Kimagure Orange Road "A Premonition Dream, One More Time!" Volume 5, Story 4 WB Volume 3, Story 6 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Albert Nakano (proofed by Hitoshi Doi) Additional translation by : Craig H. Nishida Compilation by : Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Matthew Klippenstein Leo Hourvitz Ramon Galindo Jordan Lampe Last revision : 02-07-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis() NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 115 (71) are only in the WBs! --------------------------------------------------- p 115 (71)--TITLE PAGE [Hikaru smiles in full-portrait. She stands, one leg crossed over in front of the other, in shirt, tie, slacks and suspenders. Holding it by the cuffs, she drapes a jacket behind her.] MAIN TITLE (at top) A Premonition Dream, One More Time! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) Being with Friends Is Boring. Just Hanging Out Will Make Me Go Bad. Take Me as I Am...! --------------------------------------------------- p 116 (72) [Pages 116-117 are black-bordered, denoting a dream.] 1 [Kyousuke, wide-eyed, is kissed on his cheek by Hikaru.] 2 [Closeup of Kyousuke, in anguish.] Kyousuke: DON'T DI-I-IE! HIKARU-CHAN!! 3 [Overhead shot of the two sitting on a spot-lit park bench. Kyousuke embraces Hikaru.] Kyousuke: I've finally realized. --------------------------------------------------- p 117 (73) 1 Kyousuke: Hikaru-chan, I can't go on living without you! 2 Hikaru: S-Sempai, I can't go on... 3 Hikaru: Sayonara, Sempai. It was fun... [Hikaru faints in his arms.] Hikaru FX: 4 Kyousuke: [shaking her] H-hikaru-chan! Hikaru-chan! --------------------------------------------------- p 118 (74) 1 [Kyousuke springs upright in bed.] Kyousuke: Hikaru-chan! Kyousuke sitting-up FX: Kyousuke: Hika... 2 [He sits there in bed.] 3 Kyousuke FX: 4 [He spies his sisters in their pajamas, pillows in hand. They are not amused...] Manami & Kurumi FX: 5 [Kyousuke is leveled by the pair of down-filled projectiles.] Kurumi: [off] IDIOT! What time do you think it is?! Manami: [off] Shut up! narration: Once again... pillows FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 119 (75) 1 [Daylight, and Kyousuke walks to school.] narration: ...a precognitive dream! Kyousuke: (This time it's Hikaru-chan...) 2 [He visualizes pieces of his dream in panels 2-4.] Kyousuke: [off] (But, this one had a lot of scenes... What does it mean?) narration: First, I was kissed on the cheek by Hikaru-chan... 3 Kyousuke: (Hold on. After that... I was saying something.) 4 Kyousuke: (Then finally...) Hikaru: [dream] Sayonara, Sempai. It was fun... Hikaru FX: 5 [Kyousuke portrait--wide-eyed contemplation.] 6 [View down the street.] narration: What if... Something bad has happened to Hikaru-chan, like a terminal illness, or an accident, or something... 7 [He visualizes an effervescent Hikaru-chan.] narration: B-but that couldn't happen... Not to someone who is the picture of health... --------------------------------------------------- p 120 (76) 1 [Kyousuke walks down the hallway outside classroom 1-B.] narration: Still, I couldn't help but worry, and casually passed by her classroom... 2 narration: But Hikaru-chan was not to be seen. 3 [Seated at his desk, he watches Madoka walk by.] Madoka FX: 4 [Turning to watch her head for the classroom door, he gets up to follow.] Kyousuke: (I can't tell Ayukawa about this morning's dream, but for now, I could just ask her.) Kyousuke FX: 5 Kyousuke: Ayu... --------------------------------------------------- p 121 (77) 1 Madoka: Oh, Yuu-kun. 2 [Kyousuke executes an about-face.] Kyousuke FX: Yuusaku: [blushing] Madoka-san, could I bother you for a minute? 3 [Kyousuke kneels to the side and holds a wastebasket partly over his head.] narration: I don't like him! 4 Yuusaku: Today, Hikaru-chan... [In the overhead view we see that Komatsu is about to toss a ball across the classroom.] class FX: 5 Kyousuke: (How noisy. I can't hear.) [Komatsu and Hatta spot Kyousuke under the wastebasket.] Hatta: Hey, Kasuga is doing something weird. class FX: 6 [Kyousuke flashes with the Power.] narration: Okay, I'll use the Power... --------------------------------------------------- p 122 (78) 1 Kyousuke: [focusing with the Power] ! 2 Madoka: Hikaru is absent and resting at home today. Yuusaku: Is something wrong? 3 Komatsu: [grinning] What are you doing? Playing hide and seek at your age? Kyousuke: Shhh! Shhh! 4 Madoka: [shrugging] It's the usual. It's not a bad cold but if she came today, she might be called on to demonstrate her homework and... 5 [Kyousuke, having been interrupted, missed hearing what Madoka said in panel 4. Here, he refocuses his Power.] 6 Madoka: ...that might be dangerous. 7 [Kyousuke's pov of the class, teacher and blackboard.] 8 narration: Resting at home?! Dangerous?! Then, that really was... --------------------------------------------------- p 123 (79) 1 [Wild-eyed, he leaps to his feet...] Kyousuke FX: narration: ...a precognitive dream! 2 [...and races out the door. The entire class turns to watch with surprise.] Kyousuke FX: 3 [Madoka turns and watches in shock.] 4 [Yuusaku looks out his classroom window to see Kyousuke running across the schoolyard.] Kyousuke FX: 5 narration: What's he doing? 6 [View of a sidewalk and pedestrian overpass.] --------------------------------------------------- p 124 (80) 1 [Exterior shot of the Hiyama residence.] 2 [Hikaru lies sprawled on her bedroom floor reading manga and eating cookies. Her stereo plays.] Hikaru: [merrily] (Now if only Darling would come visit me, it would be awesome!) Hikaru FX: stereo speaker FX: book 1: Chopin Pocket Guide book 2: manga: Margaret 3 door FX: 4 Mrs. Hiyama: [entering] Did you have a fever? Hikaru: [suddenly lying in bed] Well, k-kind of... door FX: 5 Mrs. Hiyama: Is it really a cold? Make sure you go see the doctor! Hikaru: [drinking a pill] Y-yes, I'll do that. 6 [Outside, Hikaru walks off, pretending to go see the doctor.] Hikaru: Damn! She's pretty sharp. Well, that's okay. I'll go and play. --------------------------------------------------- p 125 (81) 1 [On the street, Kyousuke looks about.] narration: I came flying out in a rush, but I don't really know where Hikaru-chan's house is. 2 [The arcade game's pov of an intense Hikaru staring down at it.] arcade game FX: Hikaru: Okaaay. It's mine, it's mine! 3 [Kyousuke watches her, wide-eyed.] arcade game FX: Hikaru: Aiigghh, you idiot... 4 Kyousuke: [off] Hikaru-chan! [Hikaru turns with a smile.] 5 Hikaru: [delighted] S-Sempai...! sign: Medal Corner 6 [Her smile disappears as she hears...] arcade game FX: 7 Hikaru: [angrily, to the machine] You bastard! Hikaru kick FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 126 (82) 1 [View of a train station.] Hikaru: [off] I'm so happy! 2 Kyousuke: Umm, why are you here? Hikaru: [blushing] Err, coming home from the doctor's... Eh-heh. 3 Hikaru: [beaming] Shouldn't you still be in class, Sempai? Hikaru FX: 4 [Kyousuke looks bewildered. Why is she so happy coming home from the doctor's?] 5 Kyousuke: [getting teary-eyed] (Maybe Hikaru-chan doesn't know herself, or else she knows and is trying to act as cheerful as possible.) signs: [partial] ...rozu ...rada Kyousuke contemplation FX: Hikaru: [puzzled, finger to pursed lips] ? 6 narration: Idiot! Why are you crying, Kyousuke? 7 Kyousuke: S-say, do you want to go somewhere? I'll go anywhere with you today. Hikaru: [jubilant] Hooray! --------------------------------------------------- p 127 (83) 1 [Their pov of the aquarium. Glass walls of the tanks run floor-to-ceiling.] sign: Tropical Fish 2 [A fish's pov of Hikaru, hands pressed to the glass and smiling in wonder. Kyousuke stands near and studies her.] 3 [Inside a toy store, the two of them laugh at a pair of ducklings.] signs: [right] sign: [right] Models sign: [left] <...rumi> 4 [Outside, Kyousuke treats her to food from a cart-vendor.] sign: Crepes 5 [Hikaru cheerfully blows on her crepes as Kyousuke smiles.] Hikaru FX: 6 [View pans back to show them sitting on a park bench.] Kyousuke: Taste good? Hikaru: Yup! --------------------------------------------------- p 128 (84) 1 [Kyousuke grows pensive and weepy.] narration: Maybe I've been acting too coldly towards Hikaru-chan up until today. Kyousuke contemplation FX: 2 Kyousuke FX: Hikaru: [concerned] A cold? 3 Kyousuke: [laughing it off] M-maybe. narration: D-don't cry, Kyousuke! 4 [Tenderly, Hikaru removes her scarf and places it around Kyousuke's neck.] Hikaru scarf FX: 5 Kyousuke: [looking at the scarf] Hikaru-chan... 6 [His pov of her.] Hikaru: Your health... Is important. --------------------------------------------------- p 129 (85) 1 [Kyousuke is overcome.] narration: Such a nice girl... To think she might die... 2 narration: Now that it's come to this, I can understand Hikaru-chan's existence... 3 narration: I should have taken better care of Hikaru-chan. Kyousuke pooling tears FX: 4 [Hikaru collapses against his shoulder.] Hikaru FX: 5 Hikaru: ( It's not a serious cold, but since Mom made me take some medicine... I'm sleepy.) 6 Kyousuke: [horrified] H-Hikaru-chan! --------------------------------------------------- p 130 (86) 1 Hikaru: S-Sempai, I can't go on... 2 [Kyousuke looks at her with realization.] 3 Hikaru: Sayonara, Sempai. It was fun... [She faints.] Hikaru FX: 4 Kyousuke: [shaking her] H-Hikaru-chan! Hikaru-chan!! 5 Kyousuke: DON'T DI-I-IE! HIKARU-CHAN!! 6 [Hikaru opens her eyes, a bit dazed, to find that Kyousuke is embracing her.] Hikaru: Hmm? --------------------------------------------------- p 131 (87) 1 Kyousuke: I've finally realized. 2 Kyousuke: [shouting] Hikaru-chan, I can't go on living without you!! 3 [From this pov we see Hikaru's eyes widen.] 4 [She pulls back slightly to look into his eyes.] Hikaru: Me too! 5 [They embrace once more.] Hikaru: Sempai... --------------------------------------------------- p 132 (88) 1 Hikaru stomach FX: [off] 2 Hikaru: [blushing, hand to mouth] Oh my. 3 Hikaru: [embarrassed] (This won't do. Having only one crepe is too harsh on a growing girl like me.) Hikaru: I haven't eaten since morning. 4 [Kyousuke watches wide-eyed as Hikaru races off toward the crepes cart.] Hikaru: Another 2 or 3 crepes! Hikaru FX: writing at bottom margin: Like a vendor of okonomiyaki. 5 Kyousuke: [bug-eyed] Eh? 6 [Shot of a train racing by.] train FX: 7 [Inside the train, Kyousuke and Hikaru lean back against the closed door.] Kyousuke: (Wh-what's this? What's going on? She's pretty lively.) Hikaru: And... Hmm...! Eh-heh-heh. 8 [Exiting the train station, Hikaru stretches her arms.] Hikaru: Today was the luckiest! sign 1: Towards Town. sign 2: South Exit. sign 3: Renovated Gate. --------------------------------------------------- p 133 (89) 1 Hikaru: [stretching her arms] I was in danger of getting called on for homework but conveniently caught a cold so I didn't have to go to school. 2 Hikaru: On top of that, I was even able to go on a date with you, Darling. 3 Kyousuke: Eh?! 4 Hikaru: [in glee] And, oh yes. 5 [Arms behind her back, she approaches Kyousuke slowly, but with a definite goal in mind. Kyousuke backs away in nervousness...] Hikaru: Say. What you said a little while ago, Darling. Hikaru FX: Kyousuke FX: 6 [Closeup view of her face. It is a sultry look, rich in meaning.] Hikaru: It's okay if I believe it, isn't it. narration: Th-that means I really... 7 [She rests her arms around his neck. Kyousuke goes wide-eyed and sweats.] narration: ...saw the dream in reverse... diagram: [top] Dream [middle] Kyousuke: Hikaru-chan, I can't go on living without you!! [right] Hikaru FX: [right] Hikaru: Sayonara, Sempai. diagram: [bottom] Reality [left] Hikaru FX: [left] Hikaru: Sayonara, Sempai. [middle] Kyousuke: Hikaru-chan, I can't go on living without you!! --------------------------------------------------- p 134 (90) 1 [He visualizes the moment in his dream when Hikaru kisses him on the cheek.] narration: That means, all that remains is... Getting kissed is great but... Sure enough, this kind of thing... 2 [Meanwhile, Yuusaku and Madoka walk home from school.] Yuusaku: Oh yeah, did you happen to see? That Kasuga, suddenly running out of school like that... sign: Dentistry. 3 [Down the street, Kyousuke spies Yuusaku and Madoka approaching.] sign: Altair 4 Yuusaku: I can't figure out what that guy's thinking at all! narration: ... be seen in public... 4 [In horror, Kyousuke looks off-panel.] Hikaru: [puckering up] I LOVE YOU, DARLING! narration: .......... which means "don't want to be seen." Before he could complete the word, he stops at which means "was seen" and stutters the last syllable.> --------------------------------------------------- p 135 (91) 1 [Both Yuusaku and Madoka stop short, eyes wide in shock.] 2 Hikaru kiss FX: [Kyousuke looks extremely ill.] narration: I-I've been seen! 3 [His pov of an angry Yuusaku and an angry Madoka.] 4 Kyousuke: [smiling, wearing Hikaru around his neck] H-hi... Yuusaku approach FX: Madoka depart FX: narration: You can't avoid what you saw in a precognitive dream! ---------------------------------------------------