Kimagure Orange Road "The Wake-Up Kiss!" Volume 13, Story 5 WB Volume 7, Story 16 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation & compilation by : Craig H. Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Ramon Galindo Scott Henry Last revision : 08-26-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 311 (91) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 311 (91)--TITLE PAGE [A joyous Hikaru, in a dress and hat, dances about. She holds her hat down with one hand and puts the other hand in her skirt pocket.] MAIN TITLE (at top) The Wake-Up Kiss! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) Showing a Beaming Face and Spinning Round and Round in Love! --------------------------------------------------- p 312 (92) 1 [View of the tennis courts. Two girls walk by as a boy plays at the net.] Hikaru: [off] S-Sempai!! 2 [Isolated shot of a sign in the hallway.] sign: Ladies' Dressing Room Akane: [off] Kyousuke!! 3 [Akane and Hikaru stand at the open door and stare at Kyousuke. He stands in his T-shirt and briefs. Beside him is Madoka, who holds his shorts. Both stare back in nervousness.] Akane: What's this?! Hikaru: C-can't be... 4 [Split panel. Top--Kyousuke looks back in horror. Bottom--Madoka sweats and stares.] narration: H-how will I explain this situation...? There's no excuse to make!! --------------------------------------------------- p 313 (93) 1 [Akane launches herself at him, glaring and grabbing him by the lapels.] Akane: Kyousuke! Someone like you... Even though you have a girlfriend like Hikaru-chan!! What are you doing, looking like this?!! 2 [Akane stomps on the back of Kyousuke, who now lies on the floor. Hikaru clenches her fists to her cheeks and shuts her eyes.] Akane: You scummy guy! You're the pits!! Akane FX: Hikaru: You're dirty, Sempai! I hate you!! Kyousuke: 3 [Tight shot of Kyousuke as he takes his beating.] Kyousuke: WAHHH!! I'M SORRY-Y-Y!! 4 [Oops, the previous 3 panels were a dream... Here, Kyousuke stands and contemplates his options. Beside him, Madoka drops her gaze.] narration: ...is how it's doomed to turn out! Kyousuke FX: Madoka: Actually... 5 [Tossing her hair back, Madoka holds up the empty cup of coffee.] Madoka: I goofed and spilled this coffee... 6 [Kyousuke portrait--he stares off-panel, wide-eyed.] 7 [Akane portrait--blank stare.] 8 [Hikaru portrait--blank stare.] --------------------------------------------------- p 314 (94) 1 Hikaru: [happily] Ohh. Was that it? Akane: Don't surprise us like that, okay! 2 [Kyousuke stares off-panel.] 3 [His pov of Madoka, who gives him a soft smile.] 4 narration: Ayukawa... Defended me...! 5 Hikaru: [wide-eyed] But, Sempai. Why are you in the ladies' dressing room? [Kyousuke turns and stares at Hikaru, in shock.] 6 Akane: [merrily] I'm sure it isn't like that! Besides, being absent minded, Kyousuke probably mistook this for the men's side and came in! 7 [Smiling, Akane points a finger at him. Hikaru claps the palms of her hands to her cheeks in embarrassment. Kyousuke blushes.] Akane: But I wonder if it wasn't really to come and see Hikaru-chan?! Because you're a lech!! Hikaru: Oh no-o-o. Really, Sempai! I'm so embarrassed. Kyousuke: Th-that's not i-i-it! --------------------------------------------------- p 315 (95) 1 [He again looks over at Madoka, nervously.] Kyousuke: Ah! 2 [His pov of her. She frowns at him.] 3 [A view of the courts. Two women play a match.] 4 [Kyousuke stands outside with racket in hand.] Kyousuke: (Oh boy. For a while there, I was worried about how that would turn out... But, I'm saved!) 5 Akane: [brightly] Well, shall we begin the second half of the match now?!! A kiss! A kiss by the winning side! Don't forget, hm! 6 [In a repeat of the first half, Hikaru clings to his arm and beams up at him. He smiles nervously back.] Hikaru: Let's win for sure, 'kay, Sempai!! Kyousuke: Y-yeah... --------------------------------------------------- p 316 (96) 1 [Sitting on a bench, he studies the watch once more.] Kyousuke: But... Why didn't this watch work? 2 [Unnoticed by Kyousuke, Grandpa drapes his arms over the back of the bench that Kyousuke sits on and looks over Kyousuke's shoulder.] Grandpa: Because it's a watch. Naturally, if the spring winds down, it stops. Kyousuke: [staring at the watch] Oh, that's it. I see! watch FX: 3 [Kyousuke turns to look in surprise back over his shoulder.] 4 [Kyousuke grimaces. Grandpa flashes a "V" sign.] Kyousuke: Ojiichan! Grandpa: Hi! 5 Kyousuke: Why are you here?! Shouldn't you be back home in the country by now? Grandpa: I noticed I'd forgotten that watch, and came rushing back. 6 [Kyousuke holds it out to him.] Kyousuke: Here you go! Grandpa: [smiling] That's okay, that's okay. You hold it! 7 Grandpa: That you're using the Power assertively is good for you. Use it to your heart's content!! --------------------------------------------------- p 317 (97) 1 [Grandpa takes a seat at the bench and holds the watch out to Kyousuke.] narration: Well... Either way, the game is still being played, and I need it in order to win... Grandpa: Here. Take it! 2 Kyousuke: [solemnly] Then, let me borrow it for just a little while more, please! 3 [Akane walks by, and smiles at Grandpa.] Akane: Ah! Ojiichan! 4 [View of an empty umpire's chair.] tennis ball FX: [off] 5 [Madoka returns the ball.] narration: And then... It came time when the Kyousuke-Hikaru team was one point away from getting the victory... Madoka FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 318 (98) 1 [Kyousuke stretches to his left to reach it. Hikaru turns to watch.] Kyousuke FX: 2 Kyousuke: [off] Oh!! 3 Kyousuke: (I can't lose this point, can I!) 4 [Tight shot of the watch in his hand.] watch FX: 5 [Kyousuke portrait--the watch has reached "I".] --------------------------------------------------- p 319 (99) 1 [His body continues to fall.] narration: Wh-what's going on here?! Time isn't stopping at all... 2 [View pulls back. Kyousuke is still laid out horizontally, reaching for the ball with his racket.] narration: M-my body isn't moving!! 3 [The ball lands outside the line.] ball FX: 4 Hikaru: Hooray! It's out!! 5 [Madoka portrait--a gentle smile...] 6 [...which turns into wide-eyed surprise at what she sees cross-court.] Kyousuke FX: [off] 7 Hikaru: [staring off-panel] Se... Sempai... --------------------------------------------------- p 320 (100) 1 [The three race over to the stricken Kyousuke. He's frozen in the stretched- out position.] Hikaru: Sempai!! 2-4 [Kyousuke's face fades from view in these three panels.] narration: M-my consciousness... Is quickly fading away...! 5 [A set of fractured panels...] Hikaru: [off] Sempai!! What's wrong?! Sempai! Akane: [off] Kyousuke! Kyousuke!! --------------------------------------------------- p 321 (101) 1 [Another set of fractured panels.] Akane: [off] Kyousuke! Hikaru: Sempai! 2 [Hikaru kneels beside him and touches his forehead. His eyes are wide-open and glassy. Akane looks down in worry. Madoka stares in shock.] Hikaru: Sempai... 3 [Concern is written all over Hikaru's and Akane's faces.] Hikaru: Sempai... What happened? Akane: Dunno... This guy gets strange sometimes, so... 4 Akane: Anyhow, this is due to the Power again... Hikaru: Huh?! The Power?! 5 Akane: [running off] N-no, it's nothing. I'll go call a doctor. Hikaru: I'll go, too! --------------------------------------------------- p 322 (102) 1 [Madoka kneels beside Kyousuke.] 2 [Grandpa joins her.] Grandpa: Now then, let me see. 3 [She looks down, very worried. Grandpa rubs his chin and studies the situation.] Madoka: Kasuga-kun... Grandpa: Hmm. I see... 4 [Grandpa looks up to see the worried Madoka stroking Kyousuke's head.] 5 Grandpa: You seem very worried... Madoka: What? 6 [Split panel. Each other's povs. Grandpa and Madoka exchange looks.] Grandpa: Yes... It's written all over your face. 7 [Smiling, she looks down.] Madoka: Because he's my friend... --------------------------------------------------- p 323 (103) 1 [Grandpa drops his gaze, solemnly.] Grandpa: Then, let me just say this. This condition probably won't be cured by a doctor. 2 [Grandpa's pov of Madoka. She looks back with worry.] 3 [Standing, Grandpa looks up at the sky.] Grandpa: Neither a doctor nor the hot springs of Kusatsu can cure lovesickness... 4 [Madoka's pov as Grandpa looks at her from the corner of his eye.] Grandpa: But... Maybe you can cure him in an instant--it all depends on you. 5 Grandpa: Maybe there's a witch somewhere, and Kyousuke was caught by a spell... Madoka: A witch? 6 Grandpa: [smiling] Yeah... Like Snow White. I wonder how Snow White was awakened? 7 [Grandpa's pov of Madoka, who looks back at him.] --------------------------------------------------- p 324 (104) 1 [Grandpa turns away.] Grandpa: Isn't there something you could do for Kyousuke, as though he was Snow White? Whether or not Kyousuke wakes up depends entirely on the feelings you have. 2 [He walks away, smiling.] Grandpa: Because... That's what I--that evil witch--am saying... 3 [Madoka portrait-expressionless.] 4 [Madoka portrait--she breaks out in suppressed laughter.] Madoka: 5 [She looks over her shoulder and smiles.] narration: Pretty... ...unique ojiisama, hm. A witch...huh. 6 [She studies Kyousuke once more.] --------------------------------------------------- p 325 (105) 1 Madoka: (The truth is that Kasuga-kun, who's out of shape, probably fainted because he's anemic...) 2 [Madoka profile.] narration: Should I believe him... ...I wonder. 3 [Hikaru looks back wide-eyed at Grandpa.] Hikaru: WHA-A-AT?! SNOW WHI-I-ITE?! 4 [A view looking up at the blue skies.] --------------------------------------------------- p 326 (106) 1 [Madoka bends over Kyousuke.] 2 [And brings her face close to his.] 3 Hikaru: [off] SEMPA-A-AI!! [Madoka sits bolt-upright, blushing and wide-eyed.] Madoka heartbeat FX: 4 [Hikaru races towards them, a girl with a mission...] Hikaru footsteps FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 327 (107) 1 [As she approaches near, Madoka leaps to her feet and backs away.] Hikaru: SEMPAI! Madoka FX: 2 [With a smile, Hikaru plants a kiss on his cheek.] Hikaru: Please wake up with this victory kiss!! kiss FX: 3 Akane: [wide-eyed] OHH, SO BOLD!! [She and Madoka stare off-panel.] 4 [Kyousuke rises, looking a bit groggy. Hikaru is beside him, smiling.] Kyousuke: Hm?! --------------------------------------------------- p 328 (108) 1 Kyousuke: H-huh? I... What was I doing? Hikaru: I did it!! 2 [View of a nearby building.] Akane: [off] With a victory kiss, Snow White woke up!! 3 [Kyousuke stares at a smiling Akane, and points to his face.] Kyousuke: Victory... We...?! Akane: Yup. Madoka-chan's shot was out, so you automatically won!! 4 [View of the clubhouse.] Akane: [off] Congratulations, you two. Hey! Japan's Number One Couple! 5 [His pov of Madoka, who looks at him.] narration: But... For Ayukawa to hit one out. Her control should have been great... --------------------------------------------------- p 329 (109) 1 [Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.] Grandpa: [off] 2 [With a smile, Grandpa idly tosses the watch in the air.] Grandpa: There wasn't any need for that at all. If a minute passes by, you'll return to normal... Those girls had no way of knowing that, but... Grandpa: "Magic," too, can be romantic, can't it? 3 Grandpa: As I recall... Such a miss by that Ayukawa-kun seems so unusual... Kyousuke: It's Hikaru-chan, so... I wonder if she held back. 4 Grandpa: [smiling] Well, either way you were awakened by a girl's kiss. So you're a lucky guy. 5 [Grandpa smiles and rests a hand on Kyousuke's shoulder. Kyousuke smiles down at that hand.] Grandpa hand FX: narration: Can't beat ojiichan! ---------------------------------- At bottom: [wideban only] Kimagure Orange Road 7 (End) ---------------------------------------------------