Kimagure Orange Road "The Kiss in the First Dream of the New Year!" Volume 11, Story 5 WB Volume 6, Story 14 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation & compilation by : Craig H. Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Dan Root Thomas Wyatt Last revision : 08-19-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 267 (87) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 267 (87)--TITLE PAGE [Hikaru smiles gently at us from her perch atop a railing.] MAIN TITLE (at top) The Kiss in the First Dream of the New Year! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) Longing for a Dream-Tinged Future... --------------------------------------------------- p 268 (88) 1 [Kyousuke lies asleep underwater. Bubbles rise to the surface.] narration: As I was slowly rising from the depths of a pleasant nap... 2 Kyousuke stomach FX: [off] 3 [He sits up in bed, groggy. He's dressed in pajamas.] narration: I was awakened by the sound of my stomach... 1986--the New Year... 4 [Tight shot of his feet as he walks down the hallway.] narration: I didn't have my first dream of the New Year... Kyousuke: It's once a year... I kinda feel cheated. 5 [He pushes open the door to the kitchen and sticks his sleepy face in. He smells something nice.] narration: Dad and the others have gone to ojiichan's place... So once again I'm all alone on New Year's. Kyousuke: Hm? FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 269 (89) 1 [Full-portrait of Madoka, decked out in Playboy bunny outfit--shoulderless and backless outfit, white cuffs at her wrists, white collar and black bowtie around her neck, dark nylons, bunny ears and cottontail. She holds a saucepan in one hand, stirring the contents with a spoon in the other. She smiles at us over her shoulder.] 2 Madoka: Happy New Year, Darling! [Kyousuke staggers back against the wall, stunned.] Kyousuke FX: 3 [His pov. Smiling, she bows slightly, presenting a tray to us. On the tray is a bowl and pair of chopsticks, a bottle of sake and a cup. But your attention is probably riveted to her impressive cleavage.] Madoka: Will it be o-zouni or o-toso?* is rice cakes in a vegetable soup; is spiced sake.> --------------------------------------------------- p 270 (90) 1 [View shifts. From behind her we see that Kyousuke has collapsed to the floor, back against the wall. He stares up at her with jaw dropped.] narration: Wh-what kind of get-up is this, Ayukawa?! Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 2 narration: Oh. Aha! I see! I bet I'm still... Asleep!! 3 [Seated at the kotatsu, he holds out his cup. Madoka kneels at his side and pours sake.] Madoka: Here you go, kind Sir. Kyousuke: Oh! Oh! narration: Then... This is my first dream of the New Year!! 4 [With a somewhat goofy smile, he eats his o-zouni. Madoka kneels at his side, looking a bit sadly at him.] Kyousuke: Wowww... Although it's a dream, this is good fortune at the start of the New Year. Kyousuke FX: Madoka: Huh? This isn't a dream. 5 [Her pov as he turns and eyes her skeptically.] Kyousuke: Oh, come on...! You're saying that just to try and scare me. Ayukawa wouldn't be doing something like this for me. 6 Kyousuke: Don't be silly! You won't fool me with this sorta thing! See-ee? This doesn't hurt. [With a wide grin he brings the sake bottle down on his head. Madoka watches with surprise.] sake bottle on head FX: 7 [Tight shot of Kyousuke as he staggers under the blow.] 8 [He hits the floor and stares up goofily at the ceiling. Madoka kneels over him with surprise and concern.] narration: I-it hurts...!! Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 271 (91) 1 [@Madoka transforms herself back into Akane, who remains in a bunny outfit. She looks down at the unconscious Kyousuke with a look of chagrin.] Akane transformation FX: Akane: Carefree fellow... 2 [He awakes and lifts his head up sleepily.] Kyousuke: (Is it so sweet?) 3 [This and the next 5 panels are black-bordered, denoting a dream. Here, we have Kyousuke's pov of a receptive Madoka.] 4 [Kyousuke leans over and prepares to kiss his lady love. Both have their eyes closed.] 5 [A white panel.] kiss FX: 6 [Smiling, Hikaru sticks her head in through the door. Kyousuke looks up in surprise from his position above Madoka who's lying on the floor under him.] Hikaru: Sempai! Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 272 (92) 1 Kyousuke: [horrified] H-Hikaru-chan!! 2 [Enraged, Hikaru belts him one on the cheek.] Hikaru: What are you doing?!! Hikaru FX: 3 [End of dream. Kyousuke, lying on the floor, groggily comes to. @Hikaru in a bunny outfit is gently shaking him awake.] @Hikaru: Pull yourself--pull yourself together, Sempai!! Kyousuke: Ah! 4 [He slams himself back away from her and against a wall. @Hikaru smiles in merriment.] Kyousuke: H-Hikaru-chan!! Kyousuke FX: 5 [Akane transforms back to herself, dressed in blouse, jacket, skirt and socks. She stands and smiles down at him.] Akane: See?! It isn't a dream! Akane transformation FX: 6 [Kyousuke looks up befuddled and wide-eyed.] 7 [Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.] Kyousuke: [off] AKANE-E-E!! --------------------------------------------------- p 273 (93) 1 [He gets to his feet, fists clenched and angry.] Kyousuke: What the heck are you trying to pull?! Akane: I'd heard you were alone, so I came by. Anyhow, I figured you wouldn't have eaten anything decent, right? 2 [Smiling, she raises an index finger.] Akane: Well? It was a pretty considerate production for a lonely person like you, wasn't it? Kyousuke: [calmly] Aren't you just making fun of me? 3 [Akane gazes down, looking a bit miffed. Kyousuke looks over at her with a soft smile.] narration: Well... With Akane here, I've certainly avoided being alone on the New Year... 4 [He stops and reflects, touching two fingers to his lips.] Kyousuke: But... That felt real... What I saw when I fainted just now was no doubt a premonition dream!! 5 Kyousuke: (And on top of that, *in* that dream... I *KISSED* Ayukawa!!) Kyousuke heartbeat FX: Kyousuke FX: 6 [Looking back over her shoulder, Akane heads out the door.] Akane: Then, now I'll... Kyousuke: Ehh?! You're going already? --------------------------------------------------- p 274 (94) 1 [Smiling, she takes him by the arm.] Akane: That was a joke. C'mon, let's go! Kyousuke: Huh?! Where to? 2 Akane: A New Year's party at Hikaru-chan's place!! I heard Madoka-chan will also be there! Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 3 [Exterior view of some houses, including the Hiyama residence.] 4 [His pov. Hikaru kneels in the foreground; Madoka kneels in the background near the kotatsu. Both turn to smile at him.] Hikaru: Sempai, welcome!! 5 [He stops and stares at the vision before him. Akane smiles and chats with Hikaru and Madoka.] narration: Oh my God... It seems that--only here--spring has already arrived... Akane: Happy New Year, Madoka-cha-a-an! --------------------------------------------------- p 275 (95) 1 [Kyousuke continues to stand and watch in silence. Akane playfully takes Madoka's hand. Madoka smiles nervously.] Kyousuke FX: 2 [His pov. Madoka notices he's staring at her.] 3 Akane: Hey-y-y! Sit down, Kyousuke! Kyousuke: 4 [Seated now, he has his cup filled by Hikaru.] Hikaru: [slurring] Here y'go, kind Sir. Kyousuke: Ah, thank you. narration: Hikaru-chan's drunk... 5 [Hikaru suddenly turns to Madoka, who looks up with surprise.] Hikaru: By the way, Madoka-san!! Madoka: Yes? 6 [Madoka's pov. Hikaru gives her a knowing smile.] Hikaru: Madoka-san, what do you think of Sempa-a-ai? 7 [Split panel. On top, Kyousuke snorts out the sake he's drinking. Below is Hikaru's pov of Madoka, who looks back without expression, but with a slight blush.] --------------------------------------------------- p 276 (96) 1 [With a smile, Hikaru clings to Kyousuke's arm. Kyousuke flinches slightly away.] Hikaru: Isn't Sempai wonderful! Akane: Hikaru-chan's pretty drunk, isn't she. 2 [With face flushed and beaming, she lifts up an index finger.] Hikaru: All right. Today is New Year's, so I'll loan Sempai especially to you, Madoka-san! 3 [Madoka facial portrait--a gentle smile.] 4 [Kyousuke facial portrait--wide-eyed surprise.] 5 Madoka: [getting up, eyes closed] Thank you, Hikaru. Madoka stand up FX: [Kyousuke staggers back, face in shock.] Kyousuke FX: 6 [Pausing at the door, Madoka looks back at him over her shoulder. Kyousuke pivots his head from one girl to the other. Hikaru beams encouragement.] Madoka: C'mon. Let's go, Kasuga-kun. Hikaru: So long. Do your best, 'kay! --------------------------------------------------- p 277 (97) 1 [He visualizes his dream--his lips scant millimeters away from Madoka's.] narration: S-so it's this a-after all... 2 [Smiling merrily, Madoka hands him a mixing bowl.] Madoka: Here. Hold this. Kyousuke: Eh? 3 [Holding vegetables against her chest, she talks to herself. Kyousuke watches her.] Madoka: A carrot, onion... Kyousuke: O-ohh... It's this sorta thing, hm... 4 [Wearing an unintentionally sultry look, she leans her face towards his. He flinches, eyes wide.] Madoka: Huh? What do you mean, "this sorta thing?" narration: Even Ayukawa's... Drunk! Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 5 Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: (Sheesh... Maybe, just maybe... Like this...) 6 [Madoka brings a tiny bowl to her lips and licks the rim.] Madoka FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 278 (98) 1 [View pulls back. She stands at the kitchen counter, tasting something in a pot. He stands about 2 meters away and watches her.] Madoka: Maybe... A bit sweet. 2 [Closeup of Madoka, her eyes closed, tiny bowl raised near her lips.] 3 [Kyousuke blushes and involuntarily extends out his tongue.] Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: Looks sweet... 4 [She looks at him with a soft smile.] Madoka: Would you like a taste? Kyousuke heartbeat FX: Kyousuke: [embarrassed] Eh? N-no. Don't be absurd! Ha ha ha. 5 [Isolated shot of dishes stacked on a high shelf behind sliding glass panels.] Madoka: [off] Oh yeah, that's right. Could you get the plates from the shelf up there? Kyousuke: [off] S-sure. 6 [He extends his arms up. Madoka is busy chopping vegetables.] Kyousuke: Urg... Can't reach... --------------------------------------------------- p 279 (99) 1 [He crackles with the Power.] Kyousuke: (All right... Now's the time to use the Power...) 2 [Madoka's skirt blows up high, revealing her panties.] Madoka: KYAA! Madoka skirt FX: 3 [Kyousuke looks back over his shoulder at her, face flushed and nervous.] narration: H-huh!?! Kyousuke FX: 4 [Unlike the premonition dream, it is an angry Madoka who belts him on the cheek.] Madoka: What are you doing?!! Madoka FX: narration: N-no. I didn't mean to do that... --------------------------------------------------- p 280 (100) 1 [Hand to injured cheek, he stares up at the shelf of plates.] narration: Th-the Power... Kyousuke FX: 2 [Once again, he crackles with the Power.] Kyousuke: (Strange. Isn't my control working?!) 3 [The plates start shaking against the closed glass panel.] plates FX: 4 [The glass panel shatters and plates come flying out at them.] flying plates FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 281 (101) 1 [He tackles Madoka to the floor. The plates sail over their heads and shatter against the wall.] shattered plates FX: Kyousuke: LOOK OUT!! Kyousuke/Madoka FX: 2 [Madoka ends up on her back. His chin comes to rest on her right breast.] Kyousuke: [eyes wide] Ah! 3 [He looks up at the devastation.] Madoka: Wh-what's... This? narration: Ahh, I was surprised. It looks like I can't control my Power at all... Madoka: W-was it an earthquake or something? --------------------------------------------------- p 282 (102) 1 [Pov looking up at him. His face flushes and he stares down at her.] 2 [She looks up at him with eyes grown wide.] 3 [Her face grows a soft and a little inviting.] 4 Kyousuke: Is it so... Sweet? 5 [Lying on top of her, he gazes into her eyes.] Madoka: Huh?! --------------------------------------------------- p 283 (103) 1 [Overhead view looking down on the two. Madoka lies on her back, surrounded by shattered dishes. Kyousuke is perched over her.] narration: J-just as in that premonition dream... 2 [They stare into each other's eyes. His lips get closer to their long-cherished goal.] narration: Finally, with Ayukawa... 3 [They close their eyes just before their lips are about to meet.] --------------------------------------------------- p 284 (104) 1 [With a smile, Hikaru sticks her head in the kitchen. Kyousuke does a rapid roll to the side as Madoka sits up abruptly, her back to Hikaru. Both blush deeply.] Hikaru: SEMPAI!! Madoka FX: Kyousuke FX: 2 [Hikaru enters the kitchen, smiling at Madoka. Madoka nervously smiles back. Kyousuke remains lying on his back on the floor. I think his heart stopped.] Hikaru: Madoka-saaan... Finished cooking?! Kyousuke: 3 [Hikaru slips on a broken plate...] Hikaru: Ah! Hikaru FX: 4 [...and pitches forward. Kyousuke is on his side, on the spot where she's about to hit.] Hikaru: 5 [He turns to look back at Hikaru, just as she's about to land on him.] 6 [Her forehead comes to rest against his lips. Both pairs of eyes go wide with surprise.] Kyousuke/Hikaru FX: narration: Th-this is... That premonition dream... It seems that Ayukawa and Hikaru-chan were reversed! --------------------------------------------------- p 285 (105) 1 [Hikaru sits up and stares in wonder up at the ceiling. She touches a hand to her forehead.] Hikaru: Oh my! 2 [Akane, face flushed, walks into the kitchen. Hikaru turns and smiles at her in embarrassment. Kyousuke's busy contemplating events.] Akane: Ohh... You show-offs! Akane FX: narration: Come to think of it, there was something strange about the Power... Hikaru: Oh no... Ha ha ha. Kyousuke: (..........) 3 [Exterior shot of the Hiyama residence. A pair of kites fly overhead.] Hikaru: [off] Kyaaaa! Sempai made the first kiss of the New Year!! narration: 1986... At the beginning of the New Year, I let an enormous fish get away. --Kyousuke 3 (inset 1) [In the kitchen with Madoka again, Kyousuke steals and samples some food off a plate. Blushing, he eyes her backside. Madoka is busy at the counter, chopping food.] Kyousuke: D-delicious! Sure enough, Ayukawa, your cooking is awesome... Kyousuke FX: Madoka: .......... Madoka FX: 3 (inset 2) [Turning, kitchen knife raised high, Madoka addresses him as though he was a child. He flinches away.] Madoka: We... Madoka: ...don't sneak bites when no one's looking now, do we! ---------------------------------------------------