Kimagure Orange Road "All Is Ruined!" Volume 9, Story 9 WB Volume 5, Story 16 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Daisuke Suzuki (under contract to Vancouver Animation) Additional translation & compilation by : Craig Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Jun Watatani Craig Nishida Thomas Wyatt Jerry Lee Last revision : 08-16-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 321 (173) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 321 (173)--TITLE PAGE [Hikaru half-portrait--in "Benchwarmers" sweatshirt and "Person's Team" cap. A shoulder-strap bag hangs from her right armpit and is elevated above her head (blown by the wind?). She smiles and winks at us, and holds down her cap to keep it from flying off.] MAIN TITLE (at top) All Is Ruined! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) I Want to Shine with Brilliance Forever-- Like a Small Bird Soaring Through the Blue Sky, Like a Cool Breeze Breathing in the Hills and Fields... --------------------------------------------------- p 322 (174) 1 [Exterior shot of the Hiyama residence.] sign: Hiyama 2 [Smiling, Hikaru presents a cake.] Hikaru: My folks aren't around today. 3 [Madoka and Kyousuke sit on the floor, both in school uniforms.] Kyousuke: [nervous smile] I-I hope it's okay. 4 [View pans back to show them seated at a low table, Kyousuke facing Madoka, with Hikaru sitting at the end. They are in Hikaru's bedroom. Kumagorou- kun sits and looks at us sleepily from his spot on the floor.] narration: Today, Hikaru-chan exercised her well-known skill and baked a cake, so... Hikaru: [to Kyousuke] Madoka-san is way better at making cakes... 5 narration: For some reason... Ayukawa and I are both here at Hikaru-chan's place. [With a smile, Hikaru presents the first piece to Madoka.] Hikaru: But you hardly ever bake for me, do you. --------------------------------------------------- p 323 (175) 1 [Hikaru looks dreamily up at the ceiling.] Hikaru: "I'll only bake homemade cakes for my future husband..." ...is what I suppose Madoka-san has truly decided in her heart... 2 Hikaru: [merrily] What on earth will your future husband be like, hm? [Madoka starts to blush.] 3 Hikaru: Oops. Oh no. Would you like tea or coffee? Oolong tea? Madoka: Coffee. [Kyousuke blushes even more deeply.] Kyousuke: Oolong tea. 4 Kyousuke: Let's see. Where's the sugar? 5 [He spots the sugar bowl in front of Madoka.] 6 [They nervously and politely address one another. Hikaru watches them without expression.] Madoka: ..... Here you go. Kyousuke: Ah... Thanks! --------------------------------------------------- p 324 (176) 1 [Kyousuke and Madoka take sips--both pointedly ignoring the other. Hikaru continues to quietly watch them both.] Hikaru contemplation FX: Kyousuke: 2 doorbell FX: Hikaru: Yes? 3 Hikaru: [getting up in irritation] I'm sure it's a newspaper solicitor. Grr! 4 [The two watch her leave, off-panel.] door FX: [off] 5 [Madoka looks at the sugar bowl as Kyousuke drinks.] Kyousuke FX: 6 Madoka: [merrily] How silly. Kyousuke: [perplexed] Eh? 7 Madoka: You don't usually put sugar in Oolong tea. Kyousuke: [surprised] Eh? Is that true?! --------------------------------------------------- p 325 (177) 1 Kyousuke: Kurumi is always putting in a lot at home... Madoka: 2 Madoka: [cheerily] Just like her, hmm... 3 [The two share a laugh.] 4 [He knocks the cake off his plate and onto his tie.] Kyousuke: Oh! cake FX: 5 Madoka: You klutz! 6 Madoka: [rising] Hey. Come over here! I'll wipe it off for you. Kyousuke: [rising] Th-thanks. 7 [He pitches forward, high through the air, over the table, and right at Madoka. She can only stare helplessly upward.] Kyousuke: M-my legs are numb...! --------------------------------------------------- p 326 (178) 1 [He lands on top of her; she falls on her back.] Kyousuke and Madoka FX: Kyousuke: AH! 2 [Trying to push him off her by shoving at his chin.] Madoka: [angrily] I-idiot! Hey! Kyousuke: S-sorr... 3 [Tight shot of the doorknob as it jiggles.] door FX: 4 [Kyousuke and Madoka look up wide-eyed from the floor. He's still perched over her.] 5 [Hikaru enters, smiling, her arms laden with several boxes of detergent.] Hikaru: I subscribed to another newspaper. Look how much soap I got! detergent box 1: dirt--FALL detergent box 2: Mighty ! --------------------------------------------------- p 327 (179) 1 [Kyousuke propels himself backwards, up off of Madoka, who sits up, turns aside, and crosses her arms over her chest.] Kyousuke FX: 2 [View pans back. Hikaru stands at the door in puzzlement. Kyousuke is on the far side of the room, reading a paper on the edge of a bed. Madoka sips from a cup at the table. Hmm... He couldn't have *teleported* any faster than this!] Hikaru: Hm?! 3 [Madoka sips from a cup. If you're really sharp, you *might* notice it's not the same cup she was drinking from 2 pages before.] Madoka FX: 4 [Kyousuke, sweating nervously, reads out some apparent gibberish from the paper. He's holding it upside-down, so it comes out backwards.] Kyousuke: ydorB no dednal kcen eht ot kcik s'ikonI tnemom taht... advertisement: [upside-down, on right] Look, look! Become manly! 3 times a day! Immediate testing to become an officer!! Three ! classified header: Your Advertisements personals 1: Sale Garage Kits. Every . Pro, many parts. personals 2: Mitsuru. Not angry any more. Come home at once. Father. personals 3: Masahiro. Economize. Father & Mother. personals 4: Osamu. Found a bride. Come home immediately. Mom. 5 [Isolated shot of the coffee pot, Madoka's coffee cup and the cake with a slice cut out of it.] --------------------------------------------------- p 328 (180) 1 [Hikaru portrait--silent and expressionless.] 2 [From her position, Hikaru tries to get a look at Kyousuke, who has his back to everyone. Sipping from his cup--notice that it's not his teacup--he tries to sneak a glance over his shoulder. Madoka drinks from a cup.] narration: Oh no, oh no. 3 Hikaru: Sempai, that's Madoka-san's coffee. Kyousuke FX: [At the same time, Madoka notices she's been drinking from Kyousuke's highly saccharine teacup. Her eyes grow wide.] 4 [He staggers back in horror, spilling the coffee on his shirt. The background turns pitch-dark.] Kyousuke: (C-could it be...) Kyousuke: Ow-ow-ow!! 5 narration: She saw us just now? No, no. But, maybe... But, those eyes... Hikaru: [smiling] Ohh, I'll wipe the spill off. 6 [Taking his tie, she wipes it with a hankie.] narration: For some reason, Hikaru-chan is getting mighty suspicious these days... --------------------------------------------------- p 329 (181) 1 [A view of the rooftop of a school building.] narration: And the next day, as expected, my hunch came... True?! 2 Kyousuke: [smiling, walking up the stairs] (What in the world could this be about? Hikaru-chan formally requesting a talk.) Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: Maybe we'll be eating a box lunch on the roof. 3 [He spots her over by the railing, facing away.] Kyousuke: Hi. Sorry to keep... 4 [View over his shoulder at the silent, unmoving Hikaru.] 5 Kyousuke: [smiling] You asked to talk... What is it? 6 [His pov--still, she remains motionless.] --------------------------------------------------- p 330 (182) 1 [Without turning around, she says...] Hikaru: It's about Madoka-san. [He recoils in horror.] Kyousuke FX: 2 [Finally turning around, Hikaru looks at him, face in anguish.] Hikaru: I think that's too much!! 3 Hikaru: Even yesterday, when you came to my place! 4 narration: J-just as I thought... Kyousuke: Ahh... Ah wah wah. Kyousuke FX: 5 Hikaru: [running down the stairs] I won't speak to you, Sempai, until you mend your ways! Kyousuke: Ah! W-wait!! --------------------------------------------------- p 331 (183) 1 Kyousuke: [stunned] H-Hika... 2 [Tilted view of Kyousuke, as his world starts turning upside-down.] Kyousuke: Hikaru-chan... 3 [His pov of a store-lined alleyway.] narration: I-in the end, the time that had to come, came... sign 1: [partial] ...Shop sign 2: Haruki Store 4 Kyousuke: [unhappily] (N-now, Hikaru-chan and...) 5 [He stops and looks at a store.] sign: Cakes/Confections 6 [He looks at the cakes in the window display.] --------------------------------------------------- p 332 (184) 1 [Flashback panel--Hikaru looks up at the ceiling.] narration: "I'll only bake homemade cakes for my future husband..." ...is what I suppose Madoka-san has truly decided in her heart... 2 [Kyousuke reflects.] 3 Kyousuke: Ayukawa... 4 [His face brightens.] narration: I still have Ayukawa!! 5 [Tight shot of his lower leg.] narration: If this is how it's gonna be, I'm going to Ayukawa's place... 6 [Racing off, he brushes against a stocky guy.] Kyousuke: (If it doesn't work out with Ayukawa as well, then I'll have nothing left!!) Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: Ah, sorry! --------------------------------------------------- p 333 (185) 1 [Exterior shot of ABCB.] 2 [Madoka turns at the sound of...] door FX: 3 [Her pov of Kyousuke at the door.] 4 [A closer view. This is a decisive Kyousuke.] 5 [Overhead view of Madoka wiping dishes behind the counter, and Kyousuke, who approaches the counter.] Madoka: Welco... Kyousuke: Cake... 6 Madoka: Huh? Kyousuke: I want you to bake a cake. --------------------------------------------------- p 334 (186) 1 [Her pov of him. He has a no-argument, slightly-crazed look.] Kyousuke: I want to eat a cake that you've made!! 2 [Master and Madoka look back in surprise.] 3 Madoka: I... 4 Madoka: [nervously] I can't do something like that out of the blue... 5 Master: [merrily] Ayukawa-kun, why don't you? 6 Master: A cake in need is a cake indeed...* To him, it might be his greatest, once-in-a-lifetime problem. --------------------------------------------------- p 335 (187) 1 [Madoka stares at Master...] 2 [...then turns to look back at Kyousuke.] Madoka: Well, okay... 3 Madoka: Then, wait just a sec! 4 [Isolated shot of the ingredients and mixing bowl.] narration: Ayukawa's cake, that she hardly ever bakes... But, she's... 5 [Kyousuke sits, wide-eyed and blushing, cheek in hand, at the counter.] narration: ...making one for me...! Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 6 [Outside, a view from behind as Hikaru approaches ABCB, both hands clenched into fists.] --------------------------------------------------- p 336 (188) 1 [Tight shot of the cake, a cup of coffee, forks, napkin and plate.] Madoka: [off] Here you go! 2 [She lifts up a piece on a fork.] narration: Ayukawa's cake... Eating this means... Madoka: Say, "ahh." 3 Kyousuke: Ahh. 4 [Hikaru enters and takes in the scene with surprise. Madoka is hand-feeding Kyousuke, and has the fork held to his mouth. She has her back to the door, and is blocking Kyousuke's view of Hikaru.] door FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 337 (189) 1 [Kyousuke chews.] 2 Kyousuke: [happily] Delicious! Madoka: Really? 3 [Hikaru facial portrait--surprise.] 4 [Kyousuke lowers his gaze.] Kyousuke FX: 5 [Hikaru's expression darkens.] Hikaru FX: 6 Hikaru: SEMPAI!! [Madoka and Kyousuke turn to look in surprise.] --------------------------------------------------- p 338 (190) 1 Hikaru: [wide grin] That's good! You finally understood my feelings, didn't you!! [She takes him by the wrists. He has a contorted look on his face.] Hikaru FX: 2 Kyousuke: EH? 3 Hikaru: I was convinced that you didn't like Madoka-san. 4 Hikaru: [happily] Madoka-san means more to me than a big sister!! And so I wanted you to get along well with her like this!! 5 [Kyousuke portrait--wide-eyed nervousness.] narration: Which means... 6 [He looks over at Madoka, who looks back in puzzlement.] Madoka: ?! --------------------------------------------------- p 339 (191) 1 [He looks down at a slice of cake which he holds.] 2 Kyousuke: O-ohh!! narration: It wasn't that she saw us then!! 3 Madoka FX: 4 narration: That Hikaru-chan is getting mighty suspicious these days... How terrible to think that... I'm sorry, Hikaru-chan! 5 [The three sit at the counter, Kyousuke in the middle. He and Madoka watch Hikaru eating a cake in ecstasy.] Hikaru: Sure enough, Madoka-san's cake is delicious! narration: The one who's the pits... Is me! ---------------------------------- At bottom: [wideban only] Kimagure Orange Road 5 (End) ---------------------------------------------------