Kimagure Orange Road "Summer Night Horror" Volume 15, Story 1 WB Volume 8, Story 14 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation & compilation by : Craig H. Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Matthew Akira Klippenstein Frederick Gallagher Last revision : 08-29-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 273 (7) are only in the WBs! NOTE: The existing script, by Andrew Chen, is based on an unofficial Chinese translation and so was not used in preparation of this script. --------------------------------------------------- p 273 (7)--TITLE PAGE [A sun-bronzed Madoka stands in bikini, sandals and visor in front of a framed view of clouds. She leans against an upright boogie-board, a flotation pillow draped over it.] MAIN TITLE (at top) Summer Night Horror SUB-TITLE (at bottom) I Want to Catch the Summer-Colored Angel...! --------------------------------------------------- p 274 (8) 1 [View looking up at a stormy night sky.] lightning FX: narration: Summer vacation was a lot of fun, and today is the last day. 2 [In the glare of lightning, rain pelts the front of the Ayukawa residence.] narration: Three of us, including Akane, decided to finish our homework at Ayukawa's place, but... 3 [Kyousuke grimaces up at the ceiling. Madoka looks at him matter-of-factly.] narration: In my case... Because I can hardly settle down, I'm fighting an uphill battle! Kyousuke: Ahhhh!! If it was going to be like this, I should have started sooner!! Madoka: Don't you say that every year? 4 [View pulls back. They sit across each other at a table. Madoka rests her chin in her hands and drops her gaze. Kyousuke looks embarrassed.] Madoka: Really! Why do you always, always put off doing it until the last moment?! Kyousuke: Dah ha ha ha ha! 5 Madoka: By the way, Akane-san is late, isn't she. Kyousuke: It's this weather. Maybe she's not coming. --------------------------------------------------- p 275 (9) 1 Kyousuke: I wonder if there's a typhoon coming? 2 [Exterior view of the storm.] thunder FX: 3 [A hand reaches forward to press the doorbell.] doorbell FX: 4 Kyousuke: Oh, she's here, she's here! 5 [Pov of whoever's at the door. Madoka opens the door and looks back at us.] Madoka: Yes. door FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 276 (10) 1 [Her pov. Under lurid light we see Kazuya sitting on Grandpa's shoulders. They look a bit spooky.] 2 [Madoka clutches her chest...] Madoka: EE!?! 3 [...and collapses back into Kyousuke's arms.] Madoka FX: Kyousuke: M-monster!! 4 [Grandpa and Akane walk inside where it's lit. Kazuya, holding his shoes in his hands, stares down blankly.] Grandpa: Who's a monster? Grandpa/Kazuya/Akane FX: Akane: [smiling] Good evening. narration: O-ohh! --------------------------------------------------- p 277 (11) 1 Akane: Ohh, what's the matter with Madoka-chan? Kyousuke: [angrily] What do you mean, "what's the matter?!" Anyone would be frightened if they saw something that strange!! 2 Kyousuke: Ayukawa, Ayukawa! [She weakly opens her eyes.] Madoka: Hm? Ah... 3 Kyousuke: By the way, ojiichan... Why are you here? [Grandpa smiles and fans himself. Kazuya, standing on his own now, looks on.] fan FX: 4 Grandpa: I'm here to play at Akane's place now, and we were just bored. fan FX: 5 [Kyousuke glares at a startled Kazuya.] Kyousuke: What did *you* come for?! 6 Kazuya: Is it bad if I come?! Kyousuke: [in a huff] YES!! --------------------------------------------------- p 278 (12) 1 Kyousuke: I have this mountain of homework to tackle tonight!! [He slaps a palm on top of a 2-foot-high stack of papers on the table. Grandpa, Kazuya and Akane look on wide-eyed.] Kyousuke FX: Akane: What are you bragging for? 2 Madoka: If they don't interfere with studying, it should be okay, right? Kyousuke: [angrily] They'll be sure to interfere!! 3 [Kyousuke starts shoving Grandpa towards the door.] Kyousuke: Well anyway, go home, go home. Kyousuke FX: Grandpa: Are you telling me to go home in the middle of this storm?! 4 [Grandpa buries his face in his arms and his body is racked with sobs.] Grandpa: Jeez, the world is a cruel place! I'm ashamed to have had such a cold-hearted grandson. Boo hoo hoo... <*Commentary: The "kindness is a paper balloon!" is related to the saying, , or "kindness is thinner than paper." In other words, that "kindness is lacking."> [Madoka smiles and tries to console him.] Madoka: Excuse me... Please stay as long as you like. 5 [Grandpa smiles and heartily takes Madoka by her hands.] Grandpa: Oh!! Thank you! What a well-raised girl you are... Please be this guy's bride. Grandpa FX: Kyousuke: Ojiichan!! 6 [As Madoka and Kyousuke return to their books, the other three sit on a couch and beam smiles.] narration: Jeez... This situation--it's the worst people at the worst time!! Kyousuke: All right? Please, please don't only interfere with my homework!! --------------------------------------------------- p 279 (13) 1 Madoka: But, I was really surprised just now! 2 narration: Come to think of it, fearless Ayukawa is only scared of ghosts, huh... 3 [Outside, the wind picks up.] windows FX: wind FX: 4 [Grandpa and Kazuya look up at the high ceiling of the living room.] Grandpa: But, this is a large Western-style home! Kazuya: Yeah. It's like ghosts'll pop out. 5 Madoka: Kyousuke: Ah! 6 [Kyousuke rants at the two.] Kyousuke: Don't talk about unnecessary things!! --------------------------------------------------- p 280 (14) 1 Kazuya: [smiling] Can I turn on the TV? Kyousuke: [angrily] Just keep the sound down!! 2 [Tight view of the TV. The face of a grotesque monster fills the screen.] TV: monster: 3 [Madoka stares at the TV in obvious nervousness. Kyousuke slaps a palm to his forehead.] 4 [Kyousuke reaches for the TV. Kazuya is steamed.] Kyousuke: Change the channel! Kazuya: Damn! I like this sort of stuff! 5 [The cat from chapter 14.4 ("I'm a Cat!") makes an appearance.] cat: Mew. 6 Kazuya: [winking] Hey, come here, come here!! cat: Meow. --------------------------------------------------- p 281 (15) 1 [The cat scampers off down a dark hallway. Kazuya takes off in pursuit.] Kazuya: Wait. Kazuya footstep FX: cat footsteps FX: 2 Kyousuke: Huh? That cat... narration: It's the cat that switched bodies with me before! 3 [Kyousuke smiles over at Madoka.] Kyousuke: You're keeping it? Madoka FX: Madoka: ...... Uh-huh. 4 [View of the front of the Ayukawa residence. Lightning continues to flash through the rain-filled skies.] --------------------------------------------------- p 282 (16) 1 Akane: Umm, where's the bathroom? Kyousuke: Ah, me, too... 2 [She gets up and points down a darkened hallway.] Madoka: It's this way. I'll show you. 3 [Isolated shot of windows.] 4 Madoka: Here. Akane: [smiling] Ah, thanks. 5 [Madoka walks down the hallway carrying a tray filled with drinks.] 6 [Back in the bathroom, Akane stares at herself in the mirror. Kyousuke looks over his back at her.] Akane: Say. Madoka-chan's really beautiful, no matter when you see her, huh. --------------------------------------------------- p 283 (17) 1 [Akane looks dreamily off into the distance.] Akane: If only I could be as beautiful as Madoka-chan... [Kyousuke pumps his fists and grimaces at her.] Kyousuke: It's impossible. Impossible! 2 [With a shimmer, Akane takes on the guise of Madoka.] @Madoka: Oh, if I use the Power this way... @Madoka transformation FX: 3 @Madoka: Eh-heh. How do I look? Kyousuke: Stop it!! 4 [The real Madoka walks by the open bathroom door. Glancing inside, she sees herself looking back.] @Madoka: Oh, Madoka-chan! 5 [The fake Madoka winks and points to her own face. The real Madoka stares back in shock. Kyousuke looks on in horror.] @Madoka: How's this? Do I look like you? Kyousuke: Ah, idiot!! --------------------------------------------------- p 284 (18) 1 [Madoka throws herself at Kyousuke.] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: Madoka: KYAAAA!! 2 Kyousuke: I-idiot! Don't transform in front of Ayukawa!! Akane: Ah. Oh no. 3 [Clinging tight to Kyousuke, she looks nervously about.] Madoka: A-another one of me...!! Kyousuke: [forced smile] N-no way!! 4 Kyousuke: Your imagination. It's just your imagination. [Akane looks on the two in envy.] Akane: Ahh! How nice. 5 Kyousuke: [off] Never mind that, Akane. Kazuya's gone!! He might be getting into mischief somewhere. Go look for him!! narration: When Akane's around, nothing good ever happens! Akane: [off] Right! 6 [Kazuya steps out from the third-floor windows onto the roof. The cat looks back over his shoulder.] Kazuya: (All right. Then, no matter what, I'm gonna catch you!!) --------------------------------------------------- p 285 (19) 1 [Smiling, Madoka sets a glass down near Grandpa.] Madoka: .......... Here's some tea. Grandpa: Oh, thank you. glass FX: 2 [It floats up into Grandpa's waiting hand.] glass FX: 3 [Madoka stares wide-eyed...] Madoka heartbeat FX: 4 [...and once again throws herself into Kyousuke's arms.] Madoka: KYAAAA!! Kyousuke: Ojiichan!! 5 [With Madoka wrapped around his neck, Kyousuke blushes and looks up at the ceiling with concern.] narration: Wh-what a pain... As things stand, homework isn't the problem, is it. dramatic FX: Kyousuke heartbeat FX: Madoka FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 286 (20) 1 [The cat scampers away across the rooftop as Kazuya watches angrily.] Kazuya: Don't even think you can get away from Kazuya-sama!! 2 [Kazuya flies across towards the running cat.] Kazuya levitation FX: 3 [An angry Kyousuke hustles Grandpa off.] Kyousuke: Hey, ojiichan. Go search for Kazuya and Akane! narration: There's nothing good about this jiisama, either! 4 [Kyousuke slams the hall door shut, leaving him alone in the room with a shivering Madoka.] door FX: 5 Madoka: H-hey. I'm positive that cup was flying in midair just now... Kyousuke: [forced smile] An illusion, an illusion! Now, instead of that, let's do our homework. Homework! 6 lights-off FX: [Kyousuke and Madoka look about in surprise.] --------------------------------------------------- p 287 (21) 1 Kyousuke: Huh? The power's out. 2 [A chilling noise makes the two of them turn in shock.] FX: [off] window FX: [off] 3 [Through a now-open window they see a ghostly apparition carrying a cat come flying in.] window FX: 4 [Madoka stares in shock.] 5 [A livid Kyousuke supports an unconscious Madoka while screaming at Kazuya and the cat.] Kyousuke: KAZUYA!! Madoka FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 288 (22) 1 Kyousuke: Enough already!! The whole lot of you are terrifying Ayukawa! 2 [The cat, still held in Kazuya's outstretched arms, works his claws on Kyousuke's face.] Kyousuke: GYAAAA! cat-slash FX: 3 [Madoka rises weakly.] Madoka: Ah! 4 [She sees Kyousuke securing the window shut. His back is towards her.] Madoka: K-Kasuga-kun... 5 [Her pov of him as he turns. Blood streams down his face.] Kyousuke: Eh? dramatic FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 289 (23) 1 [Exterior view of the Ayukawa residence.] Madoka: [off] KYAA-AA-AA-AA! 2 [As Kyousuke tends to Madoka, who has fainted onto the floor, the other three gather around.] Kazuya: Oh boy, you made her faint. Grandpa: Hey, Kyousuke! Don't go scaring ladies!! Akane: It's your fault! 3 Kyousuke: [screaming] What are you talking about?!! 4 Kyousuke: Ayukawa! Ayukawa!! Madoka: Ah... 5 Kyousuke: Are you awake? I didn't mean to frighten you! Are you all right? Madoka: .......... What the heck have I been seeing up to now...?! --------------------------------------------------- p 290 (24) 1 Kyousuke: Eh? Ah. Th-that is... narration: What'll I do? I can't very well talk about our Power... 2 [Kyousuke's pov. Kazuya taps his forehead and gives us a meaningful look.] Kazuya: ! 3 Kazuya: Ohh. It's oniichan who asked us to frighten you, Madoka-oneechan! 4 Kyousuke: EH?! Madoka: ? 5 Kazuya: And so, he made Akane-oneechan disguise herself, and made ojiichan use his magic... 6 [Kazuya points the accusing finger at a startled Kyousuke.] Kazuya: You pretended, with an innocent face, that you were doing your homework, and made us play all those cheap tricks on Madoka-oneechan so that she'd cling to you... You lech!! Kyousuke: Wh-what are you talking about?! --------------------------------------------------- p 291 (25) 1 Akane: [angrily] Kyousuke! Give it up already!! Grandpa: [solemnly] Yeah, that's right. Just as Akane says!! 2 Kyousuke: Don't talk nonsense!! Me--asking that sort of thing... 3 [Kazuya whispers into Kyousuke's ear.] Kazuya: Is it okay to let slip the secret of the Power? Kyousuke FX: 4 [Pivoting to face Madoka, Kyousuke drops his gaze in embarrassment. Madoka frowns.] Kyousuke: Y-yes!! It's like that. I asked them to. I'm sorry! narration: Under the circumstances, it can't be helped, but... 5 [His pov of a peeved Madoka. She rubs a fist into the palm of her hand.] 6 [Exterior shot of the clear night skies above the Ayukawa residence. Facial portraits appear on their respective speech bubbles.] Madoka: [angrily] KASUGA-KU-U-UN!! Grandpa: [happily] Well, shall we excuse ourselves now? narration: This irresponsible family!! Kyousuke: [in anguish] Wah-hee-ee!! ---------------------------------------------------