousuke, who is running off.] Madoka: She should be at a movie theater called Cinema 1!! Kyousuke: ...... Yes. 2 [She watches him run away, with a soft smile.] 3 [She drops her eyes and gently punches herself in the head.] Madoka hand FX: Madoka: Something like this... Would disqualify me from being a big sister! 4 [Exterior view of the entrance to the theater.] --------------------------------------------------- p 120 (160) 1 [Again, Yuusaku and Shin'ichi share the same thought bubble. They glare at each other around the oblivious Hikaru.] Yuusaku/Shin'ichi: (I can't be hanging out with this guy forever! When this movie ends, it will be pitch-dark here for an instant.) 2/3 Yuusaku/Shin'ichi: (Then, in one stroke, I'll swipe Hikaru-chan and run off.) 4 [Tight shot. The boys extend hands towards the unsuspecting Hikaru.] bag: Souka Se... 5 lights off FX: [Three pairs of eyes look towards us in the dark. Ya gotta love the middle pair of eyes. ^_^] 6 [The outer pair of eyes turn towards the unsuspecting middle pair.] Yuusaku/Shin'ichi: NOW!! 7 [A heroic-looking Kyousuke thrusts open the doors to the darkened theater.] doors FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 121 (161) 1 [A pitch-dark panel.] FX: 2 [Another pitch-dark panel.] voice: C'mon! Hurry!! 3 [View of the theater entrance.] voice: [off] Wah ha ha ha ha ha! 4 [Yuusaku looks back over his shoulder.] Yuusaku: Did it-t-t!! 5 [Shin'ichi looks back over his shoulder.] Shin'ichi: Serves him right!! 6 [View pans back. The two stand side-by-side and smile at each other.] Yuusaku/Shin'ichi: Well, now it's just the two of us! 7 [View pans back further. The boys are clasping hands.] Yuusaku/Shin'ichi: ...... HM? --------------------------------------------------- p 122 (162) 1 [On the sidewalk, elsewhere, Hikaru catches her breath. Kyousuke has her firmly grasped around a wrist.] Hikaru: 2 Hikaru: Ahh, I was surprised. To think you'd come here for me!! It was just like the story in the movie just now. But why...? 3 [He looks down into her eyes with conviction.] Kyousuke: You're the one... I wanted to run off with, Hikaru-chan. 4 [His words give her pause...] Hikaru FX: 5 [...and she leaps into his arms.] Hikaru: I'm so happy-y-y!! --------------------------------------------------- p 123 (163) 1 [They stand on the sidewalk. Hikaru continues to smile and clasp him around the neck. Kyousuke stands with his arms at his sides, staring forward like a zombie.] Hikaru: Sure enough, Sempai, you're the greatest!! Kyousuke: ...... Yes. 2 [In the park, Madoka listens quietly while Kurumi talks.] Kurumi: Yeah. And then, I hypnotized oniichan to obey whatever anyone tells him, so I'm worried... Madoka: [gaze dropped] I see... Hypnotized, hm... Madoka: (It's no wonder he was saying "yes, yes" no matter what anyone said. Such a Yes Man...) 3 [The two boys stand side by side and stare back at us in disbelief.] Yuusaku/Shin'ichi: (..........) ---------------------------------------------------