Kimagure Orange Road "The Angel's Temptation" Volume 7, Story 1 WB Volume 4, Story 5 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Hitoshi Doi (19 Jan 1992) Additional translation by : Scott Henry Compilation by : Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Scott Henry Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Andrew Wilson Thomas Wyatt Jordan Lampe Matthew Klippenstein Last revision : 06-29-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 93 (7) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 93 (7)--TITLE PAGE [Against the cloud-fleeced sky, Madoka stands in school uniform, facing our left. From behind her, a stiff breeze blows her hair and skirt, and she closes her eyes. Her right arm is behind her back, the hand clasping the elbow of her left arm.] MAIN TITLE The Angel's Temptation SUB-TITLE (at bottom) If You Experience the Gentle Feeling of a Dream Trailing Across a Blue Sky, Then Tomorrow, You'll Surely Become the Wind... --------------------------------------------------- p 94 (8) 1 [Madoka stands in full-length portrait, dressed in shorts and tight T-shirt. This is splashed over the right sides of panels 2-4.] 2 [Kyousuke sits up in bed.] 3 [Overhead view looking down at the bedroom scene. Madoka stands with her back to the closed door.] narration: A-Ayukawa! What do you mean "I-it's lonely sleeping by myself"? 4 [Kyousuke portrait--blushing, wide-eyed.] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: Kyousuke: (But this isn't a dream... This is real!) --------------------------------------------------- p 95 (9) 1 [Madoka facial portrait.] Madoka FX: 2 [Kyousuke facial portrait.] Kyousuke FX: 3 [Tight shot of her bare feet as she approaches his bed.] 4 [She kneels so that their eyes are on the same level, and she leans in close. Kyousuke sits and stares.] narration: A-Ayukawa...! --------------------------------------------------- p 96 (10) 1 [Isolated shot of a bottle of scotch. The label reads "Grand Gold Parr Aged 12 years DeLuxe Scotch Whisky."] 2 [She smiles and offers the bottle to Kyousuke.] Madoka: Why don't we drink together? 3 [She stands and looks back at him over her right shoulder.] Madoka: I ended up bringing this from home. Kyousuke: [forced smile, sweating] S-sure. 4 Kyousuke: [nervous & embarrassed] O-ohh... Madoka: [mystified] Huh? 5 [Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment.] Kyousuke: [off] No. Ha ha ha. N-never mind. It's nothing. Madoka: [off] Kampa-a-ai! narration: For a moment, I was rather worried about what might happen! --------------------------------------------------- p 97 (11) 1 [Madoka sits on his bed, knees pulled up, with a drink in her hand.] 2 [Kyousuke sips at his glass, watching her.] 3 Madoka: Say. 4 Madoka: [looking around at her surroundings] This is improper behavior, no matter how you look at it! Kyousuke FX: [It looks like his drink came out through his nose.] 5 [Face flushed, Madoka thrusts out the empty bottle at Kyousuke's face.] Madoka: Oh, there's none left. Get another! Kyousuke: Y-yes! --------------------------------------------------- p 98 (12) 1 [Kyousuke goes into the liquor cabinet.] cabinet door FX: 2 Kyousuke: [carrying a bottle] (Considering the way she is now, it seems like she's quite drunk...) (But is it all right for a junior high school girl to drink so much?) 3 [Kyousuke re-enters his bedroom...] door FX: 4 [...and looks around at an apparently empty room.] Kyousuke: Huh? 5 Kyousuke: [searching] Ayukawa. Ayukawa? 6 [From under the bedcovers a hand emerges, and reaches for Kyousuke's.] sheet FX: 7 FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 99 (13) 1 [View pans back to show a playful Madoka, pulling Kyousuke down onto the bed.] Kyousuke: Wah! Madoka FX: Madoka: Ah-ha-ha! 2 Madoka: [coquettishly, face flushed] Over here, over here. 3 Madoka: [looking into his eyes] Let's go to sleep! 4 [Madoka lies back smiling with her eyes closed. Kyousuke remains perched over her, staring down at her with face flushed and eyes wide.] Kyousuke: What! What!! Now... She certainly... --------------------------------------------------- p 100 (14) 1 [The telephone rings.] 2 [Kyousuke looks up.] narration: Who in the world could it be at this hour...? 3 [He lifts up the receiver.] Hikaru: [off] Sempai, it's me! Kyousuke FX: narration: H-Hikaru-chan?! 4 Hikaru: I'm sorry for calling so late at night. Were you in bed? narration: ...i-in bed? 5 Kyousuke: [shouting and blushing] N-no. No way was I in bed yet! Hikaru: [off] Huh? 6 [Looking around behind him, Kyousuke notices that Madoka is up and about.] Hikaru: [off] Oh, oh yeah, Sempai! Did you happen to see Madoka-san today?! Kyousuke heartbeat FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 101 (15) 1 Kyousuke: [looking directly at Madoka] N-no... Madoka FX: 2 Hikaru: Is that so... I wonder where the heck she went? 3 [He still eyes Madoka, who now has her attention on him.] Kyousuke: .......... narration: I wonder if something's the matter with Ayukawa? 4 [Tight shot of an open bottle of liquor, an empty glass on its side, and a partly-filled glass.] --------------------------------------------------- p 102 (16) 1 Kyousuke: She... Is something wrong? 2 Hikaru: No, it's nothing. Then, good ni... 3 [Someone puts a finger on the receiver button.] phone FX: 4 [View pans back to show Madoka standing with finger on the receiver button, staring bleary-eyed at Kyousuke. He stares back, wide-eyed.] 5 Hikaru: [staring at the phone] Oh? We were cut off. 6 Hikaru: Oh well! Never mind. Umm... Madoka-san's number... rotary phone FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 103 (17) 1 Hikaru: Hello, otoosama ? Madoka-san... She's nowhere after all... Hikaru: Yes. I wonder where on earth she is? 2 [An angry Madoka tosses her hair back.] 3 [He looks back, speechless with surprise.] 4 [Madoka leans back against the wall, arms crossed, glaring at him. Her face is flushed. He flinches back at her outburst...] Madoka: [this is one peeved girl!] LONG PHONE CALL, KYOUSUKE! --------------------------------------------------- p 104 (18) 1 [She sits on the floor, one knee up, the other foot pulled in. She rests an elbow on her knee and her cheek in that hand. She glares back at us.] Madoka: You don't care about me, do you! 2 Kyousuke: Wh-what are you saying... 3 narration: Even though Ayukawa is drunk tonight, still, there's something a bit strange about her. Somehow, she looks like she's become desperate... 4 [Kyousuke visualizes Hikaru, worried, on the phone.] Hikaru: [in flashback] I wonder where the heck she went? narration: It also seems that Hikaru-chan is looking for her... 5 [He looks at Madoka's two bags which sit on the sofa.] narration: And those bags... 6 [Kyousuke kneels on the floor in front of her.] Kyousuke: Err, what did you say when you left home? Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 105 (19) 1 [She waves a hand in dismissal.] Madoka: Good-bye! 2 [Kyousuke stares back.] narration: "Good-bye..." 3 Kyousuke: (Can't be. She ran away?!) 4 narration: Ah, speaking of runaways... 5 [Flashback view of Komatsu and Kyousuke eavesdropping in on Mr. and Mrs. Ayukawa's conversation.] narration: When I was in the coffee shop with Komatsu this afternoon... 6 [Flashback view of Mr. Ayukawa.] Mr. Ayukawa: I can't believe that she would run away from home. narration: That man was the world-famous musician that I saw in the newspaper... 7 [Flashback view of the newspaper article from chapter 3.7, "I Like Japan!"] narration: Ayukawa's father! newspaper: [partial view*] WORLD-RENOWNED VIO MR. AND MRS. AYUKAWA'S SUD EMIGRATE TO AMERICA?! <*Translation note (CN): The missing parts are denoted by <> and were taken from the more complete view of the newspaper in chapter 3.7, p 138, panel 5.> --------------------------------------------------- p 106 (20) 1 narration: Then she... 2 [His pov of Madoka.] narration: Ran away from home after all! 3 Kyousuke: [in realization] (But wait.) narration: [flashback to an overheard line] I won't say anything more-- I just want her back home. narration: That's right! Ayukawa still doesn't know that her father gave up on that... 4 [He closes his eyes, having come to a decision.] narration: Okay. Here's a great chance for me to be a man and act cool! 5 [They are still sitting and facing each other.] Kyousuke: [sternly] Ayukawa... Tonight... You're going home now! [Madoka looks back in surprise.] --------------------------------------------------- p 107 (21) 1 Kyousuke: It's not good to run away from home... 2 [She looks back with a hurt look...] 3 [...and averts her face in disdain.] Madoka: Is that so! 4 Madoka: [getting up to leave] If I'm too much trouble, I'll... ...go somewhere else! 5 Kyousuke: [grabbing her wrist] Wait!! 6 Kyousuke: [holding her as she tries to leave] Don't lose hope. I'm sure your folks are worried about you. Madoka: Thanks for everything! --------------------------------------------------- p 108 (22) 1 Kyousuke: Anyway, listen! 2 [She glares back at him.] Kyousuke: [off] I know what you're... 3 [Angrily, she turns to leave, but he still has her by the wrist.] Madoka: Leave me alone! 4 [He pulls back on her, sending her flying back at him.] Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: I can't leave you alone!! 5 [She slams into his chest.] --------------------------------------------------- p 109 (23) 1 Kyousuke and Madoka FX: 2 [His pov, peering down at Madoka's cleavage.] 3 Kyousuke heartbeat FX: crows-in-the-background FX: 4 [The two cling very close. Kyousuke blushes and stares... Down. Madoka calmly looks back.] Kyousuke: S-so... Um... I... Madoka: What are you staring at while talking? 5 Kyousuke: S-sorry! [They leap apart. Madoka puts her arms across her chest.] Kyousuke FX: 6 Kyousuke: [embarrassed] So... What was I saying? Madoka: 7 Madoka: --------------------------------------------------- p 110 (24) 1 Kyousuke: IT'S ALL RIGHT! 2 Kyousuke: I don't know what sort of reasons you had... But if you go home, all your problems will have been solved! 3 [Overhead view looking down as Madoka looks away and thinks it over.] 4 [His pov as she turns back toward him.] Madoka: Okay. I understand! 5 Madoka: [smiling] If you absolutely say so, Kasuga-kun... 6 [Her pov of him. He looks back at her with a soft smile.] --------------------------------------------------- p 111 (25) 1 Madoka: [a little defensively] Besides... If I stay overnight, I don't know what you'd do... [Kyousuke blushes...] 2 [Isolated shot of a chair at the kitchen table.] Madoka: [off] Oh, let me use the phone for a sec... 3 [Kyousuke winces and watches as she makes a call.] Madoka: Oh, hello. It's me. I'm coming home now. Kyousuke: (Am I such an untrustworthy guy...?) 4 [Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.] Kyousuke: [off] Ah, shall I walk you home? 5 [Standing in a playground, Madoka smiles and silently shakes her head.] 6 Madoka: Good night. 7 Kyousuke: Good night. --------------------------------------------------- p 112 (26) 1 [He watches as she walks away, down the street.] car FX: 2 [Kyousuke returns to the apartment, and stands at the entryway.] narration: But I feel like I missed out on something good... door FX: 3 door/lock FX: narration: Eh?! 4 [His sisters come in.] Manami: We're home! door FX: Kurumi: Oh, you're still awake? 5 Takashi: Our plans changed, and we arrived one day early. narration: Th-that was close! 6 [Exterior night shot of the Ayukawa residence.] 7 [Madoka looks into her room, her eyes widening in surprise.] --------------------------------------------------- p 113 (27) 1 [On her mirror is another message in rouge.] message: Welcome home. I concede! --Father 2 Madoka: (Thank you, Father.) 3 [Looking out her window, Madoka thinks of Kyousuke, his portrait overlaid on the starry sky.] Madoka: (And...) 3 [inset] [Kyousuke winces as his sisters yell at him.] Manami: Oniichan, you slept in my bed! Kurumi: Using my bath towel! You perver-r-rt. Takashi: [off] Heyyy! Kyousuke, my whisky! --------------------------------------------------- p ** (28) <**This is not present in the wideban, though this drawing is a part of the chapter, so wideban readers can see it anyway...> kimagure photograph [Same picture as page 104 (18), panel 1. Madoka sits on the floor with a kind of a peeved look, her left leg folded flat, with her left hand resting on her left ankle. Her head is resting on her right hand and her right elbow is supported by her raised right knee.] ---------------------------------------------------