Kimagure Orange Road "Unintentionally the Cupid!" Volume 16, Story 8 WB Volume 9, Story 13 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation & compilation by : Craig H. Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Matthew Akira Klippenstein Last revision : 09-02-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 263 (145) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 263 (145)--TITLE PAGE [With feet slightly apart and knees pulled up tight against her chest, Madoka sits on the grass. Dressed in black from head to toe, she beams a radiant smile.] MAIN TITLE (at top) Unintentionally the Cupid! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) The Highlands of Wind and Greenery Prosper Under a Mysterious Premonition... --------------------------------------------------- p 264 (146) 1 [Exterior night view of a school building.] 2 [Madoka clenches her eyes shut and rushes into @Kyousuke's arms.] Madoka: Kyaaaaaa!! @Kyousuke: Oh!! 3 [Madoka looks off-panel in nervousness.] Madoka: J-just now, a shadow over there... @Kyousuke: Hm? 4 [They see themselves.] 5 Madoka: O-ohh. It's a mirror. --------------------------------------------------- p 265 (147) 1 [Isolated shot of windows and ceiling in a hallway.] @Kyousuke: [off] Are you that scared...? 2 [View down the long and dark hallway.] Madoka: [off] Meanie! As if you didn't know this sort of thing is my weakness! 3 @Kyousuke: (Ohh. I thought she was a pretty tough-minded girl, but she's more timid than I expected.) 4 @Kyousuke: There, there. 5 [He puts a protective arm around her.] @Kyousuke: Come closer. @Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 266 (148) 1 [@Mitsuru and Shiori pause at a phone booth.] 2 @Mitsuru: [hanging up] (It looks like she's not at home either.) phone receiver FX: 3 @Mitsuru: (It seems Ayukawa also hasn't returned home yet...) phone booth door FX: 4 [He walks down the street. Shiori follows, a few steps behind.] narration: I have a bad feeling about this... Hayakawa Mitsuru... Because he's a playboy...!! 5 [With a serious look, he visualizes @Kyousuke jumping all over Madoka.] narration: Can't be... Is he using my body and hitting on Ayukawa...?! @Mitsuru FX: 6 [Exterior view of a school's front gate.] --------------------------------------------------- p 267 (149) 1 [Someone with a flashlight walks down the hallway.] watchman FX: 2 watchman: I was certain... Someone's voice came from somewhere around here... 3 watchman: But is it just my imagination? watchman FX: 4 sign: Broadcast Club 5 [@Kyousuke and Madoka hide in the darkness of the room.] watchman FX: [off] 6 @Kyousuke: (Damn! It was such a great spot, but unexpected interference popped by!!) --------------------------------------------------- p 268 (150) 1 @Kyousuke FX: @Kyousuke: WAH! 2 @Kyousuke: I stepped on something!! 3 [He starts flipping switches on a control panel.] @Kyousuke: Let's see. Lights. switch FX: 4 @Kyousuke: None of these. switches FX: 5 [He turns on a broadcast switch.] switch label: Broadcast to Entire School--ON switch FX: 6 [Madoka flips a wall switch. The lights come on. @Kyousuke looks at her.] wall switch: lights on FX: 7 [He looks down at his feet.] @Kyousuke: Hm? 8 [It's a shattered LP. His profile is on the cover.] record: ...Mitsuru --------------------------------------------------- p 269 (151) 1 [He lifts the record high.] @Kyousuke: AHHHH!! 2 [Exterior night shot of external speakers on a school building. His "AHH!" was broadcast outside.] 3 @Kyousuke: MY RECORD!! 4 [Madoka looks around at the control panel.] Madoka: This is the Broadcasting Club's room. @Kyousuke: Eh? 5 [He looks about the room.] --------------------------------------------------- p 270 (152) 1 [View of a turntable...] 2 [...and a microphone.] 3 [@Kyousuke stares at something off-panel.] 4 [He stands and looks down upon the control panel.] narration: The Broadcasting Club, hmm? This brings back memories... 5 [He grasps the mike.] narration: As I recall... There was a mike like this in the club room during my high school days, and... 6 [He visualizes a smiling face from those days.] Shiori: [flashback] Kazuto...! --------------------------------------------------- p 271 (153) 1 [Madoka picks up the record album and glances at the back.] Madoka: Hayakawa Mitsuru? 2 @Kyousuke: [looking smug] .......... You know him? Madoka: Yeah. 3 Madoka: He's that playboy idol star, isn't he. @Kyousuke pratfall FX: 4 @Kyousuke: I-I'M NOT A PLAYBOY!! Madoka: [blankly] .......... It's Hayakawa Mitsuru. 5 [Outside, Shiori and @Mitsuru are surprised by what they hear.] @Kyousuke: [off] I-I'm Hayakawa Mitsuru!! Madoka: [off] Tee! C'mon-n-n. Ah ha ha ha ha! What makes you think that? 6 [@Mitsuru looks up at the school.] narration: Th-that's... Ayukawa's voice, and what's more... That's my voice!! --------------------------------------------------- p 272 (154) 1 narration: Which means... Hayakawa Mitsuru is inside this school?! 2 [He looks back at Shiori.] @Mitsuru: Wait here for a bit! 3 @Mitsuru: I'll come back soon... And when I do, I'll be the real Hayakawa Kazuto. 4 Shiori: Huh!?! 5 @Kyousuke: To think I'm a playboy... All idols are that way!! Madoka: A selfish motive! 6 [@Kyousuke stops short.] --------------------------------------------------- p 273 (155) 1 [Panels 1-2 are black-bordered, denoting the flashback. Here, high-school- aged Shiori drops her gaze.] Shiori: A selfish motive! 2 [Kazuto holds her by the arms and stares into her eyes.] Kazuto: I'll become famous and make you happy, Shiori. 3 [Exterior view of the darkened school building.] --------------------------------------------------- p 274 (156) 1 @Mitsuru: The Broadcasting Club room!! @Mitsuru FX: 2 narration: If that guy... 3 narration: ...has done anything weird to Ayukawa, I won't forgive him!! 4 [Quietly, @Kyousuke steps out into the hall, closing the door behind him.] door FX: 5 [Staring at the ground, he walks away.] @Kyousuke FX: 6 [@Kyousuke reflects, a bit sadly.] narration: I'm just an ordinary playboy...? No! The reason I decided to be a star was for Shiori, who I dated up through high school... --------------------------------------------------- p 275 (157) 1 narration: Despite that... I've been in my own trance the last few years, and completely forgot about Shiori... 2 [@Mitsuru races up to @Kyousuke.] @Mitsuru FX: @Mitsuru: Found you! 3 [@Kyousuke's face flushes and his eyes grow large.] narration: I-I'm here?! @Kyousuke FX: 4 [@Mitsuru grabs @Kyousuke by the shirt front.] @Mitsuru: Found you at last! Hey!! @Mitsuru FX: 5 @Mitsuru: [angrily] You better not have done anything weird to the girl you were here with! @Kyousuke: N-no, no!! I was thinking of doing it, but... --------------------------------------------------- p 276 (158) 1 @Mitsuru: Even if you just thought it, I can't forgive you! 2 @Mitsuru: You bastar-r-rd!! [@Mitsuru slams his head against @Kyousuke's.] @Mitsuru/@Kyousuke FX: 3 narration: And then... Finally, the both of us were able to return to our original bodies... 4 [Madoka rushes out of the broadcast club room.] Madoka: Hey! What's all the racket? door FX: 5 [View pans back. Kyousuke clutches his head, and rises up on one knee. Mitsuru lies on his back with a goofy expression on his face.] Kyousuke: Ow-ow-ow-ouch. --------------------------------------------------- p 277 (159) 1 Kyousuke: [smiling] Ayukawa! 2 [He holds her by the shoulders.] Kyousuke: Are you all right?! Madoka: ? 3 Madoka: What are you talking about all of a sudden? We've been together till now. Madoka FX: 4 [She looks over at the guy lying on the floor.] Madoka: Oh, this guy... The star, Hayakawa... Mitsuru?! 5 Madoka: What's he doing in a place like this? .......... He's definitely the real thing! Kyousuke: Yup. If you wanna get his autograph, now's the time. 6 [Mitsuru opens his eyes blearily.] Mitsuru: Nnnn... --------------------------------------------------- p 278 (160) 1 [Kyousuke takes Mitsuru by a sleeve.] Kyousuke: Come here a sec! Kyousuke FX: Mitsuru: ! 2 Kyousuke: At least for now, go back to being Hayakawa Kazuto. For her sake... 3 Mitsuru: ...... Eh? 4 Madoka: .......... What's going on? 5 [Exterior view of the main gate to the school grounds.] 6 [Shiori sees something off-panel.] --------------------------------------------------- p 279 (161) 1 [Her pov of a wide-eyed Mitsuru.] 2 Mitsuru: Shiori... 3 [His view of her.] 4 Shiori: .......... Welcome back... Kazuto. 5 [He looks back at her, speechless...] 6 [...and slowly smiles.] Mitsuru: I-I'm back. 7 [Tears pool in Shiori's eyes.] Shiori tears FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 280 (162) 1 [She buries her face in his chest. He holds her.] 2 [Madoka and Kyousuke watch from a distance.] Mitsuru: How silly. Don't cry. Shiori: But... 3 [Madoka drops her gaze and tosses her hair back.] Madoka: What I said just now about playboy idol singers... Maybe I should take that back! 4 [Kyousuke facial portrait--blank surprise.] 5 [Madoka is surprised to see Kyousuke stifle laughter.] narration: No matter who the heart-throbbing idol singer is right now, they're just ordinary playboys to Ayukawa... Kyousuke: --------------------------------------------------- p 281 (163) 1 Madoka: What? Kyousuke: No, nothing. 2 [He smiles and points to himself.] Kyousuke: Never mind that. Didn't you hit me a little while ago? Madoka: Why...? 3 [He pats her on the tush. She blushes in surprise.] Kyousuke: But, when I did something like this... Kyousuke FX: Madoka: AH! 4 Madoka hand FX: [off] Madoka: [off] PERVERT!! 5 [Madoka walks away. Kyousuke stands there with a silly expression and a slap print on his cheek.] narration: Well... At last, the auditions are tomorrow! Madoka FX: Kyousuke: See!?! ---------------------------------------------------