Kimagure Orange Road "The Forbidden Cheek Dance" Volume 7, Story 3 WB Volume 4, Story 7 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Hitoshi Doi, (20 June 1992) Additional translation by : Craig H. Nishida Compilation by : Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Matthew Klippenstein Thomas Wyatt Jordan Lampe Last revision : 06-30-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 136 (50) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 136 (50)--TITLE PAGE [Madoka sits in a chair and looks at us with a half-smile. Dressed casually, she has the strap of her bag looped over the top of her head. The bag sits on the chair, behind her.] MAIN TITLE (at top) The Forbidden Cheek Dance SUB-TITLE (at bottom) Even a Blue Secret Stuffed into a Stylish Bag Becomes Spring-Like. For Some Reason, I'm Boyish Today! --------------------------------------------------- p 137 (51) 1 [Exterior shot of downtown.] narration: It's spring! In a few days, I'll be a high school student... 2 [Kyousuke and Hikaru walk down the sidewalk together.] narration: Even the city, for some reason, is in high spirits lately! 3 [A girl smiles and hands out coupons to passers-by. Hikaru is handed one.] girl: It's a place that just opened recently. By all means, please come. 4 Hikaru: [reading the coupon] Wowww! A new disco? --------------------------------------------------- p 138 (52) 1 [View across the street at a storefront.] Hikaru: [off] Hey, hey. Disco Sid... Couples only admissions policy?! 2 coupon: DISCOTHE SID Discount Coupon Guys: 2500 yen ---> 2000 yen Gals: 1500 yen ---> 1000 yen Full of Absolutely Enjoyable Attractions for Couples!! Disco Sid 3 [Kyousuke has a coupon, too.] Kyousuke and Hikaru: [reading] You can become more and more intimate with your boyfriend/girlfriend--guaranteed... 4 Hikaru: Ohh, wonderful!! Kyousuke: "I-intimate..." 5 Hikaru: Let's go, Sempai. [Kyousuke flinches back.] 6 Hikaru: [smiling] ...is what I want to say, but I have to go shopping tonight with my mom. Kyousuke: [In relief, Kyousuke rests his hand *over the edge of the panel* as though it were the ledge of a window...] 7 Hikaru: [waving, running off] Let's be sure and go next time, 'kay? --------------------------------------------------- p 139 (53) 1 Kyousuke: [looking distractedly up at the sky] Hmm. Intimate, huh? 2 [On a disco floor, Kyousuke turns at the sound of...] Madoka: Kasuga-kun... 3 Madoka: [moving in close] We're adults now, right? 4 Madoka: [leaning in real close] C'mon, let's get intimate. Kyousuke: [nervous] Uh... 5 [Back to reality. Kyousuke is trying to embrace the air. Pedestrians turn their heads to look.] Kyousuke: Oh. Th-that sort of thing... 6 [Behind him, some girls comment.] girls: Oh no... That boy's a weirdo. What a pervert. Kyousuke: Ah! 7 [Looking up, he realizes he's standing outside an adult movie theater. Above the theater is a billboard and on that billboard is a topless girl, with the movie title kanji obscuring her breasts.] billboard: Must be 18 years or older. THE FORBIDDEN STUFFED ANIMAL sign: [vertical] France Theater sign: [horizontal] France... ticket office sign:Ticket Price Adults... Children... --------------------------------------------------- p 140 (54) 1 [Exterior shot of ABCB.] 2 [At the counter, Kyousuke enjoys a cup of coffee and cheerful conversation with Madoka, who works behind it.] 3 Master: [entering] I'm back. 4 [Master looks at Kyousuke, who looks back.] Master: ? 5 Master: Oh, you're back already? Kyousuke: I've been here for a while. 6 Master: [looking up at the ceiling] Huh? Then the guy who went into the disco with your sister a little while ago was... Kyousuke: DISCO?! --------------------------------------------------- p 141 (55) 1 Kyousuke: Ehh?! My sister went to a disco with a strange guy?! 2 Master: I'm pretty sure it was that new disco. You know, the one that only allows couples inside. 3 [Kyousuke thinks this over.] 4 Kyousuke: [reaching into a back pocket] Ah, it must be... Kyousuke pocket FX: 5 Kyousuke: [handing Master a coupon] This one... Master: Yeah, that's it. 6 [Madoka looks at him out of the corner of one eye--a no-nonsense look.] Madoka: Something like that... Why were you saving it like it was so important?! Kyousuke: [nervously] .......... Umm. Well... --------------------------------------------------- p 142 (56) 1 Madoka: [to Master] But... Only couples are allowed in, right? Master: [rubbing his chin] I remember seeing some guy beside her. 2 [Kyousuke's angrily imagines who it might be. The portraits of Komatsu and Hatta adorn this panel.] bell FX: 3 Kyousuke: Was it really my sister? Master: Yeah... What's-her-name, uhh, the one with the ponytail. 4 [Isolated shot of a table at ABCB.] Kyousuke: [off] That's Manami! Then what about Kurumi, the one with the long hair? Master: [off] I didn't see her... But maybe she went in earlier? 5 Kyousuke: [clenching a fist] Th-those jerks...! Komatsu: [entering, with Hatta] Ah, there he is. 6 Komatsu: [tears in his eyes] O-oniisan. [Kyousuke, visibly in a foul mood, whips his head around.] Kyousuke FX: 7 Kyousuke: [grabbing him by the collar] Bastar-r-rd! You have the bloody gall to... Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 143 (57) 1 Kyousuke: What...?! You saw her going into the disco with a strange guy?! 2 Kyousuke: [smiling] O-oh, so it wasn't you. Komatsu: [wincing] Don't feel so relieved! 3 Komatsu: [with sadness] So we tried to go inside, too... But we were refused because of the couples-only rule. 4 [Isolated shot of the sink of dirty dishes at ABCB.] Komatsu: [off] So... --------------------------------------------------- p 144 (58) 1 [Komatsu and Hatta stand at the door, and bow politely.] Komatsu: Then we leave the rest to you. Hatta: I'm hoping. I'm praying. 2 [Madoka, Master and Kyousuke watch then leave.] 3 [Madoka makes an idle comment that pops Kyousuke's eyes wide.] Madoka: So couples can go in... 4 Madoka: Master. Master: [grinning] Sure. Go ahead. 5 Madoka: [to Kyousuke] The place... Where is it? 6 Kyousuke: Th-thank you. 7 [Madoka portrait--soft smile.] Madoka FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 145 (59) 1 [Full-length portraits of Madoka--in a very nice dress--and Kyousuke. They walk towards us, and are partly overlaid on panel 2.] 2 [Exterior night shot of Disco Sid.] 3 [The same female employee that handed out coupons to Hikaru stands at the counter in the entryway. Madoka and Kyousuke file past, looking about.] girl: Welcome... 4 [She looks at Kyousuke, who looks back.] girl: Oh. 5 girl: Hmm! girl FX: Kyousuke: [embarrassed] Ah, hi. [Madoka looks back.] 6 girl: [cheerfully] You have a different girl from this afternoon, Mr. Playboy. [Kyousuke, blushing and cringing, swivels his head from girl to Madoka. Madoka eyes him like she's heard this all before...] Kyousuke: Ah! Wah, wah! --------------------------------------------------- p 146 (60) 1 [View of the dimly-lit dance floor.] 2 Madoka: Oo-ooh, amazing! This is much bigger than Moebius. 3 Kyousuke: If it's this big, it won't be easy to find her. 4 [Overhead view of Madoka and Kyousuke, who stand at the edge of the dance floor.] narration: That's it! This is just the sort of time when I should just see through things with the Power... 5 [Kyousuke's eyes glow with the Power, and his body crackles with light.] --------------------------------------------------- p 147 (61) 1 [Kyousuke's eyes bulge at the sight of a nude dancing guy.] music FX: 2 [He quickly averts his face, covering his mouth as though he is about to puke.] Kyousuke: Urrgh! narration: I-I don't want to see this!! 3 [View pans back to show he's now looking directly at Madoka. She stands in profile to him.] Kyousuke: Eh?! 4 [His eyes grow huge and he jumps back. Madoka, looking around the dance floor, has now turned to present her back towards him.] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 5 [The lights over the dance floor come on. Kyousuke has his hand clasped over his nose.] lights-on FX: 6 [Blood oozes over the top of that hand.] Madoka: You're so careless. You bumped into someone, didn't you? narration: Looking through things here would seem to be a bit impossible for me! Kyousuke: Yes... No. Sorta... A nose-bleed... --------------------------------------------------- p 148 (62) 1 [Kyousuke, Madoka and others turn at the sound of...] announcer: [off] Well, it's the start of game-time. Couples wishing to participate, please come to the stage! 2 [A view of the stage. Couples engage in a 2-person race involving an apple pressed between their faces.] 3 [The female employee from before smiles at them.] girl: Don't just watch. Why don't you join in? You make a nice couple. 4 Kyousuke: [embarrassed] "W-we make a nice couple..." 5 Madoka: Kasuga-kun. [He turns toward her.] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 6 Madoka: [smiling] We... 7 [Snapping out of it, she tows him by the hand across the dance floor.] Madoka: This isn't the time for that! Kyousuke: Y-yes... --------------------------------------------------- p 149 (63) 1 [Isolated shot of the overhead lights...] 2 [...which go off.] 3 [Madoka and Kyousuke look up in surprise.] narration: What?! What?! 4 Kyousuke: (Th-this music. C-could it be...) 5 [His pov of the other couples, dancing together.] Kyousuke: [off] (Cheek dance time!!) 6 Kyousuke: Ayukawa... [She looks at him with eyes grown large and cheeks flushed.] Madoka heartbeat FX: 7 [Staring into her eyes, he decisively pulls her towards him. She is very surprised.] Madoka FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 150 (64) 1 Madoka: [angrily] Hey. This is no time to be doing this sort of...! 2 Kyousuke: [finger to lips, with a wink] Shh...! 3 [Shot of their shoes as they cheek-dance.] Kyousuke: If we move around we'd bother the other couples. We'd attract attention... It would be easier to look for her like this. 4 Madoka: [eyes wide] Y... 5 [Her features melt into a soft smile, and she rests her head against his shoulder.] Madoka: Yeah, I guess so. --------------------------------------------------- p 151 (65) 1 [They cheek dance.] 2 [Flashback pic to chapter 1.4, "Cheek Sorrow"--Kyousuke's and Hikaru's cheek dance.] narration: Come to think of it, it was a year ago, with Hikaru-chan... 3 [Kyousuke looks down upon Madoka, who has her eyes closed.] narration: And now it's with Ayukawa... 4 [Kyousuke smiles up at the ceiling.] narration: Somehow... It's like a dream. 5 Kyousuke: [closing his eyes] I wish we could dance like this forever. [Madoka's eyes snap open.] --------------------------------------------------- p 152 (66) 1 [Both have their eyes open, but there's no eye contact.] 2 Madoka: [closing her eyes, with a smile] We can't... 3 [Kyousuke hears something and his eyes bulge.] FX: [off] Kyousuke: Wha?! 4 [He turns to look at a couple, dancing and kissing. Oh, the shock of it all! ^_^] 5 [He blushes.] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 6 [Overhead view looking down on Madoka and Kyousuke as they dance and look into each other's faces.] --------------------------------------------------- p 153 (67) 1 [His pov of Madoka. She looks up at him with a gentle smile.] 2 [And hugs him tight.] Madoka breasts FX: 3 [His view of her face, inviting a kiss.] narration: A... Ayukawa... 4 [Their lips approach...] 5 [...as Kyousuke steps on the foot of someone.] voice: OWWWW!! --------------------------------------------------- p 154 (68) 1 [It's Kurumi, in suit, bowtie and hat, dressed to look like a guy.] Kurumi: [pissed] Th-that hurt, you jerk!! Kyousuke: [embarrassed] I-I'm sorry. 2 [His pov of Kurumi and Manami--surprise!] 3 [Their view of him--shock!] 4 [Isolated shot of the bar.] sisters: [off] O-oniichan!! Kyousuke: [off] K-Kurumi! And Manami-i-i! 5 [Blushing, Kyousuke and Madoka rapidly disengage and try to look nonchalant.] Manami: How did you know we were here? Kyousuke and Madoka FX: 6 Kyousuke: [angrily] Never mind that. What in the world are you doing here?!! crows-in-background FX: 7 Manami: Kurumi got a flyer in the city... She said she wanted to come here at any cost, so we pretended to be a couple... [Kurumi doffs her hat, letting her tresses fall.] Kurumi: [gleefully] Because you can eat yummy food at a disco. Kyousuke: [livid] N-now just a minute! narration: Sheesh. What the heck are they thinking... --------------------------------------------------- p 155 (69) 1 Kurumi: [wide-eyed] But what are you doing here, oniichan? Kyousuke/Madoka heartbeat FX: 2 Kurumi: [thinking it over] If it's something that the two of you would do together... 3 [Kyousuke looks back nervously at Madoka, who doesn't look all that self- assured either.] Kyousuke: Th-that is... 4 Kurumi: Oh, that's it! Just as I thought, you came to eat the yummy food, too. Kyousuke pratfall FX: narration: Th-that was close... 5 [Exterior shot of Disco Sid. In separate insets, Madoka smiles and Kyousuke looks back at her.] Kyousuke: [off] Making me worry... Hey! Let's go home! ---------------------------------------------------