Kimagure Orange Road "The Heart-Breaking Premonition Dream" Volume 14, Story 3 WB Volume 8, Story 7 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation & compilation by : Craig H. Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Matthew Akira Klippenstein Frederick Gallagher K. Huong Last revision : 08-27-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 131 (47) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 131 (47)--TITLE PAGE [Madoka sits on the edge of her bed, dressed in her nightgown, which rides up both legs to show a lot of thigh.] MAIN TITLE (at top) The Heart-Breaking Premonition Dream SUB-TITLE (at bottom) I Want to Do the Bold Thing with the Cool You! --------------------------------------------------- p 132 (48) [This page and the first two panels of the next are black-bordered, denoting the premonition dream.] 1 [Madoka's pov of Toba-sensei, as he looks at her with a serious expression.] Toba-sensei: I want you to come over... 2 [His pov of her--she looks back with a partly mischievous expression.] Madoka: Sounds like... You're trying to win my heart! 3 [Pov pulls back. The two are outside. With a decisive look, he takes Madoka by her wrist. She stares back in surprise.] Toba-sensei: By all means, I want to have you!! Toba-sensei FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 133 (49) 1 [Pov shifts. In a window of the school building above them, Kyousuke stares down in horror.] 2 [Pov shifts. Madoka looks back at us.] Madoka: Okay. Then, eat... 3 [Exterior night shot looking up the front of the Kasuga apartment building.] Kyousuke: [off] WAHHH!! 4 [Manami sits up in bed. Behind her, Kurumi rubs her eyes.] Kurumi: What was that voice just now? 5 [The neighbors pile out of their apartments.] neighbor wife: What is it? What is it? neighbor family FX: neighbor husband: In the middle of the night... --------------------------------------------------- p 134 (50) 1 [Good neighbors all, they rush towards the source of the scream.] neighbor 1: I think it came from Kasuga-san's place. neighbor 2: Maybe a thief broke in, or... neighbor 3: Maybe that cry was someone being murdered? 2 [An officer pushes his way through the mob.] police officer: Okay, make way, make way! 3 [At the door to their apartment, Takashi and Manami speak to the officer with embarrassment. Behind, the neighbors peer into the apartment.] Takashi: No-o-o... It's nothing. Ha ha ha ha ha! Manami: We're very sorry to disturb you. 4 [The twins stand and look off-panel. Kurumi winces.] Manami: Really! That oniichan--always and forever causing trouble. Kurumi: I'm so embarrassed! 5 [Kyousuke sits up wide-eyed in bed.] Kyousuke: 6 narration: It was a premonition dream!! But what the hell was this...?! --------------------------------------------------- p 135 (51) 1 [He walks to school.] Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: (B-but... Why was that teacher... Having a conversation like that with Ayukawa...?) 2 narration: Come to think of it... The last time, Ayukawa acted like she knew that teacher... Madoka: [flashback] That guy... Is so careless as usual, hm. 3 [He stops short, eyes wide with shock.] narration: That means... Those two are definitely acquainted with each other!! What's more... They're on pretty good terms...! 4 [Kyousuke's pov of his classmates. Two girls talk.] 5 [Madoka sits at her desk.] 6 [Another view of Madoka at her desk. She tosses her hair back.] 7 [Behind her, Kyousuke stands and watches her.] --------------------------------------------------- p 136 (52) 1 narration: But... Ayukawa would never... Do something like that with that teacher... No way! 2 [Exterior shot of a school building.] narration: After school... school bell FX: 3 [Kyousuke stands at a urinal.] 4 [He's surprised to hear a conversation outside the window.] Toba-sensei: [off] It's been a really long while. How long has it been, Madoka...? Since seeing you last... 5 [Kyousuke scurries on top of the urinal to get a look outside the window.] Kyousuke FX: 6 [Same view as in the premonition dream (though out-of-sequence). Above Madoka and Toba-sensei, Kyousuke peers out the window in horror.] Madoka: Well... At the very least, since there wasn't a class of yours yesterday... Hasn't it been 2 or 3 days? --------------------------------------------------- p 137 (53) 1 Toba-sensei: Ha! ha! ha! Stop kidding around. 2 [As in the dream, Toba-sensei gazes seriously back at us.] Toba-sensei: I want you to come over... 3 [His pov of Madoka. She has a mischievous expression.] Madoka: Sounds like... You're trying to win my heart! 4 [Kyousuke profile--he looks down in rapt attention.] Toba-sensei: [off] Ahhhh!! Of course that's what I mean. 5 [As in the premonition dream, Toba-sensei grasps Madoka by her wrist.] Toba-sensei: By all means, I want to have you!! --------------------------------------------------- p 138 (54) 1 [Kyousuke profile--utter shock.] 2 narration: Wh-what are they saying...?! 3 narration: The premonition dream came true, after all!! urinal FX: 4 [The urinal on which he was perched comes off the wall and crashes to the floor.] Kyousuke: Oo-wah! urinal FX: 5 [Both slam into the ground.] Kyousuke/urinal FX: 6 [Kyousuke passes out.] Kyousuke: (A... Ayu...) 7 [His consciousness goes spinning down into a black void.] Kyousuke: (Ayukawa-a-a!) (Ayukawa-a-a!) --------------------------------------------------- p 139 (55) 1 [Walking like an old man, Kyousuke hobbles out the school's front gate.] Kyousuke: Ah-ow-ouch... 2 [He stares glumly down at the ground.] narration: This is truly insult added to injury! narration: I passed out after that, so I didn't see... But Toba-sensei and Ayukawa... 3 [Madoka races up to him.] Madoka: Kasuga-kun! 4 [He turns to her with a lost look.] Kyousuke FX: 5 [Oh so cute! Arms behind her, she leans and looks up at his face with a soft smile.] Madoka: What kind of face are you making?! Say, could you drop by my place today?! 6 [Exterior view of the Ayukawa residence.] --------------------------------------------------- p 140 (56) 1 [She comes in with a heavily-laden tray, all smiles.] Madoka: Sorry to keep you waiting! 2 Kyousuke FX: 3 Madoka: [merrily] I prepared this with all my heart. Just for you, Kasuga-kun! 4 [He gives her a nervous and measuring look.] narration: What does she mean by that? Jeez! 5 [View pans back. He's seated at the low table in her bedroom. She kneels beside him to set the tray of food down on the table.] Madoka: That's a joke. I'm in the middle of testing out ABCB's new menu. Won't you try it? Kyousuke: Ohh... --------------------------------------------------- p 141 (57) 1 Madoka: You washed your hands, right? Kyousuke: Uh... Uh-hmm. 2 [As in the premonition dream...] Madoka: Okay. Then, eat... 3 [But of course, he doesn't remember. He looks down at the food.] narration: I don't feel like it at all right now... 4 [She looks across the table at him with concern.] Madoka: Ohh... It doesn't look good? 5 [His pov of her. Using a fork, she has a bite. Her lips lovingly caress the tines of the fork.] Madoka: Mmm. Not bad! Madoka FX: 6 [Using that same fork, she presents a morsel for him to eat, with a cheery smile.] Madoka: He-e-ere. Say, "ahh" . --------------------------------------------------- p 142 (58) 1 Madoka: [smiling] Say, "ahh". [He blushes and stares blankly across the table at her.] 2 [He closes his eyes and opens his mouth.] narration: Damn... Ayukawa making this cute a face with that teacher... 3 [His pov of her. She looks back at him with shiny eyes, holding out her fork towards him.] 4 [Still, he hesitates in eating from her fork. ] Madoka: I wanted you to be the first to eat this. 5 [He visualizes the premonition dream.] narration: Speaking of eating, Ayukawa said to that teacher... Ahhhh, I feel like I'm going crazy! Toba-sensei FX: [flashback] --------------------------------------------------- p 143 (59) 1 [He just stares wide-eyed at the food on the fork before his eyes.] narration: I can't hold back any more!! 2 narration: I'll ask Ayukawa... About that teacher!! [He snatches the fork out of Madoka's hands. She looks surprised.] Kyousuke: AYUKAWA!! Kyousuke FX: Madoka: Y-yes! 3 [Exterior view of the Ayukawa residence.] --------------------------------------------------- p 144 (60) 1 [View from behind as a junior high girl (in uniform) approaches the closed door to Madoka's room. Hm, I wonder who it is?] Kyousuke: [off] A-Ayukawa! That teach... 2 [Smiling, Hikaru walks in. Both Kyousuke and Madoka do rapid 180's. Kyousuke also manages to move about 3 meters from the table.] Hikaru: Sorry I'm la-a-ate!! door FX: Madoka/Kyousuke FX: 3 [Hikaru smiles at Kyousuke, who looks embarrassed, still clutching Madoka's fork.] Hikaru: Ohh, Sempai!! 4 Kyousuke: [smiling] Hi... narration: Ohh. She also called Hikaru-chan...? 5 [Hikaru angrily confronts Madoka.] Hikaru: Hey, hey, Madoka-san. That Tatsurou! You know he's back in town, right?! 6 Madoka: Of course. He's my PE teacher. 7 Kyousuke: [wide-eyed] (That guy they're talking about... Hikaru-chan knows him, too?) --------------------------------------------------- p 145 (61) 1 Hikaru: [enraged] Why is a jerk like that teaching at our school!! I hate that guy! 2 Madoka: Me too! He's your cousin, so I'm sorry, but... Madoka hair FX: 3 narration: Eh!?! Hikaru-chan's cousin?! 4 [View pans back. All three sit down on the floor. Both girls close their eyes and look irritated. Kyousuke looks stunned.] Madoka: If anything, he's not the type I like... Hikaru: [arms crossed] Yup, yup. narration: ?! 5 [Hikaru's pov of Madoka.] Madoka: A little while ago, at school, he called out to me... What's this, I thought. "By all means, I want you to come over," he said! 6 [Kyousuke visualizes the scene from his dream.] narration: Ahh... That conversation back then! --------------------------------------------------- p 146 (62) 1 Madoka: He insisted that I join the track team! It's because he's the track team coach!! 2 [Hikaru punches the air in a frenzy.] Hikaru: He said that to me, too. Because he's in charge of both the junior high and senior high track teams. Hikaru fisticuffs FX: Hikaru: He said, "by all means, I want you!!" Who would join anything that involved a jerk like that?!! 3 Kyousuke FX: 4 Hikaru: [livid] I thought I should kick his butt! Really! [Madoka looks embarrassed and stares up at a corner of the ceiling.] Madoka: Oh. I... 5 [She turns her back towards the others and tosses her hair back.] Madoka: He was too persistent, so, in the end... Madoka FX: 6 [Kyousuke still sits, looking blank and holding that fork.] Kyousuke: ..........?! --------------------------------------------------- p 147 (63) 1 narration: Ah! That means that Ayukawa knew that guy was Hikaru-chan's cousin, so... 2 [His pov of the two girls. Hikaru is loudly discussing something.] narration: I don't know why, but for some reason... He's hated a lot by these two... 3 narration: That conversation with Ayukawa at school... narration: Was just the first half of that premonition dream... 4 [He finally connects that part of his dream with what Madoka said a minute ago.] narration: Was that "eat" part from just a little while ago...? 5 [He breaths a sigh of relief and smiles.] Kyousuke: (O-ohh. I see! Now it all hangs together.) Kyousuke: Whew! narration: But I haven't felt this nervous in a long while! 6 Kyousuke: [to Hikaru] But, why do you dislike Toba-sensei so much? Hikaru: That's just it! --------------------------------------------------- p 148 (64) 1 [Hikaru addresses us, waving an index finger. Behind her is a flashback. A 4-year-old Hikaru, a 6-year-old Madoka and a young Tatsurou sit outside on a blanket on the grass and have a pretend picnic.] narration: Long ago, the three of us would often play house, but that guy lacked--should I call it knowledge, or perhaps common sense-- towards girls... He made Madoka-san and me so angry. little Tatsurou: [arms outstretched] Both of you are my wives! little Hikaru: [angry] Hey-y-y! That's no good!! 2 [Kyousuke stares down at the ground.] narration: Certainly sounds like that teacher! But, on second thought, is saying "both of you are mine" any different from me right now...?! 3 [Oh so cute! Arms behind her back, Hikaru leans and peers at what he holds in his hand.] Hikaru: Sempai, you've got something pretty tasty there, don't you! Kyousuke: Ah! 4 [With a smile, she takes it in her mouth.] Hikaru FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 149 (65) 1 [She blushes and spins about in ecstasy.] Hikaru: Hooray-y-y! It's Sempai's fork, so... We kissed indirectly!! Hikaru FX: [Kyousuke stares hard at the fork.] Kyousuke: Ah! 2 [Blushing, he looks over at Madoka, who merely turns to one side, and looks at him without expression.] 3 [In disgust with himself, he turns around and snaps his fingers at the lost chance.] Kyousuke: .......... Kyousuke fingers FX: 4 [Toba-sensei conducts class. His face is a horrible collection of lumps and bruises.] Toba-sensei: Le-e-et's see. Let's take attendance... narration: The next day... class FX: [off] 5 [Kyousuke looks back over his shoulder at a blushing Madoka with a knowing wink, but Madoka avoids the look by gazing out the window.] narration: Tomorrow... It might be me. That face of Toba-sensei is a bit pleasing today! --Kyousuke Kyousuke: ---------------------------------------------------