Kimagure Orange Road "Don't Hypnotize Me!" Volume 11, Story 4 WB Volume 6, Story 13 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation & compilation by : Craig H. Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Thomas Wyatt Dan Root Scott Henry Last revision : 08-19-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 247 (67) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 247 (67)--TITLE PAGE [Half-portrait of Madoka. She faces us, lying on her side in bed, dressed in a slip with one strap down off her shoulder.] MAIN TITLE (at top) Don't Hypnotize Me! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) The Mysterious Fountain of Your Breast, That I, with Heart-Rending Pain, Secretly Want to Gaze at... --------------------------------------------------- p 248 (68) 1 [Overhead view looking down on the Kasuga household. Kurumi happily skips over to Manami, who's dutifully washing dishes. Takashi is on the phone.] narration: New Year's Eve, 1985... Kurumi: Hey, hey, Manami-chan. Do you have a minute? Manami: Grrrr! I'm busy now. Later, later. 2 Kurumi: Then, otousan. Takashi: Later, later. 3 [Kurumi looks over at her brother, who looks up from a book he's reading.] Kurumi: Then... All that's left is... 4 [She smiles and raises a hand.] Kurumi: Yo! Idle person. Kyousuke: [walking away] Well, well... Ahh, busy, busy. 5 Kurumi: I'm, like, really interested in hypnotism now. Oniichan, you look like you're rather easy to put under, huh?! Kyousuke: [wincing] No way your hypnotism stuff would work... 6 [With a smile, Kurumi taps her left forefinger against the center of Kyousuke's forehead. He freezes, eyes gone wide.] forehead FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 249 (69) 1 [Kurumi's expression grows dark. With forefinger raised, she crackles with the Power.] Kurumi: I touched the secret spot called "Daimin" that causes one to easily be hypnotized... Now, you're a dog!! 2 [Kyousuke facial portrait--wide-eyed blank look.] 3 [He drops to the ground and gazes up at Kurumi.] Kyousuke: Woo... Woof! Kurumi: Hooray-y-y!! [Surprised, Manami turns to look.] 4 Kurumi: Next, Matsumoto Noriko!! [Under falling streamers and confetti, Kyousuke sings into his fist.] Kyousuke: [singing] Frie-e-ends... 5 Kurumi: An idiot! [He does a striking imitation of a congenital idiot.] Kyousuke: .......... 6 Kurumi: All right, that's it. Kurumi handclap FX: Kyousuke: Ah?! 7 Kurumi: Pretty much like this! Kyousuke: [staring at his hands] C-can't be...?! 8 [Kurumi stares in worry into the face of a wincing Kyousuke.] Kurumi: Huh? Oh, no! The idiot part wasn't erased. Kyousuke: Oh shuddup!! --------------------------------------------------- p 250 (70) 1 Kyousuke: Hmm... So I really was hypnotized... And on top of that, by the likes of her. Kurumi: Manami: We have the Power, so maybe that's why it's so easy to hypnotize someone. 2 Kyousuke: I'll try it, too. Turn into a cat!! [Kyousuke touches Kurumi on her forehead.] forehead FX: 3 Kurumi: [staring at the ceiling] .......... Manami: Looks like it didn't work. Kyousuke: Huh? 4 [He pokes her in the forehead again and again. Kurumi shows amusement.] Kyousuke: Turn into a koala! Into Kouchi Rie! fingertip FX: Kurumi FX: Kurumi: No way. No way. 5 Kurumi: [smiling] Well, maybe this sort of highbrow trick is a little too much for oniichan, hmm? Manami: Oniichan, phone call from Hikaru-san. 6 [While Kyousuke talks on the phone, the other three Kasugas talk in the background. Manami and Kurumi prance with joy.] Kyousuke: [brightly] Eh?! To Hatsumoude*?! Yeah, I see. I'll go!! Coming to meet me here? Sure. Then, I'll be waiting. <*Commentary: is the first visit to a shrine in the New Year.> Takashi: Oh yeah. That's right. I got a phone call from ojiichan a little while ago. How's this sound? Shall we go there now? Manami and Kurumi: HOORAY-Y-Y!! --------------------------------------------------- p 251 (71) 1 Kyousuke: Eh? To ojiichan's place?! Kurumi: Yippee! A trip, a trip! 2 [Kyousuke turns to look at the telephone.] narration: I can't very well turn down Hikaru's special invitation... But, if I don't, then I'll be alone again on New Year's Day...* 3 [He crosses his arms, closes his eyes and drops his head. His sisters stop to watch him. Kurumi rolls her eyes.] Kyousuke: Hmm... Which should I choose...? Kyousuke FX: Manami and Kurumi FX: 4 [Kurumi leans over and touches his "Daimin" spot again.] Kurumi: Now you're asleep. fingertip FX: 5 [Kyousuke lies on his back on the living room floor, sound asleep. From behind a closed door, we hear voices.] Kyousuke: Takashi: [off] Let's go. If we wait for him to decide, the New Year will arrive. Manami: [off] That's true. door FX: 6 [Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment complex.] 7 [Kyousuke sits up in the darkened living room.] doorbell FX: <...dong> Kyousuke: Oh! note at bottom of page: *You need to read "A Swinging Lullaby" in Volume 3! --------------------------------------------------- p 252 (72) 1 note: When you've decided, come. We're going on ahead. 2 [He pads over to the front door.] Kyousuke: (Left me behind, huh... Those cold-hearted buggers...) doorbell FX: 3 [A beautiful girl in miniskirt, sweater and open jacket stands at the door.] Madoka: Good evening. 4 narration: AYUKAWA! 5 [Kyousuke's face takes on a slightly silly grin.] 6 [He takes her hand and drags her in, startling her.] Kyousuke: [smiling] Well, come in, come in! Wasn't it cold!! narration: I'm glad I didn't go along with them, after all!! --------------------------------------------------- p 253 (73) 1 [Madoka tries to stifle a giggle with her hand.] Madoka: TEE! 2 Madoka: Oh, I'm sorry. It's no laughing matter! 3 Madoka: You were left behind again, hmm... [He forces a smile.] narration: But, that's okay. Tomorrow I'll be doing Hatsumoude with Hikaru-chan and... Ayukawa's come over and... 4 [View pans back to show the two seated at the kotatsu, and watching TV. An idol singer does her thing. Must be the annual "Red and White Songfest."] narration: Still, why did Ayukawa come by? Maybe... 5 narration: Well, whatever it is... It's just the two of us on New Year's Eve... 6 [His pov of Madoka, her beautiful face lit warmly by the glow from the TV.] narration: Unlike always, I somehow feel tense... --------------------------------------------------- p 254 (74) 1 [It's later, and they're still watching TV.] TV: This year's 10 Biggest News... 2 narration: Isn't there anything to talk about? I shouldn't keep silent... 3 Kyousuke: [face flushed, wide-eyed] S-say! Do you believe in hypnosis? 4 Madoka: What? Hypnosis? Kyousuke: Right... When you're hypnotized, anything that's said is obeyed. 5 Madoka: For example... In what way? 6 Kyousuke: Let's see, let's see. 7 [His eye comes to rest on the TV screen...] TV screen: Serial Drama: LOVE SLAVE --------------------------------------------------- p 255 (75) 1 [He touches her forehead. Sparks seem to fly in the background.] Kyousuke: You're now my slave. 2 [Madoka's eyes grow large and a bit glassy.] 3 [He falls back in embarrassment and mirth.] Kyousuke: I wish-h-h! Ha ha ha ha! narration: I-I wonder if that was going a bit too far?! 4 narration: But... Maybe it worked...?! Kyousuke: You can't be hypnotized like this, can you. Ha ha ha! [Madoka remains seated on the floor, merely watching him.] --------------------------------------------------- p 256 (76) 1 [She kneels, her heels under her, and bows to him.] Madoka: Yes... Anything you command... Master. [Kyousuke's eyes bug out...] 2 [...and he stares at his forefinger.] Kyousuke: Eh? Eh? 3 Kyousuke: [embarrassed] Ohh, you surprised me again. Will you quit joking around, Ayukawa! 4 [Madoka facial portrait--a smoldering gaze.] Madoka: Please call me, "Madoka"... 5 [Kyousuke portrait--he throws up his hands and flinches back.] --------------------------------------------------- p 257 (77) 1 [Madoka portrait.] narration: It... It really worked?! 2 [She stands demurely and bows her head. He ponders the ceiling and then turns to stare at her.] Kyousuke: B-but I've... Never kept a slave like that... What'll I do? I'd better bring her back. Madoka: If there is no use for me... 3 Madoka: I'm leaving. [She turns to leave and he chases after her.] Kyousuke: Oh, wait! You came all the way over here... And it's so cold outside! Madoka brisk walk FX: 4 Kyousuke: Oh, that's right. So, Ayukawa--I mean, Madoka! [She turns and smiles.] Madoka: Yes? 5 Kyousuke: Make me dinner. Oh yeah, and also heat up the bath for me!! I mean, "please"... Sorry. narration: If this isn't real, things'll get scary later... 6 Madoka: [brightly] YES! 7 [He sits at the kotatsu and eats noodles from a bowl. Madoka arrives with a tray of tea.] Kyousuke FX: narration: Gee... This is heaven. Heaven! My Power isn't something to be cast aside... --------------------------------------------------- p 258 (78) 1 [He stares at her as she pours.] narration: She's hypnotized. That means... tea kettle FX: 2 [Tight shot of his hand as he reaches out to her.] narration: For example... 3 [He pulls the startled Madoka down into his lap.] Kyousuke FX: Madoka: Ah! 4 [He leans against her back and embraces a shoulder.] narration: Even if I do something like this... Kyousuke/Madoka heartbeat FX: 5 [His hand starts to drift down from her shoulder to her...] narration: When I... Kyousuke hand FX: 6 narration: ...do something like this, I'll get slapped... [Back to reality! He tosses his cup of tea in the air.] Kyousuke: Yee-ow-ow-ow... --------------------------------------------------- p 259 (79) 1 [She leans in close. He freezes and stares into her eyes.] Madoka: Hop into... The bath. Kyousuke: Ye... Yes... 2 [Tight shot of his shirt as it lands on a clothes tray.] clothes FX: 3 [Kyousuke looks up as he begins to remove his pants. Madoka has entered the bathroom and begins to remove her sweater.] Kyousuke: Ah! 4 [Half-portrait of Madoka as she lifts up her sweater, baring her midriff.] 5 [Kyousuke's face flushes and he stares wide-eyed.] Kyousuke FX: 6 [With an embarrassed smile he hustles a reluctant Madoka down the hall, away from the bathroom.] Madoka: I thought I'd wash your back... Kyousuke: I... I can do that myself. Ha ha ha! Oh, if you like, you can bathe afterwards! --------------------------------------------------- p 260 (80) 1 [He sits in the tub.] narration: Ohhhh... She surprised me. But... I also feel like bathing with her... Kyousuke heartbeat FX: Kyousuke FX: 2 [He soaks up to his neck, staring up at the ceiling in thought.] narration: If it's hypnotism of this sort, it'd be great even if it wasn't undone for a while. If only this could last through New Year's... Kyousuke: (Maybe it won't, after all...) 3 Kyousuke: Maybe I'll go to bed now. narration: When I took a bath, I got sleepy... 4 [He stands in his darkened bedroom, wrapped only in a towel. Madoka, wearing just a towel herself, comes up close behind him.] Madoka: Yes. Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 5 [His pov of her. That towel doesn't appear to be on too tight.] Madoka: With me... If you'd like, Master... --------------------------------------------------- p 261 (81) 1 [His face flushes and goes into overload.] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 2 [Tight shot of his hand on his door. He opens it...] door FX: 3 [...exits, and shuts it behind him. He leans back against the door, clutching a shirt to his bare chest.] TV: [off] The old year's making way for the new and it'll soon be 1986. narration: I-is she talking about going to bed...?! door FX: 4 [Inside, Madoka tosses her hair back.] Madoka hair FX: 5 [He remains leaning back against the closed door.] narration: I'm... Always indecisive and just hesitating, but... TV countdown FX: [off] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 6 [Blushing and staring up at the ceiling, he tosses the shirt to the floor.] narration: On second thought, under these circumstances just now, I don't really need to... shirt FX: TV countdown FX: [off] 7 [He reaches for the doorknob to his bedroom door.] narration: Hesitate!! TV countdown FX: [off] --------------------------------------------------- p 262 (82) 1 TV: [off] Happy New Year, 1986... doorbell FX: [off] [Kyousuke pauses and turns to look off-panel.] 2 [A voice calls out from behind the closed front door.] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: Hikaru: [off] Sempa-a-ai! 3 [Kyousuke's face becomes a mask of pure horror.] narration: H-Hikaru-chan?! 4 [He hops about trying to get his pants on.] narration: Wh-why right now...?! I thought she'd be coming on New Year's morn. Hikaru: [off] Can I come in? Kyousuke: Huh? Ahh... W-well... Kyousuke FX: 5 Kyousuke: (O-oh no!! Ayukawa's in my room...) 6 [Shot of a lovely pair of bare legs. A towel has come to rest on the floor at her feet.] Madoka towel FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 263 (83) 1 [Hikaru bursts through the front door, smiling.] Hikaru: Happy New Year!! door FX: 2 [He flinches back, terrified.] Kyousuke: Ai-i-ee-ee-ee!! narration: Jeez... This is terrible!! 3 [He pauses, wide-eyed, as a hand taps him on the shoulder.] Madoka: Well, shall we go? Madoka hand-on-shoulder FX: 4 [He turns to find Madoka standing fully dressed behind him. She smiles.] 5 [View pans back.] Madoka: To Hatsumoude! --------------------------------------------------- p 264 (84) 1 Madoka: [smiling] Happy New Year, Hikaru. Hikaru: [gaily] Happy New Year, Madoka-san. 2 [Kyousuke--a portrait in confusion.] 3 Madoka: Kasuga-kun, aren't your pants on backwards? [Kyousuke twists around to look at his rear. Yup, there's the zipper.] Kyousuke: Ah! Oh no! 4 [Isolated night shot of the gate to a temple.] Hikaru: [off] What kinda strange face are you making? Kyousuke: [off] N-nothing. Can't be... Hatsumoude at night... 5 [Madoka walks on a bit ahead, her back to the other two.] Hikaru: [merrily] Oh, come on... Really, Sempai! You heard it from Madoka-san! I forgot to tell you it was tonight, so I had Madoka-san go over to your place. Kyousuke: [stunned] EH!?! --------------------------------------------------- p 265 (85) 1 [Madoka turns to look back at him.] narration: Although knowing that Hikaru-chan would be coming... Then that means, that hypnosis a little while ago was... Kyousuke: [sweaty, nervous] Eh?! S-so... 2 narration: That was all... [His pov of Madoka. Smiling, she pulls down an eyelid and sticks out her tongue.] narration: An act... 3 [Madoka breaks out in a merry smile. Overlaid on this is Kyousuke's speech bubble, with his anguished face adorning it.] Kyousuke: H-hey-y-y!! narration: Sure enough, she's an extraordinary... Angel! ---------------------------------------------------