Kimagure Orange Road "The Fugitive of Love" Volume 8, Story 8 WB Volume 5, Story 6 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Craig H. Nishida Compilation by : Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Thomas Wyatt Jerry Lee Ka-Ping Yee Last revision : 07-17-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 113 (159) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 113 (159)--TITLE PAGE [Madoka stands in headband, shorts and Boston Red Sox jersey, and looks off to her left.] MAIN TITLE (at top) The Fugitive of Love SUB-TITLE (at bottom) The Pretty and Desired Girl Becomes Transparent Under a Shower of Burning Looks! --------------------------------------------------- p 114 (160) 1 [Exterior shot of ABCB. Overlaid partially on this is a portrait of Madoka.] 2 [Kyousuke sits with cheek in hand, and stares off, deep in thought.] narration: This is what happened today at lunchtime. 3 [This and the next 5 panels are double-bordered, denoting the flashback sequence. Here, Hikaru beams and presents him with a whopping box lunch.] narration: As usual, the familiar Hikaru-chan Box-Lunch Offensive... Hikaru: Here you are!! dramatic FX: Kyousuke: Wahhh!! 4 [She cheerfully feeds him.] Hikaru: Here. Say, "ahhhh." Kyousuke: (How embarrassing...) 5 [Looking about, Kyousuke sees his male classmates watching intently.] Kyousuke FX: 6 Kyousuke: Umm... Of course I'm delighted over the box-lunch, but, after all, this kind of thing is a little... Hikaru: [horrified, teary-eyed] It's not delicious? --------------------------------------------------- p 115 (161) 1 Kyousuke: [placatingly] No... It's nothing like that... Hikaru: [mad, teary-eyed] Just tell it to me straight--it doesn't taste good! 2 [She runs out of the classroom.] Hikaru: I hate it when you're unclear!! Kyousuke: Ah, Hikaru-chan. Hikaru FX: narration: Somehow, it seems I've done something awful... guy: Hey, you made her cry! 3 [Back to the present. Madoka smiles and looks at us.] Madoka: What's got you looking so spaced-out? No matter how close it might be to summer vacation... 4 [View shifts to show that he's still deep in his thoughts and doesn't realize she's talking.] Madoka: Say, if it's okay, would you... narration: But this is Hikaru-chan we're talking about, so I think she'll be perfectly fine by tomorrow and bringing me a box-lunch, but... 5 Kyousuke: Eh?! Did you say something? Madoka FX: 6 [She slams down a glass of water on the counter.] Madoka: What are you doing? Have you decided?! Madoka glass FX: Kyousuke: Y-yes. Ice coffee. --------------------------------------------------- p 116 (162) 1 [He walks home alone.] Kyousuke: Ahhhhh. 2 Kyousuke: (I even made Ayukawa angry.) Kyousuke FX: 3 [Elsewhere, a familiar scene. Kazuya and his chibi Madoka and Hikaru-clones encounter each other in the park.] Kyouko: Kazu-chan's playing with me!! chibi Madoka-clone: Ahh, yesterday you promised to play with me. 4 [Kazuya's pov of the two girls.] Kyouko: Me, right?! chibi Madoka-clone: It's me, isn't it?!! 5 [Wincing, Kazuya pokes his fingers in his ears.] Kazuya: What a pain... This is why I don't like little girls. girls FX: [off] 6 Kazuya: [running off] I'm not playing with either of you!! Kyouko: [glaring] Ahh! He's running away!! --------------------------------------------------- p 117 (163) 1 [An overhead view shows Kazuya running down the sidewalk. Approaching from the opposite direction is Kyousuke.] Kazuya footsteps FX: 2 Kyousuke: Kazuya! Kazuya and Kyousuke FX: Kazuya: Oniichan! 3 [Kazuya pauses to catch his breath.] Kazuya: 4 Kyousuke: What's the matter? You look depressed. 5 Kazuya: You, too... 6 Kazuya: Ahh, you have it so good, oniichan. You always get to be with those sexy oneechans. 7 Kyousuke: What are you saying? Kindergarten kids have the easy life... I'm jealous--I'd like to be a kid, too. --------------------------------------------------- p 118 (164) 1 Kyousuke and Kazuya: ! 2 [Both smile and point to their own faces.] Kyousuke and Kazuya: Why don't we trade places again? 3 [Both do double-takes.] 4 [They seal the agreement with a handclasp.] Kazuya: It's the first time we've had the same idea! handclasp FX: Kyousuke: That's unusual. 5 Kyousuke and Kazuya: Ready, set... 6 collision FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 119 (165) 1 @Kyousuke and @Kazuya: So, in that case... 2 @Kyousuke: (How stupid, oniichan. I bet you'll be tossed about by those two!) 3 @Kazuya: (He has no idea about the harsh life of a high school student... He'll soon regret doing this!) 4 [Exterior dusk shot of the Kasuga apartment building.] 5 [He eats like a demon.] @Kyousuke FX: 6 [The rest of the family watches him wide-eyed.] @Kyousuke: Seconds, please!! 7 [He lies on the floor and watches a video girl in her panties blow him a kiss.] @Kyousuke: (Just as I thought. It's so nice to be a high school student! No one gets angry even if I stay up till late...) book: Japan --------------------------------------------------- p 120 (166) 1 [Exterior night shot of Kazuya's home.] 2 @Kazuya: [tucked in bed] (It's so nice to be a kid... You aren't told to study, and life is easy.) @Kazuya FX: book 1: Visiting the West--an Account book 2: Momotarou--the Peach Boy* <*Commentary: A Japanese folk tale--An old, childless couple find a large peach drifting down a stream one day. They cut it open and find a boy, Momotaro, who they raise as their own. He grows up to be a renowned Oni (devil) fighter. Aided by his animal companions, he hunts down the oni (who had stolen all the wealth of the people years before). He returns the treasures to their rightful owners, and sees that his adoptive parents live comfortably thereafter. What does this have to do with KOR? Absolutely nothing... ^_^> 3 [Exterior shot of a school building.] narration: And the next day... 4 @Kyousuke: [wide-eyed] Delicious! 5 Hikaru: Really?! @Kyousuke: Delicious, delicious! 6 [@Kyousuke turns to look at 4 guys eating ramen or sandwiches.] guys FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 121 (167) 1 @Kyousuke: [wide grin] Yahhh, you guys are jealous, aren't you! 2 @Kyousuke: Having made such a delicious box lunch for me... I'm so lucky! How I look forward to it tomorrow as well. Hikaru: Hooray! 3 Hikaru: [blushing] (I'm so happy... What's up with Sempai today? He's so pleased with me...) 4 [A shot looking up the face of a school building.] --------------------------------------------------- p 122 (168) 1 [Full-length full-portrait of Madoka in school uniform. She looks to the left in search of someone.] 2 [She visualizes her behavior at ABCB the previous day.] narration: I wonder if I was a little too harsh yesterday... 3 Madoka: Oh! @Kyousuke: (Oh, it's oneechan.) 4 Madoka FX: 5 Madoka: [taking him by the wrist] Come here a sec. 6 [His pov of an apologetic-looking Madoka.] Madoka: I was nasty yesterday. I'm sorry. --------------------------------------------------- p 123 (169) 1 @Kyousuke: ? 2 Madoka: [gaze downcast] So... I want you to come to ABCB tonight at closing time. @Kyousuke: Eh? 3 [She looks up with a smile.] Madoka FX: 4 Madoka: Anyway, be there for sure, no matter what happens. I'll be waiting for you the whole time, so I... [She notices some guy watching them with curiousity.] Madoka: Ah! 5 Madoka: See ya! 6 @Kyousuke: (Somehow, this looks like it'll be fun!) (I'm glad I traded places after all!) @Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 124 (170) 1 [Walking down the sidewalk, @Kazuya turns to see the blonde tot come racing out of a building.] Kyouko: Kaaazu-chan, let's play! sign: [partial view] garten 2 [The brunette tot appears and pushes the blonde tot aside.] chibi Madoka-clone: Trying to steal a jump on me again! chibi Madoka-clone FX: 3 @Kazuya: Now, now... 4 [With a big smile, he hugs the two of them. Both are surprised out of their anger.] @Kazuya: I know! Then let's all three of us go somewhere nice. 5 [Exterior shot of ABCB.] 6 [The two girls smile and laugh in conversation.] girls: 7 Madoka: Is it really okay, Kazuya-kun? To put it on Kasuga-kun's tab... @Kazuya: [wincing] Sure it's okay. It's my money, after all. 8 Madoka: Huh?! narration: Oh no! I'm Kazuya now! --------------------------------------------------- p 125 (171) 1 Madoka: [merrily] All right. Then today, it's my treat! @Kazuya: Saved...! 2 narration: But... What's up with Ayukawa? A complete change from yesterday--she's in a great mood. 3 [@Kyousuke and Hikaru enter.] @Kyousuke: Hello... door FX: 4 [Their pov of Madoka, @Kazuya and Kyouko.] 5 [@Kyousuke catches sight of his two tot girlfriends and flinches. The two look up from drinking, puzzled.] @Kyousuke: Wah! @Kyousuke FX: 6 [View of the 3 children as they smile and chat and eat.] @Kazuya and girls FX: narration: It seems that I'm getting along just fine with these kids. 7 @Kyousuke: (What's this...? Oniichan's doing just fine...) --------------------------------------------------- p 126 (172) 1 Madoka: Okay, while I'm at it! May as well treat the entire lot of you. @Kyousuke: All right! 2 [@Kazuya pulls at his drink through a straw.] @Kazuya: (What's this...? He's doing just fine.) @Kazuya FX: 3 @Kazuya and @Kyousuke FX: 4 [While Hikaru walks away, @Kyousuke leans over past Kyouko--bumping the child --to whisper at Madoka.] @Kyousuke: Then, I'll come here again at closing time. How I'm looking forward to it. 5 [@Kyousuke and Hikaru leave.] @Kyousuke: See ya. 6 @Kyousuke: [flashing a "V"] Bye, Kazuya-kun! @Kyousuke FX: 7 @Kazuya FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 127 (173) 1 [Exterior night shot of Kazuya's house.] 2 [@Kazuya lies in bed, wide awake.] narration: What in the world was he promising her? 3 [He visualizes @Kyousuke and Madoka together at ABCB.] 4 narration: Shit! You're going overboard, Kazuya!! @Kazuya sit-up FX: 5 [He imagines @Kyousuke leaning in to kiss Madoka.] narration: If this keeps up, it'll turn outrageous!! 6 [@Kazuya tries to sneak out of his room, but is nabbed.] Kazuya's mom: Hey!! Where are you going at this hour of the night?! @Kazuya heartbeat FX: 7 [She takes him by the scruff of the neck and drags him back down the hall.] Kazuya's mom: Get to bed this instant!! This is no time for a kid to be up, is it. @Kazuya: (Damn...!!) @Kazuya heels FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 128 (174) 1 narration: O-one way or another, I have to slip out of here... door FX: 2 @Kazuya: (Ah! That's it! Despite the fact I'm in Kazuya's body, my Power remains the same!) 3 [Exterior night shot of ABCB.] door FX: 4 [Madoka looks up from her cleaning as @Kyousuke enters.] door FX: 5 @Kyousuke: [with a dark look] I wonder what the heck you have planned for me at this late hour... --------------------------------------------------- p 129 (175) 1 [Madoka portrait--a mysterious look.] 2 [She playfully touches a finger to the tip of his nose.] Madoka: As if you don't know... 3 Madoka: Finally, we can be alone. 4 @Kyousuke FX: 5 [Surprising him, she sets him down on a stool at the counter.] Madoka: I'm not letting you go home tonight... @Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 130 (176) 1 [Outside ABCB, @Kazuya rematerializes.] @Kazuya FX: 2 [He cups a hand to his ear.] @Kazuya: ? 3 @Kazuya: I hear something... 4 @Kyousuke: [off] Ehhh?! Do some more?! Madoka: [off] I said I'm not letting you go home tonight... [He jets out about a pint of blood.] @Kazuya nosebleed FX: 5 @Kazuya: [aghast] (C-can't be...!) 6 [He visualizes @Kyousuke and Madoka in an ardent embrace.] narration: A-am I too late...?! --------------------------------------------------- p 131 (177) 1 @Kazuya: [bursting in] Hey-y-y! Stop it!! door FX: 2 [@Kyousuke and Madoka look up from a textbook.] book: [partial view] Life Science Senior High School... book: [back] Publication 3 Madoka: [smiling] Oh, Kazuya-kun. @Kyousuke: Oniicha--I mean--Kazuya!! 4 @Kazuya: Eh?! 5 @Kyousuke: [approaching] Yeah, I'm saved. 6 [The guys exchange fives.] @Kyousuke: A kindergarten kid like me doesn't know how to study for a high school test! @Kazuya: St-study for a test?! @Kyousuke and @Kazuya hands FX: 7 @Kazuya: [relieved] (O-ohhhh!) --------------------------------------------------- p 132 (178) 1 @Kazuya: [wincing] (Th-that's right!! Final exams begin tomorrow!) This is no time to be laughing! @Kazuya FX: 2 [Smiling, @Kazuya turns and begins to walk back out.] @Kazuya: W-wait!! I think I'd prefer to remain a kindergarten kid for a while longer, after all. narration: Because there are no tests in kindergarten. @Kyousuke: No fair-r-r, oniichan. 3 @Kyousuke: But... Would it be okay to take your exams any way I please? Sure I don't understand, so maybe I'll just write gibberish. 4 @Kyousuke: [off] Then you'll have tests with failing marks! @Kazuya: [off] I-I understand! 5 collision FX: 6 narration: And so, we quickly returned to our own bodies, but... Kazuya: [exiting, waving] Then, do your best, oniichan. --------------------------------------------------- p 133 (179) 1 Madoka: [pointing in the book] So, which one's the answer? narration: Now that I finally had a night alone with Ayukawa... Kyousuke: [hand on chin] Hmmm. This one, I guess. No, wait. Maybe this one... 2 Kyousuke: [pointing] I see. It's this one!! Madoka: [smiling] Bingo!! narration: How pitiful it is to be studying so hard! 3 Madoka: That's basically it. Kyousuke: [smiling] Eh? 4 Madoka: The exam questions weren't the only... 5 [Kyousuke leans toward her expectantly, and she looks down at the book.] Madoka: Here. The next problem is? Kyousuke: Eh? narration: But... On the day when I can answer that difficult problem, then Ayukawa... 5 (inset) [As Kazuya slips into his house he hears...] Kazuya's mom: [off] I wonder where that kid's gone to...? Kazuya: Oh no! ---------------------------------------------------