"Panic at the Beach!" Volume 3, Story 3 WB Volume 2, Story 4 Written and illustrated by Izumi Matsumoto Translation by Craig H. Nishida Compilation by Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Andrew Wilson Station Zebra Last revision : 7-1-94 NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()] NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a few extra's to those of you not having them. Example: (The subtitles on page 71 (49) are only in the WB'S!) ____________________________________________________________ p 71 (49)--TITLE PAGE [Madoka stands on one leg, lifting the other foot behind her to undo her sandal. Her free hand holds the other sandal. She wears a sleeveless minidress/beachwrap.] MAIN TITLE (at top) Panic at the Beach! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) When Under Love's Spell, Cast Off the Blue Dress from Your Rose-Colored Skin and Kick Off Your Glass Sandals. Don't You Want to Revel in the Feel of Bare Feet...? --------------------------------------------------- p 72 (50) 1 [We see Madoka's lower legs as she leaves the water.] water FX: 2 [She is standing in a bikini.] 3-4 [She reaches for her towel to dry her hair, and seems to let out an unhappy sigh.] 5 Hikaru: [off] Aw.. hey, Sempai. Come on... 6 [Madoka looks on...] --------------------------------------------------- p 73 (51) 1 [...at Hikaru and Kyousuke playing in the surf.] Hikaru: Kyaa! wave FX: 2 Hikaru: I'm scaaared!! [Hikaru leaps into the security of his arms.] hug FX: 3 [closeup of their torsos pressed together] hug FX: 4 [Kyousuke blushes deeply] Kyousuke FX: 5 narration: T-this marshmallow feeling must be her...! 6 Kyousuke: A-are you okay, Hikaru-chan? narration: Hikaru-chan might seem slim, but actually, she's rather developed. Hikaru: Yeah... --------------------------------------------------- p 74 (52) 1 [She pulls back slightly to fasten her glisteny gaze on him.] Hikaru: ...because I'm with you, Darling. Kyousuke FX: 2 narration: She's been coming on to me awfully strong ever since we came to the beach... [Hikaru closes her eyes, inviting a kiss.] Kyousuke FX: 3 [Now, Kyousuke becomes the "marshmallow"...] Kyousuke: [closing his eyes] H-Hikaru-chan... narration: T-time to eat! 4 Kyousuke:[pulling back, looking over at Madoka] "!" 5 [closeup of Madoka staring daggers] 6 narration: Danger! Danger! 7 [Kyousuke hops back, puts arms behind his back and grins into the sky...] narration: Ayukawa has been angry ever since we got here. I wonder if I did something!? Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: Oh! How about we go get some ice cream or something... narration: But she's the one who stood me up. I just don't understand. --------------------------------------------------- p 75 (53) 1 Kyousuke: [sweating, sneaking a peek at Hikaru] (Now that was close. I almost started to kiss her...) Hikaru: [sneaking a peek at Kyousuke] (Darn! Just a little longer...) 2 [Hikaru watches another couple at play.] girl: Ouch! My leg has a cramp... [The boy goes to help.] 3 Hikaru: (That's it!) Imagined Hikaru: Oh! My leg cramped up. Imagined Kyousuke: What! That's awful! 4 Imagined Kyousuke: Come, hang on to me. Imagined Hikaru: Thank you. 5 [The lips of imagined Kyousuke and imagined Hikaru simulate the approach to a docking maneuver.] Hikaru: (All right. That's the plan.) 6 Kyousuke: (Ayukawa's behavior is really bothering me today. Why is she so upset?) (If she has something to say, she should say it already. I wonder if Ayukawa can't say anything because Hikaru-chan is around?) Kyousuke FX: 7 Kyousuke: [eyes bulging, in pained shock] "!" --------------------------------------------------- p 76 (54) 1 Hikaru: [shouting] Kyaa! Ow-ow-ow-ouch!! 2 Hikaru: Da-Darling, I have a leg cra... 3 Hikaru: [turns to see him] Dar... 4 Kyousuke: [holding one leg up] I have one, too! Hikaru: [gritting her teeth] "..............." 5 [Hikaru helps him out of the water.] Hikaru: Are you okay? Kyousuke: Yeah... 6 [Behind them, a seaweed-encrusted Yuusaku surfaces.] Yuusaku FX: 7 Yuusaku: (Damn! That jerk! I'll beat him up for being so close to her!) girls: Kyaa! A sea monster! --------------------------------------------------- p 77 (55) 1 [Hikaru walks back with 2 ice cream cones in hand.] 2 [From their table, some guys watch her pass by.] Jerk #1: Check her out! Pretty flashy, huh?! 3 [Jerk #1 steps in front of Hikaru.] FX: 4 [Hikaru stops, wide-eyed.] --------------------------------------------------- p 78 (56) 1 Jerk #1: Hello. Another hot day today, huh? Jerk #2: Oh, that looks good, little lady. [There's also a Jerk #3, but he never speaks a word...] 2 [Hikaru glares] 3 Jerk #1: Yeah, yeah. Give us some, too! Jerk #2: Yes, yes. 4 Jerk #2: [grabbing her by the wrist] What say we go off somewhere quiet to eat that together, and maybe get to know each other better? 5 [Hikaru shoves a cone into his face.] ice cream FX: 6 [She spreads it evenly about.] wrist rotation FX: 7 Hikaru: [with a dark and sinister look] Taste good? 8 Hikaru: [shouting] Do you want to try for more!? Jerk #1: Shit! [Jerk #2 wipes his face...] --------------------------------------------------- p 79 (57) 1 [...and lunges for her.] Jerk #2: Argh! [Hikaru easily sidesteps the charge...] Hikaru FX: [...but lands on a piece of broken glass.] 2 Hikaru FX: 3 Hikaru: "!" 4 [Hikaru crumples to the ground.] Hikaru: Ah-ow-ouch! Jerk #2: You see? That's what you get for being a tomboy! 5 Jerk #1: Shall I take a look at that for you? Heh! Heh! Heh! 6 Kyousuke: [walking and searching] Hikaru-chan is taking so long to buy ice cream. Where is she? 7 [Unknown to Kyousuke, Yuusaku rapidly approaches from the side.] Yuusaku: (Oh, there he is. I'm going to bury that jerk at sea.) Yuusaku's T-shirt (front): East Ministry announcement Yuusaku FX: Kyousuke: [seeing something] "!" --------------------------------------------------- p 80 (58) 1 [Jerk #1 has raised Hikaru up by her wrist. The other 2 jerks laugh.] 2 Kyousuke: H-Hikaru-chan!! Yuusaku: "!" 3 Yuusaku: What are they doing to Hikaru-chan!! 4 Yuusaku: [running past Kyousuke] Get outta my way!! Fool!! Yuusaku FX: Kyousuke FX: 5 Yuusaku: [charging] Argh!! Hikaru: [happily] Yuusaku!! --------------------------------------------------- p 81 (59) 1 Yuusaku FX: 2 Yuusaku headbutt FX: 3 [The jerks see stars...] 4 [Yuusaku watches them flee.] Jerks: Run! Jerks FX: 5 [Behind Yuusaku, Hikaru sits on the ground.] Hikaru: Thank you... Yuusaku. [Yuusaku blushes.] Yuusaku FX: 6 Hikaru: Could you help me up? Yuusaku: Y-yeah... 7 Kyousuke: [watching from a distance] (That jerk. He's just showing off.) 8 narration: But I have to admit, he cares about Hikaru-chan a tiny bit more than I. --------------------------------------------------- p 82 (60) 1 Kyousuke: (Anyway, I'll let him take care of Hikaru-chan for now, while I...) 2 [Kyousuke looks off in another direction...] 3 [...and runs.] narration: ...go and figure out why Ayukawa is so angry at me! 4 [aerial shot of the beach and a public shower/restroom] 5 Kyousuke: (Hmm... She was here just a minute ago.) (I wonder if she already went back to the inn?) 6 [He sees the restroom...] 7 Kyousuke: I guess I drank too much juice. [...and enters it, unaware that Madoka is showering just around the corner.] shower FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 83 (61) 1 [Madoka lets the water run on her head.] 2 [She reaches for her towel...] 3 [...and someone hands it to her.] Jerk #1: Here you go. 4 Madoka: Thank you. 5 Jerk #1: No problem. 6 [Jerk #1 blocks Madoka's exit.] Jerk #1 FX: 7 Jerk #2: Hey. Jerk #1: [singing] Blooocking your way... Blocking your way... --------------------------------------------------- p 84 (62) 1 Madoka: [smiling] Okay. I guess I'll have to give you the "pain treatment" to let me go. 2 Jerk #2: "Pain treatment"? Don't be silly! Jerk #1: We only want to have a good time... 3 [Madoka catches Jerk #1's nose with a left jab.] punch FX: Jerk #1: Ouch! 4 Jerk #2: She has awfully quick hands. Jerk #1: Let's get her! 5 spin kick FX: [Jerk #2 goes flying] 6 [The back strap of Madoka's bikini top pops loose.] strap FX: Madoka: Oh! 7 Madoka: O-oh, no! bikini top FX: [Madoka crosses her arms to keep her top on.] Jerks: [ogling] O-o-oh! --------------------------------------------------- p 85 (63) 1 Jerk #1: Any more violent movement would be embarrassing for you! 2 Kyousuke: [coming around the corner] Ayukawa!! Madoka: Kasuga-kun! 3 [Kyousuke's eyes zero in on Madoka's top...] 4 nosebleed FX: 5 narration: W-what's... I came 'cause I heard a cry, and w-what's all this? Kyousuke: What are you doing!! 6 Jerk #1: Shut up, boy! punch FX: narration: First shot--Miss! 7 punch FX: narration: Second shot--Hit! [Kyousuke goes flying.] 7 Madoka: Kasuga-kun!! --------------------------------------------------- p 86 (64) 1 narration: S-shit! Looks like I'll have to use my Power! (Because) I have to rescue Ayukawa! 2 [Kyousuke starts to use the Power, but...] 3 [...he visualizes Yuusaku charging these same jerks.] narration: But that guy defended Hikaru-chan using only his own real abilities. narration: No matter how you put it, it would be shameful to use the Power against them! 4 narration: But how can I protect her if I don't use my Power... [Kyousuke attempts to body-tackle Jerk #1] Kyousuke: Ayukawa, run!! 5 [Madoka spies her towel and gets an idea.] 6 [A fist extracts more blood from Kyousuke's nose.] narration: Just as I thought. It's impossible... Kyousuke FX: 7 Madoka: You. --------------------------------------------------- p 87 (65) 1 Madoka: [tying towel around her top] Now I'm really mad. towel FX: 2 Jerks: Eh! 3 [Madoka helps them see more stars...] 4 Jerks: [running off] We're very sorry! [Madoka dusts off her hands...] 5 [...and looks back at the unconscious Kyousuke.] 6 Madoka: [kneeling beside him] Kasuga-kun. Kasuga-kun! 7 Kyousuke: [dazed] A-Ayukawa... --------------------------------------------------- p 88 (66) 1 Kyousuke: [sitting up] T-those guys. Kyousuke FX: Madoka: They're gone already. 2 narration: I'm so pathetic. Kyousuke: Ow-ow... 3 Madoka: Silly, aren't you... Don't be reckless, okay? 4 Madoka: [turning her back to him] Well, shouldn't you be going? Isn't a special someone waiting for you? 5 [Realization smacks Kyousuke like a sack of shucked oysters.] 6 Kyousuke: Oh, that's it! 7 narration: I told Ayukawa that only the two of us would go... Kyousuke: I didn't know Hikaru-chan would be here. --------------------------------------------------- p 89 (67) 1 Madoka: [back still turned] Oh. 2 Kyousuke: Hikaru-chan merely gave me 2 coupons and said "I'll be waiting." I thought she meant she'd be waiting at home... 3 [Madoka is wide-eyed through all this.] 4 Madoka: [back still turned, she starts to walk off] That's none of my business. 5 Kyousuke: Wait! 6 [He grabs her by the wrist.] --------------------------------------------------- p 90 (68) 1 Kyousuke: It is your business! Because there was just the one coupon... 2 Kyousuke: ...and I gave it to you, Madoka Ayukawa! 3 [Madoka facial portrait--surprise] 4 [Kyousuke facial portrait--earnestness] 5 [Madoka facial portrait--tenderness] 6 Madoka: [beaming] I see! [They hold hands.] --------------------------------------------------- p 91 (69) 1 Kyousuke: But... It's too bad! Madoka: What? 2 Kyousuke: [eyeballing her, um, towel...] I would like to have seen more... Perhaps I should have been a little slower in helping you... Kyousuke FX: 3 [Madoka yanks her hand back...] hand FX: 4 [...and marches off down the beach. Kyousuke gives chase.] Kyousuke: Just kidding! Just kidding! 5 [Meanwhile...] Hikaru: Hey! What are you touching?! slap FX: Yuusaku: What do you mean?-- I'm putting medicine on you. ---------------------------------------------------