Kimagure Orange Road "A Chance in a Premonition Dream!" Volume 9, Story 7 WB Volume 5, Story 14 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Daisuke Suzuki (under contract to Vancouver Animation) Additional translation & compilation by : Craig Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Jun Watatani Jerry Lee Ka-Ping Yee Thomas Wyatt Last revision : 08-15-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 281 (133) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 281 (133)--TITLE PAGE [Madoka drops her schoolbag and stands barefoot on the grass. Wearing her school uniform with kerchief untied, she hikes up her skirts, showing lots of thigh and a bit of her panties.] MAIN TITLE (at top) A Chance in a Premonition Dream! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) Peeking Up a Sailor Uniform Is Against the Rules! You Can See Me Sigh in Heartache... But If You Have a Crush on Me for That, Then I'm Sorry! --------------------------------------------------- p 282 (134) [This entire page is black-bordered, denoting a dream sequence.] 1 [Hikaru portrait--angrily, she lifts an index finger and shouts at us.] Hikaru: isten! 'Cause Sempai's my special guy, okay!! 2 [Madoka portrait--a look of sullen silence.] 3 [Kyousuke looks from one side to the other, in obvious panic.] Kyousuke FX: 4 [Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.] FX: [off] voice: Kyaaaa! --------------------------------------------------- p 283 (135) 1 [With sunlight streaming in, Kyousuke sits up with a start.] 2 [View pans back. He's in bed.] narration: I-it's a premonition dream! birds FX: [off] 3 [Still in shock, he turns to see his sisters, dressed for school, watching him and whispering to one another.] narration: But... What a horrible premonition dream...! 4 [He gets out of bed.] narration: I don't really know why... But Ayukawa and Hikaru-chan had a big fight over me... Kyousuke: (N-no way...) 5 [Kyousuke hits the floor. The twins turn in surprise.] Kyousuke FX: 6 Kyousuke: [sitting in a daze] Wh-what...? M-my body won't do what I say. Kurumi: [merrily] Oh, that's a good one! After all, school *does* begin today, right? 7 [Kurumi collapses beside him and curls up in anguish. Manami stands over the two, hands on hips and looking vexed.] Kurumi: Mine won't do what I say either! Kurumi FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 284 (136) 1 Manami: [exploding] Look you two! If you don't knock off this "Won't-Go-to- School" sickness stuff, you'll be late for school!! [The two pop up and hit the ground running.] Kurumi: Farewell, O Bygone Summer! 2 [Looking pale, Kyousuke puts on his tie.] Kyousuke: I really don't feel too well, but... Kyousuke FX: 3 [Exterior shot of a school building. Students are seen walking onto school grounds--some exchange greetings.] narration: The new school term begins today! 4 [A view of 4 students--2 males, 1 female and 1 kappa.] sensei: Matsui! Nishida! Yoshikawa! students: Here! He-e-ere. sensei: Kasuga! 5 sensei: Kasuga! Isn't Kasuga here? book: 1-F Roll Book 6 Kyousuke: [off] Here... [The entire class pivots in their seats, looking towards the back of the room.] --------------------------------------------------- p 285 (137) 1 [The door opens, but no one is there.] door FX: 2 [View pans down to show Kyousuke on his belly on the hallway floor, looking weak and exhausted.] Hatta: [off] Kasuga!! 3 [Horrified, Hatta and most of the class rush over to tend to the fallen Kyousuke. Kyousuke lies back in Hatta's arms.] Hatta: What's wrong, Kasuga?! Pull yourself together! class FX: 4 [With his last ounce of strength, Kyousuke lifts up a composition book. Hatta eyes it.] Kyousuke: Th-this... This is... 5 [Shot centers on the book. In addition to the title there is a picture of a flower beneath a shining sun. The class is astonished.] book: Summer Vacation Homework class: OHHHHH. 6 [Kyousuke passes out, collapsed against the kneeling Hatta. Hatta raises the homework in his hand.] Hatta: [vehemently] I understand! I will take charge of your summer vacation homework without fail!! class FX: student: Such a model student!! 7 [Madoka portrait--still seated, she looks on, astounded.] --------------------------------------------------- p 286 (138) 1 [Kyousuke lies on the floor, out cold. The teacher stands near, looking down with disdain.] sensei: With vacation ending, I see a lot of this... This sort of fellow... 2 [Looking back at the roll book, the teacher turns his back on Kyousuke and walks back to the front of the class.] sensei: As though they exhausted all their energy during the holidays, or... door FX: [A hand appears on the floor at the partially opened classroom door.] 3 [It's Komatsu. He also lies passed out in the hallway.] Komatsu FX: girl: [concerned] Sensei! This time it's Komatsu-kun... 4 sensei: [darkly] Bury him...! Dig a hole or something. girl: Huh? 5 [Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.] 6 [Kyousuke returns home from school.] Kyousuke: D-damn... door FX: 7 narration: Looks like I'm starting to get a fever. Anyway, at a time like this, it's best to eat well and get lots of rest! Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: Hey-y-y, Manami, Kuru... --------------------------------------------------- p 287 (139) 1 [He spots a note left on the table.] 2 note: To oniichan: We're going to Dad's studio. We'll be late. --Manami, Kurumi Kyousuke: Murderers! 3 [He picks up the phone and looks at a phone list.] Kyousuke: (O-oh yeah. I'll call Akane over and have her take care of me.) Kyousuke FX: 4 [Tight shot of the phone list. His finger runs past the listing for "Akane" and comes to rest upon "Abakabu".] phone listings: Akane Abakabu 5 [Exterior late afternoon shot of ABCB.] phone FX: 6 Madoka: Yes? --------------------------------------------------- p 288 (140) 1 [Madoka listens wide-eyed to...] phone: Hello. It's me, Kyousuke! 2 phone: I'm sick... And on top of that, nobody's home right now. H-help... Madoka: Huh?! 3 [Tight shot of the Kasuga telephone receiver. It hangs from the cord.] phone: Kasuga-kun?! Ka... 4 [View pans back. Kyousuke is unconscious, sitting against the wall next to the phone.] 5 [Madoka stares at the receiver in her hand.] 6 [Hanging up, she turns to Master, who smiles back merrily.] Madoka: Master. --------------------------------------------------- p 289 (141) 1 [Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.] 2 [He opens his eyes...] Kyousuke: Hm? 3 [...and sits up in his bed.] 4 [Madoka enters, closing the door behind her. She carries a tray of soup, bread, a drink and a fruit.] door FX: Madoka: You're awake? 5 narration: Why is Ayukawa...?! Madoka: You're such a troublemaker, aren't you. Kyousuke: Sorry. 6 narration: Oh, I see! She saw how I was in school and was concerned about me... --------------------------------------------------- p 290 (142) 1 [His face becomes flushed, his eyes tear up, and he touches a finger to his nose.] Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: (Ayukawa's so kind...) 2 [She feeds him soup.] narration: She even cooked this for me... Madoka: Say "ahh..." Kyousuke: Ahh... 3 doorbell FX: 4 [He leaps to his feet.] Kyousuke: O-oh no, it's Akane!! Kyousuke stand-up FX: Madoka: (Wh-what's this...? He's pretty lively.) 5 [As in his dream sequence, he looks from side to side, highly agitated.] Kyousuke FX: narration: I-if Akane sees us here like this--that's the worst!! 6 [He looks at his wardrobe closet.] 7 [He opens it, and looks back at Madoka. The closet consists of 5 drawers at the bottom, with space above for hanging coats and shirts.] Kyousuke: S-sorry, but could you get in here... Madoka: What?! --------------------------------------------------- p 291 (143) 1 [Looking at the door, he urges her in.] Madoka: W-wait! Why? Kyousuke: Just hurry!! 2 [In his haste, he unthinkingly gives her a boost up by laying both hands on her shapely rear.] Kyousuke: H-hurry!! Madoka: Ohh 3 Madoka: [blushing, angry] Wh-where the heck are you touching me?! Kyousuke: S-sorry!! 4 [Into the room bursts...] Hikaru: [irritated look] SEMPAI!! door FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 292 (144) 1 [Pov shifts to show Kyousuke with back against the closed closet.] door FX: 2 Kyousuke: [wide-eyed] H-Hikaru-chan... 3 [Inside the closet, Madoka sits stunned.] 4 [Hikaru throws herself against him.] Hikaru: Please don't die, Sempai! Kyousuke: Eh?! 5 [She hugs him, teary-eyed and stricken.] Hikaru: Hatta-san and the others told me at school that you were gasping for air... Kyousuke: Those guys... Trying to kill people off for their own reasons. Kyousuke: Am I a cicada or something? 6 [Madoka sits in the dark, wide-eyed and worried.] 7 Kyousuke: I mean... Anyway, it was only a case of summer heat exhaustion. Hikaru: Ohhhh! --------------------------------------------------- p 293 (145) 1 [With a smile she slaps him on the back, sending him reeling.] Hikaru: Now that I'm here, everything will be all right! I'll care for you all night!! Hikaru backslap FX: 2 [Kneeling, she produces several items from a sack. Kyousuke watches with a nervous smile. The "potty" is one of those ducks that you sit on, with handles on its neck.] Hikaru: Anyway, I brought lots of stuff. Medicines from Toyama, diapers, a potty, crutches, and my stuffed bear, Kumagorou-kun. 3 [Kyousuke visualizes the portraits of an angry Hikaru and a sullen Madoka from his dream.] narration: That means this morning's premonition dream...! 4 Kyousuke: [a decisive look] (No matter what... I can't very well let Ayukawa and Hikaru-chan see each other!!) 5 Hikaru: Oh my. The sheets are... Hikaru: You spilled soup, didn't you. 6 [She starts pulling off the bedsheets.] Hikaru: Sempai, where are the spare sheets? Kyousuke: I think they're in the closet... 7 [Too late, he claps a hand over his mouth.] Kyousuke: AH! 8 [Inside the closet, Madoka also gasps "Ah!"] --------------------------------------------------- p 294 (146) 1 [Hikaru runs over to the closet.] Hikaru: I'll change them for you! Kyousuke: Oh god...! 2 [Madoka is in an uncertain frenzy.] Madoka FX: 3 [Hikaru reaches a hand out to the handles of the closet door.] 4 [Madoka's pov as Hikaru opens the closet.] door FX: 5 [Madoka covers her face with both hands.] 6 [She peeks between her fingers.] 7 [View pans back to show that Kyousuke has come up very close behind Hikaru, causing Hikaru to turn back to look at him over her shoulder. Madoka watches this with eyes grown wide.] Kyousuke: I'm fine... It's already getting late, so you should stop worrying and go home. Hikaru: Really? --------------------------------------------------- p 295 (147) 1 [With a smile, Hikaru turns around to face him. Kyousuke lifts up his hands and stares nervously past Hikaru at Madoka.] Kyousuke FX: 2 [His pov of Madoka--as in the dream, she looks unhappy.] 3 [With Hikaru hugging him, he uses both hands to reach past her and close the closet doors. We catch one last glimpse of a smoldering Madoka.] Kyousuke: Ha... A ha! A ha ha ha ha! closet door FX: 4 closet door FX: narration: That look... If it had gone on any further, then the two of us... That was close! 5 [On her way out, two large bags at her side, Hikaru pauses.] Hikaru: Then, please take care! narration: It looks like I've somehow managed to avoid the worst situation... 6 [As in the dream, Hikaru angrily points a finger at him and shouts...] Hikaru: Oh yeah. That's right. Please eat properly and get lots of rest. And no bath for today! --------------------------------------------------- p 296 (148) 1 Hikaru: Listen! 'Cause you're my special guy, okay!! 2 Kyousuke: [face flushed] S-sure. 3 Kyousuke: [realization] Huh? 4 [Outside, Hikaru struggles to carry her two bags down the night street.] Hikaru FX: 5 [Kyousuke visualizes the black-bordered page which began this chapter.] narration: That means... That premonition dream was... 6 narration: O-ohhh... Then... 7 [He collapses in a series of fractured panels.] Kyousuke: Th-thank god...! Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 297 (149) 1 [Isolated shot of a corner of his room.] narration: And when I woke up again... Madoka: [off] Say "ahh..." 2 [Kyousuke lies back on the floor, his head cradled in her lap. She feeds him a bit of the bread.] Kyousuke: Ahh... narration: For some reason, Ayukawa was kind to me. 3 Kyousuke: Delicious. 4 [His pov of her. She smiles down at him.] Madoka: It seems like... You're getting better. 5 [A hazy view of the two. Madoka speaks in a white-text-on-black speech bubble.] Madoka: But I was so surprised... I mean, you phoned me up out of the blue like that. --------------------------------------------------- p 298 (150) 1 Madoka: [closing her eyes] Don't make me worry so much... 2 [Kyousuke portrait--I think he finds that this pov has its merits.] 3 Madoka: But the fact that you phoned me first... I... 4 [She gazes to one side, in thought.] 5 narration: Oh, I see. Back then I phoned Ayukawa's place by accident! Or... Perhaps I subconsciously wanted to be cared for by Ayukawa, so my finger dialed her number on its own. --------------------------------------------------- p 299 (151) 1 [He turns over on his side, rubbing his cheek against her thigh.] Kyousuke: Feels good! Kyousuke FX: 2 [Madoka portrait--deep blush.] 3 Kyousuke: Come to think of it, the feel of your rear end back then was also quite... [Madoka's expression is one of wide-eyed shock.] Madoka: ! 4 [Suddenly realizing what he's saying, he lifts his head to look at her. She looks at him quietly, still blushing...] Kyousuke get-up FX: Kyousuke: Ah! 5 [...and exactly as in the premonition dream...] FX: [off] Kyousuke: [off] Kyaaaa! haiku: On a lap pillow, A summer heat exhaustion Vanishes in one night. --Kyousuke ---------------------------------------------------