Kimagure Orange Road "Parallel Night!" Volume 10, Story 2 WB Volume 6, Story 2 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation & compilation by : Craig H. Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Thomas Wyatt Jerry Lee Last revision : 08-16-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 27 (27) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 27 (27)--TITLE PAGE [Parallel-Madoka stands with back towards us, facing a motorcycle. She is decked in a tight 2-color jumpsuit and boots, a helmet held in her left arm. She looks back at us over her left shoulder.] MAIN TITLE (at top) Parallel Night! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) Wanting to Turn into a Sparkling Wind--A Silver Machine and Helmet. --------------------------------------------------- p 28 (28) 1 [Portrait of the gang lieutenant--a pretty and slender blonde. She points a finger back. This is Madoka's pov.] gang lieutenant: You... You're the one called Ayukawa Madoka--the former leader of Kouryou's girl gang? 2 [The gang lieutenant's pov. Madoka stares back. Kyousuke looks on wide-eyed.] 3 [View pans way back. The motorcycle gang confronts the two, who stand just outside of ABCB.] motorcycles FX: 4 Madoka: If you don't go soon you're gonna get hurt. Kyousuke: S-sure. But... 5 [His pov of the beefy punk types riding the motorcycles.] narration: If I don't hurry and go to the amusement park, and ride on the roller coaster, I won't be getting back to my world! But... What the heck do these guys want with Ayukawa?! --------------------------------------------------- p 29 (29) 1 Madoka: [sternly] Go now!! Kyousuke: Y-yes! [He starts to run off.] 2 gang lieutenant: GO!! [Several guys rush in on Madoka all at once.] 3 [One takes a corner of the Ace of Diamonds in his forehead.] punk 1: Gah! 4 [She holds the Ace of Spades up high, between fore- and middle-fingers. The other punks circle her, but do not approach.] Madoka: If you come any closer... You're gonna get hurt! 5 gang lieutenant: [off] Hold it right there! --------------------------------------------------- p 30 (30) 1 [The gang lieutenant holds a large knife at the throat of Kyousuke.] Kyousuke: Ah... Ayukawa... 2 [Madoka portrait.] 3 Madoka: He has nothing to do with this! Let him go! gang lieutenant: Then come with us!! 4 Madoka: [look of resignation] I understand... 5 [The gang lieutenant extends her knife at Madoka's throat.] gang lieutenant: The game... Is over! 6 [Wrists tied behind her, Madoka is set on the back of a motorcycle. She'll ride side-saddle.] gang lieutenant: The gang leader wants to have a talk with you. Come with us. motorcycles FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 31 (31) 1 [The gang motors off and Kyousuke runs after Madoka.] gang lieutenant: Let's roll! Kyousuke: Ayukawa!! 2 Madoka: [tiny smile] Don't worry... You'd better hurry and go, too. The cops are chasing you, aren't they. 3 [Madoka looks back wistfully.] 4 [Kyousuke stares after her, wide-eyed and worried.] 5 motorcycles FX: narration: Ayukawa... 6 [Shot of the entrance to the amusement park. Parked outside is a motor scooter.] Hikaru: [off] They're late, aren't they. sign: Toshima En --------------------------------------------------- p 32 (32) 1 [Hikaru sits on a bench, still dressed in her white jumpsuit. The twins, in school uniforms, stand nearby. Manami is armed with a stick.] Hikaru: How strange... Hey, that challenge really was sent out, right? Kurumi: Were they so scared of us that they turned tail and ran? trashcan sign: Trash Container 2 [Hikaru crosses her arms, closes her eyes and grins at the ground. Behind her, Kyousuke approaches, but is looking off to the side.] Hikaru: I see. Those wimps. 3 Hikaru and Kurumi: Ah! You're...?! Kyousuke: AH! 4 Hikaru: [angrily pointing] You jerk! You're the pervert from earlier today! Kyousuke: Y-you're wrong! 5 Kyousuke: Th-that's right. Ayukawa is...! Hikaru: Huh?! What about Madoka-san?! 6 [A view of some of the rides.] Hikaru: [off] Wha-a-at!?! Madoka-san was taken off by the gang leader's group?! sign: [partial view] Empty Cans... --------------------------------------------------- p 33 (33) 1 Kyousuke: [to Hikaru] The rest is up to you. I'm putting her fate in your hands. narration: Anyway, I have to get to the roller coaster and return to my own world. 2 [Turning, Kyousuke looks off-panel and stops short.] 3 [View shifts to show what he sees. The indoor roller coaster building is already partially dismantled.] Kyousuke: Ahhhh!!! Th-the roller coaster is...?! scaffold signs: Safety First Hatta Construction building sign: Coaster 4 [He drops to his hands and knees in horror.] narration: Wh-what's this? W-with this... 5 Kyousuke: [flash thought] (Now... I can't return to my home world!!) 6 [Outside a school building, several motorcycle punks sit and wait.] motorcycles FX: helmet: [right] Fool ---> I love you helmet: [left] --------------------------------------------------- p 34 (34) 1 [The gang leader makes her entrance. Another pretty and slender girl wearing reflective goggles, leather pants and vest over a T-shirt. She has metal- studded leather bands on her forearms, and casually raises her helmet to her adoring gang. She's accompanied by bodyguards.] 2 [Their view as they open a door. Madoka sits on the floor in her school uniform, arms tied behind her back. She wears a look of defiance.] door FX: [off] --------------------------------------------------- p 35 (35) 1 gang leader: So you're the one... The reputed former chief gang leader, Ayukawa Madoka? 2 [Madoka facial portrait--if looks could kill...] 3 [View shifts. Madoka glares up at the gang leader and her two hefty male bodyguards.] 4 gang leader: We've almost taken over complete control of the school... But... There are still some stupid ones--though it's just a few--who are not submitting to us. 5 [She lifts up Madoka's chin and leans down to look into her eyes. Madoka continues to glare.] gang leader: I hear they're waiting for you to stand up against us... So then... How about this? Why not cooperate with me? --------------------------------------------------- p 36 (36) 1 gang leader: If only you were working for me, then no one would oppose me. Madoka: I refuse!! 2 [Madoka's pov. The two bodyguards look back with surprise. The gang leader's face--behind those reflective goggles--is unreadable.] 3 gang leader: I see... Then, it can't be helped. 4 [She raises a hand. One of her bodyguards hands her a bullwhip.] gang leader: No. But before long you'll come around to say "yes"... If you won't listen to what I have to say... 5 bullwhip FX: gang leader: [off] ...then I'll make you listen!! 6 gang leader: Through your body. --------------------------------------------------- p 37 (37) 1 [Overhead view looking down on the four at the park.] Hikaru: Wh-what'll we do? To think Madoka-san was caught... Manami: I bet they're trying to win her over to their side. 2 Kyousuke: [twiddling thumbs] I-I'm sorry. I'm responsible! 3 [Hikaru grabs him by the shirt and--fangs bared--yells in his face.] Hikaru: THAT'S RIGHT! IT'S YOUR FAULT!! 4 Hikaru: It's them we're talking about. If this continues, I don't know what they might do to Madoka-san! Kyousuke: EHHH?!! 5 [Shot of a roller coaster ride.] Hikaru: [off] Because they're a cruel bunch who'll stop at nothing to reach their goals. If you don't listen to what they say, then they'll be sure to torture you until you do. 6 Kyousuke: [aghast] T-TORTURE?! Hikaru: [glaring] Sure. That's the way they do things... 7 [Hikaru blushes, hands to cheeks.] Hikaru: Strike you with a whip... And do perverted things... --------------------------------------------------- p 38 (38) 1 [Kyousuke sweats, blushes and looks up in worry at the sky.] Kyousuke: W-with a whip. Perverted things...?! 2 [He visualizes a nude Madoka flinching in anguish from the blows of a whip.] bullwhip FX: Madoka: AAAAAH! 3 Hikaru: [blushing furiously] What are you making me say?!! [She grants him Parallel Slap #5. Though this one's more of a straight-arm punch. Same cheek, though. Kyousuke reels.] 4 [He holds a hand to his injured cheek.] Kyousuke: Th-that's awful!! narration: It all started because of me...! 5 [He raises an arm and starts running off. He looks back at the others with a decisive look.] Kyousuke: We have to go rescue her at once! Hikaru: [smiling] Oh! So you do have a good side. 6 [Rockets and shooting stars adorn this panel.] FX: All: KYAAAAAA! 7 [A shot of an open pit in the ground. It had once been covered by a small tarp anchored by wood and bricks. Voices emanate from the hole.] Kyousuke: [off] Ow-ow-ouch. Kurumi: [off] H-hey-y-y. What's this?! tarp: Construction 8 [Kyousuke lies crushed under the combined mass of Kurumi, Manami and a gleefully smiling Hikaru.] Hikaru: During the day, I set this up, thinking I'd have those guys fall in. Kurumi: Hikaru-san, you bozo!! --------------------------------------------------- p 39 (39) 1 [Madoka, wrists tied in front of her with her arms wrapped around a pole, has her back flogged.] bullwhip FX: 2 gang leader: [sweating] How was that...? Do you feel like listening? 3 [Madoka turns her head to spit in the gang leader's face. It lands smack in the middle of the reflective goggles.] Madoka FX: gang leader: Oo! 4 gang leader: Sh-shit! H-hey! Take her away! 5 [The gang leader smiles back over her shoulder at her 2 bodyguards.] gang leader: Since it's come to this... You guys may do your best to treat her with love! musclehead 1 FX: musclehead 2: Hey! --------------------------------------------------- p 40 (40) 1 [Madoka portrait--she hugs the pole in wide-eyed fear.] 2 [View of a door in a graffiti-riddled school hallway.] sign: Health Room overlaid on sign: Hotel 3 [Madoka, tossed onto the bed with wrists tied behind her, lies still as the two guys take off their jackets.] musclehead 1: Well, let's get friendly! Till morning, huh. musclehead 2: 4 musclehead 1: [reaching out to her] I wonder if it's okay... To have a beautiful girl like this... 5 Madoka: Pl... --------------------------------------------------- p 41 (41) 1 [View of the sign outside the health room.] Madoka: [off] PLEASE STOP! 2 [Tight shot of a wheel of a motor scooter in motion.] scooter FX: 3 [Kyousuke opens his eyes wide in surprise. View has panned back to show him riding double behind Hikaru, arms around her waist.] Kyousuke: (Ayukawa!!) 4 [He fixes a stare to the side.] narration: Just now, for an instant, it seemed like I heard Ayukawa scream. Kyousuke: (Even though I don't have any telepathic ability...) 5 Kyousuke: (D-did something happen to her?!) (Damn! I can't teleport in front of everyone...) 6 [View shifts to show the twins riding double on a second scooter.] Kyousuke: [to Hikaru] Hurry! Ayukawa's in danger! Hikaru: Huh?! --------------------------------------------------- p 42 (42) 1 [Kyousuke throws his head back and lets out a mighty roar. Hikaru winces. Manami looks on in surprise.] Kyousuke: AYUKAWA!! 2 [Madoka stops short, eyes wide.] 3 [As musclehead 1 approaches, she looks off to one side.] narration: Wh-what was that voice just now? That voice was... 4 [She visualizes Kyousuke.] Madoka: [off] (Him?!) 5 [Musclehead 1 grasps her by her upper arms. She is still distracted by her thoughts...] narration: How could that be? Even though I only just met him a little while ago... It feels as though he's definitely coming here... --------------------------------------------------- p 43 (43) 1 [Hikaru nearly runs over a startled Komatsu.] Komatsu: [diving out of the way] WAH! Hikaru: [without a glance] Sorry! FX: 2 [Komatsu sits on the pavement and raises a fist in the air.] Komatsu: Hey hey! What are you kids doing this late at night?!! scooter FX: 3 [Komatsu stares in surprise.] 4 [Kyousuke stares back over his shoulder.] 5 Komatsu: Y-you're...!! 6 Kyousuke: ARG! 7 [Komatsu hops onto a bicycle.] Komatsu: Y-you jerk, h-hold it!! --------------------------------------------------- p 44 (44) 1 [The two scooters are followed closely by Komatsu and Hatta doubled up on the bicycle.] Hikaru: Oh no! It's the cops!! Komatsu: Finally found ya, kid!! It's illegal to ride double!! 2 [Hikaru glares back at Kyousuke over her shoulder.] Hikaru: What did you do?! Kyousuke: [wincing] Th-they saw a little of my Power. 3 Hikaru: Power?! What's that? "Power"? narration: O-oh well, it doesn't matter... This is only a parallel world... 4 [Tight shot looking down at the scooter's front wheels.] narration: I have to use it to rescue Ayukawa... I'm going to be seen anyway! Kyousuke: [off] To tell you the truth, I... 5 Kyousuke: [off] Have ESPer powers! 6 Kyousuke: [hand over his mouth] (I finally... Said it!!) --------------------------------------------------- p 45 (45) 1 Hikaru: [glaring back over her shoulder] You're slightly strange after all, aren't you. Kyousuke: [wincing] I-it's the truth, I'm telling you!! Komatsu: Stop-p-p! 2 [Musclehead 1 begins removing Madoka's blouse.] Madoka: B-bastard!! 3 [Exterior shot of the school grounds. Around a burning 55-gallon drum sit many punk bikers.] musclehead 1: [off] God knows, even if you scream... This place is a fortress of hell that even cops aren't allowed to come near!! ---------------------------------------------------