Kimagure Orange Road "The Jealousy by Peeking" Volume 15, Story 8 WB Volume 9, Story 5 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Tonghyun "Vajra" Kim (17 April 1992) Special thanks to : Peter Payne, Kevin Quinn Compilation & Additional translation by : Craig Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Matthew Akira Klippenstein Last revision : 09-01-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 105 (165) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 105 (165)--TITLE PAGE [Kyousuke and Madoka lean or sit on a car parked at the beach. A surfboard stands on its end, wedged between the back of the car and a low wall. (I think its tail fin is crushed. ^_^)] MAIN TITLE (at top) The Jealousy by Peeking SUB-TITLE (at bottom) It Looks As Though the Future of These Two Can Be Seen on the Other Side of the Horizon... --------------------------------------------------- p 106 (166) 1 [Kyousuke's pov of Madoka's kiss with another guy.] 2 [Kyousuke goes into shock.] 3 Madoka: [flashback] To tell you the truth, he promised to meet me here today, after several years... Under this tree... Madoka: [flashback] He saved my life. But before I could even thank him, he was gone. Instead, here... 4 Kyousuke: A-Ayukawa-a-a!! Kyousuke FX: 5 (inset) [He claps a hand over his mouth.] Kyousuke: Ah! 5 [The couple turn to look, but Kyousuke is hightailing it outta there.] man: Who's there!?! Kyousuke: O-oops!! --------------------------------------------------- p 107 (167) 1 Kyousuke FX: 2 [As he runs he remembers...] Madoka: [flashback] I was sure... Madoka: [flashback] ...you'd come. 3 [Another remembrance of the couple kissing in the park.] narration: What the hell did I see just now...? narration: I must have had a really bad dream!! 4 [A silhouette view of the kiss.] 5 [His streaky pov of trees as he races through the park.] Kyousuke: [off] IT'S ALL A LI-I-IE!! 6 [A view of a far-off building.] Grandpa: [off] Kyousuke-e-e. Kyousuke-e-e!! 7 Grandpa: Where the hell did he disappear to...? I can't just go home alone. 8 Grandpa: Although this place is near his house... --------------------------------------------------- p 108 (168) 1 [View down the street at some buildings.] sign: Konjou Bakery 2 Grandpa: Anyway, I'd better find him soon and take him back. If he does something *here*, then... Grandpa FX: 3 [Grandpa wipes his sweaty brow as he walks away.] Grandpa: It'll be terrible!! 4 [Kyousuke stands and buries his face against the tree.] Kyousuke: 5 [He sits, back against the tree and closes his eyes.] narration: Ayukawa...!! What the hell is she trying to pull?! 6 [He slumps to the ground, eyes closed.] narration: Is she serious about that guy?! No, it can't be. No matter what happened between the two of them in the past... 7 [Panels 7-8 comprise a single view. Kyousuke lies on his back under the tree.] narration: She wouldn't be a girl who does something like that unthinkingly!! 8 narration: Ayukawa's... Feelings... I don't understand...!! --------------------------------------------------- p 109 (169) 1 leaves FX: Kyousuke: ZZZ 2 (inset) [Someone approaches.] foot FX: 2 [With a few blades of grass, this someone tickles his nose.] tickle FX: 3 (inset) Kyousuke: Ah... Ah-choo! 3 [View pans back. A kid in shorts and sweatshirt kneels next to him, smiling.] Kyousuke: Hey-y-y, who is it?!! kid: Ah ha ha ha ha! 4 [Black, short hair. 10-11 years old. Cute kid.] kid: If you take a nap in a place like this, you'll catch a cold! --------------------------------------------------- p 110 (170) 1 [The line sounds familiar to him.] Kyousuke: .......... Ayu...! 2 [He looks closely at this kid.] Kyousuke: Hm? 3 kid: [rising, holding a soccer ball] What are you doing? Kyousuke: Eh? 4 Kyousuke: Oh... Ohhhh. A kid, hmm... 5 [Looking irritated, he sits back against the tree, hands resting behind his head.] Kyousuke: As you can see, I was taking a nap*. kid: In the middle of the day? 6 Kyousuke: That's why it's called a nap*. <*Commentary (CN): As before, Kyousuke is specifically saying he's taking an *afternoon nap*. In other words, a "siesta."> --------------------------------------------------- p 111 (171) 1 [View pans way back. The kid stands in front of the sitting Kyousuke, under the large tree.] kid: I see-e-e!! That's funny. Kyousuke: I'm sorry, but I'm not amused right now... 2 kid FX: 3 kid: Oniichan, do you know that oneechan back there? Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: EH?! 4 [The kid balances the soccer ball on a fingertip.] kid: You were watching back there, weren't you. 'Cause I heard, "Ayukawa!" narration: .......... I was seen!! 5 kid: [bouncing the ball on the head] Hey. How do you know her? Friends? Or... Kyousuke: [irritated] It doesn't matter, does it!! narration: Precocious kid!! --------------------------------------------------- p 112 (172) 1 [The soccer ball rebounds sharply off his face...] ball FX: Kyousuke: Gya! 2 [...and travels back.] Kyousuke: Wh-what are you doing?!! 3 kid: [catching it off the head] Nice pass!! 4 [The kid kicks it back.] kick FX: kid: Arrgg! narration: Th-this kid!! 5 [Kyousuke kicks it back, with all his might.] Kyousuke: Get lost, boy! kick FX: 6 kid: [easily catching it off the chest] Hey!! bump FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 113 (173) 1 kid: [doing a head pass] You should give up! ball FX: 2 Kyousuke: Eh? 3 [The ball knocks Kyousuke off his feet.] kid: Those two have been together for a lo-o-ong time. Kyousuke FX: 4 [View pans back. Kyousuke lies on his back. The ball rolls away.] Kyousuke FX: kid: Ah! ha! ha! You're not good at this! 5 Kyousuke: [rising] How the hell do you know all this? 6 kid: [off] Because we're siblings! [The ball flies through the air.] ball FX: 7 [Kyousuke catches it.] Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 114 (174) 1 Kyousuke: .......... I see. 2 [Kyousuke's expression grows dark.] narration: Then, this kid... Is that guy's kid brother?! Kyousuke FX: narration: Then, that makes me... 3 [He kicks the ball hard.] narration: ...hate this kid even more!! kick FX: 4 ball FX: 5 kid: Kya! ball/kid FX: 6 [The ball flattens the kid.] kid FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 115 (175) 1 Kyousuke: Ah! I'm sorry... 2 [He bends over the kid, who lies face first in the grass. He's beating up on a lot of kids today...] Kyousuke: Are you all right...?! 3 [Kyousuke lifts the kid up, grabbing under the arms. The kid looks surprised.] Kyousuke/kid FX: 4 kid: KYA! 5 kid: PERVERT-T-T! 6 narration: Wh-what was that soft thing just now...?! Kyousuke: [pointing, sweating] Could it be... You're a girl? [She crosses her arms over her chest, protectively.] girl: Nobody said I was a boy. --------------------------------------------------- p 116 (176) 1 [She dusts herself off.] Kyousuke: Why is a girl playing soccer by herself in a place like this? girl FX: girl: This is my playground. 2 [Kyousuke considers.] 3 girl: [happily] I love exercising . Kyousuke: Don't you have any friends? 4 [She looks up, off-panel.] 5 [A view of the large tree.] girl: [off] ...... That tree! 6 [She kicks the ball off the trunk.] ball FX: 7 [The ball rolls back to her.] ball FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 117 (177) 1 girl: See?! girl FX: 2 [Kyousuke looks at her.] 3 [View looking up at the sky.] Kyousuke: [off] ...... All right. Then... 4 [He holds the ball in one hand and winks at her.] Kyousuke: I'll play with you!! 5 [They pass the ball back and forth with their feet.] Kyousuke: If you're a girl, you have to act more like a girl. Or you won't be popular with boys in the future! 6 [He kicks it to her.] ball FX: Kyousuke: A girl should have longer hair, and be more sexy, and... 7 [The ball gets intimate with his face.] ball-in-face FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 118 (178) 1 [She pulls down one eyelid and sticks out her tongue.] girl: Who asked you!! 2 [View looking up at the trees.] girl: [off] But, oniichan... 3 [He slowly sits up. She kneels nearby.] girl: Do you like that kind of girl? Kyousuke: Eh?! 4 [He looks off to one side.] narration: .......... That's Ayukawa I'm trying to describe. 5 [His pov of the girl. She looks a bit unhappy...] 6 [...but soon breaks out into a radiant smile.] girl FX: 7 girl: Oniichan, you're a nice person. --------------------------------------------------- p 119 (179) 1 [She looks up into the tree.] girl: If it were me... I'd prefer you, oniichan...!! 2 [His eyes widen.] Kyousuke FX: 3 [Very flustered, he looks off to the side.] Kyousuke: Ah, that's right. Oops! I left ojiichan waiting a long time. 4 [As he leaves, he looks back over his shoulder.] Kyousuke: Bye. I'll come again. girl: Ah, wait. 5 girl: Will you really come again?! Kyousuke: Sure! 6 (inset) [She looks unhappy.] girl: .......... 6 [She kicks the ball hard.] ball FX: 7 [The ball comes to rest high up in a branch of the tree.] branch/leaves FX: 8 girl: Uh-oh. --------------------------------------------------- p 120 (180) 1 [Kyousuke walks down the street, searching from side to side.] Kyousuke: How strange... Where the heck did ojiichan go? 2 [A view of a bookstore.] Kyousuke: [off] But... What in the world is this? banner: Copies. 3 [He holds a familiar book in his hands.] little girl: Excuse me. This... book: [upside-down] Shuueisha's Manju of Japan Everything you always wanted to know about manju!! 4 [He turns it around and looks at the cover. View has shifted so that we can now see the same little, blonde, long-haired girl looking up at him.] Kyousuke: Ah... 5 [Kyousuke pats the little girl on her head. She smiles in contentment.] Kyousuke hand FX: Kyousuke: Ahhhh... Thank you, little lady. 6 [His pov of the little girl, who looks up at him a bit sadly here.] 7 [He kneels down to get a closer look.] Kyousuke: (But... For some reason, this girl looks like Hikaru-chan.) 8 little girl: It's weird... This book is for next year. How come it's already out? [Kyousuke stares at the book.] Kyousuke: EH?! --------------------------------------------------- p 121 (181) 1 [He flips through the book.] pages FX: 2 Kyousuke: 1982 version? 3 [View down the street. He overhears a couple as they walk near.] man: Kobe's Port pier is nearly here. woman: Are you going? 4 [He stares wide-eyed off panel.] Kyousuke: ..........?! 5 [Sweating, he bends down to ask the little girl.] Kyousuke: Little lady, what year is this? little girl: 1981. 6 [He collapses to his knees.] Kyousuke: ?! 7 [He glares off to one side.] narration: That means... 8 narration: That jiisama... Pretending to go to some place nearby... Brought me to the past!! Grandpa: [flashback, off] Okay? Don't open your eyes until I count three!! Grandpa: [flashback, off] Three. Grandpa: [flashback, off] Two. Grandpa: [flashback, off] One. Grandpa: [flashback,] All right! --------------------------------------------------- p 122 (182) 1 [A flashback pic of the couple kissing in the park.] Kyousuke: [off] (Th-then, that Ayukawa...?!) 2 [A look of shock comes over his face.] Kyousuke: (...isn't Ayukawa?!) 3 [Kyousuke runs.] narration: Where the hell has jiichan gone?!! Kyousuke: (Is he going to leave me behind in 1981?!!) 4 [He sees something off-panel.] Kyousuke: Ah! 5 [It's the young, tomboyish, brunette girl from before. She's up in the branches of the tree.] 6 [She looks down at him. He looks up in fright.] Kyousuke: Th-that's dangerous!! Wh-what are you doing?!! --------------------------------------------------- p 123 (183) 1 girl: But, without the ball, I can't play with you... 2 [The branch she's sitting on gives way.] branch FX: girl: Kya! 3 [Kyousuke looks up in horror.] narration: L-look out!! 4 [The speech bubble crackles with the Power.] Kyousuke: [off] (All right! I'll use the Power here...) 5 narration: I... I can't use the Power!! [The girl begins her long fall to the ground.] girl: KYAAAA! 6 [Elsewhere, Grandpa continues his search.] Grandpa: Hey, Kyousuke! narration: If he interferes with anything *here*... It'll change the present as well... I have to find him quickly before he does something! ---------------------------------------------------