Kimagure Orange Road "Don't Cheat!" Volume 9, Story 6 WB Volume 5, Story 13 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Daisuke Suzuki (under contract to Vancouver Animation) Additional translation & compilation by : Craig Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Jun Watatani Jerry Lee Thomas Wyatt Last revision : 08-14-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 262 (114) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 262 (114)--TITLE PAGE [Red with rage, Kyousuke chases off Kazuya, who's just finished a large piece of graffiti on the side of a building. It's the standard "love umbrella," under which are the faces of Madoka, Kyousuke and Hikaru.] MAIN TITLE (at top) Don't Cheat! graffiti caption: Kyousuke SUB-TITLE (at bottom) Dangerous Graffiti Is Absolutely Forbidden!! --------------------------------------------------- p 263 (115) 1 [Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.] narration: This is rather out of the blue, but--it's Ants and Grasshoppers! 2 [At the start of summer break, Manami does her homework while Kurumi prances off in her swimsuit.] narration: It's a commonly-said old saying, but still... Those who plan ahead, and... caption: July 20th Kurumi: The pool, the pool! 3 [A week before the end of summer break and it's Kurumi who's madly doing her homework, while Manami happily comes by with a drink on a tray.] narration: Those who can only consider what's in front of their nose. caption: August 25th Kurumi: Eee! 4 [Kyousuke frantically talks on the telephone.] narration: And, sure enough, he's also... caption: August 31st Kyousuke: Komatsu, let me see your notes. What?! You haven't done it? You're starting now?! 5 [Kyousuke, wearing a white headband, tackles his books in a frenzy. His smiling sisters stand nearby and comment.] Kyousuke: Eeeee!! Kurumi: Well oniichan, now you're the only one who hasn't done his homework. --------------------------------------------------- p 264 (116) 1 Kyousuke: [wincing] Ahh... If I'd known it would be like this, I would've started sooner. [The twins turn to each other and smile.] Kurumi: There it is--a famous event on the last day of the summer break!! Manami: Sure enough, he said it. 2 [Kyousuke stops to reflect, visualizing Madoka and himself studying together at ABCB.] narration: If things were normal, I'd be with Ayukawa... 3 [Panels 3-4 are double-bordered, denoting the flashback. Here he's confronted by towel-clad Madoka and Hikaru in the ladies' locker room from the previous chapter.] narration: But... Ever since that affair at the pool... Madoka: [flashback] Stop right there! Hey! What do you think you're doing? Coming in here! Hikaru: [flashback] You're such a pervert, Sempai! 4 [Outside ABCB, Kyousuke walks by, looking wistfully at the coffee shop.] narration: Just as usual, now I'm even afraid of opening ABCB's door. Kyousuke: (I bet she's in a bad mood again.) 5 [Back to realtime. He resumes studying.] narration: But bad luck never comes in ones. Even the problems that I can usually solve I don't understand at all, because I'm concerned about Ayukawa. Kyousuke: Somehow, I can't get into the right frame-of-mind for studying. 6 Kazuya: [off] Ohh? Have you ever been in the right frame-of-mind, oniichan? Kyousuke: None of your business!! --------------------------------------------------- p 265 (117) 1 [Pov shifts to show Kazuya leaning against the front door. He waves a greeting.] Kazuya: Hey! 2 Kazuya: Shall I help you somehow? 3 [Kyousuke picks up his books and heads out the door.] Kyousuke: Well, I'll go do the rest at the library... Kyousuke FX: Kazuya: Don't run away! 4 [The two walk outside, down the street.] Kyousuke: How can a kindergartner possibly understand high school problems? Go home! Shoo! Shoo! 5 Kazuya: Those are problems that you--a high school student--don't understand either. Kyousuke FX: 6 Kyousuke: [forced smile] But how nice for you... You probably don't have any homework to do. Kazuya: [incensed] That's not true! 7 Kyousuke: Eh?! Kazuya: [nervous smile] Ah, I mean... --------------------------------------------------- p 266 (118) 1 [Both turn to find Hikaru walking towards them, some books in one hand.] Hikaru: [waving] Ah, Sempai! 2 [Exterior shot of the library.] Kyousuke: [off] Then this becomes this, and... sign: Main Library 3 Hikaru: [ecstatic] Wowww. You really saved me, Sempai!! 4 [View pulls back to show the three seated side-by-side inside the library.] Hikaru: Now my homework's all done. Thank you so much. Kyousuke: I see. That's good. Ah ha ha... 5 Kazuya: Hmmph. You're pretty smart. Solving that so easily... Why don't you do junior high over again? Kyousuke: Quit making fun of me! 6 [Kyousuke turns to look at Hikaru, worry on his face.] narration: But... I wonder if she thinks about that pool incident at all? --------------------------------------------------- p 267 (119) 1 Kazuya: Don't worry about Hikaru-oneechan. Kyousuke: Eh?! 2 Kazuya: Hey, oneechan. Oniichan's worrying about the pool. Kyousuke: Wah! H-hey! Hikaru: [smiling] Oh my! 3 Hikaru: [looking thoughtful] But if it's about that--on the contrary, I was happy. 4 [He does a double-take.] Kyousuke: Ah?! 5 Hikaru: [smiling] (I mean, I was a bit surprised when Sempai came into the locker room, but... That he wanted to see me that much... I'm deeply touched!!) 6 Kyousuke: [whispering to Kazuya] Wh-what does she mean by "happy"? 7 Kazuya FX: 8 Kazuya: [whispering back] She says she's happy 'cause you're a lech, Kyou-niichan. --------------------------------------------------- p 268 (120) 1 Kyousuke: [angrily] Is this true? You... No way she's that bold... Kazuya: Don't forget about my Power! 2 Kazuya: [thumbs-up] I can read people's minds! 3 [Kyousuke facial portrait--surprise.] narration: Oh yeah! 4 [Isolated shot looking up at the sky. Trees and a traffic signal are in view.] 5 [View looking down the street.] Kazuya: [off] Now do you understand? *I* could somehow do your homework, oniichan. Kyousuke: [off] But how? 6 Kazuya: Show it to Madoka-oneechan! Kyousuke: If I could do that, I wouldn't be this worried! narration: No way that Ayukawa would tell me the answers right now! sign: ...Model 7 Kazuya: All you have to do is show the problems to Madoka-oneechan. After that, I'll take a little peek into her mind... --------------------------------------------------- p 269 (121) 1 Kyousuke: That would sorta make me feel self-conscious. Wouldn't you be cheating... Kazuya: Then shall I cheat and read your mind too? 2 [Kyousuke gives him a sharp stare.] 3 Kazuya: [glaring back] "I'm... Disliked, aren't I...?" See? That bothers you more than the homework, doesn't it. Kyousuke: [nervously] Hey, hey. Don't cheat! 4 Kyousuke: But... 5 Kyousuke: Well, once in a while, you do come in handy, don't you. Kazuya: Oh, leave everything to me! 6 [Exterior evening shot of ABCB.] 7 [Madoka opens the door to put up the "closed" sign.] sign: [bilingual] Closed --------------------------------------------------- p 270 (122) 1 [She pauses to stare off into the distance.] 2 [She turns at the sound of...] Master: [merrily] In the end, Kasuga-kun didn't come today either, huh... I wonder if he's doing all right with his homework... 3 Master: That's what your face looks like it's saying... [She turns away in a huff.] Madoka: Who cares?! 4 [Apron removed, she closes the accordion door to the changing room behind her.] door FX: crates: 5 [She gives a gentle smile.] Madoka: (It looks like he's still worried about that pool thing.) 6 [Kyousuke enters ABCB, being urged forward by Kazuya.] Kazuya: Hurry up and get in there! Kyousuke: J-just a sec! 7 Master: Oh! Speak of the devil! Kyousuke: [embarrassed] H-hello. It's been a while. --------------------------------------------------- p 271 (123) 1 Kazuya: Where's oneechan? Master: [heading out the door] She's in the back room! 2 [Kazuya shoves Kyousuke toward the closed door to the changing room.] Kazuya: See! Go for it! Kazuya FX: Kyousuke: Wahhh!! 3 [He comes crashing through the crack in the (accordion-style) door. Madoka, back to the door, is down to her panties.] 4 [She turns in shock, blushing.] 5 [Exterior shot of ABCB.] Madoka: [off] PERVERT!! --------------------------------------------------- p 272 (124) 1 [Door once more closed behind him, he blushes fiercely.] Kyousuke: S-sorry!! door FX: 2 [Madoka stares off-panel, eyes grown huge.] Madoka heartbeat FX: 3 [Kyousuke does likewise.] narration: Why does it always turn out like this? 4 [She emerges from the room, wearing a blouse and skirt.] Madoka: What's so important? 5 Kazuya: [smiling] Oniichan said he wants to study with you! 6 [His pov of Madoka, who looks back without expression.] 7 Madoka: Sure! Madoka FX: [Kyousuke is speechless.] --------------------------------------------------- p 273 (125) 1 Madoka: [tossing back her hair] However... 2 [View pans back to show Kyousuke sitting at a table, his books set before him. Kazuya stands nearby. Madoka stands on the other side of the table and points to his books.] Madoka: I won't just tell you the answers like I usually do! Think for yourself!! 3 [Kyousuke looks at Kazuya, who smiles back.] Kazuya: [telepathic message] (See?! Sure enough, I was correct in coming along with you!) 4 [Kyousuke's pov of Madoka, who rests her cheek in a hand and pointedly ignores him.] 5 Kazuya: [whispering] The answer is... 'C'. Kyousuke: I-I see. 6 narration: But... Should I be doing such a miserable thing like this after all? Kyousuke: [to Kazuya] Is she still mad? 7 [Another pov of Madoka and Kyousuke--still, she ignores him.] --------------------------------------------------- p 274 (126) 1 Madoka: (Jeez... Whether it's bad timing or just blundering... In the end, Kasuga-kun comes off looking awfully perverted, doesn't he.) 2 [Kazuya facial portrait--he studies her.] 3 Madoka: (Oh well... He doesn't seem to be doing it on purpose, so I can forgive him...) 4 Kazuya FX: 5 Kazuya: [solemnly] I wouldn't want to hurt you, oniichan, if I could possibly help it... So I shouldn't say this, but... Kyousuke: Eh?! 6 Kazuya: [whispering in his ear] Oneechan says she hates perverts, and wants to break up with you! Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 275 (127) 1 [Tight shot of his notebook--seems to be a treatise on the Spitfire jet fighter.] pencil FX: 2 [Kyousuke rises to his feet as Madoka looks up in surprise.] Kyousuke stand-up FX: 3 Kyousuke: [nervous smile] C-can't be... Break up...? 4 Madoka: Huh?! 5 [He turns and runs out the door.] Kyousuke FX: narration: It's all over...!! 6 [Kazuya and Madoka watch him leave.] --------------------------------------------------- p 276 (128) 1 [Akane walks down the street, looking off to one side.] 2 Akane: That guy... If he isn't at Kyousuke's place, then... Where the heck is he? 3 [Kyousuke, running full-tilt, barrels past her.] Akane: Ah! Kyousuke FX: 4 Akane: Kyousuke!! [He looks back over his shoulder.] 5 Kazuya: Ah ha ha ha ha ha! 6 [View pans back to show Kazuya beside himself with joy. Madoka looks on with very little expression.] Kazuya: That Kyou-niichan. That felt good. Now I feel refreshed! What an idiot... He believed all that nonsense I fed him... --------------------------------------------------- p 277 (129) 1 Kyousuke: [off] So is that what it was? Kazuya: [eyes wide] Ah! 2 [Kazuya turns to see Akane and Kyousuke standing just inside the entrance. Kyousuke has his arms folded and casts an angry gaze downward. Akane looks irritated.] 3 Akane: Finally found you, Kazuya! 4 Kazuya: [horrified] N-neechan!! 5 Madoka: [surprised] What?! O-oneechan?! 6 [Akane confronts her little brother, who falls back into a chair.] Akane: So you were hiding out here, tossing aside all your homework! --------------------------------------------------- p 278 (130) 1 [Kyousuke prepares for physical mayhem, rubbing his fist in the palm of his other hand.] Kyousuke: Taking advantage of someone's weakness. You... Today is the day... I won't forgive you... Kyousuke knuckles FX: [Akane angrily holds out a stack of books.] Akane: C'mon, kindergarten starts the day after tomorrow!! What are you gonna do about this homework?! 2 Kazuya: No-o-o! Kazuya FX: 3 [Akane chases him out the door.] Akane: Hey-y-y, stop!! Akane hand-on-glass-door FX: 4 [Kyousuke and Madoka just stand and watch.] 5 Madoka: Those two are sister and brother?! Kyousuke: [wincing] Jeez... They're such troublemakers. --------------------------------------------------- p 279 (131) 1 Kyousuke: Asking Akane for help with his homework, and then running away... What an idiot... That guy. He should at least do his own homework on his own! 2 [Madoka turns her back to Kyousuke, facing the counter.] Madoka: So true!! Like how a certain someone else does it all by himself, hmm? 3 [She turns, smiling and stifling a laugh. Reflecting, Kyousuke looks surprised.] Madoka: 4 Madoka: [gaze downcast] You sure are cousins. Not only do your faces look alike, but you're the same on the inside as well! 5 [She looks off to the side.] Madoka: But... An undependable boy... For some reason, is so cute that I want to care for him! --------------------------------------------------- p 280 (132) 1 Kyousuke: [tentative smile] EH?! Y-you mean... Kazuya, or... 2 [His pov of her. She looks back wide-eyed and without expression.] 3 [She smiles and tosses back her hair...] Madoka: As to that... 4 [...then walks away, looking unconcerned. Kyousuke gives a nervous smile.] Madoka: Work it out yourself! Kyousuke: Okay. narration: A hand of love to an awfully miserable Mr. Grasshopper! --Kyousuke ---------------------------------------------------