Kimagure Orange Road "Jealousy With a Beat!" Volume 4, Story 1 WB Volume 2, Story 11 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by Craig H. Nishida Compilation by Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Mitch McGlothlin Peter Norby Andrew Wilson Tony Schrick Gary Kacmarcik Last revision : 9-19-94 NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()] NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a few extra's to those of you not having them. Example: (The subtitles on page 223 (7) are only in the WB'S!) --------------------------------------------------- p 223 (7) [Madoka sits at drums, decked out in minidress.] MAIN-TITLE (at top) Jealousy with a Beat! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) If You Are the Drumbeat of Love Echoing in My Heart, Then My Heart Wants to Be Rocked! --------------------------------------------------- p 224 (8) 1 [Interior shot of the "Mersey Beat" nightclub sign.] narration: I came with Hikaru-chan to this "live spot"* and was surprised! There, performing onstage with the band... <*i.e., nightclub/theatre featuring live music> rock FX: 2 [View from behind of Madoka at keyboards. Splashed down the right side of panels 2-5 is a sideview of Madoka standing at keyboards.] 3 [Kyousuke & Hikaru watch from the back of the audience.] narration: ...is AYUKAWA...! 4 [Closer view of a dumbfounded Kyousuke.] narration: And beside her onstage is that man...! 5 [Shuu plays the guitar.] --------------------------------------------------- p 225 (9) 1 [Panels 1-3 show various views of Madoka performing onstage.] narration: But almost making me forget even that... 2 narration: ...is the way Ayukawa looks tonight... 3 [Closer view of Madoka.] 4 [Kyousuke's attention is diverted by the sight of vocalist Yukari.] 5 [Yukari sings.] 6 [Kyousuke's pov of Yukari as she seemingly winks at us.] narration: That female vocalist is also quite... Ah! Was that wink just now aimed at me?! --------------------------------------------------- p 226 (10) 1 [Hikaru stares at a flustered Kyousuke as he sneaks a peek back at her.] Kyousuke FX: 2 [Kyousuke thumps himself on the head. Hikaru puts finger to pursed lips in wonder.] narration: What am I thinking at a time like this?! Kyousuke FX: 3 [Onstage, Shuu leans in close to Madoka, and they exchange looks.] 4 narration: On top of it all, that guy...! 5 [Exterior shot of the "Mersey Beat" nightclub.] Hikaru: [off] Say, Sempai. 6 [Hikaru & Kyousuke stand on the sidewalk.] Hikaru: That man with the glasses was looking only at Madoka-san during the entire performance, right? Kyousuke FX: [Kyousuke stands with his back to Hikaru, eyes bugged out.] 7 Hikaru: And Madoka-san doesn't seem entirely unlikely... Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 227 (11) 1 Hikaru: Gee! Perhaps those two are... 2 narration: All right! First things first... 3 Kyousuke FX: narration: A clock... Nope, none! 4 Kyousuke: Shall we go home soon? sign: Aloeswood Perfumery Hikaru: Eh?! 5 Hikaru: [looking at her watch] So soon...? 6 [Kyousuke flashes with the Power.] 7 [View of Hikaru's watch--it reads 7:30.] 8 watch FX: [Now it reads 9:00.] 9 Hikaru: What?! Oh no! Look at the time!! Kyousuke: [hands behind head and smiling] Yup! --------------------------------------------------- p 228 (12) 1 Hikaru: That's strange. Just a while ago I checked and it was just past 7. Kyousuke: Time flies when you're having fun!! 2 [Kyousuke waves goodbye to Hikaru, who stands stunned, waving back...] narration: So, with that, I somehow managed to send Hikaru-chan home... Hikaru: (..........) Kyousuke: (I'm sorry, Hikaru-chan.) 3 [View of Kyousuke's foot.] 4 [Same panel art as 226-3; overlaid on it are 3 flash speech bubbles.] Flash #1: That man with the glasses was looking only at Madoka-san during the entire performance, right? Flash #2: And Madoka-san doesn't seem entirely unlikely... Flash #3: Gee! Perhaps those two are... 5 [Tight shot of Kyousuke's fist.] fist FX: 6 [He runs off.] narration: I'll try going to that "live spot" one more time! 7 Mrs. Hiyama: [at sink, back to us] My, you're back early this evening. Hikaru: [looking from wall clock--reading 7:45--to wristwatch] Eh? What! --------------------------------------------------- p 229 (13) 1 [Exterior shot of sidewalk outside nightclub. The bass player and drummer leave.] Bass player: What a tiring day. Drummer : Weeellll, after that, how about a drink? 2 Bass player: [thumping drummer on the head] Hey Mitsuru, you made a mistake at the end ! Mitsuru: Ah, I did...?! 3 Yukari: [looking off to the side] What? 4 [It's Kyousuke.] 5 Yukari: [pointing at him] Aren't you the kid who was watching from the back? Kyousuke: (I wonder if that wink awhile ago was aimed at me after all?) 6 Kyousuke: Uh... Ayukawa... I mean... Where's Ayukawa-kun? 7 [His pov as Yukari looks at him.] --------------------------------------------------- p 230 (14) 1 [Kyousuke looks back at her.] 2 Yukari: If you're referring to that girl... 3 Yukari: ...she's still with Shuuichi inside. narration: Shuuichi...?! 4 [Kyousuke visualizes Shuu.] narration: That guy...?! 5 Yukari: I wonder what they're doing? Surely they're doing something more fun than playing music. 6 Kyousuke: [horrified] (More fun than playing music?!) Kyousuke FX: 7 Kyousuke: [walking into the club] Th-thanks! --------------------------------------------------- p 231 (15) 1 [View of Yukari.] 2 [Kyousuke races down the stairs.] Kyousuke FX: 3 Kyousuke: (C-can't be... The two of them are in that sort of relationship?!) 4 Kyousuke FX: 5 [Kyousuke comes to a full stop in the hall as he hears...] Shuu: [off] Kissing fine? Madoka: [off] But... It's still much too quick. Kyousuke FX: 6 narration: Their voices...?! 7 [He sneaks a peek around the corner.] narration: Wh-what? --------------------------------------------------- p 232 (16) 1 [They sit apart at a table. Shuu has a guitar in hand.] Shuu: "I want to hold you to my heart's content!" About like this? Madoka: Right! That tempo seems just fine. [Kyousuke does a pratfall.] Kyousuke FX: 2 Kyousuke: [letting out a puff of air] (Wh-what's this? They're working on a song?) Kyousuke FX: 3 [Shuu blinks in surprise.] 4 Shuu: Who are you? 5 Madoka: Kasuga-kun?! poster: 6 Kyousuke: [embarrassed] ...good evening. --------------------------------------------------- p 233 (17) 1 [They all gather outside on the sidewalk.] Madoka: Oh! This is my classmate, Kasuga-kun. 2 Shuu: [beaming] Pleased to meet you. I'm Shuuichi Sawada! 3 Kyousuke: [glaring] .......... 4 Kyousuke: [giving him the evil eye] ...pleased to meet you! hand clasp FX: [Shuu sweats and stares at their handclasp.] 5 Yukari: [hand on Kyousuke's shoulder] I know... We're finished here, but if you want, why don't you come with us? 6 Shuu: Yukari, are you inviting a minor to go drinking? Yukari: Why, it's the same thing for Ayukawa-san, isn't it? 7 Shuu:Well, yeah, but... Shuu FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 234 (18) 1 Shuu: But you sure don't look to be the same age as Ayukawa-kun. Kyousuke FX: 2 Kyousuke: (S-so irritating!) 3 Yukari: [grabbing Kyousuke by the arm] Well, let's go! Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 4 [Kyousuke sneaks a look back at Madoka, who walks beside Shuu.] Kyousuke FX: 5 [His pov of Madoka and Shuu.] 6 [Overhead view of the sidewalk as the 6 walk along.] narration: Somehow, things have become strange... --------------------------------------------------- p 235 (19) 1 [Exterior shot of the "Weekend Shuffle" bar.] 2 [Interior shot of patrons sitting at a table.] 3 [View of Madoka sitting next to Shuu.] 4 [View of Kyousuke.] 5 Yukari: [off] Hmm... So you're Kyousuke-kun, eh? 6 [Kyousuke turns and we see he's sitting next to Yukari, who sips at her drink.] --------------------------------------------------- p 236 (20) 1 Yukari: A fine name. 2 Yukari: Do you have a girlfriend? 3 Kyousuke: Eh! [In the background, we see that Madoka's attention has sharply shifted over to Yukari and Kyousuke's conversation.] 4 [Kyousuke glances tentatively at Madoka.] Kyousuke FX: 5 [His pov of Madoka--she gives him a slightly unhappy look...] 6 [...and turns back to her conversation with Shuu.] Kyousuke: N-no. 7 Yukari: I wonder if I'm a little too old for you? Kyousuke: Eh?! 8 Yukari: [playfully coming close and touching fingertip to his nose] That's because you seem like a younger brother and that's cute. Kyousuke: [blushing fiercely] C-cute?! 9 [Madoka sips at her drink and looks on with some distress.] --------------------------------------------------- p 237 (21) 1 Shuu: [off] ...not join? Madoka: [turning back to face him] What? 2 Shuu: [leaning close and putting his hand on Madoka's shoulder] So--as I was saying--why don't you just officially join the band already? 3 [Kyousuke's pov and closeup of Shuu's hand on Madoka's "infinitely sweet and soft" shoulder...] 4 [Kyousuke is livid.] narration: Th-that jerk! Kyousuke: (E-even I haven't held her shoulder yet!) 5 Shuu: If you join, I'm sure we could turn professional! 6 [Kyousuke stands.] Kyousuke FX: narration: No more ! 7 [View of the bass player and drummer, looking on at something in amazement.] Voice: [off] Take that!! FX: [off] --------------------------------------------------- p 238 (22) 1 [Yukari stands, having just emptied her drink in Shuu's face. Kyousuke and Madoka look on in amazement.] 2 [Kyousuke facial portrait--astonishment.] 3 [Madoka facial portrait--astonishment.] 4 [Yukari turns and leaves.] Shuu: Yukari!! Yukari FX: 5 [Yukari stops to talk to the bar's "Master".] Yukari: Master, that guy looks like he's drinking pretty well, so toss him another one. 6 Yukari: Farewell, Shuu-chan! Kyousuke: Yukari-san?! 7 [Shuu bursts past Kyousuke, in pursuit of Yukari.] Kyousuke: ?! FX: Shuu: Wait, Yukari!! --------------------------------------------------- p 239 (23) 1-2 [Shuu chases and catches Yukari by the wrist outside on the sidewalk.] 3 [They stand and exchange words.] sign #1: Pub sign #2: Dilemma 4 [Kyousuke stands just outside the bar, and makes to walk toward the arguing pair.] narration: What in the world is happening? Kyousuke: U-uh, excuse me. 5 [Closeup of someone grabbing Kyousuke by the wrist.] 6 Kyousuke: Ayukawa...! 7 [Madoka shakes her head.] 8 Kyousuke: B-but... Madoka: Leave them alone. It's because they're sweethearts. --------------------------------------------------- p 240 (24) 1 Kyousuke: Eh?! 2 Madoka: It's just that they've been fighting recently, and things aren't going so well. 3 [This makes Kyousuke angry.] 4 [Shot of the bar's door.] Kyousuke: [off] But that guy was staring at you during the musical performance, and just a little while ago... 5 [Kyousuke facial portrait--slight embarrassment.] 6 [Madoka facial portrait--wide-eyed.] 7 Madoka: Shuu-chan and me?! --------------------------------------------------- p 241 (25) 1 Madoka: That's the funniest thing I ever heard! Madoka: A-ha-ha! 2 Madoka: [regaining her composure] He frequently looked my way during the performance because I haven't learned the music by heart yet, so he was signaling me with his eyes. 3 Madoka: First of all, Shuu-chan is my first cousin. It's not _that_ kind of relationship! 4 [Kyousuke's eyes bug out.] 5 Kyousuke: First cousin?! 6 Kyousuke: [relieved] (O-oohhh... So that's why! No wonder they were addressing each other so informally!) 7 Kyousuke: [turning to look at Shuu and Yukari] Huh! --------------------------------------------------- p 242 (26) 1 [Their pov of Shuu and Yukari, hugging.] 2 Yukari: I'm sorry for wanting to slap you... Shuu: I have indeed had my entire mind on the band... ...and not spent much attention on you. I'm sorry. 3 [View of Madoka and Kyousuke looking on.] Kyousuke FX: 4 Madoka: Look! They say that even a dog will turn up its nose at a quarrel between a husband and wife. 5 [Madoka puts her hands on hips, and looks at him out of the corner of her eye.] Madoka: But just now, you didn't seem altogether unhappy being chased by Yukari-san. Kyousuke FX: 6 Kyousuke: [calmly slinging back mud] Yeah? Well, you seemed like you were having a pretty good time talking with that guy. --------------------------------------------------- p 243 (27) 1 [Madoka facial portrait--GLARE!] Madoka FX: 2 Kyousuke: College women are seductive and very nice. Madoka: But such a woman wouldn't seriously want a little boy for a companion. 3 [They square off and give each other evil eyes.] glare FX: 4 Bass player: [looking on] We were a bit concerned about what those people were doing, and now look at them... Mitsuru: Oh boy! 5 [View over the shoulders of the bass player and drummer. Shuu and Yukari continue to hug. Kyousuke and Madoka yell at each other. In insets, we see closeups of Kyousuke and Madoka, in their screaming rage.] Bass player/Mitsuru: What's going on? ---------------------------------------------------