Kimagure Orange Road "A Room for Just the Two" Volume 17, Story 5 WB Volume 10, Story 3 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation & compilation by : Craig H. Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Matthew Akira Klippenstein Last revision : 09-08-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 45 (85) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 45 (85)--TITLE PAGE [Madoka reclines and looks pensive.] MAIN TITLE (at top) A Room for Just the Two SUB-TITLE (at bottom) A Whimsical Girl Who Likes to Be Alone... --------------------------------------------------- p 46 (86) 1 [Exterior view of Akane's house.] 2 [View of a lit window.] 3 [View down a winding hallway towards the stairs.] 4 [View of Akane's lower legs.] Akane footsteps FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 47 (87) 1 [Kyousuke follows Akane down the hallway.] 2 [Kyousuke portrait.] 3 [The two girlfriends follow nervously behind.] 4 [Kazuya smiles and trails them all with the camera.] 5 [Kyousuke blushes.] narration: Th-that Akane... 6 [Profile view of a defiant-looking Akane.] narration: Even if this is only acting... A girl asking me--a guy--into her room at night... --------------------------------------------------- p 48 (88) 1 [The brunette turns to the blonde.] brunette: H-hey. That Akane said she'd show us what we wanted to see most of all... 2 brunette: [blushing] But I wonder... Is it THAT, after all? 3 blonde: Y-yeah! I'm sure it's *THAT*. 4 [Their pov of an excited Kazuya.] Kazuya: Hey hey, what's "that"?! 5 [They flinch, eyes goggling.] brunette/blonde: EH!?! 6 [They exchange smiles.] brunette/blonde: "Th-that" is... Umm... --------------------------------------------------- p 49 (89) 1 [They smile at him. The blonde pats him on the head.] brunette: Well, it might be a little hard for a child like you, even if we explained it... Ho ho ho! blonde: Yeah... It's one of life's mysteries. Ho ho ho! 2 [Kazuya thinks about it.] Kazuya: ...... Hmm. 3 Kazuya: [brightly] Then... It's about "C" after all?! 4 brunette/blonde: Oh my! 5 [View down a hallway. This is a remarkably spacious home. Too bad half of it is hallways... ^_^] 6 [View down another hallway towards a door.] --------------------------------------------------- p 50 (90) 1 [We approach the closed door.] 2 [Akane stops in front of the door and spins around.] Akane: Now! 3 [She looks down blankly at Kazuya, still holding his camera.] Akane: Hm? 3 Akane: [angrily] What are you...?! Kazuya: Eh?! No... I'm... Uhh... 5 Akane: Children should be asleep already! [Kazuya high-tails it outta there.] 6 [Smiling, Akane ushers Kyousuke into her bedroom.] Akane: Well, in you go, Kyousuke. Just you. --------------------------------------------------- p 51 (91) 1 [Akane sticks her head out the open door...] Akane: Then, good ni-i-ight! 2 [...before closing it.] door FX: 3 [The two girls stare at the closed door in surprise.] 4 [They stare at each other blankly.] brunette/blonde: Huh? 5 [They stare at the door again.] 6 blonde: [pounding the door] W-wait a minute. What?!! Akane! You're not letting us in?! door FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 52 (92) 1 [Akane leans against the other side of the door and yells.] Akane: Why do I have to show that much to you guys? 2 brunette: S-sure... That's true, but... 3 Akane: Well?! Now... You believe, don't you?!! 4 blonde: ...... Y-yeah. Akane: [off] Then, good night!! 5 blonde: Damn. That Akane! 6 [The girls turn to leave, but stop when they hear...] voice: [off] Ohh... --------------------------------------------------- p 53 (93) 1 [Their pov of the closed door.] voice: [off] No! No good, no good! Not there. Higher! 2 [The two girls smile sickly.] brunette/blonde heartbeat FX: 3 [They edge closer to the door.] voice: [off] Ooo . There. There. 4 brunette/blonde: Wh-what's this...?! blonde FX: 5 [They press their ears against the wall.] brunette/blonde FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 54 (94) 1 voice: [off] Harder, harder-r-r. [The two are scandalized.] 2 blonde: Even if he is a boyfriend, you don't go that far. brunette: ...... Really. 3 [The two stagger back.] voice: [off] That's it. Yes, yes. You're pretty good, aren't you . 4 brunette: [kicking the door] What's this?! Aren't you guys going a bit too far?!! door FX: 5 [The two do pratfalls.] voice: [off] Ahh, that feels wonderful!! It's like I went to heaven! --------------------------------------------------- p 55 (95) 1 [Exterior shot of a lit window.] brunette/blonde: [off] Whew! 2 [The two girls drop their gazes.] brunette: I think... Doing something like this has begun to lose its purpose. blonde: .......... I think so, too. 3 [The two walk down the hall.] blonde: I'm going home and write another fan letter to CCB! brunette: I'm going home and go to bed, hugging my stuffed doll. 4 [The two stop and stare at each other.] blonde/brunette: Huh?! Don't you have a boyfriend? 5 [View through a window of the hallway. We see Akane's closed bedroom door.] --------------------------------------------------- p 56 (96) 1 [A corner of her room.] 2 [Akane lies on her back, asleep, in bed. Kyousuke sits on a chair and watches over her, wide-eyed.] 3 [Akane's TV is on. A commercial is running. A young man works on the back of his grandma.] young man: [TV] Does it itch here, obaachan? young man FX: screen titles: When an itch strikes--Kinkon young man: [TV] At a time like this, if we only had Kinkon... 4 [Akane rolls over on her side, still asleep.] Akane FX: 5 narration: What the...? Does this mean that, in the end, letting a guy into her room was a show on Akane's part that took all her strength...?! --------------------------------------------------- p 57 (97) 1 [He rests his cheek in his hand and thinks it over.] narration: It seems... I was anticipating things a little too much... 2 Kyousuke: [angrily] Akane!! 3 [He drops his eyes.] Kyousuke: *I'm* a guy!! 4 [He opens his eyes and leans toward her, glaring.] Kyousuke: Is it okay? I'm gonna sleep here!! 5 [She rolls over onto her other side, still asleep.] Akane FX: 6 [She talks in her sleep.] Akane: Sure... But wake me up on time tomorrow... I'm bad at waking up. --------------------------------------------------- p 58 (98) 1 [He rises and smiles down at her.] Kyousuke: Okay, okay... 2 [Something catches his eye up on the ceiling.] 3 [Pov shifts. It is a huge poster of Madoka, seated in her warm-weather school uniform. It is affixed to the ceiling above Akane's bed.] 4 [He closes his eyes.] Kyousuke: With that... I'm the one who'd be too afraid to go to sleep. 5 [A closer view of Madoka's poster.] --------------------------------------------------- p 59 (99) 1 [Panels 1-2 comprise a single view of Akane's house.] Kyousuke: [off] Good night... 2 Kyousuke: [off] ...Akane. 3 [The sun rises over Akane's house.] birds FX: [off] --------------------------------------------------- p 60 (100) 1 [View of a school building.] 2 [Akane and her two friends walk home together.] brunette: [smiling] Is that it, Akane? Then, you're saying you fell asleep back then? blonde: And on top of that, that guy was your cousin?! 3 Akane: [miffed] You guys also lied about having boyfriends... So don't talk big, huh! 4 [View of the sky.] brunette/blonde: [off] The same goes for you! --------------------------------------------------- p 61 (101) 1 blonde: So, in the end, none of us have boyfriends? 2 [The three touch their hands in the middle of a circle.] brunette: All right?! We won't ever get boyfriends before the others do! blonde: I swear it!! 3 [A view from in front as the three girls walk home down a street.] blonde: C'mon-n-n, really?! narration: And... 4 [View pans back. Three boys stand, talking amongst themselves in the direction the girls are taking.] boy 1: They're here!! They're here!! boy 2: Tsutomu, you call out to them. Tsutomu: Ehh? Me-e-e?! --------------------------------------------------- p 62 (102) 1 [The pov rises high. We look down upon the three girls walking towards the boys. The girls still haven't noticed what lies ahead.] narration: A vow of burning friendship... Who knows how long it will last...? Because... [Two boys push their blond friend forward.] Tsutomu: I-I understand! boy 1: Well, go! 2 [With surprise, the three girls notice what lies ahead.] 3 [View looking up at tree and sky.] Tsutomu: [off] E-excuse me! Tsutomu: [off] We're from Taiyou High School... narration: Maybe the summer for Akane and her friends has already arrived right before their eyes... 4 [Exterior view of a camera store.] --------------------------------------------------- p 63 (103) 1 [An angry clerk paws through a set of developed pictures. Kazuya staggers back.] clerk: What the...! Although you're just a kid, all you took were lecherous pictures like this... You precocious brat! 2 [A view of the pics. Leg and torso shots of Akane and her friends.] 3 [Kazuya turns around to see Kyousuke staring in through the front door of the store.] Kazuya: Huh!?! Kyousuke FX: 4 Kyousuke: Pervert!! 5 [View looking up at trees and sky.] narration: It looks like the bet's ended in a draw, too...!! ---------------------------------------------------