Kimagure Orange Road "A Premonition Dream in the Starry Sky" Volume 4, Story 8 WB Volume 3, Story 2 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by Craig H. Nishida Compilation by Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Gary Kacmarcik Peter Norby Last revision : 11-11-94 NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()] NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a few extra's to those of you not having them. Example: (The subtitles on page 29 (161) are only in the WB'S!) --------------------------------------------------- p 29 (161)--TITLE PAGE [Against the backdrop of a spiral galaxy, Kyousuke and Madoka sit together. Kyousuke looks up at the sky. Madoka looks down at her knee or foot.] MAIN TITLE (at top) A Premonition Dream in the Starry Sky SUB-TITLE (at bottom) I Concentrated on a Wish and It Seemed Like I'd Be Able to See a Dream-Tinged Future in the Starry Sky... --------------------------------------------------- p 30 (162) 1 [Madoka facial portrait.] Madoka: Kasuga-kun... 2 [Kyousuke blushes and looks back at her.] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 3 Madoka: [leaning close, her hands behind her back] I'll give you something ni-i-ice... --------------------------------------------------- p 31 (163) 1 [Madoka leans in for a kiss, eyes closed. Kyousuke stands frozen and wide-eyed.] Kyousuke: Ah! Ayukawa... Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 2 [A fractured view of the night sky.] Kyousuke: [off] Ah! 3 [Cut to the Kasuga residence. Kurumi and Manami peer around the corner of a door.] Kyousuke: [off] Oh, no. Can't be... More! 4 [Closeup. Kyousuke comes wide awake with a start.] 5 [View pans back to show Kyousuke kneeling in bed, tightly hugging his pillow to his chest. His sisters stand and stare.] Kyousuke: .......... 6 Kurumi: More...? More whaaat...? Kyousuke: [deeply blushing] A-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha narration: A dr-dream...? --------------------------------------------------- p 32 (164) 1 [Kyousuke stands on the sidewalk outside a bowling alley.] narration: I'm going bowling with Hikaru-chan today! 2 [He visualizes the almost-climactic moment from his dream.] Kyousuke: [blushing] But this morning's dream, for a dream, felt strangely real... My heart's still beating wildly... 3 Kyousuke: Wait. Is it due to the Power? I had a dream that felt like this back in kindergarten, too. That time, for some reason, I dreamt I was scolded by the teacher, and when I went to school... [Young Kyousuke stands in a puddle. His classmates gather 'round and stare.] little Kyousuke FX: little girl: Sensei... Kyousuke-kun...!! 4 Kyousuke: If that's the case, that was a..."premonition dream"?! Kyousuke FX: 5 [View down an open mall.] Kyousuke: [off] But, it can't be! I'll be with Hikaru-chan today, and Ayukawa is unlikely to do that sort of thing. 6 Madoka: [off] Kasuga-kun! --------------------------------------------------- p 33 (165) 1 [Not really a panel. A full-length view of Madoka, standing in jersey top and jeans, is splashed down the right half of the page, overlaying panels 2, 3 and 6.] 2 [Kyousuke stares.] 3 [Overhead view of the two in conversation.] Madoka: Why are you standing around in a daze? Kyousuke: Eh?! Today, Hi... 4 [Kyousuke stops short, smile frozen on his face.] 5 narration: Danger, danger! Kyousuke: ...because I have time to spare, and I'm idly... " as "hima na" = idly/leisurely.> 6 [Kyousuke visualizes his dream again.] 7 [Madoka sun-splashed portrait.] narration: Ayukawa's clothes... narration: ...are the same as in the dream! --------------------------------------------------- p 34 (166) 1 narration: Th-then that dream... narration: ...is something that will actually happen today? 2 Madoka: Say, why don't we go to the planetarium? 3 Kyousuke: Planetarium? 4 [View pans back to show a building that's next to the bowling alley.] Madoka: Look! It's in this building. It just opened recently. 5 Kyousuke: [pondering] (Huh? Ayukawa's inviting me. How unusual.) 6 Kyousuke: (B-but Hikaru-chan is coming soon. I can't very well stand her up...) 7 Kyousuke: [flash thought] (But if that dream was a premonition dream, then, as usual, my only choice will be to use the Power to cheat on them.) Kyousuke fist FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 35 (167) 1 [Hikaru shows excellent form as she releases her bowling ball.] narration: So, as usual, I'm going back and forth between Ayukawa and Hikaru-chan, but... 2 [Her ball levels the pins.] 3 [Hikaru leaps and grabs Kyousuke by the neck.] narration: ...somehow, sneaking around this time leaves me with more leeway! Hikaru: I did it! A strike! 4 [Overhead view of Kyousuke as he addresses the pins. He awkwardly holds the ball.] Kyousuke: (I wonder if it's this way? No. Like this...?) 5 [Hikaru watches him. Kyousuke continues to address the pins, though his attention is more on the ball he holds up in his hands.] Hikaru: [blushing] (Wow. He must be checking over the ball. I guess when one is as good as Sempai, one has to worry about a ball's good and bad points, too.) Kyousuke: (How do you hold this ball? It's because I haven't bowled before.) 6 [Hikaru races past and behind him, thumping him on his back as she passes by.] Hikaru: Sempai, I'll bring you another ball. Hikaru FX: [Kyousuke drops the ball on his foot.] 7 [Hikaru runs for the ball rack.] Kyousuke: [hopping about] (Good!! Now's my chance!) ball FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 36 (168) 1 [Kyousuke materializes just outside the planetarium entrance.] Kyousuke teleport FX: sign (top/partial): ...netarium sign (door): Sunshine Planetarium sign (post): Planetarium Entrance 2 [He looks both ways...] 3 [...brushes off his hands...] 4 [...and clears his throat.] narration: I'll straighten up here... Kyousuke FX: 5 Kyousuke: [entering, waving] Hi. Wait long?! [Madoka sits waiting and turns at his voice.] 6 Madoka: It's just starting now. Madoka FX: 7 [Kyousuke gives a small smile back.] narration: That smile tickles me with anticipation! Kyousuke heartbeat FX: sign (partial): ...International... --------------------------------------------------- p 37 (169) 1 [They walk into the darkened planetarium theatre. Madoka leads the way.] Madoka: Watch out for that step... 2 [Kyousuke trips on that very step...] Kyousuke FX: 3 [...and pitches forward...] Kyousuke: AH! 4 [...crashing into the back of Madoka. She goes wide-eyed with surprise.] 5 [Closeup of Kyousuke's face pressed into Madoka's hair.] Kyousuke FX: 6 [Closeup of the surprised look on Madoka's face.] --------------------------------------------------- p 38 (170) 1 Kyousuke: [leaping away] Ah! S-sorry! Kyousuke FX: 2 [Madoka takes him in tow, walking to their seats. Kyousuke blushes.] Madoka: That's why I said look, you klutz. Madoka FX: 3 [Kyousuke facial portrait.] narration: The smell of shampoo from Ayukawa's hair, and an indescribable warmth from the nape of her neck... 4 [Madoka facial portrait.] 5 [Madoka still has Kyousuke in tow, grasping him by his wrist. In the background is Kyousuke's dream, as dream-Madoka leans in for a kiss.] narration: That dream... --------------------------------------------------- p 39 (171) 1 [View of the star-projector which projects the images of the stars on the black ceiling.] 2 [Madoka and Kyousuke sit in aisle seats. They look up.] sign: Danger 3 Kyousuke FX: 4 [Kyousuke's pov of Madoka looking up at the ceiling.] 5 narration: Soon, I have to follow up on Hikaru-chan, too. 6 [Kyousuke claps a hand to his mouth and peeks over at Madoka.] narration: I'd better hold my breath or I'm gonna be busted... 7 Kyousuke teleport FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 40 (172) 1 [Kyousuke releases the ball. His form needs a little work.] 2 [The ball heads straight for the gutter.] ball FX: 3 [Kyousuke flashes with the Power...] narration: Oops! 4 [...and the ball veers away from the gutter, taking a classic "hook" trajectory...] ball FX: 5 [...right into the 1-3 pocket for a strike.] ball FX: 6 [He dusts off his hands.] narration: This sort of thing is so easy if I use the Power! Hikaru: [hugging him about the neck] Amaaazing, Sempai!! observer: OHHH 7 [Kyousuke bowls. Splashed over the panel is a closeup of his smiling face.] narration: For some reason, I'm having such a good time today, that I keep using the Power unintentionally! 8 [View of the crowd that gathers.] crowd: narration: Is even this because of that dream...?! --------------------------------------------------- p 41 (173) 1 [Kyousuke releases another ball. narration: Well, soon I have to return to Ayukawa. ball FX: 2 [He flashes with the Power.] narration: Now! 3 ball teleport FX: 4 Hikaru: [goggle-eyed] Huh? [Kyousuke looks back at the empty lane with dismay. He blushes, sweats.] narration: Yikes! 5 narration: Oh no! I meant to nudge the ball, but I accidentally made it disappear . Hikaru: [still goggle-eyed] ? Kyousuke: [forcing a smile] Well, that's okay. 6 [View of the bowling alley.] --------------------------------------------------- p 42 (174) 1 [View of the planetarium entrance.] sign on wall: Sunshine Planetarium Constellation Show All-New Time-Lapse Constellation Show inside 2 Madoka: [reaching over to touch Kyousuke's shoulder] Hey, Kasuga-kun. That star... 3 [Her hand falls to rest atop a... Bowling ball?!] 4 [Madoka goes goggle-eyed...] 5 [...and she turns to look.] 6 Madoka: [holding the ball] Wh-what's this...!! 7 Madoka: [looking around] Huh? Kasuga-kun. --------------------------------------------------- p 43 (175) 1 [Out on the street, Hikaru waves good-bye as she runs off.] Hikaru: Bye, Sempai. narration: Now... Back to Ayukawa... 2 Kyousuke teleport FX: 3 [He materializes in the lap of a woman.] Kyousuke: Huh? 4 Kyousuke: [swiveling his head around] Eh?! Eh?! woman with Kyousuke in her lap: KYAAAA 5 Kyousuke: [running out of the theatre room] Wh-what's this? The audience for the next show is already here? 6 Kyousuke: Ah! Kyousuke: In that case, Ayukawa...!! 7 Madoka: [standing behind him] Where did you go? Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 44 (176) 1 [Kyousuke is horror-struck.] narration: D-damn!! 2 [Not meeting her eye, he blushes...] Kyousuke: Being discovered here, the special dream I had disappears like bubbles on water... Kyousuke FX: 3 Madoka: What dream? Water? Is something wrong? [Realizing he spoke out loud, Kyousuke belatedly slaps a hand over his mouth.] Kyousuke: Ah! 4 Kyousuke: [embarrassed] Water... Like, I went past some water a moment ago, in the restroom... narration: Liar, liar! 5 [She considers his words...] Madoka contemplation FX: 6 [He looks back and sweats.] 7 Madoka: [turning to go outside] Oh, well. Kyousuke: Phew! --------------------------------------------------- p 45 (177) 1 [View of the street.] Madoka: [off] Hey, then what about the dream? 2 Kyousuke: Huh? 3 [He gazes seriously into the distance.] Kyousuke: This morning... I saw you in a dream. crows-in-background FX: 4 [Madoka looks at him askance, wide-eyed and with a small smile.] 5 Kyousuke: [blushing, looking up at the sky] And so... narration: A-and so, I can't simply be saying that to her face... 6 [Smiling, she tosses back her hair.] Madoka: What kind of a dream? Kyousuke: [horror-struck, blushing deeply] Wha... 7 Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 8 [Madoka facial portrait--she smiles sweetly.] --------------------------------------------------- p 46 (178) 1 [She clings to his arm and rests her head against his shoulder.] Madoka: It's chilly... [Kyousuke's eyes bug out.] 2 [His pov of her face resting against his shoulder.] 3 Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 4 [Kyousuke blushes deeply as he thinks.] narration: It was a premonition dream after all?! 5 [He turns to her and she looks up.] narration: Today, by now, Hikaru-chan has returned home...! Kyousuke: Ayukawa... --------------------------------------------------- p 47 (179) 1 [From behind, two guys walking down the street recognize Kyousuke.] guy: Hi...! Aren't you the guy who was just now rolling strike after strike? You were still there. 2 guy: Your bowling skill is impressive. I mean...! It's truly awesome. Kyousuke: [sweating and swiveling his head from Madoka to the guy] Wah! Hold on...! Madoka: [surprised] Bowling?! 3 guy FX: guy: Huh...? 4 guy: [holding up his pinkie finger*] Just a while ago you were with a nice short-haired girl, and now you're with this beautiful girl. You're pretty good at this sort of thing, too. <*A secret sign known only to members of the Royal Order of Girl-Chasers...> Kyousuke: [motioning for silence] Shh! Shh! 5 [Madoka facial-portrait--wide-eyed.] 6 [The two guys turn to wave as they walk away.] guy: Bye...! sign: Oota Commercial Affairs narration: Good-for-nothing bums...!! --------------------------------------------------- p 48 (180) 1 Madoka: Kasuga-kun. 2 Kyousuke: [in obvious fright] Y-yes...! Kyousuke FX: 3 [But she smiles sweetly.] Madoka: 4 Madoka: [leaning in close, her hands behind her back] I'll give you something nice... 5 Madoka: [still smiling, presenting the bowling ball] Something you left behind! Kyousuke: [smiling] HUH?! --------------------------------------------------- p 49 (181) 1 Madoka: [feigning clumsiness] Oops. Sorry. ball FX: narration: And in the end... 2 [The ball lands on his foot. He grabs it in pain. Madoka walks off.] narration: ... the dream I had this morning was going to be like this... What's more, it was too good to be true! 3 [He watches her walk away.] narration: But if I hadn't had strange, lecherous thoughts, or been sneaking around... 4 [Overhead view.] narration: Perhaps... 5 [Pov shifts to show Madoka's expression as she walks away. She looks hurt.] narration: Perhaps she might have...?! ---------------------------------------------------