Kimagure Orange Road "The Hawaii Everyone's Longing for!" Volume 14, Story 6 WB Volume 8, Story 10 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (30 Oct 1989) Compilation & Additional translation by : Craig Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Matthew Akira Klippenstein Frederick Gallagher Last revision : 08-27-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 191 (107) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 191 (107)--TITLE PAGE [Madoka kneels in a black bikini at the beach.] MAIN TITLE (at top) The Hawaii Everyone's Longing for! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) An Actress for Just One Summer--Acting out a Dazzling Love... --------------------------------------------------- p 192 (108) 1 [A shot looking straight up at the sun.] FX: 2 [Kyousuke walks down the street, staring at the sidewalk.] Kyousuke FX: 3 [He puts a hand to his forehead.] narration: Hello everyone. This is Kyousuke... 4 narration: Summer vacation is supposed to be fun. Then why am I feeling so down, you ask? 5 narration: It's all because of what Ayukawa said the day before yesterday... 6 [Exterior shot of ABCB.] --------------------------------------------------- p 193 (109) 1 [His pov of Madoka, dressed in her ABCB apron.] Madoka: Starting tomorrow, I'm planning to go to America for about a month! 2 [Pov shifts. We look down at the two. Kyousuke sits at the counter, stunned. Madoka does dishes behind the counter.] Kyousuke: EH!?! 3 [Cracks appear on this panel. It is a facial portrait of Kyousuke.] glass FX: 4 glass FX: 5 [The panel shatters completely.] glass FX: narration: This world has become pitch-black... 6 [He aims a grimace at the ceiling. Behind him, he visualizes a black-bikini- clad Madoka at the beach.] narration: A summer without Ayukawa isn't summer at all! dramatic FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 194 (110) 1 narration: Well, but I bet she's going to see her father and mother, so there's nothing to be done about it, is there! Madoka: Before that, I think I'll stop by in Hawaii for about a week and get a nice tan! 2 Kyousuke: EH? 3 [She leans toward him, with a merry look on her face. He smiles back nervously at her.] Madoka: Do you want to go, too, Kasuga-kun? Kyousuke: Ah... No... Ah ha ha ha ha... 4 [Kyousuke facial portrait--he is stricken.] narration: A young girl alone on a trip to America for a month... What's more, one week in Hawaii...?! 5 narration: Someone as beautiful as Ayukawa... Won't be left alone by the guys over there. Kyousuke FX: 6 [Against the backdrop of a quasi-American flag (it's got too many stripes, and too few stars) a couple of hunks tower over a cringing Madoka.] narration: Blue eyes that press close! Buff blond boys. Raging gaijin power!! Madoka: Kyaaaa! --------------------------------------------------- p 195 (111) 1 [Back to the present. Kyousuke has stopped in the street, holding both fists to his mouth, and sweating it.] Kyousuke: Ah!?! 2 [A man in anguish...] narration: [both narration boxes combined] Ahhhh, I'm dying of worry over Ayukawa, after all!! Kyousuke FX: 3 Kyousuke: (I used up all my savings on last year's Okinawa trip...) Kyousuke: Ahhhh... Kyousuke FX: [Sayuri spots him walking off with his shoulders hunched.] 4 [Sayuri is in shorts and shirt, looking cute as ever.] Sayuri: [smiling] Hey-y-y! 5 [She runs up past him and turns to give him a smile. Kyousuke hardly sees her.] Sayuri: It's been a while! Kyousuke: H-hi... --------------------------------------------------- p 196 (112) 1 [Hmm. I don't think I've ever been here before... Exterior shot of a fast food place. Anyway, its logo is the "Golden Arch".] sign: NcDonald's Hamburgers 2 [Kyousuke and Sayuri stand at the counter. Sayuri smiles at him.] narration: But... This isn't the time to be doing something like this! 3 [Tight shot of a card with rub-off squares held in Sayuri's hand.] Sayuri: [off] What's... This? card: [partial view] ...iz Kyousuke: [off] Isn't it a quiz? 4 Kyousuke: [smiling] I'll give that to you. Sayuri: Thanks . 5 [View looking down at the two seated at a table. Hm, NcDonald's looks the same the world over... ^_^] Sayuri: .......... 6 Sayuri: You're very depressed, aren't you. 7 [Her pov of Kyousuke's profile. He looks at her out of the corner of his eye.] Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 197 (113) 1 [View across the restaurant.] Sayuri: [off] Yesterday... When I went to Narita Airport to see my friend off, I unexpectedly... 2 [His pov of Sayuri.] Sayuri: Ran into her... Ayukawa-san! 3 [Her pov of Kyousuke. He blushes slightly and studies her solemnly.] 4 [She sips from her drink and smiles softly at him. He studies the ceiling.] Sayuri: Is that the reason? Sayuri FX: 5 Kyousuke: [face flushed and nervous] Wha... What are you talking about...!! crows-in-background FX: 6 Sayuri: Apparently she's going to be in America for the entire summer break! Sayuri FX: Sayuri: (Ahh, good riddance, really... I hope that girl never comes back!) --------------------------------------------------- p 198 (114) 1 [Sayuri looks off to one side and ponders.] narration: But... Without that girl around it seems this guy's become easier to take down... But it isn't worth the trouble of taking him down if it's not done in front of that girl... 2 [Her pov of the average-looking, puzzled Kyousuke.] narration: If I had to say it, with that girl gone... A guy of this caliber is nothing special! 3 [A view up at the sky past towering palm trees.] narration: If I was going to take this guy... It would be better to chase after her to Hawaii, thumb my nose and do it in front of her... 4 [Sayuri is lost in dreams.] narration: But, Hawaii... narration: It must be full of great guys... 5 [Similar background as before. Against a backdrop of a quasi-American flag, a couple of hunks tower over an ecstatic Sayuri.] narration: Blue eyes that press close! Buff blond boys. Raging gaijin power!! Sayuri: Kyaaaa! 6 [On either side of the table, the two stare up at the ceiling, dreamily.] Sayuri/Kyousuke: Hawaii, hmm... Sayuri/Kyousuke: --------------------------------------------------- p 199 (115) 1 Sayuri FX: Kyousuke: .......... 2 Kyousuke: What are you doing? 3 [She looks down at the card on the table in front of her.] Sayuri: The quiz just now. If I rub this and win, maybe I can get another hamburger... Sayuri FX: Kyousuke: [wincing] It's not that easy to win something like this. 4 [Tight shot of the card.] Sayuri: OH?! 5 [She holds it up to her face, smiling.] Sayuri: I won!! Lucky-y-y . Kyousuke: Eh? 6 Sayuri: If you match this mark... Let's see... Sayuri: It's probably nothing special... 7 dramatic FX: card: * One week trip for two to Hawaii * A present--Kusatsu Hot Sulfur Springs * One more hamburger --------------------------------------------------- p 200 (116) 1 [The two stare down at the card, incredulous.] 2 [Both flinch back, sending their drinks flying.] Sayuri/Kyousuke: I CAN'T BELIEVE IT! 3 [Two male employees gather around Sayuri. Kyousuke can only watch from a distance.] NcDonald's worker 1: You're kidding! Sayuri: Oh no-o-o! NcDonald's worker 2 FX: narration: Ahh... If I had that, I could have gone to Ayukawa... 4 [He starts to get up from his seat.] narration: But I gave that ticket to Sayuri-chan... narration: It doesn't concern me any more. Anyhow, I'm sure she'll go with a girlfriend or someone from her family... Kyousuke: That was nice. See ya... 5 [With a merry smile, Sayuri hooks her arm around his.] Sayuri FX: 6 [Brightly, she announces to all present...] Sayuri: I'll go with him! crowd: OHHHH! --------------------------------------------------- p 201 (117) 1 [A worker hands over a clipboard for Sayuri to sign.] narration: This was an unexpected piece of good luck!! But to think it's a trip for two to Hawaii with me... narration: What's this girl thinking?! 2 Kyousuke: (During that time, we'll stay in the same room of the same hotel, won't we?!) Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 3 [He turns aside and winces.] Kyousuke: (What's more, Ayukawa's over there, too... I don't know how this'll turn out!!) 4 [Isolated shot of a tray carrying a styrofoam burger container and a drink.] --------------------------------------------------- p 202 (118) 1 [He nervously addresses Sayuri.] Kyousuke: Well... I... Appreciate this... But, I... After all... Sayuri: .......... 2 narration: I want to see Ayukawa!! But... To use this girl for that... My conscience won't allow it! [While he's thinking to himself, Sayuri turns back to the employee.] 3 Sayuri: Excuse me... We're still high school students, and since we aren't lovers or anything, can we get separate rooms? 4 Kyousuke: [wide-eyed] S-separate? 5 narration: With this word, the reason and conscience I had left were completely swept away!! [Kyousuke waves tiny flags amidst falling confetti and streamers.] Kyousuke party popper FX: 6 [With a knowing look, Sayuri crosses her arms and looks off-panel.] Sayuri: (From this guy's personality, I'm sure that by saying this, he'll be hooked... In a way, he's the type that needs a justification!) --------------------------------------------------- p 203 (119) 1 [A jumbo jet takes off.] 747 FX: 2 [Kyousuke and Sayuri chat in their plane seats.] narration: And so, this impromptu couple set off for dreamy Hawaii... 3 [The plane's tires hit the runway at Honolulu International Airport.] 4 [View of two 747's at adjacent gates at the airport.] narration: ...and arrived!! --------------------------------------------------- p 204 (120) 1 [A Madoka full-portrait runs down the right half of this page. She stands in a mini-jumpsuit.] 2 [A view inside the airport.] narration: Going to America without giving any reason... Everyone's probably surprised. 3 [Master smiles and waves.] narration: Especially Master, who's put out because I'm absent from ABCB... 4 [Hikaru smiles.] narration: And Hikaru... And.. 5 [Profile of Madoka.] jet FX: [off] 6 [She drops her gaze.] narration: ...Kasuga-kun... --------------------------------------------------- p 205 (121) 1 [The two wait with a suitcase at curbside. Just *one* suitcase?] narration: F-finally, we're here!! Kyousuke: .......... Sayuri: [looking around] Oo-wahhh! Only newlyweds, hm?! 2 [Kyousuke looks around. A couple walks by.] Kyousuke: Ha ha ha... Kyousuke FX: 3 [Smiling, she wraps a hand around his arm.] Sayuri: But if we try like this, even we... 4 [She looks up into his eyes. Oh, she's VERY good, Sayuri-chan is...] Sayuri FX: 5 [And blesses him with a newlywed smile. He blushes.] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: Sayuri FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 206 (122) 1 [A couple of beautiful and tanned, bikini-clad and flower-lei-bedecked girls greet Kyousuke.] pretty wahine*: Alo-o-ha! <*Hawaiian for "girl". ^_^> 2 [One drapes a lei around his neck...] 3 [...and kisses him on the cheek.] pretty wahine FX: Kyousuke: Oo-wah! 4 [He turns to Sayuri in embarrassment.] Kyousuke: This is just a greeting in Hawaii!! Ha ha ha ha ha! 5 Sayuri: Is that so? Then maybe I should greet you, too?! 6 Kyousuke: [flinching] Eh?! --------------------------------------------------- p 207 (123) 1 [Madoka walks along with a letter in her hand.] 2 [Tight shot of the letter. It's addressed to Kyousuke.] 3 [She approaches a mailbox...] 4 [...and starts to insert the letter into the slot.] letter FX: 5 [Madoka is surprised by something seen off-panel.] --------------------------------------------------- p 208 (124) 1 [Closeup of Sayuri, eyes closed, kissing a blushing Kyousuke on his cheek.] Sayuri kiss-on-cheek FX: 2 [View pans back to show Madoka staring at the two, and frozen in the act of mailing off the letter.] 3 [View pans back further. Madoka stands there with the letter in her hand. Kyousuke stares wide-eyed back at her. Sayuri hasn't noticed Madoka yet.] --------------------------------------------------- p 209 (125) 1 [Madoka's pov of the two. Sayuri looks back, surprised. Kyousuke starts looking horrified.] Kyousuke: ..........?! 2 [Their pov of Madoka. She is stunned.] 3 [View looking up at the vapor trail of a departing jet.] narration: Th-this is terrible...!! jet FX: ---------------------------------------------------