Kimagure Orange Road "The Girls' Day Temptation" Volume 6, Story 7 WB Volume 4, Story 2 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Craig H. Nishida Compilation by : Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Jordan Lampe Thomas Wyatt Last revision : 04-11-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 29 (139) are only in the WB's! --------------------------------------------------- p 29 (139)--TITLE PAGE [Madoka and Hikaru make a pair of very lovely Girls' Day dolls as they sit in formal wear. In front of them, Kyousuke, in a kimono, topples over, apparently drunk. Madoka looks on in surprise. Hikaru beams.] MAIN TITLE (at top) The Girls' Day Temptation SUB-TITLE (at bottom) The Dairi-sama* of Indecisiveness. Beware of Getting Drunk on the Sweet Sake! <*Translation note: The is the festival doll representing the emperor.> --------------------------------------------------- p 30 (140) 1 [A view of a wrestling ring--it's ladies pro wrestling. One girl arches her back to hurl her opponent up-and-over to the mat behind her.] 2 [Kyousuke and Kurumi cheer the action. Kyousuke is jubilant while Kurumi is steamed.] Kyousuke: There! Atomic Gals, go-o-o!! Kurumi: Arrrrgggggghhhh... 3 TV: Ohh! It's the Flash Gals' Counterattack... The Hijacking Piledriver!! Kurumi: Yaaayyy! Kyousuke: [wincing] Ahh-hh-hh... TV: Well, in one fell swoop, the Flash Gals have dropped them into a fall! Ohh! All of a sudden, the Evil Alliance has staged a raid here!! 4 [Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.] TV: [off] One. Two. Three! 5 TV: The Flash Gals, while being distracted by the Evil Alliance, were caught in the Atomic Gals' Roaring-Clutch Hold!! Kyousuke: [pumping a fist] Victoryyy! Kurumi: [up in arms] No faiirrr! Kurumi FX: 6 Kurumi: This referee's part of a plot. I'm pissed... [Kurumi shoves her brother aside. Kyousuke goes flying off-panel.] Kurumi shove FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 31 (141) 1 Kyousuke: [angered] It was a clean 3-count. [And he slings Kurumi across the room.] Kyousuke toss-sister FX: 2 Kurumi: [on bullhorn, raising a fist in challenge] Th-that does it!! [Kyousuke uses both hands to invite Kurumi on.] Kyousuke: Come on! 3 [Manami pauses in her cleaning...] fight FX: [off] 4 Manami: [to Kyousuke, who turns] Quiet! 5 Kurumi flying-kick FX: Kurumi: An opening! [And she connects to the back of Kyousuke's neck. He goes down like a side of beef.] 6 [Kurumi leaps on Kyousuke's chest, pinning him to the floor. He's in no condition to resist. Manami goes to her knees to count him out.] Manami pounding-floor FX: Manami: One. Two. Three! 7 [Manami raises the jubilant Kurumi's arm in victory.] Kurumi: That's it! Kyousuke: [grabbing the back of his neck] Ow-ow-ow-ouch... --------------------------------------------------- p 32 (142) 1 [Exterior shot of the Hiyama residence.] narration: Today dawns, the 3rd of March... sign: Hiyama 2 [Isolated shot of a Girls' Day doll.] 3 [View pans back to show many such dolls on a multi-level display stand.] narration: It's Girls' Day! 4 Hikaru: [offering sweet sake] For you, kind Sir. 5 Kyousuke: [rubbing the back of his neck] Th-thanks. Ow-ouch... 6 Hikaru: Is your neck troubling you? Kyousuke: Yeah... A little... , and --were spoken with a high degree of politeness, which isn't always apparent in the English translation.> 7 [Kyousuke aims a dark look at Kurumi.] Kyousuke: Seems like a bone or muscle is out of whack... Kurumi stick-out-tongue FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 33 (143) 1 [The 3 Kasuga sibs sit in a row in front of the display of dolls as Hikaru serves them sweet sake. The girls smile cheerfully.] narration: I was invited by Hikaru-chan, and brought along my sisters over to her place for a Girls' Day celebration! 2 Kyousuke: [looking at the dolls] (How nice... Girls' Day, with girl-like grace...) 3 Kyousuke: [looking at his sisters] (Because we've done nothing but move up until last year, my sisters haven't been able to celebrate this day.) 4 Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: [smiling] (Surrounded by girls, and I can drink sweet sake, too... This is Heaven! Heaven!) 5 Komatsu: [popping up] HI! 6 Kyousuke: (No matter where you are, this guy comes crawling out like a cockroach.) --------------------------------------------------- p 34 (144) 1 [He sips from his cup, watching the three girls talk.] narration: Now if Ayukawa was here, it would be perfect... 2 narration: But she's got ABCB! I wonder if she's not coming after all? 3 Manami: Oniichan, if you drink too much, you'll get drunk! [He slugs down another cup.] Kyousuke FX: 4 Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: [face flushed] Well, I'll have another. 5 [He tries to reach for the pot of sweet sake next to Hikaru...] Kyousuke: Oops, can't... Reach. narration: All right. With the Power... Come! Come here, sweet sake! 6 [Looking up, Kyousuke realizes he can see through Hikaru's clothes... His eyes goggle.] Kyousuke hearbeat FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 35 (145) 1 Kyousuke: [babbling in shock] B-bare bare. [The girls all turn to stare at him.] Hikaru: ? 2 narration: Str-strange... How is it I could see through her clothes? Kurumi: He's gotten fairly drunk. Sheesh. 3 [Later, they play "Old Maid".] 4 [Kyousuke draws a card from Hikaru's hand.] 5 narration: Because today is Girls' Day, this time I'll let Hikaru-chan win. 6 narration: All I have to do is see through her cards and draw the Old Maid. 7 [With Hikaru looking off to the side, Kyousuke abruptly disappears.] Kyousuke teleport FX: Manami: Ah! 8 Hikaru: [looking about] Huh? Sempai... Manami: [wiping her brow] (That drunk...) [Kurumi is wide-eyed. Komatsu's complete attention is on the twins.] --------------------------------------------------- p 36 (146) 1 [View of a hallway.] 2 Kyousuke teleport FX: 3 [He finds himself in a bedroom.] Kyousuke: ? 4 Kyousuke: Huh? I teleported! 5 [View of a stereo deck.] Kyousuke: [off] Hmmm. This room...? 6 [Hikaru walks down the hallway...] Hikaru: (Strange... Sempai. Where did he go?) 7 [...and opens the door.] door FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 37 (147) 1 Hikaru: [brightly] Sempai! 2 Kyousuke: [embarrassed smile] Ah! Excuse me! This is... Your room? 3 Hikaru FX: 4 [With a knowing look, she shuts the door behind her.] door FX: 5 Hikaru: Ohhh. So this is what it was. 6 Hikaru: [putting her hands around his neck] You secretly slipped away, and waited for me to come... Great! Kyousuke: HUH?! --------------------------------------------------- p 38 (148) 1 Kyousuke: Ow-ow-ow-ouch... My neck... Ahhh. Hikaru: [letting go] Oh, sorry. 2 [She nestles contentedly against his shoulder.] Hikaru FX: 3 [She closes her eyes, inviting a kiss.] narration: Perhaps it's because I'm drunk, but Hikaru-chan looks a lot cuter! 4 narration: The two of us, alone in her room. 5 [She tilts her chin up as Kyousuke stares hard at her...] Kyousuke FX: narration: Th... This is... 6 Madoka: [off] Excuse me. --------------------------------------------------- p 39 (149) 1 [Full-length portrait of Madoka in sweatshirt and long skirt.] Manami: [off] Ayukawa-sempai. 2 Madoka: Huh? Where's Hikaru? Manami: Uhh... 3 Madoka: Kasuga-kun vanished? 4 [Hikaru turns, smiling, at the sound of...] door FX: Hikaru: Ye-e-es. 5 door opening FX: [Madoka and Manami enter, eyes grown large at what they see.] --------------------------------------------------- p 40 (150) 1 [Hikaru is still clinging close to Kyousuke.] Komatsu: [sticking his head in] Whooaaa. So brazen! 2 [They return to the living room. Hikaru sits at Kyousuke's side as they all eat and chat.] Kurumi: [to Komatsu] Huh? Reallyyy? Hikaru: [to Kyousuke] And then, it was... 3 Komatsu: [grinning] Hot as usual. You lucky guy! Hikaru: [pouring him more sake] Go on, gulp it down. 4 [Kyousuke portrait--he is sloshed.] Kyousuke FX: 5 [His pov of Madoka, who pointedly ignores him.] Madoka primness FX: 6 narration: She certainly didn't need to enter that room... Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 41 (151) 1 [Komatsu and Hikaru are quite impressed as Kyousuke tosses another one back.] Kyousuke FX: 2 Komatsu: [pouring him another] What fine drinking . Here, have another. pouring FX: 3 narration: Ahh... It doesn't matter now! Kyousuke drinking FX: 4 [Kyousuke falls on his back, stone drunk.] Hikaru: Sempaaai! Kyousuke FX: 5 [Isolated shot of the display of dolls.] --------------------------------------------------- p 42 (152) 1 [Exterior night shot of the Hiyama residence.] 2 [Kyousuke lies asleep, tucked into Hikaru's bed.] 3 Kyousuke: Hmm? 4 Kyousuke: Huh... Is this Hikaru-chan's room? 5 [Downstairs, Manami chats with Madoka as Hikaru, Kurumi and Komatsu play cards.] 6 Kurumi: I'm thirsty. 7 Madoka: [getting up] Shall I make some coffee? Hikaru: [smiling, with cards in her hand] Sorry. --------------------------------------------------- p 43 (153) 1 [Madoka walks down the hall.] 2 [Passing a door, she looks at the knob.] 3 [Inside, Kyousuke reaches for the door.] Kyousuke: (Ahh. My head is still spinning.) 4 [Tight shot of Madoka's hand grasping the door knob.] 5 [Kyousuke yanks the door open, sending Madoka flying into the room. Both are surprised.] door FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 44 (154) 1 [Kyousuke moves to catch her, and ends up grabbing a breast.] Madoka: Kya!! 2 Kyousuke hand FX: 3 [Horrified, he leaps back, yanking the offending hand back with his other hand. Madoka blushes and crosses her arms over her chest.] Kyousuke leap-away FX: 4 [As Madoka stands there silently, Kyousuke searches about. He sees the open door.] narration: B-better run! I'll t-teleport! 5 [Instead, the door slams shut.] door FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 45 (155) 1 narration: H-huh? I'm sure I tried to teleport... 2 [Madoka's eyes grow wide with nervousness.] 3 Kyousuke: I-I... Didn't mean this. narration: The Power is acting in a strange way! 4 [She backs away from this madman...] Madoka FX: 5 narration: I-if I don't somehow come up with a good excuse, I'm ruined! Kyousuke: I-it's a misunderstanding. 6 Kyousuke: The reason I touched your breast is... [His face goes all goofy.] 7 [Madoka doesn't like this expression at all. She continues to back away, her arms still crossed over her chest.] Kyousuke: Ah! --------------------------------------------------- p 46 (156) 1 [She backs into the bed and topples over.] Madoka: Ah! 2 Madoka fall FX: [off] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 3 [His pov of the lovely maiden. Her eyes are wide with fear, and her skirt has ridden up, showing her legs and a bit of her panty.] 4 Kyousuke: [racing forward] Ah! Are you all right?! Kyousuke FX: 5 [His knee hits the side of the bed.] --------------------------------------------------- p 47 (157) 1 [He falls...] 2 [Madoka winces, prepared for the impact...] 3 [...as Kyousuke's chin hits the side of the bed.] Kyousuke: Yelp. Kyousuke chin FX: 4 [He looks up at her from the edge of the bed...] Kyousuke: .......... 5 [...and his face crashes to the floor.] Kyousuke chin FX: 6 Madoka: --------------------------------------------------- p 48 (158) 1 [Night shot of a dimly-lit street.] 2 [Kyousuke, rubbing his neck, walks home with his sisters.] Kyousuke: Huh?! 3 Kyousuke: My neck, which felt out of whack, is back to normal again! 4 narration: Out of... Out of whack?! Kyousuke: Oh! That's it!! 5 diagram: 1. When I tried to get the sweet sake... 2. I saw through things! 3. When I tried to see through the cards... 4. I teleported! 5. When I tried to teleport... 6. The door closed! door FX: 6 [View down the dark street.] Kyousuke: [off] Was it because of my neck that my Power was out of whack...? But... Why did it return to normal? 7 Kyousuke: (As I recall... Getting drunk, falling asleep...) --------------------------------------------------- p 49 (159) 1 narration: Aaahh!! Th-that-s it! [He visualizes grabbing Madoka's breast, her look of nervousness, his view of her as she lay back on the bed...] 2 narration: Th-that terrible thing did it! 3 Kyousuke: [nervously] Umm... Didn't Ayukawa say anything? Manami: [thinking about it] Oh, now I remember. I don't know what to make of it, but... [Kurumi smiles merrily.] 4 narration: March 3rd, Girls' Day... Today was just a mess, but... Manami: She said, "You're the pits"! [The sisters turn to walk away. Kurumi stifles a laugh. Kyousuke has done a pratfall.] narration: It was quite pleasant being surrounded by girls for a whole day... I wonder...? --Kyousuke ---------------------------------------------------