Kimagure Orange Road "The Suspicious Flickering Light Beam!" Volume 3, Story 9 WB Volume 2, Story 10 Written and illustrated by Izumi Matsumoto Translation by Craig H. Nishida Compilation by Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Jay Harvey Ramon Galindo Peter Norby Last revision : 9-19-94 NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()] NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a few extra's to those of you not having them. Example: (The subtitles on page 201(179) are only in the WB'S!) ____________________________________________________________ p 201 (179)--TITLE PAGE [Madoka stands, hand on hip, other hand toys with her hair which is tied up on top; her midriff is bare, thus the subtitles.] MAIN TITLE (at top) The Suspicious Flickering Light Beam! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) With Hair Up and Spirits High! I Want to Feel the Nuance on My Sensitive Skin... --------------------------------------------------- p 202 (180) 1 [Exterior shot of ABCB.] phone FX: 2 Madoka: Yes, this is ABCB. 3 [Madoka listens to whomever is on the other end of the phone.] 4 Madoka: Shuu-chan! 5 Madoka: [smiling] It's been a long time, huh? [pause] Yeah, fine! 6 [Madoka glances at the clock, which reads 9:40.] Madoka: Work? ...yeah. I'm done soon. --------------------------------------------------- p 203 (181) 1 Madoka: WHAT? TONIGHT?! 2 [Master looks on, curious.] 3 Madoka FX: Master FX: 4 Madoka: [writing on a pad] Yeah... I've got it. The record store in front of the station. I'll be there. Bye. 5 [On the streets at night, Madoka looks about.] 6 [From behind, we watch her walk away, past some night spots.] sign #1: Kitty Cat Lounge sign #2: A.H. "Hat-chan" sign #3: Tracy Snack Bar sign #4: A.M. "Mitsuru-kun" sign #5: Tremolo sign #6: Music Woman Pub & Restaurant sign #7: White Water Bar sign #8: A.G. -chan sign #9: Seventh Heaven --------------------------------------------------- p 204 (182) 1 [Exterior shot of ABCB.] narration: The next day... Master: [off] Welcome! 2 [Kyousuke sits at the counter and looks about.] 3 Master: What can I get you today? Kyousuke: Oh, I'll have an ice cafe. 4 Kyousuke: [looking about again] Uh... 5 [Master studies him.] 6 Master: [smiling] Sorry, she's not here! Some important business came up, and so she's taking a break from work. 7 Kyousuke: Oh... narration: I got hold of some movie tickets so I thought I'd invite her... --------------------------------------------------- p 205 (183) 1 [Kyousuke spies a piece of paper on the counter.] 2 Kyousuke: (That's Ayukawa's handwriting!) (Hmm, let me see...) 3 [Closeup of the paper.] memo: Shuu-chan; 10:30 PM; front of station; in front of record store 4 [Kyousuke's eyes grow wide.] 5 Kyousuke: (Shuu-chan?!) (Who might that be?) 6 Kyousuke: [still staring at the paper] (Since she wrote "chan", they must be pretty close.) 7 Kyousuke: (So she's meeting this guy in front of the record store?) (And this late... Who in the world might "Shuu-chan" be?) --------------------------------------------------- p 206 (184) 1 [Master sets down Kyousuke's order...] drink FX: 2 [...and notices what Kyousuke is reading.] Master FX: Kyousuke FX: 3 Kyousuke: [setting it down] (Oh no, oh no!) memo FX: 4 Kyousuke: (Again, as usual, my worries run away with me... It's a bad habit of mine!) 5 [Kyousuke sips his drink.] narration: Hey! This is nothing to get worried about. Right, Kyousuke?! 6 [Portrait of Madoka.] narration: It's Ayukawa. It must certainly be a legitimate errand! narration: That's what this "Shuu-chan" is all about... 7 [Kyousuke looks up at the ceiling, in thought.] 8 [Exterior night shot of ABCB.] narration: But I don't really know everything about Ayukawa... --------------------------------------------------- p 207 (185) 1 [Madoka stands and unties her ABCB apron.] narration: And again, the next day... Madoka: Oh! 2 Madoka: You came yesterday. Kyousuke: [embarrassed] Ha ha! narration: Ayukawa's here! 3 narration: All right! Today indeed...! Kyousuke: I have two movie tickets. If tomorrow's okay... 4 [Madoka looks at him.] 5 Madoka: [small (apologetic) smile] I'm sorry. I have to run a little errand tomorrow. 6 Kyousuke: Oh. Master: Ayukawa-kun, it's almost time. 7 Madoka: Oh you're right. I'm sorry about this, Master. Well, I'll be going! Madoka: [waving] Bye, Kasuga-kun. --------------------------------------------------- p 208 (186) 1 [Kyousuke sits stunned.] door FX: [Master touches him on the shoulder.] touch FX: 2 Master: Worried? Kyousuke: [blushing] Eh! N-no. Not really... 3 Kyousuke: But... What in the world is going on? 4 [Master thinks about it.] 5 [Shot of the ABCB wall.] Master: [off] Well. I didn't hear what kind of errand, but ever since that phone call (on the evening of) the day before yesterday... 6 Kyousuke: Ah! narration: Telephone... 7 [Kyousuke visualizes Madoka waving and leaving ABCB. Overlaid on this is the memo.] memo: Shuu-chan; 10:30 PM; front of station; in front of record store narration: Ayukawa was called by that "Shuu-chan" guy in that memo?! I guess I was right. But what in the world is this all about... --------------------------------------------------- p 209 (187) 1 [Exterior night shot of Komatsu's home.] narration: That day my worries gradually grew... sign: Komatsu 2 [Inside, Kyousuke tries to do the homework, but Komatsu flashes him a centerfold pinup.] narration: ...I spent the night at Komatsu's house in order to cram and finish up the summer vacation homework. 3 [Daylight. And Kyousuke walks home, through a rather questionable neighborhood...] Kyousuke: Yawn! narration: The next morning. sign #1: Mahjong sign #2: Dirty Bookstore sign #3: Pachinko sidewalk sign: Kabuki 4 Kyousuke: [looking around at the signs] (Come to think of it, this is where that record store is...) (...it's in a rather indecent neighborhood.) sign #1: Super-Extreme MASSAGE sign #2: Dirty Videos sign #3: Super-Perverted Books "Adults Only" sign #4: Perverted Tea House, 2 floors (up) sign #5: Crows too 5 [Kyousuke walks down the street. From behind him, comes a voice...] Madoka: [off] Looks like it's morning already. sign: Large servings 6 [Kyousuke turns to look.] narration: That voice just now?! --------------------------------------------------- p 210 (188) 1 [Shot of Madoka and Shuu leaving a building.] 2 [Shot of Kyousuke in shock.] narration: A-AYUKAWA!! 3 [Kyousuke zips around the corner of a building.] narration: Who's that guy next to her...?! Kyousuke FX: 4 Shuu: Shall we get something to eat? 5 Madoka: That's okay. Right now I'm going home and straight to bed. Madoka: Yawn! 6 [They walk past the alley in which Kyousuke is hiding.] Shuu: Whew! It's already morning, and we're only now going home! Kyousuke: "!" --------------------------------------------------- p 211 (189) 1 [Shuu tries to stifle a yawn.] Madoka: A-ha! Shuu-chan, you have a sleepy face. 2 Shuu: [smiling] You have a pretty sleepy face, too! Madoka: [smiling] I put you through an exhausting time!* <*Cultural note and commentary: This phrase is difficult to translate into English. Madoka here says "o-tsukare-sama deshita!" said by one after a long day, and is almost-but-not-quite an apology or offer of thanks to another for putting him through such a long day.> 3 [Kyousuke watches as Madoka and Shuu walk away.] sign #1: [partial view] ...Perverted sign #2: Cabaret sign #3: Obscene sign #4: 4 [Kyousuke is stunned.] 5 narration: I felt like I'd been hit on the head with a hammer... 6 narration: After all, that man--that so-called "Shuu-chan" guy --looks to be around college age. narration: Also, their relationship allows him to address Ayukawa informally... --------------------------------------------------- p 212 (190) 1 [Kyousuke looks up at the business signs.] narration: And... 2 [Shot down the street.] sign #1: Come-Along Tea House sign #2: Indecent Bookstore sign #3: [partial] Studi... Stage... narration: They came from down that way... 3 [Tilted shot down the street.] narration: Oh! I don't understand any more! sign #1: Best Humble Tea House sign #2: Student Reading Room 4 [Madoka portrait.] narration: Ayukawa...!! 5 [Kyousuke stands and stares down the street.] narration: What in the world is this all about?! sign #1: [Note: in Japanese, "...doeji"> sign #2: Intensely Perverted Videos sign #3: Dirty Bookstore --------------------------------------------------- p 213 (191) 1 [Exterior shot of a movie theatre and associated billboards/posters.] Hikaru: [off] SEMPAI!! sign #1: [partial] Shibu... billboard sign: Love Comedy "I'm Sorry" small billboard sign: Love Comedy "I'm Sorry" Road Show left poster: Coming Soon to a Theater Near You 2 [A hand jars Kyousuke to his senses.] Hikaru: [off] SEMPAI!! 3 [Hikaru and Kyousuke sit in their theatre seats.] Kyousuke: A-ah! What is it? Hikaru: .......... 4 Hikaru: Sempai, you're looking very pale and unwell. 5 Kyousuke: Eh?! I-I see. 6 narration: Well, that makes a lot of sense--after seeing a scene like that...! --------------------------------------------------- p 214 (192) 1 Hikaru: But... Thank you very much. 2 Hikaru: [brightly] To be invited by you... I've wanted to see this movie. 3 [Kyousuke watches her.] 4 Kyousuke: Aren't you hungry? Shall we get something to eat? Hikaru: [happily] Wow, Sempai! You're so generous today! 5 narration: "Shall we get something to eat...?!" Kyousuke: Ah! 6 [Shot of Kyousuke covering his ears as flash-bubbles appear around him.] Flashback #1: Shall we get something to eat? Flashback #2: That's okay. Right now I'm going home and straight to bed. Flashback #3: A-ha! Shuu-chan, you have a sleepy face. Flashback #4: You have a pretty sleepy face, too! 7 Kyousuke: ENOUGH ALREADY!! --------------------------------------------------- p 215 (193) 1 [Outside on the street, Kyousuke, hands on ears, comes to his senses. Hikaru looks at him in surprise.] sign: [view of left side of same billboard seen in panel 213-1] Screen-Projection Road... 2 Hikaru: Something happened after all? Kyousuke: [embarrassed] N-nothing, nothing! 3 [Hikaru looks on with concern.] 4 Hikaru: [brightly, grabbing his arm] Well, today I was thinking of taking you to a nice place. 5 Hikaru: [resting her head on his shoulder] Would you do that with me? narration: Usually, Hikaru-chan sticks so close that I shrink back... 6 Kyousuke: [small smile] ...yeah. narration: ...but today, for some reason, it feels nice... 7 [They walk off down the street, Hikaru clinging to his arm.] narration: Today, I think I want to spend the entire day with Hikaru-chan! --------------------------------------------------- p 216 (194) 1 [Exterior shot of "Mersey Beat" nightclub.] 2 [Inside the lobby, they stand and Kyousuke looks around him.] Kyousuke: Live spot?! Hikaru: Sempai, you like rock music! 3 Kyousuke: ...yeah. sign (top): Today's Presen... sign (bottom): Apple T... narration: But... Now I don't feel like listening to rock music. 4 Hikaru: [looking worried] I don't know what happened, but you're in poor spirits! 5 [Kyousuke looks at her in surprise.] 6 Hikaru: When I see you like this, even I become sad. Kyousuke: Hikaru-chan! marquee sign: "Ikugashi" Band Monty Python The Doors "Ratoruzu" "Aasharutakkaa" Band --------------------------------------------------- p 217 (195) 1 Hikaru: [brightly] I'm sure listening to this kind of sound will put you back on top of the world! 2 [Kyousuke looks at her, wide-eyed...] 3 [...and smiles.] narration: Thanks, Hikaru-chan! narration: That's so nice. 4 Hikaru: [starting to walk off] Actually, in here... ...is a secret! A secret! 5 Hikaru: [running towards the entrance to the nightclub proper] Sempaaai. Hurry, hurry. It's already started! 6 [The two enter.] rock music FX: Hikaru: [in glee; hands to ears] Heyyy! They're playing! They're playing! --------------------------------------------------- p 218 (196) 1 [This panel is splashed across the tops of pages 218-219. The band, including Madoka on keyboards and Shuu on lead guitar stands onstage. The female vocalist, as we later find out, is Yukari. The bass player (Shige) and drummer (Mitsuru) round out the band.] 2 [Kyousuke stands in amazement.] 3 [His pov of Madoka at keyboards.] 4 narration: Wh-what... 5 [Another view of Madoka performing.] --------------------------------------------------- p 219 (197) 1 [This panel is splashed across the tops of pages 218-219... See description above.] 2 [Kyousuke is speechless.] 3 [Another view of Madoka.] narration: Ayukawa...?! 4 Hikaru: [waving] Madoka-saaan! 5 Madoka FX: 6 [Kyousuke stands and stares.] narration: Ayukawa's in a rock band?! narration: Wh-what in the world is this? --------------------------------------------------- p 220 (198) 1 [The band ends their number and Shuu takes to the microphone.] Shuu: Hey, I'd like to introduce a new member. 2 [Kyousuke visualizes the conversation overheard on the street.] narration: H-him! Shuu flashback: You have a pretty sleepy face, too! 3 Shuu: Ken-chan on keyboards is injured, so filling in for him is... 4 [Isolated shot of Madoka standing at keyboards.] Shuu: [off] ...Madoka-kun! crowd: [off] Wah! Soooo cute! 5 [Madoka facial portrait.] 6 [Kyousuke looks on.] narration: Ayukawa... 7 Shuu: Because she only practiced overnight on the stage in front of the station, and on the way here, we ask for your courtesy! crowd: [off] She's cute, so we forgive her. Wah! 8 Shuu: I also went through that grueling crash-course training, didn't get much sleep, and practiced on the way here too, so out of consideration for my cuteness, I need your forgiveness! crowd: Wah ha ha. We don't forgive men!! FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 221 (199) 1 [Madoka gives us a wink and a thumbs-up.] 2 [Kyousuke smiles.] narration: Wh-what's this?! That's what it was?!? 3 [Shot of part of the audience.] 4 [Kyousuke glares, his eyes flashing.] narration: But... Shuu: [off] For our second song! 5 [Shuu looks over to Madoka as the band begins to play.] narration: ...that familiar way they behaved... 6 narration: What in the world sort of relationship might he have with Ayukawa?! ---------------------------------------------------