Kimagure Orange Road "The Everlasting-Summer Beach Suspense!" Volume 14, Story 8 WB Volume 8, Story 12 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation & compilation by : Craig H. Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Matthew Akira Klippenstein Frederick Gallagher Last revision : 08-27-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 231 (147) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 231 (147)--TITLE PAGE [Madoka sits on the sand under a blazing sun, dressed in a white, one-piece swimsuit. Hands at her sides, knees up, she smiles back at us.] MAIN TITLE (at top) The Everlasting-Summer Beach Suspense! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) Overly-Dazzling! A Beachside Girl! --------------------------------------------------- p 232 (148) 1 [View looking up at a hotel building.] narration: Three days since coming to Hawaii... At last, the wedding for Ayukawa's sister is tomorrow. 2 [Kyousuke's pov of a smiling Sayuri.] Sayuri: Huh? You're going to the beach? I'll go too! 3 [View pans back. Madoka and Kyousuke stand near the elevator. Sayuri hops on.] Sayuri: So please wait here! 4 elevator doors FX: narration: And so saying, Sayuri-chan went up to her 8th-floor room to get her swimsuit, and... 5 [The elevator light indicates the car has traveled past the 2nd floor...] elevator indicator panel FX: 6 [...finally stopping at the 8th floor.] elevator indicator panel FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 233 (149) 1 [The car stays at the 8th floor for a while...] 2 [...before traveling back down past the 5th and 4th floors.] elevator indicator panel FX: 3 [Kyousuke takes his eyes off the elevator panel to look across at a curvaceous woman wearing a skimpy swimsuit.] Kyousuke: Wowww! So bold . This truly is the US of A! Hawaii!! 4 [He cringes when he notices the look on Madoka's face.] Kyousuke: Ah!?! Madoka FX: 5 [The elevator returns to the first floor.] elevator indicator panel FX: 6 [Pov from inside the elevator looking out as the doors open. Kyousuke and Madoka stare back.] elevator doors FX: 7 [They step inside the empty car. At their feet lie a sandal and a piece of paper.] Kyousuke: Huh? Where's Sayuri-chan?! Madoka: She's not in it. --------------------------------------------------- p 234 (150) 1 [Kyousuke stares down at the floor...] Kyousuke: Hm? 2 [...at the sandal and paper.] 3 [He lifts up the sandal and the piece of paper falls.] Kyousuke: This is... Sayuri-chan's? Madoka: Huh? What's that slip of paper? paper FX: 4 [On the note, in English, is "Queen's Choco-Pafe".] 5 Madoka: .......... Queen's Choco-pafe? 6 Kyousuke: .......... What the heck is that? Madoka: Dunno... 7 [The doors close. Kyousuke punches a button.] Madoka: Maybe Sayuri-san is still in her room? elevator doors FX: Kyousuke: Let's go and see! --------------------------------------------------- p 235 (151) 1 [He knocks on the door to room 802.] Kyousuke: Sayuri-chan, Sayuri-chan! Kyousuke FX: 2 [They search the room as a bellboy stands behind them.] narration: We asked and had the bellboy open the room, but Sayuri-chan wasn't there. 3 [They walk down the hall.] Kyousuke: Sayuri-cha-a-an. Sayuri-cha-a-an. narration: In the end, there was no sign anywhere on the 8th floor that Sayuri-chan was around... 4 [View looking out the sliding glass door to a balcony.] narration: Even though the elevator, carrying her alone, should have gone to the 8th floor and returned to the 1st floor nonstop, neither she, nor much less a kitten, was on it. 5 [Isolated shot of the elevator doors opening on an elevator containing just a sandal and the note.] elevator doors FX: narration: Sayuri had disappeared, leaving behind the mystery of a sandal and a strange slip of paper on the elevator. --------------------------------------------------- p 236 (152) 1 [The two hit the beach. Madoka wears a more conservative one-piece swimsuit today. Bummer. ^_^] Madoka: I wonder what in the world is the matter. Kyousuke: She'll come to the beach before long. She probably went shopping! 2 narration: And so... Suppressing our uneasiness, the two of us headed out to the beach. 3 [View looking up at palm trees.] waves FX: 4 beach babble: Yyy. Oh. Hey-y-y. --------------------------------------------------- p 237 (153) 1 [Kyousuke turns to Madoka, who's lying on her towel nearby.] Kyousuke: But... She isn't coming, hm. It's already been 4 hours. 2 [Madoka gets up and walks off.] Madoka: I'll go look for a bit! Kyousuke: Then I'll go back to my room. 3 Madoka: [staring at the note] But still, Queen's Choco-Pafe... What the heck could that be? 4 [View past some palm trees and a marina at the skyline of Waikiki.] --------------------------------------------------- p 238 (154) 1 [Madoka asks a guy outside the American Legion...] guy 1: [in English] I don't know. 2 [A guy's pov of a shocked Madoka.] Madoka: Hawaii's notorious kidnapping ring?! 3 [A blond guy holds up a forefinger and winks back.] guy 2: [English*] Yeah... All Japanese tourists--especially cute, young girls--are usually targeted... You're cute too, so you better watch out...! <*Translation note: That the person is speaking a translated English is evident by the fact that the kana runs left-to-right, rather than the normal top-to-bottom.> 4 [Madoka profile--she thinks about it.] 5 [Madoka hammers on his door--room 803.] Madoka: Kasuga-kun, Kasu...!! Madoka FX: 6 [From within, Madoka hears...] Kyousuke: [off] GYAA-AA-AA! Madoka: ! --------------------------------------------------- p 239 (155) 1 [She opens the door and races in.] door FX: Madoka: Ka! Kasuga...!! 2 [She hears water running from behind a door on the right.] water FX: [off] 3 [She opens it and looks in.] door FX: 4 [Pov shifts. Madoka stares down in horror at Kyousuke lying nude under sudsy water, apparently dead. His upper body and the walls are covered in blood. His eyes are open and vacant. His jaw hangs slack.] Madoka: KYAAAA! --------------------------------------------------- p 240 (156) 1 Madoka FX: 2 [He comes to, rubbing his head.] Kyousuke: Ahh... Ah-ow-ouch. I've got a lump. 3 [He holds up a bottle of shampoo--that ever-popular brand that looks like blood, I guess. ^_^] Kyousuke: Western-style baths are hard to use, after all... I slipped and fell. Kyousuke: Ahhhh, what a waste. This shampoo I just bought all came out... 4 [Having rinsed off, he steps out of the bath, to find Madoka coming to on the floor.] Madoka: Hm?! Kyousuke: Hm?! 5 [He turns and runs away, blushing. Madoka's eyes grow large and she blushes as well.] Kyousuke: Kyaaaa! Ayukawa, you pervert! 6 [She sits on the edge of his bed, back towards him, in a huff. Kyousuke stands wrapped in a towel.] Madoka: Grr-rr-rr! Enough with the scaring!! Kyousuke: S-sorry... --------------------------------------------------- p 241 (157) 1 Kyousuke: Ehhh!?! Sayuri-chan was kidnapped?! 2 Kyousuke: Wh-what'll we do?! Kyousuke FX: Madoka: In any case, we have to report this to the police!! 3 phone FX: Kyousuke/Madoka heartbeat FX: 4 Kyousuke: H-hello... 5 phone: Kyousuke: [wincing] I-I don't understand. Madoka: Gimme that! 6 Madoka: [English] Hello? What can I do for you?! [Kyousuke watches wide-eyed.] narration: Amazing... Ayukawa can speak English!! --------------------------------------------------- p 242 (158) 1 phone: [English] May I request that the two of you go to the observatory that's on the cape? Madoka: [to Kyousuke] It appears to be the crooks. Kyousuke: Eh?!! 2 Madoka: [English] For what purpose? You're... phone: [English] If you come, you'll undertand!! Okay? The blue dolphin is waiting there!! 3 Madoka: [English] What do you mean to do with Sayuri-chan?! Wait! phone FX: 4 Kyousuke: How amazing. Ayukawa, you're really smart... phone FX: Madoka: Anyway, if we don't do as the crooks say... 5 [View of an observation deck overlooking a beach.] Madoka: [off] ...Sayuri-chan's life will be in danger!! --------------------------------------------------- p 243 (159) 1 [The two stand at the edge of the deck and gaze out.] Kyousuke: Wow, beautiful. Madoka: Hey, we aren't here to sightsee. 2 [Smiling, Kyousuke pulls out a camera.] Kyousuke: But... Since we're here, let's take a picture! Madoka: S-sure... 3 [Kyousuke smiles and offers his camera to an American tourist.] Kyousuke: C-could you please take a picture. American tourist: [English] Oh yes. Okay! 4 [The two stand together as the tourist snaps the picture.] camera FX: 5 [The tourist waves goodbye.] American tourist: [English] That's an awfully lovely and pretty wife you have! How'd you manage to win her heart, young boy? [Kyousuke swivels his head from the tourist to Madoka. She has dropped her gaze and is blushing.] Kyousuke: Eh? What's he saying?! Madoka dramatic FX: 6 Kyousuke: [off] But what the heck does "the blue dolphin is waiting" mean...? 7 [Isolated shot of one of those coin-operated mounted telescope viewers-- though this one's like a large pair of binoculars.] --------------------------------------------------- p 244 (160) 1 [Madoka looks out through the telescope.] Madoka: Oh, that's it! The Blue Dolphin!! 2 [Her pov. On a sail of a distant ship is a dolphin over the words "Blue Dolphin".] 3 [Kyousuke looks up from the telescope.] Kyousuke: S-so Sayuri-chan and the crooks are in that...?! 4 [His pov of Madoka.] Kyousuke: [off] But... This is America. What'll we do if they point guns at us? Madoka: Then, I'll go alone. 5 [View of a sailboat, the "Blue Dolphin," docked at a marina.] Kyousuke: [off] Ah, wait!! --------------------------------------------------- p 245 (161) 1 [The two approach the boat. Kyousuke looks very nervous.] 2 [A large man, wearing a captain's hat and sporting a pipe, smiles and waves at the two. Kyousuke cringes.] seaman: [English] Hello! Kyousuke/Madoka heartbeat FX: 3 seaman: [English] Are you Ayukawa-san? Madoka: [English] Y-yes... That's right... 4 seaman: [English] Welcome to the Blue Dolphin! narration: He knows our names. Then... The crooks are here after all?! 5 [Kyousuke and Madoka walk past a sign in English.] sign: [English] This yacht is reserved for a sweet sweet couple all night tonight until morning. 6 [The boat moves out to sea.] --------------------------------------------------- p 246 (162) 1 [The two of them stand at the railing and watch the sun set in the ocean.] Kyousuke: Wowww! It's beautiful! Madoka: Really... 2 [Kyousuke peeks at Madoka.] 3 narration: If only this really was my honeymoon with Ayukawa... 4 [Their view of a cart filled with crab, lobster and other appetizers.] 5 [The man pours Madoka a drink.] seaman: [English] Please. Madoka: Th-thanks! bottle FX: 6 Kyousuke: Is it poisoned? Kyousuke FX: Madoka: [English] This is alcoholic...? seaman: [English] Yes, screwdrivers! --------------------------------------------------- p 247 (163) 1 [Tight shot of a tumbler filled with a drink.] Kyousuke: [off] "Screwdriver"?! Madoka: [off] Well, it's a sort of cocktail! It's sweet and tastes good, so girls find it easy to drink... But the alcohol is strong, so you have to watch out. 2 Madoka: [blushing] Boys use this cocktail, which is also called "The Pervert Drink"*, to get girls drunk so they can do naughty things... Uhh... . from "H" or = "perverted/dirty".> crows-in-background FX: 3 [Kyousuke smiles and hands her a glass.] Kyousuke: Then, Ayukawa, toss one back! [She shouts at him, face flushed and wide-eyed.] Madoka: What do you think we're here for? 4 [With a wink, the man pats Kyousuke on the shoulder.] seaman: [English] Good luck! seaman FX: 5 [His pov of Kyousuke, who looks back in horror.] Kyousuke: W-wait a minute! What's to become of us?! 6 [View of the setting sun.] seaman: [English/off] Don't worry, and stay on the yacht until morning! seaman: [English/off] I'll be back in the morning! --------------------------------------------------- p 248 (164) 1 [The man casts a final sinister sidelong glance back at them.] seaman: [English] With a great breakfast! I'll take your money then. seaman FX: 2 narration: And with that, the crook got off the boat, and left the two of us behind. 3 Kyousuke: Special "breakfast"?!* Maybe... It has to do with Sayuri-chan?! <*Commentary: The implication is that neither Kyousuke nor Madoka know what the word "breakfast" means.> 4 [Kyousuke loses it.] Kyousuke: Take our money... He's talking about a ransom! What'll we do? I don't have that much money! 5 Kyousuke: Anyway, it wouldn't be a small amount, would it? If... We tell them there isn't any money to hand over... --------------------------------------------------- p 249 (165) 1 [Kyousuke stares as Madoka extends her forefinger out at him, her hand in the shape of a gun.] Madoka hand FX: 2 [Pov shifts. Madoka has one eye closed.] Madoka: BANG. narration: I-it's no joke!! 3 Kyousuke: That means... Even our lives... When morning comes... 4 [His pov of Madoka, who looks back at him somberly.] 5 [The boat sits at anchor a bit offshore.] waves FX: narration: Is Sayuri-chan all right? But, when morning comes... Arrgghh. We should resign ourselves to our fate! --------------------------------------------------- p 250 (166) 1 [Kyousuke stands at the railing and stares glumly out to sea. Behind him, Madoka stands near the open doors to below-deck.] Madoka: Hey! Look! It's amazing! A kitchen and a bed, and a shower beside it. narration: In other words... 2 [Madoka stares at the back of Kyousuke, who stares quietly out across the water.] narration: For Ayukawa and me... Tonight is all that's left of our lives! 3 Madoka: Kasuga-kun... 4 [She hands him a glass.] Madoka: The naughty liquor... Shall we drink it? Madoka FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 251 (167) 1 [With a gentle smile, she raises her glass to him.] Madoka: To our wonderful night... Kampai! 2 [He stares back at her, wide-eyed and blushing.] Kyousuke: .......... Ayukawa! narration: The first... And the last night for the two of us... 3 [The boat lurches, sending her into his arms.] ---------------------------------------------------