Kimagure Orange Road "Hawaiian Mystery" Volume 14, Story 9 WB Volume 8, Story 13 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation & compilation by : Craig H. Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Matthew Akira Klippenstein Frederick Gallagher Last revision : 08-27-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 253 (169) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 253 (169)--TITLE PAGE [In three panels, Madoka towels her hair dry.] MAIN TITLE (at top) Hawaiian Mystery SUB-TITLE (at bottom) Naughty Fun's for After a Shower... --------------------------------------------------- p 254 (170) 1 [A tumbler falls through the air...] 2 [...and falls...] 3 [...and falls...] 4 [...finally shattering on the deck. Madoka pitches into Kyousuke, who falls back against the railing.] dropped drink FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 255 (171) 1 [Kyousuke looks up at the night sky. Madoka's head rests on his shoulder.] 2 [Pov shifts. She doesn't seem to mind the close contact.] 3 Madoka: [pulling away] S-sorry... Madoka FX: Kyousuke: I-it's swaying a lot, huh... The wind is strong! 4 [Kyousuke looks up.] sails FX: narration: It's not just the boat that's swaying... 5 Kyousuke: Shall we go in? narration: My heart, too, is just like a tiny yacht in the middle of a storm. Madoka: Yeah. --------------------------------------------------- p 256 (172) 1 [Madoka takes a shower.] shower FX: 2 [Kyousuke sits on the seats built in along one wall of the cabin.] narration: If we're going to run away, we can always do so by using the Power... 3 narration: But I can't very well leave Sayuri-chan hanging...!! As the man, I must save Ayukawa's and Sayuri-chan's lives!! --------------------------------------------------- p 257 (173) 1 [Madoka enters, dressed as before.] door FX: 2 Madoka: .......... It's all yours! Kyousuke: I'm fine!! 3 [She whacks him across the back.] Madoka: Slob! Go clean yourself up nicely!! Madoka FX: Kyousuke: Y-yes! 4 [Kyousuke takes a shower.] shower FX: Kyousuke heartbeat FX: narration: What does she mean by "go clean yourself up..." 5 [He clenches his eyes shut under the running water.] narration: I'm swaying! My heart is swaying. Definitely swaying... 6 [He looks down in amazement, off-panel, at, err, some region below his waist...] Kyousuke FX: 7 [He blushes and stares up at the ceiling.] Kyousuke: (Even in a storm, at least my mast is magnificently...) crows-in-background FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 258 (174) 1 [Shot of the boat sitting upon the placid sea.] 2 [Kyousuke knocks back a drink.] Kyousuke FX: 3 [View pans back to show the two seated and drinking. He throws back his head and shouts to the ceiling.] Kyousuke: Damn! I'm gonna die anyway!! Madoka: Hey, don't cry! How unmanly! 4 [Tight shot of his hand holding up his drink. Madoka rests her hand on his.] 5 Madoka: [soft smile] Aren't you a man? 6 [He looks back at her.] --------------------------------------------------- p 259 (175) 1 [He sorta glares at her, wraps an arm around her shoulder, and stares her in the eye.] Kyousuke: That's right... I'm a man, too, so... I don't know what I might do! narration: O-oh no!! I've gotten rather tipsy... 2 [Madoka's face looks thoughtful.] 3 Madoka: ...... Yeah. 4 [He closes his eyes, on the verge of passing out.] Kyousuke: Ayukawa... But I won't let *you* die... For that, I don't mind... ...if I die... Kyousuke FX: 5 [She looks at him, deep in thought.] --------------------------------------------------- p 260 (176) 1 [Full-page art. Seated side-by-side, Madoka leans close and kisses him near his ear. He comes wide awake. (In this, the 123rd chapter... This is the first time she's actually kissed him.)] --------------------------------------------------- p 261 (177) 1 [Exterior daylight shot of the boat. It is now docked at its slip at the marina.] 2 [Kyousuke comes awake. Madoka is asleep, clinging to his arm.] Kyousuke: Hm... 3 [He wipes his eyes.] narration: Morning...?! I fell asleep and didn't notice. 4 [He visualizes the kiss from the night before and his eyes grow large.] Kyousuke: Ah! 5 [He blushes.] narration: Was that... 6 Kyousuke: A dream?!! Madoka: [waking up] What was? 7 narration: It was a dream, after all... Kyousuke: Nothing... Ha ha ha ha! --------------------------------------------------- p 262 (178) 1 [The crusty seadog sticks his head in the door. Sunlight streams in.] seaman: [English] Did you enjoy yourselves a lot yesterday?! door FX: 2 [His pov of the two. They stare back wide-eyed and nervous.] 3 seaman: [English] Well... It's the great "breakfast" you've been dying for! 4 [Both cringe a bit and look defiant. Whatever this "breakfast" is, they're not willing to "die for" it.] Kyousuke: I-it's Sayuri-chan he's talking about!! 5 [View of another cart laden with food.] seaman: [English] Here you go. Help yourself. 6 [Kyousuke and Madoka stare wide-eyed.] 7 Kyousuke: [off] HEY! --------------------------------------------------- p 263 (179) 1 [Kyousuke grabs the guy--who probably outweighs him 3:1--by the collar and glares in his face. The man merely smiles affably.] Kyousuke: Bring out Sayuri-chan!! Enough of this bullshit!! 2 [The man merely flicks Kyousuke's hand off him...] seaman: Sayuri?! seaman FX: 3 [...and pulls out a gun from his pocket.] 4 [He aims it at them.] 5 [The two are horrified.] 6 [Kyousuke throws out his arms and shields Madoka with his body.] Kyousuke: LOOK OUT!! --------------------------------------------------- p 264 (180) 1 [Well, it's a lighter, not a gun. The man lights his pipe.] lighter FX: flame FX: 2 Kyousuke: ?! Madoka: ?! 3 seaman: [English] What's this "Sayuri"? The name of a Japanese sauce? 4 [Outside on deck, the two ponder their situation. Madoka is in the foreground.] narration: It looks like this man really doesn't know a thing about Sayuri-chan... He took money... But it was just a dollar. Madoka: If he's not the crook or anything, then that means... Kyousuke: ? ? ? ? ? 5 [They finally stop to read the sign they walked past the afternoon before. Well, Madoka reads it anyway, since it's in English.] Madoka: This... Was just a rental yacht. Kyousuke: But a one dollar charge for lodging is too cheap. 6 [Isolated shot of the tops of several masts.] narration: I feel completely mystified! In the end, we're back to square one! Kyousuke: [off] Where the heck was Sayuri-chan taken to? --------------------------------------------------- p 265 (181) 1 [View of some high-rises.] Kyousuke: [off] Anyway... 2 [The two split up at the corner of an intersection.] Kyousuke: I'll go and report this to the police, after all!! Madoka: I'll go back and check her room one more time. Maybe I can find some clue! 3 [Madoka gets on the elevator.] 4 [The elevator panel indicates that the car goes past the 3rd floor.] 5 [It stops at the 4th floor.] elevator FX: 6 [Sayuri gets on.] Sayuri: I danced and danced. elevator door FX: 7 Sayuri: Ah!! Madoka: Huh!?! --------------------------------------------------- p 266 (182) 1 Madoka: [wide-eyed] You were all right. 2 Sayuri: [puzzled] Huhhh?! What?! 3 [On the street a police officer talks to Kyousuke. Kyousuke winces.] policeman: [English] Ahh, Queen's Choco-Pafe... That's a 24-hour disco. It's a pick-up joint for both men as well as women! Kyousuke: ? (Oh no... I can't understand English at all.) 4 [An extreme close-up of Madoka's incredulous face.] Madoka: Then... You... Were just dancing all night long at the hotel's 4th-floor disco?! 5 [Flashback. Sayuri and 2 studly guys ride on the elevator. Sayuri is obviously thrilled.] narration: Yesterday, when Sayuri-chan returned to her room to change into her swimsuit... She came across two cool-looking gaijin who passed by while getting on the elevator... Sayuri: (Oh, what studs!) 6 [She writes in her memo book while listening in on the guys' conversation.] narration: She was hooked just like that, and got on the elevator. Sayuri: (Wonder where you're going? I can just make out "Queen's Choco-Pafe"...) stud: [English] Let's go! Queen's Choco-Pafe!! --------------------------------------------------- p 267 (183) 1 narration: The gaijin got off at Queen's Choco-Pafe, the hotel's 4th-floor disco... elevator FX: 2 [A sign at the entrance to the disco.] disco music FX: narration: These, the handsome gaijin before her eyes, rather than Kyousuke, who's waiting down below!! 3 [Sayuri gets off the elevator. A sandal and a slip of paper are left behind.] narration: The wanton Cinderella hopped off! She left behind on the elevator a sandal and the paper she had written on... Sayuri: I-I'll get off, too. 4 [Sayuri smiles and holds up her little black book.] narration: And so, Sayuri set off to hunt guys. Sayuri: Thanks to that, my list of hunted handsome guys grew in a snap. Madoka: Really. I wish you'd stop being a troublemaker. 5 Sayuri: [taken aback] Eh?! 6 [Madoka crosses her arms and turns her back to Sayuri.] Madoka: If Kasuga-kun heard this... I'm sure he'd be surprised. [Sayuri is rocked.] Sayuri heartbeat FX: 7 [She claps her hands before her and bows to Madoka.] Sayuri: Please... It's a secret! Okay?! Okay?! 8 [Kyousuke comes upon the two, who pretend that nothing is amiss.] narration: And so, this troubling affair is over! Kyousuke: ? ? ? --------------------------------------------------- p 268 (184) 1 Sayuri: But... What were *you guys* doing last night? [The two blush...] Kyousuke/Madoka heartbeat FX: 2 [...and look embarrassed.] narration: It was a night of self-kept secrets. 3 [Exterior shot of a church--damn, I forget the name of this church, but it really exists.] narration: That afternoon, the wedding of Ayukawa's sister was held at a church... 4 [View looking up at the stained glass windows.] narration: And through rather unexpected circumstances, the call we'd thought had come from the crooks back then became clear. 5 [The wedding couple stand at the front with the minister and exchange vows.] narration: Actually, that was a manager's joke gift to the newlyweds... Although we left on a mystery tour that had us act according to instructions given in a sudden phone call to the newlywed's room, just like in a suspense movie, we didn't know where we were being taken off to... --------------------------------------------------- p 269 (185) 1 [A diagram.] tour plan: A souvenir picture on a cape that commands a fine view ===> A sunset cruise ===> A sweet night on a boat for just the two of them!! 2 [Two men sit at a pew. Madoka, walking down the aisle, happens to overhear. A handy label is attached to one of the men's head. ^_^] narration: Yesterday's phone call was a rehearsal. label: Manager manager: You sure you phoned my room? How strange. other man: I'm sure I did! Isn't your room 803? 3 manager: Idiot! That's not it. My room is 703! other man: [sweating] Ehhhh!?! Then I called up the room one floor up! 4 [The two men walk away.] manager: Although it was a rehearsal... We definitely got a bill for a night's stay at the boat... Who the hell was it? other man: You mean someone else got on during rehearsal and gypped us?!! How annoying. 5 [Madoka smiles.] Madoka: (The dollar we paid for the boat was a tip, hm...) Madoka: 6 [Madoka claps. Kyousuke pulls on the string of a party-popper.] party-poppers FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 270 (186) 1 [The bride and groom leave the church under a shower of confetti.] 2 Kyousuke: That's so beautiful... Madoka: Uh-huh. 3 [Kyousuke sneaks a peek at Madoka.] Kyousuke FX: 4 Kyousuke: [wide-eyed] By the way... Ayukawa... Yesterday... Madoka: Huh? 5 narration: I think it was a dream after all, but... [He blushes and points to his cheek. Madoka looks back blankly.] Kyousuke: Here on my... 6 [Sayuri suddenly appears and hauls him off by the hand. Kyousuke trails in the air behind her.] Sayuri: Hurry, hurry!! Our return flight's leaving soon! Sayuri: See ya-a-a. Sorry to leave! Sayuri/Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 271 (187) 1 [Madoka pulls out an envelope from her pocket...] Madoka: Oh, wait! I forgot!! 2 [...and waves it high in the air at Kyousuke.] Madoka: There's no need for me to mail this! Not when the person is standing in front of me!! 3 [Shot of the envelope suspended in the air against a backdrop of blue skies.] narration: Come to think of it, when I ran into Ayukawa at the airport, she was holding a letter... 4 [The jet flies through the air.] 5 [Kyousuke reads the letter. His face is a happy one.] narration: It's addressed to me! 6 letter: Is everything all right? Because of my sister's wedding, I'm now writing this letter in Hawaii. I've changed my mind and am canceling my trip to America... Because you're not there in America, Kasuga-kun, and I'll be bored. Just kidding! I'll be back 2 or 3 days from now. --Madoka ---------------------------------------------------