Kimagure Orange Road "The Girls' Battlefield: Hawaii!" Volume 14, Story 7 WB Volume 8, Story 11 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (30 Oct 1989) Compilation & Additional translation by : Craig Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Matthew Akira Klippenstein Scott Henry Frederick Gallagher Last revision : 08-27-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 211 (127) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 211 (127)--TITLE PAGE [Madoka stands in shirt and pants, one foot set in front of the other. One hand is behind her back, the other holds a hat to her head.] MAIN TITLE (at top) The Girls' Battlefield: Hawaii! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) The Midsummer Sun. To Take You As an Ally and Play with 16-Beat Love*... <*Translation note: = "play with fire" also connotes "play with love".> --------------------------------------------------- p 212 (128) 1 [A view of the "Wikiwiki" shuttle bus dropoff point at the main terminal at Honolulu International Airport.] 2 [Madoka's pov of a somewhat smirking Sayuri and a speechless Kyousuke.] 3 [Their pov of a stunned Madoka.] 4 Madoka: Ka... Kasuga-kun! 5 [He forces a smile. Might work if Sayuri wasn't clinging to his arm...] Kyousuke: H-hi! --------------------------------------------------- p 213 (129) 1 [Sayuri approaches Madoka with a smile.] Sayuri: Ohh! To meet you here... 2 Sayuri: [smirking] ...is such a coincidence. 3 Madoka: My sister's wedding is taking place in Hawaii, so I've been here since the day before yesterday. It's been a while since we've gotten together with our parents, who are here in America! 4 Kyousuke: Eh?! 5 [He looks relieved.] Kyousuke: (O-ohh. So that's what it was.) 6 [Madoka aims a smile his way. Sayuri looks, too.] Madoka: And yourselves...? Madoka FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 214 (130) 1 Kyousuke FX: 2 [She turns away, and smiles blithely back at him over a shoulder.] Madoka: You're with a wonderful partner. [He waves his arms spastically.] Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: N-no! This is the quiz's...!! 3 [Smiling, Sayuri appears at his side and takes his arm once more.] Sayuri: I won a trip for two to Hawaii in a quiz at a hamburger place! And so I came with my boyfriend. Isn't that nice? Madoka: [dropping her gaze] Oho-o-o! 4 [The two exchange pleasant smiles. Pretty scary. Kyousuke looks at Madoka.] Madoka: Congratulations. Madoka/Sayuri FX: Sayuri: Thanks! 5 [His eyes grow large and his face colors.] 6 [He stares hard at Madoka, who doesn't meet his eye. He struggles to keep his composure...] Kyousuke: URGGHHH... --------------------------------------------------- p 215 (131) 1 [...because Madoka is grinding the point of her high heel into his foot.] Madoka high-heel FX: 2 [He finally hops about, clutching that foot in pain.] Kyousuke: Ow-ow-ow-ouch! narration: Sure enough, she's mad! 3 [Madoka walks off without a backward glance.] Madoka: See you. Kyousuke: Ah! Wait! 4 Kyousuke: D-do you have anything planned for today? 5 [Madoka looks back over her shoulder.] 6 Madoka: Nothing special today... I thought I'd just wander around... 7 [He runs up to her with an almost frantic smile.] Kyousuke: H-hey! Then, if it's okay, why don't we go around together for the rest of the day?! Madoka: Huh?! --------------------------------------------------- p 216 (132) 1 Sayuri: [smiling] Yeah, yeah, Ayukawa-sa-a-an. Let's do that!! Sayuri: We just got here today, so I'd like to ask that you guide us, if it's okay with you. 2 [Kyousuke claps his hands together before him.] Kyousuke: Please! Sayuri: Okay?! 3 Madoka: Well, okay... 4 Kyousuke: (After all, I came to Hawaii because I was worried to death about Ayukawa!) 5 Sayuri: (If I don't take down this guy in front of her, coming to Hawaii will have been pointless!) 6 [Madoka portrait.] 7 [She stares at the letter in her hand...] 8 [...and puts it into her handbag.] letter FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 217 (133) 1 [View of a palm tree eclipsing the sun.] 2 [Shot of the street signs at the corner of Beach and Kalia (in Waikiki).] 3 [Looks like a view down Kalakaua Avenue in Waikiki--but trust me, traffic is never this light there. Nor is the speed limit 50 mph! ] 4 [Sayuri returns with two drinks.] Sayuri: Whew! It's so hot. 5 [She hands one to Madoka, who sits on a bench. Kyousuke sits on another.] Sayuri: Here you are! Kyousuke: Huh? Where's mine? 6 [Sayuri blushes in embarrassment and claps a hand to her mouth.] Sayuri: Oh, that's right. Oh no-o-o. I forgot and only bought two... --------------------------------------------------- p 218 (134) 1 Madoka: I don't need one! 2 Sayuri: [smiling] No, please, please! 3 [Tight shot of a drink with two straws.] Sayuri: [off] Since I have two straws... We can do it this way... straw FX: 4 [Sayuri raises the drink and gazes into Kyousuke's eyes. He kinda looks like a frightened deer.] Sayuri: And drink together in friendship! 5 [Kyousuke tries to look out the corner of his eyes off-panel.] Kyousuke FX: 6 [Madoka stares at the two lovebirds. Kyousuke sits stock-still as Sayuri smiles and clings to his arm.] Madoka: .......... 7 [Madoka ignores them and takes a hard pull at her drink.] narration: Somehow, I think it was a mistake to go around together... --------------------------------------------------- p 219 (135) 1 [View across the city from atop some hotel.] 2 [Sayuri approaches Madoka with a camera and a smile.] Sayuri: Oh, could you, ple-e-ease?! 3 [Madoka's pov of Sayuri clinging to Kyousuke's arm. Kyousuke looks like he'd rather be elsewhere.] Sayuri wave-and-wink FX: 4 [Madoka frowns over the top of the camera.] 5 [View through the camera's viewfinder. She aims for a shot above their heads.] camera FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 220 (136) 1 [A mini-mall, probably still in Waikiki.] 2 [Aloha shirts hang from racks.] 3 [Sayuri and Madoka look at some blouses. Kyousuke stands idly behind them.] Sayuri: Wow! So cute . 4 [He smiles at a blouse he's pulled off the rack.] Kyousuke: (I bet this would look good on Ayukawa...) 5 [He smiles nervously at Madoka.] Kyousuke: Ayukawa, this is perfect... Madoka: Huh? --------------------------------------------------- p 221 (137) 1 [Smiling brightly, Sayuri takes the blouse out of his hands.] dress FX: Sayuri: Wahhh! Thanks! You chose it just for me, hm!! 2 Kyousuke FX: 3 Madoka: .......... 4 [He grimaces and clutches at his head.] narration: O-oh no. If this keeps up, I'm in trouble! I didn't come to Hawaii for this!! 5 [Madoka profile.] narration: If I don't do something now, Ayukawa will... 6 [Sayuri looks back over her shoulder at Madoka, who is staring hard at Kyousuke.] Sayuri FX: Ah! Madoka FX: 7 [Sayuri starts to look very worried.] Sayuri: (Oh no! If that girl comes at me with a fury, there's no way I can win... I'll just hide behind this guy then...) 8 [Glancing Madoka's way, Sayuri takes Kyousuke by the arm.] Sayuri: Cute clothes like these aren't suited for a certain someone with a fierce personality, are they?! Kyousuke: Eh?! 9 [Madoka starts to look a bit worried.] Madoka: .......... --------------------------------------------------- p 222 (138) 1 [This panel is the right-half of a 2-page panel. View across the waters off Waikiki Beach towards Diamond Head.] 2 Sayuri: (Well! Tee hee hee hee... Now I'll show you my true skills!) 3 [Sayuri watches Madoka and Kyousuke as they walk together on the beach.] Sayuri: (Watch. Now for the coup de grace...!!) --------------------------------------------------- p 223 (139) 1 [This is the left-half of a 2-page panel.] 2 [Sayuri changes into her swimsuit.] Sayuri undress FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 224 (140) 1 [She stands and bends down at the waist to look him in the eye. Kyousuke, seated on the sand, looks up.] Sayuri: Won't you please teach me how to swim? Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 2 [She pulls him away. He looks back towards Madoka, who has changed into her black bikini.] Sayuri: C'mon, hurry-y-y. Kyousuke: Ah... Yeah... 3 [Sayuri frolics with a hesitant Kyousuke in the shallow surf.] Sayuri: Kyaa! waves FX: 4 [Madoka sits and watches, unhappily.] --------------------------------------------------- p 225 (141) 1 Madoka: ! 2 Madoka: [smiling] Hmm... 3 [Kyousuke towels his face dry. Sayuri approaches on one side as Madoka sits on the other.] Sayuri: Say, I have a favor to ask... Madoka: Oh, me, too! Kyousuke: [swiveling his head] Eh?! Eh?! 4 [Isolated shot of the edge of the water.] wave FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 226 (142) 1 [Yabba dabba... Madoka presents her back to us and undoes her bikini top-- lots of curves on this goddess! She looks back at us over her shoulder. Sayuri likewise unties her top straps of her one-piece swimsuit, showing lots of cleavage and curves.] Madoka/Sayuri: Could you put suntan oil on me? Madoka/Sayuri swimsuit tops FX: 2 [Kyousuke's eyes shine with the megawatt lust of a teenage boy.] Kyousuke: EH?! Kyousuke heartbeat FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 227 (143) 1 Kyousuke: Eh?! Eh?! 2 Kyousuke: [smiling nervously] Th-then, one at a time... 3 Sayuri: [angrily] Choose one or the other!! 4 [View pans back and up. Kyousuke stands frozen. Sayuri stands and faces him. Madoka kneels with her back towards him and smiles.] narration: Usually, I'm so indecisive... --------------------------------------------------- p 228 (144) 1 [With a look of fierce determination, he unscrews the cap off a bottle of suntan lotion...] narration: But today, it's a bit different!! suntan oil cap FX: 2 [...and kneels before Madoka's back.] Kyousuke FX: Madoka: Thank you very much! 3 [Sayuri is aghast.] Sayuri FX: 4 Sayuri: [running away] Damn! How vexing!! Sayuri footsteps FX: 5 [Her arms crossed over her chest, Madoka kneels in front of Kyousuke on the sand. Kyousuke rubs oil on her back.] --------------------------------------------------- p 229 (145) 1 [Their view of the ocean.] waves FX: 2 [Kyousuke smiles as he rubs her back.] Kyousuke: Because, uhh... I was worried about you and... Umm... There's nothing between Sayuri-chan and me... narration: Making her jealous by putting oil on Ayukawa's body somehow makes me awfully happy today! Madoka: Oho. And so? 2 (inset) [Sayuri smiles from behind a palm tree at a passing stud muffin.] Sayuri: (Kyaaaa! What a hunk!! This is truly Hawaii.) ---------------------------------------------------