Kimagure Orange Road "The Jealous Card" Volume 7, Story 5 WB Volume 4, Story 9 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Craig H. Nishida Compilation by : Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Thomas Wyatt Matthew Klippenstein Jordan Lampe Ka-Ping Yee Last revision : 07-03-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 179 (93) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 179 (93)--TITLE PAGE [Madoka, wearing a skirt and white blouse, stands on a stone walkway, with her hands in her skirt pockets. Trees along the side cast their shadows over her.] MAIN TITLE (at top) The Jealous Card SUB-TITLE (at bottom) Sunlight Filtering Down Through Leaves Flickers onto Stone Steps Shrouded in a Veil of Magic. It's As If I Can Almost Hear Wonderful Whisperings... --------------------------------------------------- p 180 (94) 1 [Shot of a boom box.] song on the radio: The sight of you from behind, on a far-off, distant day, tenderly revives me...! 2 [Manami's pov of Komatsu and Hatta, who sit and grin. Cherry blossom trees in bloom stretch their branches behind them. Komatsu extends a bottle of sake out to her.] Komatsu: Go on... T-toss one back! Hatta: Chug it! Chug it! 3 [She sits and holds her full glass and smiles.] Manami: Ha ha... 4 Kyousuke: [incensed] You jerks! What are you making my sisters drink?!! Hatta: Wah ha ha ha ha. Komatsu: Ohh, don't worry, don't worry. 5 [A shot looking over at the cherry blossom trees.] Komatsu: [off] But, despite going to all the trouble of marching out here, his is all the cherry blossoms there are? Furthermore, they're already starting to scatter! Hatta: [off] Do something about it, Kasuga! Make them bloom more wildly! --------------------------------------------------- p 181 (95) 1 Komatsu: Yeah, wildly. Kyousuke: [livid] Where do you think you are?!! 2 [Both guys point their arms at him. The view has panned back to show all five seated inside the Kasuga apartment, next to a sliding glass door, through which we can see the cherry blossom trees.] Komatsu and Hatta: Your place. Kyousuke: Hey... Would you not make my home a meeting place without telling me? narration: Having a flower-viewing at someone else's place... Sheesh... 3 Komatsu: [putting an arm around Kyousuke] A little thing like that... Forget it, forget it... I know. Why don't we play a game? A game! Kyousuke: [nervously] What is it? Trumps? 4 Komatsu: [finger to lips] NO! 5 Komatsu: [whispering to Kyousuke] For this day, I've prepared a delightful game so that we can rub up against the girls. I was up all last night designing this, oniisan. writing at bottom of page: Japan Music Copyright Association (issued from) Permit Number 9151824-101 --------------------------------------------------- p 182 (96) 1 Kyousuke: [rising] I'm not playing. I'd rather nap in my room. 2 [Kyousuke bumps into Komatsu, sending the pieces of paper flying.] Kyousuke/Komatsu FX: 3 cards FX: card: [top] Give either the person on the right or the left a kiss on the cheek. card: [bottom] Pinch the person on the left. 4 Kyousuke: W-wait a sec. What are those cards? Komatsu: [false smile] Ohh, nothing, nothing. 5 [Kyousuke turns at the sound of...] doorbell FX: Komatsu: There she is...! 6 [Hikaru, in her "St. Francis College" sweatshirt, stands at the open door. Incidentally, Hatta is wearing a "USC" shirt.] Hikaru: Hello. Kyousuke: Hikaru-chan. --------------------------------------------------- p 183 (97) 1 Komatsu: [elbowing Kyousuke] There. Now everything's square. You may thank me! I invited her because I couldn't let you feel lonely! Hikaru: [off] I hope I'm not intruding. 2 [Hikaru pushes in a reluctant Madoka. She's wearing a sweatshirt and overalls.] Hikaru: Oh, and here's Madoka-san, too. Go in, go in. 3 [Kyousuke facial portrait--surprise.] 4 [His pov of the 2 girls.] Hikaru: Komatsu-san said there was going to be flower-viewing, so I invited her. 5 [As Hikaru chats with Kurumi in the background, Madoka talks to Kyousuke.] Madoka: There's no refusing the Hikaru Express. Kyousuke: Ha ha ha. --------------------------------------------------- p 184 (98) 1 Hikaru: Whaaat?! A game?! 2 [She plops Kyousuke down to sit on the floor.] Hikaru: Sounds like fun! Sempai, let's play! 3 [Everyone gathers around.] Komatsu: The rules are simple. First of all, everyone sits in a circle. 4 Komatsu: [smiling] Ah, Manami-chan, Kurumi-chan, sit between us guys. 5 [Kyousuke looks across at Komatsu, who's failing to hide a sneaky grin.] Kyousuke: ? 6 Komatsu: [holding up some cards] Then I'll deal out these six cards that I prepared to everyone. 7 Komatsu: This is embarrassing. We've become one card short. Madoka: [matter-of-factly] I'll pass. --------------------------------------------------- p 185 (99) 1 Komatsu: When I've finished dealing, turn the card over and you'll each do what's written there. Hikaru: In other words, this is an idea you borrowed from the sprints at an athletic meet. 2 Komatsu: Then... After that. 3 [From behind, Madoka takes the cards from Komatsu.] Madoka: Well then, I'll deal for you. Madoka FX: 4 Komatsu: [wincing] (She ended up dealing.) 5 [A diagram of who sits where. In clockwise order, it's Manami, Komatsu, Kurumi, Hikaru, Kyousuke and Hatta.] caption: Special Diagram--Relative Positions 6 [Kurumi and Hikaru read their cards. Komatsu winces as he hears...] Hikaru: What's this? Give the second person on your right a pounding? Komatsu: 7 Hikaru: [leaning over--with a smile--to belt Komatsu] SORRY! Hikaru FX: [Komatsu is sent reeling.] --------------------------------------------------- p 186 (100) 1 [Manami and Kyousuke read their cards. Komatsu flinches as he hears...] Kyousuke: Give the person across from you an electric massage. Komatsu: Manami: Pinch the person on the left. 2 [Kyousuke grabs Komatsu by the legs and raises them high and apart. He then shoves his foot in Komatsu's crotch. Meanwhile, Manami pinches Komatsu on his cheek. Both Kasugas are highly amused.] Komatsu: Gyaaaaaaa! Manami: Sorry. Manami FX: 3 [Hatta gives Kyousuke a shoulder massage.] Hatta: Give the person on the right a shoulder rub. Hatta FX: Kyousuke: Ah, that feels good. 4 Komatsu: Give the 2nd person on the right a tickle! Hatta: Oo-wah. Ha-ha-ha. Komatsu FX: 5 Kurumi: [reading her card] Give either the person on the right or the left a kiss on the cheek... 6 [Kurumi's pov of Hikaru, Kyousuke, Madoka and Manami--who silently stare back at her.] --------------------------------------------------- p 187 (101) 1 [Kurumi weighs her options. On one side, Komatsu smiles and points at his cheek. On the other side, Hikaru looks back.] 2 [Kurumi makes the only possible choice.] Hikaru: [smiling, one eye closed] Oh! Kurumi:[eyes closed] This way's fine! 3 Komatsu: [wincing] (Despite the fact I'd thought of taking the trouble to stack the deck, my plans were foiled...!!) 4 Kyousuke: [burning with anger] (Th-that guy! I thought as much... Given half a chance, this lech tries to move in on my sisters.) 5 Kyousuke: [in horror] (Ah!! In that case, if Hikaru-chan or I draw that card next time...) 6 Hikaru: [deep in thought] (If I draw that card, Sempai's the one I'll...) 7 [Madoka watches.] --------------------------------------------------- p 188 (102) 1 [Kyousuke worries.] 2 Komatsu: [wincing] Then, shall we try it one more time? Komatsu: Shit. This time for sure. Komatsu cards FX: Hatta: Wait! 3 Hatta: L-let me cut that too! Hikaru: Me too! 4 Komatsu: [holding out the deck] Then sure, in that case, just everyone cut... 5 [Madoka deals out the cards.] 6 [Komatsu, Kurumi and Kyousuke hold their cards face down. Komatsu glares.] narration: And then, with everyone's thoughts mingling together inside... 7 [Hatta and Manami hold their cards.] narration: ...the fateful second round began! 8 [Hikaru smiles at the back of her card.] 9 [Madoka watches without expression.] --------------------------------------------------- p 189 (103) 1 [Isolated shot of the cherry blossoms.] narration: But... Komatsu: [off] It's mine...!! Hatta: [off] Oh no...! Komatsu: [off] Don't run away!! 2 [Komatsu belts Hatta on the cheek.] narration: The problematic kiss card... Komatsu FX: 3 [Hatta again massages Kyousuke's shoulders.] Hatta FX: Hatta cheek FX: Kyousuke: Ahh. 4 [Manami gets a kick out of her card.] Manami FX: Kyousuke: Ooo-ha-ha-ha. E-hee-hee-hee-hee. 5 narration: ...somehow, didn't quickly emerge! Kurumi: Give the person across from you an electric massage! Hatta: 6 [Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.] Hatta: [off] Gyaaaaaaa! --------------------------------------------------- p 190 (104) 1 narration: Then there only remained Hikaru-chan and me! [The two sit side-by-side, holding their cards face down.] 2 Hikaru: [radiant smile] Now, it's just Sempai and me left. Hikaru FX: narration: If Hikaru-chan drew the card she'll naturally head for me!! 3 Kyousuke: (For that matter...) narration: If I drew it, there's no way I'm gonna kiss Hatta... [Hatta studies a spot across the room.] 4 [Hikaru smiles and crawls towards Kyousuke.] Hikaru slip-close FX: Kyousuke FX: 5 Kyousuke: (I'm doomed to kiss her either way!!) 6 Hikaru: [tossing the card aside] This is already decided. 7 Kurumi: [picking up the card] Huh?! falling card FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 191 (105) 1 Kurumi: The writing on this says "Pinch the person on the left." 2 [Hikaru, her arms wrapped around the neck of Kyousuke, pauses. Both Hikaru's and Kyousuke's eyes grow large.] 3 Kyousuke: [looking at the back of his card] Then... narration: I-I'm...!! [Hikaru waits in wide-eyed anticipation.] 4 [His pov of Madoka, who stands with gaze down.] narration: It would be a little better if Hikaru-chan were to kiss me, but... 5 narration: For me to kiss Hikaru-chan in front of Ayukawa...! --------------------------------------------------- p 192 (106) 1 [He looks at his card.] Kyousuke: Huh? 2 Kyousuke: It's blank! everyone: EHHHH?! 3 Hikaru: [unhappily] Why-y-y?! Komatsu: [wincing] Who did it? Who switched the cards?! Just when it was getting interesting. 4 Kyousuke: (Anyway, it's saved me!) Kyousuke: 5 [Exterior night shot of ABCB.] narration: After that, Komatsu and the others cheered up and set out on a sightseeing trip to view the cherry blossoms at night. 6 [Inside, Kyousuke and Madoka sit at the counter. Madoka is in her ABCB apron.] Kyousuke: [staring at a card] But... It's strange. 7 Kyousuke: (Why did a blank card come out in place of that kiss card? If they WERE switched, who on earth...?) --------------------------------------------------- p 193 (107) 1 Madoka: [studying him] What are you looking at with such regret? 2 Madoka: Did you want to that much? KISS? Kyousuke pratfall FX: 3 [He zips over and yells in her face. She flinches, wide-eyed, and blushes.] Kyousuke: Th-that's not it! I merely wondered who switched it for the blank card...!! 4 [Isolated shot of the other 5 cards, which lie scattered face-up on the counter.] --------------------------------------------------- p 194 (108) 1 [His pov of her. She gives him a mysterious look.] Madoka: If... If that person was me, what would you do, Mr. Police Detective? 2 [Kyousuke's eyes grow large.] 3 Kyousuke: [seriously] Arrest you! 4 [She smiles.] 5 [Kyousuke thinks it over...] narration: A-Ayukawa...? N-no way! 6 Kyousuke: [embarrassed] .....I wish! 7 [She gives him another mysterious smile.] --------------------------------------------------- p 195 (109) 1 Madoka: [tossing her hair back] Arrest... And then what would you do? 2 [Overhead view looking down on the two. Kyousuke has regained his look of surprise.] 3 [His pov of her. Mysterious smile still intact.] 4 [He blushes and looks embarrassed.] Kyousuke: Th-then I'd... I'd punish you, as expected... crows-in-background FX: Kyousuke: What am I saying? 5 [She looks at him...] 6 Madoka: What would that punishment be? --------------------------------------------------- p 196 (110) 1 Kyousuke: Th-that would... 2 Madoka: [gazing into his eyes] Something like what was written on that paper back then? 3 [Kyousuke blushes deeply and his eyes grow wide.] 4 [She leans in closer.] Madoka FX: 5 Madoka FX: Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 197 (111) 1 Madoka: If that's the punishment, aren't there more effective spots? 2 [Kyousuke facial portrait--he stares back.] 3 Madoka: [leaning in REAL close] For example... 4 [They stare at each other in surprise when they hear...] Hikaru: [off] Good evening! door FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 198 (112) 1 [Overhead view. Somehow, Madoka is now behind the counter, washing dishes. Kyousuke is seated over at a table and he waves at the gang coming in.] Hikaru: Just as I thought, here you were...!! gang FX: 2 Komatsu: [holding a sprig of cherry blossoms] A gift! 3 Komatsu: [grinning] In a park in a neighboring city were late-blooming cherry blossoms in full flower, so... Here's one! Kyousuke: Hey hey hey! 4 Komatsu: [raising a bottle of sake] Well... To end it all, how about we get wild? Komatsu: 5 [Everyone parties in ABCB. Hikaru leans towards Kyousuke, who flinches back and sweats. Madoka watches over her shoulder from her position behind the counter.] group FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 199 (113) 1 [Madoka prepares to launch a paper airplane.] 2 [It lands point first on the top of Kyousuke's head.] paper airplane FX: 3 [Rubbing his head, he looks around the room.] Kyousuke FX: 4 [Having unfolded the airplane, he reads it.] Kyousuke: ? 5 paper: [partial view] Give either the person on the right or the left a kiss on the cheek... 6 [Exterior shot of ABCB. In double-insets, Kyousuke ponders and Madoka smiles merrily.] Kyousuke: Hmmmm? narration: Madam Criminal, what on earth did you intend to commit? --Police Detective ---------------------------------------------------