Kimagure Orange Road "A Shake in the Camp!" Volume 9, Story 2 WB Volume 5, Story 9 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation & compilation by : Craig H. Nishida Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Thomas Wyatt Jerry Lee Jun Watatani Last revision : 08-14-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 178 (30) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 177 (29) 1 narration: August, and summer finally enters the stage! Therefore, I, Kasuga Kyousuke, have come here...! The chirping of cicadas, the twittering of small birds... That's right! Here... 2 [At the edge of a forest stands a posted trail map.] cicada FX: Title: A Shake in the Camp! --------------------------------------------------- p 178-179 (30-31)--TITLE PAGES [Two-page title art. On the right side, splashed over the mountain vista, stands Madoka and Hikaru, back-to-back, in shirts, shorts and headbands. They smile at us. On the left hand page, Kyousuke looks a bit beat as he labors under a heavy backpack.] MAIN TITLE (at top) A Shake in the Camp! SUB-TITLE (at right side) When Summer Girls Glitter So Cool, You Want to Have Naughty Dreams... Kyousuke: Hey-y-y. Wait for me-e-e... --------------------------------------------------- p 180 (32) 1 [Full-page panel. Their pov of a forest trail spreading out before them.] --------------------------------------------------- p 181 (33) 1 [Hikaru and Madoka lead the way. Slightly behind them is Kyousuke. Yuusaku brings up the rear.] narration: I'm here camping with Hikaru-chan and the others! 2 [He smiles, framed by Hikaru and Madoka, who walk ahead of him.] narration: Surrounded by two pretty girls--this is exactly what it means to be doubly blessed! = "be-doubly-blessed"/"between-2-beauties" which literally translates to "holding flowers in both hands."> 3 [He looks back over his shoulder, in irritation...] Kyousuke: (I wish that was the case, but... If only HE wasn't here...) 4 [...at Yuusaku, who glares back.] Kyousuke: (I wonder where he caught wind of this? Jeez!) 5 Kyousuke: (But... Hikaru-chan's pack is awfully heavy... What the heck is in here?) 6 [He sits on a tree stump, wiping his brow.] Kyousuke: But... Do we still have more to walk ? Hikaru: [to Madoka] Come to think of it, a lot of people got off the bus with us back then--where have they gone? --------------------------------------------------- p 182 (34) 1 [She smiles at Kyousuke.] Hikaru: Anyway, it's just a little bit more. Fight! Kyousuke: O-kay-y-y. 2 [Kyousuke exerts much effort in rising to his feet.] Kyousuke: narration: But... This is heavy! 3 [View of his rear end. It's still on the tree stump.] 4 Kyousuke: 5 [Unknown to him, a branch tears a hole in the bottom of his backpack.] backpack FX: 6 Kyousuke: (Huh? Maybe it's my imagination, but did this seem to get lighter somehow?) 7 [The four walk off. Kyousuke unknowingly leaves behind a trail of items, including a transistor radio, combination can opener and corkscrew, and a Swiss Army knife.] --------------------------------------------------- p 183 (35) 1 [View looking up at a sign. The skies are bright overhead.] Hikaru: [off] We're here!! sign: Horned Owl Highlands Campground 2 Madoka: [looking back] Aside from us, there's no one here... 3 [Another view of the radio, left behind on the trail.] 4 radio: The typhoon is approaching the mountain region. Sometime tonight, the typhoon, accompanied by thunderstorms, will strike with violent force. Mountain climbers are strongly cau... 5 Kyousuke: But... It's been bothering me for some time now... Whether it's the mountains around here, or that river and bridge we crossed back then... 6 Kyousuke: There's something familiar about this place... [All four look around at the trees that surround the clearing.] Yuusaku: Hmm... --------------------------------------------------- p 184 (36) [This entire page is bordered in black, denoting the flashback.] 1 [A view of the Kasuga apartment building.] narration: Speaking of old, familiar things, for the first time in a long while, a letter arrived the other day from our obaachan in the country*. <*Commentary (JW): The term has a more specific meaning than merely "countryside". There is a secondary meaning of one's hometown. In this case, not Kyousuke's hometown--he doesn't really have one--but his *mother's* hometown...> cicada FX: [off] 2 [The twins look at a postcard held in Kurumi's hands.] Kurumi: Wow, listen to this... It's become hot, but are you well? Over here... Manami and Kurumi: 3 Kyousuke: What a pain... Manami and Kurumi: [off] 4 Kyousuke: As it is now, I can't settle down and do it. I thought I would finish my homework before heading off for camp... 5 [A view of his homework, piled on his desk.] Kyousuke: [off] If I stay at home for the summer break, being around my sisters will be a real pain. In that case, the only choice I have is to create opportunities where I can be alone and do well... 6 Kyousuke: (When I'm alone, I'll have a chance to study.) Kyousuke FX: 7 [The twins smile and lean toward Kyousuke, who remains lost in his thoughts.] Manami and Kurumi: Wahhh, oniichan. She says, come and have fun, just you and your girlfriend. Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: A chance... 8 Kyousuke: When I'm alone with my girlfriend, I'll have a chance... Kyousuke FX: 9 Kyousuke: Huh? --------------------------------------------------- p 185 (37) 1 [Back at the camp, Hikaru throws her arms up in joy.] Hikaru: Now, let's set about preparing camp right away! 2 [Kyousuke and Madoka stand and watch as Hikaru unpacks her stuff.] Hikaru: Flour to make the cake, a bowl, and the essence... Here's a heater, for when it gets cold at night... Here's my pet stuffed animal, Kumagorou-kun... 3 [Madoka watches wide-eyed; Yuusaku and Kyousuke sweat and force smiles.] Kyousuke: (No wonder it was heavy. Jeez...) 4 Hikaru: [pleasantly] Sempai, please put up the tents. Madoka-san and I will prepare dinner! 5 Hikaru: [angrily] Yuusaku!! Go gather firewood or something! [Yuusaku flinches.] 6 [A view of a covered, but open-air cookhouse. The skies begin to darken.] sign: Community Cookhouse small sign: ...okhouse Always ! --------------------------------------------------- p 186 (38) 1 [While taking out cooking utensils, the two girls look up at the sky.] Madoka: Somehow... The skies are starting to look threatening. Hikaru: Oh no... It was nice till a little while ago... 2 [Hikaru extends her palm out to feel the falling rain.] raindrops FX: 3 Hikaru: [running off] I brought a radio so we can try to pick up a weather report or something! 4 [Sheltered in the tent, Kyousuke kneels and smiles up at the pouring rain.] Kyousuke: Oh... It's like this, is it. 5 [He looks surprised to see Hikaru enter.] Hikaru: Sempai! 6 Hikaru: [looking around] Huh? How strange... 7 Hikaru: Where did I pack the radio? --------------------------------------------------- p 187 (39) 1 [He reaches for a pack--in the process, getting close to Hikaru.] Kyousuke: Let me look. 2 [She looks at him in thought.] 3 [She edges closer and gives him a small smile. He returns a wide-eyed look.] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: Hikaru FX: 4 Hikaru: It's just the two of us, Sempai... 5 [Kyousuke turns his face away from her. She stares off in front of her.] 6 [And when he turns to look again, his face wears a grin.] Kyousuke FX: 7 [With a diabolical look, he extends his palms out towards the unsuspecting Hikaru, and...] Kyousuke FX: 8 [Hikaru, looking into a backpack, leans forward, and Kyousuke pitches over her head.] Kyousuke FX: Hikaru: Now, radio, radio... --------------------------------------------------- p 188 (40) 1 [Outside, Madoka runs to the tent to find it collapsed on the two.] tent noises FX: 2 [The two surface from the tent wreckage, gasping for breath.] Kyousuke and Hikaru: Pwah! 3 [The other two aren't amused.] Madoka and Yuusaku FX: 4 Kyousuke: [noticing the audience] O-oh?! narration: Wh-what... Was I trying to do just now? 5 [Kyousuke smiles and looks relaxed.] Kyousuke: Well anyway, all that's left is to open the cans and cook dinner... 6 Hikaru: [looking in a backpack] Huh? It's not here. But I thought I packed the can opener in this bag. Come to think of it, the radio and lighter, too... 7 [View through the forest.] Hikaru: [off] Ahhh! There's a hole! Kyousuke: [off] Ehhhh!?! --------------------------------------------------- p 189 (41) 1 [A view of Kyousuke's backpack and the huge hole at the bottom.] 2 [He visualizes...] Kyousuke: [flashback] (This seems lighter somehow.) Kyousuke: Th-then, that's when! 3 [He bows his head.] Kyousuke: S-sorry. It's my fault. Madoka: [looking stern] .......... 4 Yuusaku: To rip a hole in the backpack that carried all the most important stuff-- like the lighter, radio and can opener... What's wrong with you?! Hikaru: Never mind that... What'll we do? 5 Hikaru: [looking out the tentflap] As it stands, we won't be able to eat dinner... And on top of that... This weather! 6 [The view outside the two tents. The skies are pitch-black and the wind is driving the rain nearly horizontally.] wind FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 190 (42) 1 Madoka: [rising] I'll look around this area and go borrow the stuff we need. 2 [Madoka exits the tent.] tent flap FX: wind FX: 3 Kyousuke: Oh wait! I'll go, too! 4 [A view of the skies.] wind FX: 5 [Kyousuke follows Madoka, who walks resolutely onward.] narration: Whether it's because of that incident with Hikaru-chan a while ago, or my mistake with the backpack... She's mad, isn't she. 6 Kyousuke: Ah, where are you going? That way is... Madoka: Of course... 7 [She looks back at him with a glare.] Madoka: The only thing we can do is go to another campground! --------------------------------------------------- p 191 (43) 1 [Further along the path, the two find themselves buffeted by the wind.] wind: 2 Kyousuke: (We walked a lot, didn't we. Should be another 2 or 3 kilometers.) 3 Kyousuke: Hey, let's go back already! If we go any farther, we'll lose our way in this storm. Madoka: But... Without a fire we can't keep warm, and we can't eat either! 4 Kyousuke: [decisively] Then I'll go on by myself. Because, Ayukawa, it's too dangerous for a girl!! [She looks at him in surprise.] 5 Kyousuke: (And if I'm alone, I can teleport... It's just a single jump...) 6 [They come upon the rope bridge.] Madoka: [off] Huh? Ahead... --------------------------------------------------- p 192 (44) 1 Madoka: Light! It's a house!! 2 [She rushes out onto the bridge.] Kyousuke: Ah! W-wait! Kyousuke: [inset] Ayukawa, it's better if we wait here!! Madoka: [inset] It's fine! It's only this! 3 Madoka: AH! wind FX: 4 [And she's carried over the side of the bridge.] Madoka: KYAA! --------------------------------------------------- p 193 (45) 1 Kyousuke: AYUKAWA! 2 [He leaps after her, head-first.] narration: I'm usually such an indecisive guy, but I didn't hesitate at all... 3 [Madoka bobs to the surface of a raging torrent, unconscious. Kyousuke hits the surface with a splash.] narration: ...to go diving in after Ayukawa! Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 194 (46) 1 [Tight shot of Kyousuke lying at the side of the stream.] Kyousuke: 2 [View pulls back to show Madoka lying beside him. She's still unconscious.] narration: I-it looks like we're saved... 3 [He carries her on his back...] narration: But Ayukawa's still unconscious... 4 [...to a cabin he happens upon.] narration: Good! For now, that cabin! --------------------------------------------------- p 195 (47) 1 [Inside, Madoka lies on the floor, in a pool of water that drips off her wet clothes.] 2 [Tight view of her face. Water drips onto her cheek.] drops FX: 3 [View pans back to show the water dripping off the head of Kyousuke, who's leaning over her.] narration: That's good... She doesn't appear to be injured. 4 [He shivers...] narration: But... How cold... 5 [...and removes his shirt.] narration: I didn't think it could get this numbingly cold in the middle of summer! --------------------------------------------------- p 196 (48) 1 [He looks down.] 2 [His pov of the unconscious beauty.] 3 narration: Speaking of being soaked to the skin... Even Ayukawa... 4 [Kyousuke facial portrait--he blushes.] crows-in-background FX: 5 [He reaches out a hand towards her.] Kyousuke: I won't look! Kyousuke hand FX: 6 [A view up at the rafters.] narration: I never thought I'd be alone with Ayukawa like this... 7 [Kyousuke's eyes flash, and he reaches both hands out.] Kyousuke: (Just the two of us...!) --------------------------------------------------- p 197 (49) 1 [His face again takes on a slightly sinister look.] Kyousuke FX: 2 [Tight shot of his hand.] 3 [He clasps her by the sweater collar and...] sweater FX: ---------------------------------------------------