"The Island of Forbidden Love" Volume 3, Story 5 WB Volume 2, Story 6 Written and illustrated by Izumi Matsumoto Translation by Craig H. Nishida Compilation by Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Andrew Wilson Station Zebra Last revision : 7-3-94 NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()] NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a few extra's to those of you not having them. Example: (The subtitles on page 115 (93) are only in the WB'S!) ____________________________________________________________ p 114 (92) Title at top margin: The Island of Forbidden Love 1 [panoramic view of a deserted and idyllic beach] Kyousuke: [off, exclamation due to the heat of the sand] Ouch! 2 [Kyousuke, lying on the sand, shades his eyes from the sun.] 3 Kyousuke: [sitting up] And it's so hot. narration: How long has it been? 4 [pov pulls way back and we see Madoka from behind, standing in the water, adjusting her bikini bottom--yi yi!] Madoka: Hey, are you only going to nap...? --------------------------------------------------- p 115 (93)--TITLE PAGE 1 [full-panel full-portrait of Madoka standing in shallow water in bikini.] Madoka: Let's swim! MAIN TITLE (at top) The Island of Forbidden Love SUB-TITLE (at bottom) The Key to the Heart Is Stolen in the Dazzle of the Summer Sun. My Feelings Almost Laid Bare... --------------------------------------------------- p 116 (94) 1 Kyousuke: [blushing] Ha ha! Okay! 2 [Madoka sits next to him on the sand.] narration: Definitely... 3 [Madoka stares off into the sea.] narration: ...if I came this far, there's nothing else to do but swim... Kyousuke: 4 [aerial view of the island] narration: ...here on this uninhabited island... --------------------------------------------------- p 117 (95) [This and the following 2 pages are black-bordered, denoting a flashback.] 1 [We get Hikaru's pov as Madoka, Kyousuke and Yuusaku stare back at us...] narration: Hikaru-chan was the one to suggest it! Madoka/Kyousuke/Yuusaku: A race?! 2 Hikaru: [smiling] Yeah! 3 [a view across the waves with Hikaru's arm pointing] Hikaru: Let's split into 2 groups and row over to that uninhabited island. 4 Yuusaku: (Good time to show off in front of Hikaru-chan.) Kyousuke: (What if the boat flips over...) Madoka: Sounds interesting. 5 Hikaru: [grabbing onto Kyousuke's arm] Then it's settled! Well, I'll team up with Darling. 6 [Kyousuke looks over at Madoka and Yuusaku ] Kyousuke: Ah! 7 Kyousuke: S-say. Why don't we draw lots? [Hikaru frowns.] --------------------------------------------------- p 118 (96) 1 [aerial view looking down on 2 rowboats in the open sea...] narration: The outcome of that was... 2 [A closeup of one boat...] narration: ...Ayukawa with me... Madoka: [holding up a sack as Kyousuke mans the oars] What's this bag? 3 Madoka: Emergency kit?! Kyousuke: 'Cause I can't swim... 4 [...and a closeup of the other boat.] narration: ...and Yuusaku paired with Hikaru-chan. Hikaru: [shouting, with stern look] Hey! C'mon, go faster! And if you get water on me, I won't forgive you! Yuusaku: [shouting] R-right! 5 Yuusaku: [glancing to his right] (Just watch! I'm going to make him look like a fool in front of Hikaru-chan.) Yuusaku FX: <(sinister) smile!> 6 Kyousuke: [glancing to his left] (No way am I losing to a first-year student.) Kyousuke FX: <(sinister) smile!> 7 Kyousuke & Yuusaku: Arg...! rowing FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 119 (97) 1 [facial portrait of Madoka looking off to the side] narration: But our boat was caught in a powerful current. Madoka: We're rapidly heading out to sea. 2 [Kyousuke & Madoka look across the waters at a shrinking Yuusaku & Hikaru.] narration: Our two boats became separated... Hikaru: [waving arms] Sempaaai! Madoka-saaan! 3 Madoka: [leaning and pointing] Oh well, let's head for that island! 4 Kyousuke: [paddling like crazy] N-no good. The current is too strong! The boat won't do what I tell it to do! rowing FX: 5 [Kyousuke's body flashes with the Power...] narration: Shit! The secret isn't worth the cost of our lives!! 6 [...which energizes his arms.] 7 Madoka: [falling back as the boat accelerates] Kya! boat/rowing FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 120 (98) 1 [End of flashback. Madoka and Kyousuke sit on the beach.] narration: And that's why I'm all alone with Ayukawa on this island! Madoka: But I'm worried about the others... 2 Kyousuke: They'll be all right. Surely by now they've returned to the beach!! Kyousuke FX: 3 Madoka: ...I suppose. 4 Kyousuke: [getting up] Well, let's go swimming. narration: Well... Besides, we have the boat, and the sun is still high... 5 Madoka: [standing] Hey, aren't you afraid of the water? 6 [Madoka gives Kyousuke a faceful.] water FX: 7 Madoka: [running off] C'mon! I'll give you swimming lessons! Madoka FX: Kyousuke: [chasing after her] Sure! --------------------------------------------------- p 121 (99) 1 [a tilted view of the beach] narration: No one else on this white sand and blue water... 2-3 [split panel of Madoka and Kyousuke at play] narration: There's only Ayukawa and me. 4 [they splash in the water] narration: The two of us alone on an island paradise. narration: Somehow, this seems just like the movie... 5 [full-profile of Madoka in bikini] narration: ...where a boy and a girl lived alone together on a deserted island just like this! --------------------------------------------------- p 122 (100) 1 [picturesque view of the calm sea, fluffy clouds and setting sun] narration: Well, if we don't return soon... Kyousuke: [off] Huh?! 2 Madoka: What is it? 3 Kyousuke: The boat is... Gone. Madoka: What! 4 Kyousuke: [standing near water's edge] T-that's strange. I'm sure it was right here. 5 Kyousuke: AH! 6 Kyousuke: I forgot to tie up the boat. narration: Because I used up too much Power to move the boat, I was barely conscious when we arrived here... 7 Madoka: You didn't... --------------------------------------------------- p 123 (101) 1 [view of waves lapping at the sand] Madoka: [off] What are we going to do? We can't go back! 2 Kyousuke: (An island like this probably doesn't have food or water. Oh god, this is turning into one of those survival tests!!) 3 [Madoka stands silent.] 4 Kyousuke: [slightly worried] Uh, well, by tomorrow a ship or something might pass nearby... 5 Madoka: [exploding] Get real! Are you saying it'll be okay to spend the night here?! Hikaru and Yuusaku would be worried! 6 [Kyousuke stands perplexed at her outburst.] 7 Madoka: [sternly] Anyway... 8 Madoka: We have to get back somehow. [Madoka spins about and heads off down the beach.] Madoka: I'll start looking over this way! --------------------------------------------------- p 124 (102) 1 Kyousuke: Oh! That way's rocky-- it's dange... 2 [He watches her retreating backside.] 3 narration: Ayukawa... Kyousuke: (It's _my_ responsibility...!) 4 [Kyousuke looks off across the waters.] 5 narration: All right, it's do-or-die time. If I can just make it to the beach... Power FX: 6 [a spectacular splash] re-entry FX: 7 Kyousuke: Phew. surfacing FX: narration: I-it's hopeless... I used up an awful lot of my Power getting here on the boat. I can't teleport as far as the beach! --------------------------------------------------- p 125 (103) 1 [Someone walks on the sand] footstep FX: 2 [It's Kyousuke. On the sand he spies the sack Madoka held up on the boat.] 3 Kyousuke: [flash thoughts!] T-that's right. This! We have this!! 4 [Elsewhere, Madoka climbs a vertical rockface over the pounding surf.] wave FX: 5 Madoka: (Perhaps there's a house on the other side of the island. Maybe we could borrow their boat...) 6 [The rock on which her right foot rests breaks off...] rock FX: 7 [...and she falls...] Madoka: AH!! --------------------------------------------------- p 126 (104) 1 [Kyousuke, gathering firewood, turns at the sound of her scream.] Madoka: [off] Kyaa! 2 Madoka grasp FX: 3 [Madoka clings to the cliff by her left hand.] rocks FX: 4 Kyousuke: [dropping the wood and running] "!" 5 Madoka: [eyes closed; a flash thought!] K-Kasuga-kun...!! 6 breaking rock FX: 7 [Madoka plunges past a climbing Kyousuke.] Madoka: Kya! Kyousuke: Ayukawa!! --------------------------------------------------- p 127 (105) 1 [With a burst of Power, Kyousuke dives off the cliff face after her...] leap FX: 2 [...catching her in mid-plunge. They plummet head-first.] 3 [Kyousuke sees that their heads are about to become intimate with Mr. Jutting Rock.] narration: W-we're going to hit!! 4 narration: Please, even if it's only a little bit, let there be some Power left!! 5 exploding rock FX: 6 Kyousuke/Madoka FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 128 (106) 1 [Later, they lie on the beach] gentle wave FX: 2 [Madoka kneels beside him as he lies back on the sand.] Madoka & Kyousuke: Kyousuke: That was dangerous! 3 Madoka: W-why did you do such a crazy thing! 4 Madoka: What if you were killed too! 5 Kyousuke: 6 Kyousuke: [glowing, looking heroic] But I'm the man! [And he glows with, um, testosterone, I suppose...] narration: Over here, if I don't protect you... 7 [Madoka is momentarily speechless.] 8 Madoka: [humbly] ...thank you. narration: ...who else will! [The stars twinkle in the sky.] --------------------------------------------------- p 129 (107) 1 [Madoka looks down the beach and sees the fire that Kyousuke had been working on previously.] 2 [They walk over to it.] Madoka: Oh! A fire... 3 Kyousuke: [tossing her the sack] See this?! 4 Madoka: [looking inside] It's the emergency kit I saw in the boat!! There's medicine, a lighter, and even some canned food! 5 Kyousuke: If we keep the fire going we can keep warm, and besides... ..it's only for a while. A passing ship might see us and come to help! fire FX: 6 [Madoka portrait] 7 [pov from down the beach--they sit side-by-side next to their blazing fire] --------------------------------------------------- p 130 (108) 1 Madoka: It's so quiet! Kyousuke FX: 2 Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: [gazing at her, but Madoka doesn't meet his look] (T-true. This is a deserted island, and it's night... Just the two of us...!) 3 fire FX: 4 Madoka: [flinching away from the flying ember] Ouch! 5 [She falls against him, her hand on his chest.] 6 [Romantic moment looms...] --------------------------------------------------- p 131 (109) 1 Madoka: [tenderly] At this moment... 2 [Kyousuke is silent.] 3 Madoka: [clinging close] ...not being rescued wouldn't be too bad. 4 Madoka: [gazing into his averted face] If that should happen... 5 [They lock eyes.] 6 Kyousuke: "If that should happen?" 7 Madoka: ...I'd probably... --------------------------------------------------- p 132 (110) 1 [The young would-be lovers stop at the sound of...] Hikaru: [off] Yuusaku, come on... 2 [Hikaru and Yuusaku appear by the fire] Hikaru: See? I told you someone's here. 3 Kyousuke: [freaked] H-Hikaru-chan?! 4 Hikaru: [ecstatic] Oh!! 5 Hikaru: [executing a flying tackle] Sempaaai!! Hikaru FX: 6 Hikaru: You're alive, after all! 7 [Hikaru hugs him tightly about the neck.] narration: W-what? What in the world's happening?! --------------------------------------------------- p 133 (111) 1 Hikaru: [stepping back to explain] We drifted ashore on the other side of this island! 2 [Madoka stands behind Kyousuke, who sits; both are wide-eyed.] 3 Hikaru: [sadly] We saw your boat drift by, and I thought the two of you fell out into the ocean... 4 Hikaru: [hugging Kyousuke] But it's so good to see you alive. I'm so happy! 5 [Kyousuke, sweating and in a daze, glances over at Madoka] Kyousuke FX: 6 Madoka: [tossing her hair back] Well... I think it's time to go home. After all, we found the boat... 7 [Madoka storms off as Hikaru hugs Kyousuke. Kyousuke watches wide-eyed as Madoka walks away. Yuusaku sits grimly by the fire.] Hikaru: Ooohh, a campfire is so romantic, don't you think? Since we're here, let's stay another 2 or 3 days, okay, Darling? Yuusaku: Shit! I thought for sure he'd croaked. 7 (inset) Kyousuke: [grimacing/sweating, with Hikaru wrapped around his neck] Ah... 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