Kimagure Orange Road "The Thrilling Amusement Park!" Volume 3, Story 8 WB Volume 2, Story 9 Written and illustrated by Izumi Matsumoto Translation by Craig H. Nishida Compilation by Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Peter Norby Last revision : 9-19-94 NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()] NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a few extra's to those of you not having them. Example: (The subtitles on page 179(157) are only in the WB'S!) ____________________________________________________________ p 179 (157)--TITLE PAGE [Full-panel pic of Madoka sitting on the ground in warmup outfit & shorts.] MAIN TITLE (at top) The Thrilling Amusement Park! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) Stopped by the Stitching of Light and Shadow. A Summer's Day on Which You Hang Your Head, Deliberately Behaving with Cheerfulness. --------------------------------------------------- p 180 (158) 1 [Exterior shot of ABCB.] Master: [off] A lunchstand at the amusement park?! 2 Master: Hmm... 3 [Shot of Kyousuke, looking on wide-eyed.] Master: [off] There's been talk of running a hamburger-type fast-food stand inside the amusement park. It turns out that I'll need to send you, but just for a day. 4 [Shot of Madoka sitting at the counter in ABCB apron, likewise looking on wide-eyed.] Master: [off] But... 5 [Kyousuke sits at the counter about 2 stools away from Madoka. Master is behind the counter.] Master: [leaning and stage-whispering to Kyousuke] ...she's complaining that she won't go without you, Kyousuke-kun. Kyousuke: [turning head to look wide-eyed at Madoka] Eh?! [Madoka is likewise surprised.] 6 Madoka: Master!! I said no such thing! narration: These days continue to be cheerful ones... --------------------------------------------------- p 181 (159) 1 Master: [smiling] Anyway, joking aside... Kyousuke: [blushing] (It's a joke?) 2 Madoka: ...And we've had you work here before... 3 Madoka: ...and as for me... 4 [Kyousuke facial portrait--the idea appeals to him...] 5 Kyousuke: [standing] Okay, I'll help! 6 [Kyousuke walks away, looking back at Madoka.] Madoka: Then, I'll see you tomorrow at the amusement park! narration: I've got to admit, a summer vacation with Ayukawa is just the thing! 7 [Madoka smiles and gazes at Kyousuke as he leaves.] door FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 182 (160) 1 [Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment complex.] 2 [Kyousuke starts to enter his apartment, but Hikaru comes up from the side.] Hikaru: Sempai... 3 [Full-portrait of Hikaru standing in the hall.] 4 Kyousuke: Hikaru-chan! 5 Hikaru: [looking quiet and a bit sad] Sempai, there's something I wanted to ask you about... 6 Kyousuke: Eh?! narration: Somehow, this was a different Hikaru-chan... --------------------------------------------------- p 183 (161) 1 Hikaru: [glaring] Is there someone new that you like? 2 [Kyousuke goes into cardiac arrest.] Kyousuke FX: 3 Kyousuke: Wha... Wha...! Wha...!! Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 4 Kyousuke: [sweating] What are you talking about!! Hikaru: Because...! 5 Hikaru: [leaping into him, arms about his neck] We haven't seen each other in the past two days, and still, you haven't even phoned me. And on top of that, _three_days_ ago, I only got to spend a single hour with you! Kyousuke: EH?! --------------------------------------------------- p 184 (162) 1 Kyousuke: O-oh, is thaaat all?! Again, I was with Ayu... Hikaru: ?! 2 Kyousuke: Uh, nothing... 3 Kyousuke: Th-that's right. Next time, let's go somewhere and have fun! 4 Hikaru: HUH? Kyousuke: Where shall we go? Let's spend a full day together! If I'm with you, anywhere is fun!! 5 [Hikaru lets that sink in.] 6 Hikaru FX: Hikaru: Well, let's see then...! 7 Hikaru: Let's go to the amusement park tomorrow!! Kyousuke: Yeah, fine! 8 narration: Amusement park...?! Madoka: [flashback] Then, I'll see you tomorrow at the amusement park! Kyousuke: Ah! --------------------------------------------------- p 185 (163) 1 Kyousuke: T-tomorrow... And there... Wait now... 2 Hikaru: I'm so happy. Actually, I've been wanting to go to an amusement park for a long time now. 3 [Hikaru clings to his arm in happiness.] narration: ...On one hand, she's so happy, I can't tell her no, but on the other hand, it's already too late to take back my promise to Ayukawa! 4 narration: Well, all right, then. I have the Power in me!! Kyousuke: (And besides, an amusement park is such a large place, that they won't cross paths.) 5 [Shot of the entrance to the amusement park.] sign at left: Ticket Office 1000 Yen 500 Yen <2nd sign at left is unreadable by me.> sign at gate: Entrance Big sign: TOSHIMA EN message sign at right: You visited the entire place with admission, but how often does it take to become used to visiting? --------------------------------------------------- p 186 (164) 1 [Shot of several of the rides at the amusement park.] narration: While secretly dating Hikaru-chan, I'm also... narration: ...selling hamburgers with Ayukawa in the same amusement park. In other words, I began a tough schedule! 2 [Exterior shot of the deserted concession stand.] 3 [Madoka is inside the stand, working the grill. Kyousuke takes orders outside.] Kyousuke: Two hamburgers, two cokes. Madoka: [smiling] Hey, you're pretty good. Way to go! 4 [Kyousuke nervously glances at the clock.] narration: It's almost time! Kyousuke FX: 5 Madoka: Why are you so nervous? Kyousuke: O-one moment. I need to use the restroom. 6 Kyousuke FX: [searching] --------------------------------------------------- p 187 (165) 1 [He sees the Ferris wheel.] narration: That'll do fine! 2 Kyousuke: [running towards the Ferris wheel car] Wait! Let me on, please! Ticket attendant: Uh, sir. Your ticket? 3 [Kyousuke returns to the ticket booth, embarrassed.] Kyousuke: One junior high student. Oh, do you sell books of tickets? Ticket attendant: What?! 4 [Long-range view of the Ferris wheel. Kyousuke is at the top.] narration: All right. Right about now...! 5 Kyousuke teleport FX: 6 [Hikaru waits at the amusement park entrance.] sign: Entrance... Pool... 7 [Kyousuke walks up.] sign: Free... Hikaru: Sempaaai! --------------------------------------------------- p 188 (166) 1 [Tilted view of Hikaru and Kyousuke walking inside the park. Kyousuke points to the roller coaster.] 2 [They ride in the front car of the roller coaster. Hikaru clenches her eyes shut.] roller coaster FX: 3 Kyousuke FX: 4 narration: Now's the time... 5 narration: ...to go to Ayukawa! Kyousuke: (I'll be right back, Hikaru-chan!) 6 Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 189 (167) 1 [Kyousuke reappears in the Ferris wheel car.] Kyousuke FX: 2 [He steps off the Ferris wheel.] Kyousuke FX: 3 Kyousuke: I feel sick! I'm no good with roller coasters...! 4 Ticket attendant: (Roller coasters...?!) 5 [Exterior shot of the concession stand.] Madoka: [off] That's not right! 6 Kyousuke: [working the grill] Eh?! grilling FX: 7 Madoka: That hand technique is for preparing crepes! These are hamburgers. Hamburgers!! Kyousuke: ...oh. --------------------------------------------------- p 190 (168) 1 [She grasps his hand...] Madoka: Okay... Do it this way. 2 [...and comes oh-so-close-up behind him...] 3 [Tight shot of their upper torsos as she presses up against his back.] 4 [Kyousuke looks back and catches an eyeful of her cleavage.] Kyousuke FX: 5 [He blushes a deep, well, grey... When are they gonna colorize these things, anyway! ^_^] narration: O-oh no!! I have to be going soon! Madoka: See, hold it more firmly! crows-in-background FX: 6 Kyousuke: [jumping away from her] Th-that's right. There's not enough sauce, right? 7 Kyousuke: [leaving, looking back over his shoulder] One moment. I'll see if the next stand will let us have some. Madoka: Ah, Kasuga-kun! 8 [Madoka lets out a sad sigh.] --------------------------------------------------- p 191 (169) 1 [Kyousuke teleports onto the roller coaster tracks.] Kyousuke teleport FX: 2 [Kyousuke portrait--his life flashes before him...] 3 [The roller coaster approaches him at high speed.] Kyousuke: Wah!! 4 roller coaster FX: 5 [Kyousuke lands in his seat.] narration: Timing was a bit off! Kyousuke teleport FX: 6 Hikaru: Oh! I was scared! safety bar FX: 7 [They stand after exiting the ride.] Hikaru: I had my eyes closed the whole time. narration: Just in time! --------------------------------------------------- p 192 (170) 1 [Hikaru leaps into Kyousuke's arms. They stand next to a really funky- looking graveyard. Must be "Obake-Land". ^_^] 2 [In the concession stand, Madoka reaches past Kyousuke for a bowl. Kyousuke blushes at one of the benefits of working with a beautiful girl in tight quarters...] 3 [Kyousuke zips off the Ferris wheel, past the watching ticket attendant.] 4 [He rushes back onto the Ferris wheel, again past the attendant.] 5 [Shot of a soft-drink vending machine.] Hikaru: [off] I'm getting hungry! 6 Kyousuke: [pointing] W-well... Shall we go to that lunch counter? --------------------------------------------------- p 193 (171) 1 Hikaru: Someone was saying a little while back that there's a stand that serves tasty burgers! [Kyousuke is horror-struck.] 2 Hikaru: Let's try there! 3 narration: A-anything but that...! 4 [He sees the ventilation fan to the nearby concession stand.] 5 [He flashes with the Power.] narration: That's it!! 6 [The fan starts blowing hard.] fan FX: 7 Hikaru: Ah! Smells good! Kyousuke: Doesn't it? I'm sure that lunchstand is better! --------------------------------------------------- p 194 (172) 1 Hikaru: Is that so? Kyousuke: Right! 2 fan FX: 3 explosion FX: 4 [Kyousuke and Hikaru stare at the smoke billowing out from where the spinning fan once was.] smoke FX: 5 Hikaru: [walking off] Let's get some burgers, after all. Kyousuke: .......... 6 Hikaru: O-oh, that stand there! [Kyousuke slaps a hand to his face and thinks dark thoughts.] --------------------------------------------------- p 195 (173) 1 [Long-distance shot of the ABCB concession stand. Many customers surround it.] 2 Hikaru: It's pretty crowded. Kyousuke: [pointing off] Hey! Since it is, how about that stand over there... 3 Hikaru: [heading for the ABCB stand] But everyone knows that longer lines mean better food. Kyousuke: Ah, H-Hikaru-chan. 4 Kyousuke: [retrieving and depositing Hikaru into a seat] W-well, you sit and wait here while I go buy them! Hikaru FX: 5 [He runs off to the lunchstand.] narration: S-somehow I've got to do something to stop them from meeting! 6 [Inside the stand, Kyousuke searches... Madoka turns to look.] Kyousuke: (Well, let's see... Hamburgers, hamburgers.) 7 Madoka: [off] KASUGA-KUN! Kyousuke: Y-yes! --------------------------------------------------- p 196 (174) 1 Madoka: Where were you! There are customers waiting in line, you know! Kyousuke: R-right! "I'm back!" 2 Kyousuke: [working the grill] (What in the world am I doing...) grill FX: 3 Hikaru: (Sempai's so late.) 4 Hikaru: [approaching the stand] (I wonder if he's still in line.) 5 grilling FX: 6 [Surprise registers on Kyousuke's face.] 7 [He ducks out of view below the counter. Hikaru is outside looking about.] narration: Oh no! --------------------------------------------------- p 197 (175) 1 Madoka: What are you doing, Kasuga-kun? [Hikaru is right up to the counter, but not looking inside, or she'd see Madoka's back.] 2 [Close shot of Hikaru.] 3 [Tight shot of Kyousuke grabbing Madoka by the wrist.] 4 [He yanks her to the floor on top of him.] 5 [Closeup as she lands on him.] 6 [He flashes with the Power.] 7 [Shot of the gas used for the grill. In inset we see the valve being turned telekinetically.] valve FX: tank: L. P. G. Propane Gas --------------------------------------------------- p 198 (176) 1 Kyousuke: [pointing under the grill] Look at this. The flame went out. Madoka: Ah, it's true! 2 Madoka: [examining it closely] Strange, huh... [Kyousuke slips away.] 3 [Someone taps Hikaru on her shoulder.] hand FX: 4 Kyousuke: [with burgers] Okay. Here you go! Let's eat in the shade over there. 5 narration: And so, somehow, somehow... narration: ...this date ended without incident... 6 [Hikaru waves good-bye as she leaves. Kyousuke beams a smile.] narration: And it also looks as if Hikaru-chan's mood is cured! 7 Kyousuke: [sweating] Oh no! Ayukawa... --------------------------------------------------- p 199 (177) 1 [Shot of Madoka, standing quiet and subdued inside the concession stand. There are no customers about.] 2 Kyousuke: S-sorry. narration: I wonder if she happened to notice Hikaru-chan?! 3 Madoka: [unemotionally] It's obvious why the flame won't light. The gas valve is shut. Thanks to that I had a terrible time because I couldn't serve any hamburgers to the customers. 4 Madoka: [with a glint of irritation] And besides, what were you doing, sneaking out so often? Where in the world were you going?! 5 Madoka: [turning aside in displeasure] Well, I realize we're at an amusement park, and you may want to play... You're such a little boy! [Kyousuke clenches his eyes shut and sweats.] narration: S-saved! 6 Madoka: [setting down a stack of dishes] Here! These had better all be washed [by the time I get back], since it's my turn to play now! stack of dishes FX: 7 [Exterior shot of concession stand. Madoka walks away, tossing her hair back. Back at the concession, Kyousuke stands alone, chin in hands, elbows on the counter, watching her walk away.] narration: Looks like I made her a bit angry, but [all in all] it looks like it's all right! ---------------------------------------------------