Kimagure Orange Road "Unrequited Love Graffiti!" Volume 17, Story 7 WB Volume 10, Story 5 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation & compilation by : Craig H. Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Matthew Akira Klippenstein Last revision : 09-09-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 85 (125) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 85 (125)--TITLE PAGE [Madoka sits in a swimsuit, one arm held high.] MAIN TITLE (at top) Unrequited Love Graffiti! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) Your Face Is Too Dazzling... --------------------------------------------------- p 86 (126) 1 [Panels 1-2 are black-bordered, denoting the flashback. This is Yuusaku's pov of Shin'ichi.] Shin'ichi: [flashback] Do you know the "Hot Rod" motorcycle gang? That name's known a bit around this area... 2 Shin'ichi: My close pal is the leader. He's a 3-dan in karate... 3 [Yuusaku walks down the hallway at school, hands in his pockets and staring at the ground in troubled thought.] Yuusaku FX: 4 narration: It would be easy to level that guy, but if he calls on his gang buddies and we fight, it's obvious I'd be at a distinct disadvantage. narration: At the very least, I better avoid dueling with him! 5 narration: Shit! Even though there's that eyesore Kasuga...!! --------------------------------------------------- p 87 (127) 1 Yuusaku: (Anyway, to make Hikaru-chan turn her attention on me...! That's all I have to do!!) 2 [Exterior shot of a school building.] 3 [Yuusaku demolishes his umbrella with one hand.] Yuusaku FX: [flashback] umbrella FX: 4 Yuusaku: [flashback] ...... I better tell you... I'm a 2-dan in karate...! 5 [Shin'ichi stands at the railing on a school rooftop, and stares off into the distance.] Shin'ichi: 2-dan in karate...hmm... --------------------------------------------------- p 88 (128) 1 narration: What should I do? I said that I have a powerful friend in a gang... 2 narration: But that guy caused trouble and is in the slammer right now, and isn't here... 3 narration: So if I duel directly, it's obvious I'll be at a distinct disadvantage. 4 narration: In other words, before that guy challenges me, I have to make Hikaru turn her attention on me!! 5 [Exterior view of a school building.] --------------------------------------------------- p 89 (129) 1 [Out on school grounds and carrying her schoolbag, Hikaru looks aside, off-panel.] Hikaru: Huh? A movie? 2 [View pans back. Yuusaku nervously stands before her with two tickets held out.] Yuusaku: Y-yeah. If it's okay, why don't we go see it today? I have two tickets... 3 Hikaru: [pondering] .......... Well... 4 [As she's considering, another pair of tickets appear before her gaze.] tickets FX: 5 Shin'ichi: Why don't you go with me? Yuusaku FX: Hikaru: Oh! --------------------------------------------------- p 90 (130) 1 [Yuusaku grabs Shin'ichi by the shirtfront.] Yuusaku FX: Yuusaku: What's this, you bastard!! 2 [Shin'ichi shades his eyes and dramatically looks off to the left. Yuusaku releases his hold.] Shin'ichi: Oh? Could that be my gang buddy? Yuusaku FX: 3 [The two yell in each other's faces.] Yuusaku: That's cowardly, you bastard!! Shin'ichi: Who is?!! 4 [Madoka walks by and turns to watch the three.] Madoka FX: 5 [Hikaru spots her and smiles.] Hikaru: Ah! --------------------------------------------------- p 91 (131) 1 [Hikaru waves and runs towards her.] Hikaru: Madoka-sa-a-an! Hikaru footsteps FX: 2 [Hikaru smiles and waves back at the two boys.] Hikaru: Sorry! I'm sorry, but I promised to go shopping with Madoka-san today!! Hikaru: See ya! 3 Shin'ichi/Yuusaku: [waving tickets] Ahh... The movie...!! 4 Shin'ichi/Yuusaku FX: 5 [They scream in each other's faces again.] Shin'ichi/Yuusaku: It's because you're so stubborn, you jerk! 6 [View down a tree-lined street.] --------------------------------------------------- p 92 (132) 1 [Hikaru's pov of Madoka, who doesn't meet her gaze.] Madoka: You're so popular, aren't you, Hikaru. 2 [Hikaru is a bit taken aback.] Hikaru: Really? 3 Madoka: [soft smile] Those two are serious about you. 4 [They enter a park.] Hikaru: But, to be honest, they're a pain. 5 Hikaru: Because, I'm... Only thinking about Sempai... 6 [Madoka keeps her gaze forward, without any expression.] --------------------------------------------------- p 93 (133) 1 Hikaru: [smiling] That's it. Next time, I'll introduce Sempai to those two and make them recognize our relationship! If I do that, then even those two shouldn't pester me to death any more! 2 [Brightly, Hikaru raises a fist in the air.] Hikaru: All right!! Now it'll be okay!! 3 [Madoka doesn't look at her.] 4 Madoka: That's no good, Hikaru. Hikaru: HUH?! --------------------------------------------------- p 94 (134) 1 [Madoka looks at Hikaru, wide-eyed and embarrassed. Hikaru looks back, blankly.] Madoka: Ahh... I mean. Because... 2 [View down the path.] Madoka: [off] Maybe you'll be okay then, Hikaru... 3 [Madoka drops her gaze.] Madoka: But I think those two would be terribly hurt. 4 [Hikaru looks at Madoka as the two walk. Madoka doesn't meet her gaze.] 5 Hikaru: Madoka-san... 6 Hikaru: .......... You're so kind, Madoka-san. --------------------------------------------------- p 95 (135) 1 [Madoka still doesn't meet Hikaru's gaze.] Madoka: .......... It's... Nothing like that. 2 [Hikaru places a hand on the back of her head and stares ahead.] Hikaru: Then, what should I do? 3 Hikaru: [off] If I do it that way, then I can't say that, can I. 4 [Madoka portrait. She looks askance at her friend, perhaps a bit troubled- looking.] 5 [Hikaru smiles and waves.] Hikaru: Then, maybe for now I'll go out with them to the movie tonight. Because I feel bad. Bye, Madoka-san. 6 [Madoka waves back.] --------------------------------------------------- p 96 (136) 1 [View down a darkened street lined with stores.] 2 [Exterior night shot of ABCB.] 3 [View of the front wall inside.] 4 [Water runs onto a sinkload of dirty dishes.] water FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 97 (137) 1 [Hikaru stands in the park.] Hikaru: [flashback] .......... You're so kind, Madoka-san. 2 [Water continues to fill the sink of dishes.] water FX: 3 [Her hands in the sink, Madoka stares down, deep in thought.] water FX: 4 [Closeup of her face.] 5 [Water flows over the side of the sink.] overflowing water FX: 6 [Madoka is still deep in her thoughts.] narration: I'm a liar... --------------------------------------------------- p 98 (138) 1 [A hand reaches out to turn off the faucet.] faucet FX: 2 [It's Master, who looks at Madoka inquiringly.] 3 Master: Something... On your mind? [Madoka stares down at the sink.] Madoka: .......... 4 [She doesn't meet his gaze, instead staring down at the sink.] Madoka: Two boys are fighting over Hikaru... But Hikaru... 5 Madoka: [blushing] Has K-Kasuga-kun... 6 [Master watches her.] --------------------------------------------------- p 99 (139) 1 [She tries to put on a happy face.] Madoka: So I asked her how could she deal with it without hurting them...? It's hard, isn't it! 2 [Master is silent.] 3 [View into a corner of the coffee shop.] 4 [Master now sits at the counter, resting his head in one hand, and watching Madoka work behind the counter.] Master: Oh, I see. Hikaru-chan went to a movie with those boys tonight, huh. 5 Master: .......... What does Kasuga-kun think? 6 [Madoka turns to face him.] Madoka: Huh?! Madoka heartbeat FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 100 (140) 1 [He smiles merrily.] Master: I mean... About those two boys. 2 Master: Won't Hikaru-chan be taken away from him if he's careless? 3 [His pov of her. Madoka stares back without expression.] 4 [Master strokes his chin and studies the wall.] Master: But depending on how you think about it, Ayukawa-kun, that way for you might be... 5 Madoka: [in anguish] MASTER!! 6 [Master recoils.] Master: ...... Yes. --------------------------------------------------- p 101 (141) 1 [Madoka walks out from behind the counter, removing her apron. Master watches her from his seat.] Madoka FX: 2 Madoka: I'm going out for a bit... Is that okay? Master: .......... Sure, sure. 3 door FX: 4 [View down a darkened street.] 5 Madoka FX: 6 [She looks determined.] Madoka FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 102 (142) 1 [Exterior view of the Kasuga apartment building.] 2 [View of the front door from inside.] doorbell FX: 3 Kyousuke: Y-yes! 4 [He opens the door to find Madoka standing there.] door FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 103 (143) 1 [She steps in, but remains at the front door.] 2 [He looks at her with some joy. Madoka doesn't meet his gaze.] Kyousuke: Huh... Ayukawa. What's wrong? At this late hour... 3 [His pov of her. She looks back, sadly.] 4 Madoka: I have something important to tell you. ---------------------------------------------------