Kimagure Orange Road "The Dangerous Twosome" Volume 12, Story 6 WB Volume 7, Story 8 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (12 Jan 1992) Compilation & Additional translation by : Craig Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Ramon Galindo Last revision : 08-26-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 147 (107) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 147 (107)--TITLE PAGE [Madoka stands and leans back against the wall on the sidewalk outside "Bobby's Bar," dressed in coat and matching short skirt, black blouse, black shoes and black leggings. She looks up the street.] MAIN TITLE (at top) The Dangerous Twosome SUB-TITLE (at bottom) On a Street Corner, Passionately, a Single Sigh. I Believe Him, and He Stood Me Up. --------------------------------------------------- p 148 (108) 1 [Near full-length portrait of Madoka standing in a towel, arms crossed over her chest.] Madoka: Don't leave... 2 [Kyousuke looks on in shock.] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: narration: Wh-what do you mean, "don't leave"...? A-Ayukawa! 3 [His pov of her face.] Madoka: Now that we can finally be alone. 4 [She takes a seat, pulling him by the hand. He uses his other hand to hold his towel against his privates.] Madoka: Come over here... Kyousuke: O-okay. --------------------------------------------------- p 149 (109) 1 [He sits beside her, and drapes the towel on his lap. Madoka pulls her knees up under her and eyes him out of the corner of her eyes in a sultry manner.] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: Madoka FX: Madoka: Like this, see... It looks like it'll be fun sweating! 2 [Back to reality. As Kyousuke stands and reels with an imaginary partner, Madoka stares at him blankly.] Kyousuke: N-no... N-not that... Ah, not there... Ayukawa, you pervert! crows-in-background FX: Madoka FX: 3 [She yells, snapping him out of it.] Madoka: What are you agonizing over, all by yourself?! Don't shout so loud. Kyousuke: AH! 4 [She looks out the window that's set in the door.] Madoka: Hey! Someone outside is about to come into the bath. Kyousuke: EH?! --------------------------------------------------- p 150 (110) 1 [Akane and Hikaru enter the outer room to the sauna.] Hikaru: My muscles ache all over, so I can't sleep! Akane: At a time like this, a nice hot bath is best!! 2 [Kyousuke stares out the window as well.] Kyousuke: A-Akane! A-and Hikaru-chan as well... 3 Kyousuke: [wincing] Wh-what'll we do? Madoka: [sternly] I don't know! 4 [She takes a seat. Kyousuke continues to hover near the window at the door.] Madoka: [angrily] You reek of alcohol... So you got drunk again, mixed up the men's and women's entrances, and came in here, didn't you! Kyousuke: I-isn't that obvious!! Wh-who would come in on purpose?! 5 [Miffed, she stands and glares at him over her shoulder.] Madoka: Don't be so arrogant, you lamebrain!! Madoka FX: Kyousuke: S-sorry... --------------------------------------------------- p 151 (111) 1 [Akane and Hikaru look in wonder at the door to the sauna room.] Akane: Hey! Is this a sauna?! 2 [Kyousuke and Madoka turn and stare.] 3 Akane: A sauna is awfully good for beautiful skin. And for losing weight... Hikaru: Then let's see! [Hikaru begins to turn the knob.] 4 [Tight shot of Hikaru's hand on the doorknob.] door FX: 5 [Inside, Kyousuke and Madoka stare helplessly at the knob.] Kyousuke FX: door FX: 6 [Kyousuke facial portrait--wide-eyed horror.] 7 [Madoka portrait--considering.] --------------------------------------------------- p 152 (112) 1 [Akane and Hikaru leap back as Madoka emerges from the sauna and shuts the door behind her.] door FX: 2 Hikaru: Huh! Madoka-san. Madoka: [nervously] O-oh... 3 Madoka: [nervous smile] Oh yeah, that's right. The lady in charge came by a little while ago, and I was told to hurry and leave since they're closing this place soon. 4 Hikaru: Then let's go bathe in the morning. Akane: Can't be helped. 5 [Madoka watches the two exit.] Akane: [off] Let's go back to our rooms and sleep! door FX: 6 [Kyousuke opens the door and peeks out. He sees Madoka breathing a sigh of relief.] Kyousuke: .......... Are they gone? Madoka: .......... Yeah. --------------------------------------------------- p 153 (113) 1 [Her towel comes undone.] Madoka towel FX: 2 [It falls to the floor, allowing Kyousuke (and us) a wide-eyed view of her bare backside. She looks over her shoulder in shock. Kyousuke's eyes bulge.] Madoka: Ah! Madoka towel FX: Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 3 [Kyousuke facial portrait--face flushed, a thin trickle of blood emerges from a nostril.] nosebleed FX: 4 [She sinks to the floor, clasps her arms across her chest, and aims a glare at him.] Madoka: Y-you saw!?! [He shuts his eyes and shakes his head violently, sending spumes of blood jetting from his nose.] Kyousuke: I-I didn't, I didn't. Madoka FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 154 (114) 1 [She pulls the towel up over her front. With the other hand she rockets his clothes at his face, sending him staggering back.] Madoka: Don't look this way! Get your clothes on!! 2 [Split panel. On the right, Madoka blushes. On the left, Kyousuke stares skyward from under his pile of clothes.] Madoka/Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 3 [Overhead view looking down through the glass-exterior of the building onto the hallway. Hikaru enters room 212; Akane pauses outside room 211.] Hikaru: Good night. door FX: 4 [Akane looks over at the door to room 210.] Akane: (It's Madoka-chan's room...) 5 Akane: (Well, I was just jumping to conclusions over Kyousuke and Madoka-chan... What a relief.) 6 [Smiling mischievously, Akane opens the door to room 210.] Akane: (Tee hee hee. Tonight, I'll just go ahead and... Chase after Madoka-chan!) --------------------------------------------------- p 155 (115) 1 [Kyousuke walks down the hall to his room. Following some 4 paces behind is Madoka, who looks aside.] Madoka/Kyousuke footsteps FX: 2 [Kyousuke opens the door to room 210, glancing over at Madoka, who's outside the door to 209.] Kyousuke: Then, good night... 3 [He goes in.] door FX: Kyousuke FX: 4 [Split panel. On top, Kyousuke looks abashed and nervous. Below, Madoka blushes quietly.] doors FX: 5 [Madoka portrait--she looks a bit sad and worn.] 6 [She falls back on the bed in exhaustion.] Madoka FX: Madoka: --------------------------------------------------- p 156 (116) 1 [Kyousuke walks towards the bed (which isn't even in the same corner of the room as his REAL bed in room 209). Looks like someone is under the covers.] 2 [He visualizes the bare backside of Madoka.] Kyousuke FX: 3 [He falls face-first into bed.] Kyousuke FX: 4 Akane: (She's here!!) 5 [Akane and Kyousuke lie back to back in bed. Kyousuke's eyes are closed. Akane's are open.] Akane: (How can Madoka-chan possibly not notice that I snuck into her bed.) 6 [Akane visualizes the two sitting up in bed. Akane takes a surprised Madoka by the hand. Pairs of the universal symbol for "female" dance about in the background.] Akane: Madoka-chan, I was waiting for you! 7 [A tight shot of two pairs of legs, with the girls apparently in an embrace.] Akane: I'm not letting you go tonight! Akane FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 157 (117) 1 [His face in a goofy daze, Kyousuke rises up on one elbow and looks up at the ceiling above Akane. He still hasn't seen her. Akane lies on her back, but looks dreamily off to the other side.] Kyousuke lift-head FX: Kyousuke: (Ahh... It looked so soft. Ayukawa's...) 2 [Still dreaming, his other hand falls upon Akane's breast. Akane blushes, and her eyes grow huge.] Kyousuke hand FX: Kyousuke: (Yeah, just like this...) Akane: (Wow! Madoka-chan's so bold!!) 3 [Akane smiles in pleasure. Kyousuke pauses and looks up at the ceiling.] Kyousuke: HUH?! What's this...?! Akane: Ohh! 4 [With a wide smile, Akane sits up. Kyousuke flies back off the bed.] Akane: Ma-a-adoka-chan! 5 [His pov of Akane's face. She blushes slightly.] Akane: I was waiting for you in your room all this time! Did I surprise you-u-u? 6 [Kyousuke portrait--no, but you sure surprised him!] --------------------------------------------------- p 158 (118) 1 [Akane and Kyousuke stare at each other blankly.] 2 [Akane portrait--wide-eyed, open-mouthed.] 3 [Kyousuke portrait--wide-eyed, blushing and sweating.] narration: Ah! Akane?! 4 [Out in the hall, he closes the door behind him and leans back against it.] narration: I-I mixed up the rooms again. door: 5 [He stares at the room number.] Kyousuke: (Huh? But it says room 210... This is Ayukawa's room.) 6 [He walks down the hall to his own room.] narration: Ohh, so that Akane snuck into Ayukawa's room? She has a lot of nerve. Jeez... Kyousuke footsteps FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 159 (119) 1 [He stops in sudden realization.] Kyousuke: (O-oh no!!) 2 narration: Akane clearly... Saw my face. 3 narration: What'll I do?!! What the hell did Akane think about me coming into Ayukawa's room at this hour of the night?! 4 narration: At any rate, this... IS AWFUL!! 5 [Akane sits on the bed in the dark.] Akane: (..........) 6 [Kyousuke stares at the door to room 209.] narration: Oh, that's right... Then Ayukawa's in my room... --------------------------------------------------- p 160 (120) 1 [Madoka lies on her side in bed, asleep.] 2 [Opening her eyes, she spies something off-panel.] Madoka: ! 3 [She props herself up on one elbow.] narration: Kasuga-kun's bag... Then this room is... 4 [She sees the door opening, and Kyousuke entering.] door FX: 5 [Her pov of him at the door.] --------------------------------------------------- p 161 (121) 1 [He enters and closes the door behind him.] door FX: 2 [Kyousuke facial portrait--face flushed, he stares off-panel.] 3 [Madoka feigns sleep.] 4 Kyousuke footsteps FX: [off] 5 [He kneels beside the bed and studies her.] --------------------------------------------------- p 162 (122) 1 [He reaches out a hand towards her face.] 2 [He lets her hair run through that hand.] narration: I was seen by Akane... Maybe I should just... Kyousuke/Madoka heartbeat FX: Madoka hair FX: 3 [Split panel. Madoka's eyes open (top half) as Kyousuke closes the drapes (bottom half).] 4 [Exterior view of the room from the courtyard as the curtains close completely.] curtains FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 163 (123) 1 [Exterior daylight shot of the athletic club.] 2 [Madoka opens one eye...] 3 [...and sits up in bed. She is alone.] Madoka: .......... 4 [She sticks her head out the door.] door FX: Madoka FX: 5 [Seeing Hikaru, she quickly exits, slams the door behind her and leans back against it.] Hikaru: [smiling] Oh, good morning, Madoka-san. I went to take a bath. door FX: Madoka: G-good morning! 6 [The two girls stare wide-eyed at something off-panel.] Hikaru: Huh? --------------------------------------------------- p 164 (124) 1 [It's Kyousuke, asleep in the hall, a blanket draped over him. Hikaru raises both fists to her cheek, appalled.] Hikaru: Sempai must move around an awful lot when he sleeps. He's sleeping in this sorta place! 2 [Madoka portrait--extremely wide-eyed.] 3 [Her pov of his sleeping face.] 4 [Madoka gently smiles, and lets out a sigh.] 5 [Scene shift. Standing outside, Kyousuke slaps his hands over his face and tenses up when he hears...] Akane: [off] Good morning!! narration: Th-that's Akane's voice!! 6 [He shuts his eyes tight and doesn't dare to look. Behind him, Akane has clapped a hand on Madoka's shoulder.] Akane: KYOUSUKE!! Akane hand-on-shoulder FX: narration: I-it's all over now... --------------------------------------------------- p 165 (125) 1 Akane: [smiling at Madoka] I bet you were able to sleep well last night! You exercised so much, didn't you!! [Kyousuke dares to look. He is most puzzled.] 2 Akane: [smiling at Kyousuke] Madoka-chan! [Kyousuke points a puzzled finger at his own face.] 3 [Akane sadly whispers into Kyousuke's ear.] Akane: It was awful of you to run away last night! It was getting to the good part! 4 Hikaru: Akane-san, Madoka-san is over here. So, you haven't put your contacts on yet, have you! 5 [He points a finger of surprise at a blank-looking Akane.] Kyousuke: What!?! Contacts? Then maybe last night, you... narration: And so that's how I cut my way out of that tight spot... 6 [Exterior view of the athletic club. Akane's portrait appears on her speech bubble.] Akane: Of course I took them out. narration: When I close my eyes, Ayukawa's nude figure comes to mind... I don't think I'll be able to sleep tonight, either... ---------------------------------------------------