Kimagure Orange Road "The Dangerous Beach!" Volume 8, Story 5 WB Volume 5, Story 3 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Craig H. Nishida Compilation by : Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Jerry Lee Thomas Wyatt Last revision : 07-17-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 49 (95) are only in the WBs! NOTE: The existent script by Patrick Yip is evidently done from an unauthorized Chinese translation. It contains many major and minor deviations from the Japanese and so was not used in preparation of this script. --------------------------------------------------- p 49 (95)--TITLE PAGE [Madoka--looking us straight in the eye--stands at the beach in roller skates, knee & elbow pads, and matching tanktop and bikini bottom. Moving to a beat she teasingly begins to lift up her tanktop.] MAIN TITLE (at top) The Dangerous Beach! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) The Shining, Summer-Tinged "C" Girl Gives Herself Up to a Naughty Rhythm. She Wants to Remove/Avoid* the Heartbreak...! <*Translation note: This is a pun--one that won't translate well into English. The verb used here is which means either "to remove" (as in remove one's shirt) or "to avoid/evade." So the double-meaning here is "to avoid heartbreak" and "to remove that heartbreak (i.e., her shirt)."> --------------------------------------------------- p 50 (96) 1 [Exterior night shot of the 2-room hotel bungalow.] Kyousuke: [off] ("St-stay here...") 2 [Hikaru lies on her side on the bed, facing away from Kyousuke, who now sits on the edge of the bed, looking back over his shoulder at her.] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 3 [Pov shifts to the ceiling.] narration: Wh-what does Hikaru-chan mean by that? 4 [Overlaid on panels 4 and 5, Kyousuke nervously ponders his choices. In panel 4, a small, evil-looking version of himself lurks over his head.] evil conscience: This is your chance. Do it!! Kyousuke: (Maybe Hikaru-chan... No. Or maybe not...) 5 [In the adjacent panel, another version of himself pleads its case.] good conscience: Don't do anything stupid!! 6 [Tight shot of Hikaru's hand reaching out for his.] Hikaru: Sempai... Hikaru hand FX: narration: At this rate, I-I'll... Really... --------------------------------------------------- p 51 (97) 1 [Night shot of the swimming pool.] Sukeda: [off] The Rules of Diving: Number 1... 2 [Sukeda stands behind Madoka and clasps her by the wrist. Komayama likewise has Akane by her wrist.] Sukeda: Don't enter the water when you're drunk!! Komayama: Second, you will obey what your teacher tells you without question!! Akane: L-let go of me-e-e!! --------------------------------------------------- p 52 (98) 1 Akane: You think it's all right for instructors to do stuff like this?!! 2 Komayama: All we're saying is that we'll give you diving lessons out of simple kindness. Sukeda: Yeah, that's right. But before entering the water, we should do some warm-up exercises!! 3 [Angrily, Madoka slaps Sukeda's hand away. But Sukeda catches her hand neatly in his own.] Madoka hand FX: 4 Sukeda: [leering] See? When you struggle you get even more tipsy. Madoka: --------------------------------------------------- p 53 (99) 1 Madoka: [angrily] Are you really instructors? 2 [Both display nervous, wide-eyed expressions.] Sukeda and Komayama: AH! 3 Akane: Come to think of it, I was told at the front desk at lunchtime to keep a careful eye out, because there have been numerous cases around this beach of molesting swimsuit thieves pretending to be instructors... 4 Komayama: [to Sukeda] H-hey... Akane: Ahh, just as I thought. You're bogus instructors, huh. 5 Sukeda: We've been found out--can't do anything about that!! Komayama: Who cares. Do it!! Akane: Stop it!! 6 Komayama: Shall we show you why we won't be caught so easily as that?! [He hurls Akane into the pool.] Komayama shove FX: Akane: KYAA! --------------------------------------------------- p 54 (100) 1 [Sukeda and Madoka briefly stop struggling to watch the action in the pool.] Sukeda: Because you can't breathe under water she won't be able to shout, so she can't cry out for help. Akane FX: [off] 2 [Komayama hops into the pool and walks towards the surfacing Akane.] Komayama: And even if she cries out at this late hour, no one will care! Komayama FX: Akane surfacing FX: 3 Akane: [flash thought] (I'm no match for a man's brute strength!! At least if I had Kyousuke's type of Power...) Akane: (But my Power...) 4 [Akane, back to Komayama, lights up her face. Komayama places his hand on her shoulder...] Akane: (That's it!!) Komayama: Hey! Face this way! 5 [...and turns her around. Akane uses her Power of illusion to appear as Komayama.] Komayama: Pretty face... Akane transformation FX: Akane FX: 6 [Komayama staggers back, clapping a hand over his mouth as though ready to puke. Akane takes the opportunity to climb out of the pool.] Komayama: N-not pretty!! Akane FX: 7 [Sukeda and Madoka continue to struggle.] Akane: Madoka-chan!! Sukeda: Damn...! Such a high-spirited neechan. --------------------------------------------------- p 55 (101) 1 Akane: (That's it! Change into a police officer...!) 2 [She transforms into a cute policewoman a la Nene Romanova...] Akane transformation FX: 3 [Shaking her head in dismay, she sheds that image.] Akane: No, no!! Akane transformation FX: 4 [She stands perplexed in a Playboy bunny costume.] Akane: Not this! 5 Akane: [dumbfounded] What does a police officer look like?! 6 Madoka: Akane-san, run!! Akane: What are you saying? I can't leave you behind!! --------------------------------------------------- p 56 (102) 1 Madoka: Get someone!! Go and call for help! 2 Akane: B-but... 3 Madoka: [wailing] I'M OKAY! HURRY!! 4 Akane: [racing off] O-okay!! Komayama: D-damn! 5 Akane: [flash thought] (The only guy to ask now... Is Kyousuke!!) 6 Komayama: O-oh no! She's gonna call others! Sukeda: Now that it's come to this, we can't afford to play around! Since we can't be sticking around here any longer... At least... --------------------------------------------------- p 57 (103) 1 Sukeda: We'll be taking this one for our collection. [Madoka blesses him with a deadly glare.] 2 Sukeda: A beautiful girl like this isn't found just anywhere. This is a bitchin' babe worthy of being our final trophy! 3 [Kyousuke blushes and stares wide-eyed at Hikaru off-panel.] Hikaru: [off] Come close... 4 [Evil conscience lands a solid right to the head of good conscience, sending it reeling.] evil conscience FX: evil conscience nametag: Desire good conscience nametag: Reason 5 Kyousuke: Hikaru-chan!! --------------------------------------------------- p 58 (104) 1 [Akane reaches the bungalow...] 2 [...and tries the door.] doorknob FX: Akane: Locked... "Do not disturb" perhaps? 3 [Hikaru still lies on her side on the bed, though her eyes are now closed. Kyousuke stands and leans over her.] Kyousuke: Huh? 4 [Bleary-eyed, he looks up to see Akane pounding on the window.] Akane pound-on-window FX: narration: Huh? It's Akane! 5 [Kyousuke smiles and waves.] Akane: [wincing] That idiot. He's still drunk. 6 [She transforms into Madoka.] Akane transformation FX: 7 Kyousuke: --------------------------------------------------- p 59 (105) 1 [He leaps back--away from Hikaru--in horror.] Kyousuke: Wahhh!! Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: I-I'm sorry! 2 [Akane--back in her true form--points behind her.] 3 Kyousuke: Hm? 4 [She transforms into Sukeda and points to her face.] Akane transformation FX: 5 narration: Ayukawa... Something's wrong?! 6 [Night shot of a table at poolside, and the starry sky.] Madoka: [off] AH! Madoka FX: [off] --------------------------------------------------- p 60 (106) 1 [Sukeda, sans shirt, walks through the water to the surfacing Madoka.] Madoka surfacing FX: 2 [He grabs her wrist and pulls.] Sukeda: Hey now, if you don't come over here, you'll drown. Sukeda FX: 3 [Tight shot of someone grabbing her wrist and raising it high.] Madoka arm FX: 4 [It's Komayama, who squats at poolside, holding up Madoka by her arms. She appears to have passed out.] Komoyama: Here! Madoka FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 61 (107) 1 [Madoka portrait--unconscious.] 2 Komayama: It looks like she fainted. Sukeda: That's convenient... 3 [Another Madoka portrait--still unconscious.] 4 Kyousuke: Wha-a-at?! Ayukawa's with those guys from this afternoon?! 5 Kyousuke: Why didn't you say so sooner?! Akane: (He sure talks... This guy...) 6 Akane: Anyway, hurry!! Kyousuke: [running off] I know!! --------------------------------------------------- p 62 (108) 1 [In mid-dematerialization he looks back at Akane and shouts...] Kyousuke: I'll go on ahead!! 2 [Madoka's pov--if she were awake--of Sukeda reaching out both hands towards her.] Sukeda: Rule number 3! Enter the water with as light clothing as possible. Sukeda: Your birthday suit is the best!! 3 [Sukeda takes hold of the front of her T-shirt.] Sukeda FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 63 (109) 1 [Kyousuke rematerializes a meter above Komayama's head. Sukeda pauses to look skyward. Komayama is oblivious.] Kyousuke FX: 2 [Kyousuke crashes down on Komayama's shoulders.] Kyousuke impact FX: Kyousuke and Komayama: WAH! 3 Kyousuke: (Oh, shit!! Did Ayukawa see me teleport?!) 4 [Madoka portrait--still unconscious.] 5 Kyousuke: [relieved] (That's good... She fainted.) 6 Kyousuke: [angrily] (N-not good! How dare they do this to Ayukawa!!) Sukeda: What's this? You. --------------------------------------------------- p 64 (110) 1 [Komayama topples forward, sending both Kyousuke and himself into the pool.] Kyousuke and Komayama: Ooops! 2 Kyousuke and Komayama: WAHHHH! Kyousuke and Komayama FX: 3 Komayama: [surfacing] Wh-what the hell are you doing? Sukeda: Finish him quickly!! 4 [Tight shot of a corner of the pool. The water churns.] Komayama and Sukeda FX: [off] Komayama: W-wait a sec!! 5 [Isolated shot of the poolside bar and some tables.] Komayama and Sukeda FX: [off] Sukeda: [off] Give up! 6 [Triumphantly, Komayama lifts something in his hand.] Komayama: G-got it!! Komayama FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 65 (111) 1 [Both hold up swimtrunks.] Komayama and Sukeda: Th-this is your pants! 2 [Blushing and grinning nervously, they point at one another.] Komayama and Sukeda: Pervert . Komayama and Sukeda FX: 3 [Both swimtrunks fly out of their hands.] swimtrunks FX: Komayama and Sukeda: WAHHH! 4 [Both turn to look up at Kyousuke, who stands heroicly and defiantly at poolside, carrying the still-unconscious Madoka in his arms.] Kyousuke: That's as far as you'll go! 5 [Face set in a grim mask, he crackles with the Power.] Kyousuke: (My Power tonight is a touch different!!) --------------------------------------------------- p 66 (112) 1 [Isolated view of the drain outlets for the swimming pool. Water gushes out.] water FX: sign: Danger--Drainage Outlet 2 [Sukeda and Komayama stand and cover their privates as the water quickly drains from the pool.] water FX: Komayama and Sukeda: Wah wah! 3 Sukeda: Th-the water's...!! Komayama: ...going away!! 4 [Still carrying Madoka, Kyousuke slowly walks away from the pool. The two swimtrunks float in the air beside him. The two punks are still in the pool, and shout at Kyousuke's retreating back.] Komayama and Sukeda: H-hey-y-y!! 5 [Akane leads a charging mob to the pool.] Akane: Over there!! men running FX: 6 [Akane stops, wide-eyed.] Akane: Huh?! --------------------------------------------------- p 67 (113) 1 [The two are found in an empty pool, covering up. Hotel guests, workers and a police officer stand and gawk. Akane, blushing, beats a hasty retreat.] Komayama: Ohhhhhh! D-don't look!! Sukeda: Go away! Shoo! Shoo! crowd FX: Akane: Hey, yuck! 2 [Kyousuke leans over Madoka, as she regains consciousness.] Kyousuke: Ayukawa! Ayukawa!! 3 [She reflexively scurries away.] Madoka: AH! Kyousuke: It's me. 4 [View pans back to show the two seated in a covered rest area.] Madoka: Kasuga-kun... Kyousuke: Everything's fine now!! 5 Madoka: [glaring] Those guys... 6 [Smiling, Kyousuke turns to watch the two led away by the officer, and followed by the crowd.] Kyousuke: As you can see...! crowd: Wha-a-at? Those two are hoods, huh?! I hear they're panty thieves. --------------------------------------------------- p 68 (114) 1 [Madoka turns back to Kyousuke with a soft smile.] 2 [He touches her hair, which is still done up in a ponytail.] Kyousuke: Your hair is wet. The nights get cold even in the southern lands... 3 Kyousuke: [getting up] Well, shall we go...? 4 [He pauses...] 5 [...because a lovely girl seems to have become attached to his arm.] Madoka: I'd like to stay here like this for a little while more. --------------------------------------------------- p 69 (115) 1 [She closes her eyes and rests her cheek against his arm.] Kyousuke: (Tonight is...) 2 Kyousuke: (...special!) 3 Akane: [bursting in] Oh, there you are!! Sorry, Kyousuke! For interrupting your "Do not disturb..." [The two quickly disengage with eyes grown large.] Kyousuke FX: Madoka FX: 4 Akane: Just a little bit longer with Hikaru-chan and... [Kyousuke clamps a hand over Akane's mouth.] Kyousuke: [wincing] You didn't see a thing! 5 [A view beyond the pool--to the ocean, the horizon and the starry sky. In triple insets, Madoka looks puzzled, Akane and Kyousuke smile at one another, and Hikaru lies asleep, hugging a pillow tightly.] Madoka: ? narration: Like so... For this night only... Right?! Hikaru: Darling... Hikaru FX: ---------------------------------------------------