Kimagure Orange Road "Jealousy Rain" Volume 2, Story 7 WB Volume 1, Story 15 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Craig H. Nishida Compilation by : Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Matthew Klippenstein George Robbert Jordan Lampe Last revision : 02-07-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis() NOTE: Translation is done from both the normal and WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having one or the other. Example: The subtitles on pages 326-327 (140-141) are only in the WB's! --------------------------------------------------- p 325 (139) 1 [Exterior shot of ABCB.] Hikaru: [off] See ya. sign: Pub & Restaurant ABCB title: Jealousy Rain 2 [Hikaru and Kyousuke walk home.] Hikaru: [clinging to his arm] Okay, time to go home, Darling! narration: As usual, I left ABCB with Hikaru-chan when... 3 Kyousuke: H-hey, Hikaru-chan. Hikaru FX: 4 [Kyousuke notices something over his shoulder.] narration: Somehow... I felt someone staring daggers at my back... 5 narration: When I turned my head to look... 6 [A boy stands staring.] narration: There was a guy watching me! --------------------------------------------------- p 326-327 (140-141)--TITLE PAGES [Pages 326-327 are a double-page title-page spread. Hikaru on the left page and Madoka on the right. Both stand with umbrellas, looking back cheerfully at us over their inside shoulders. The skies are overcast.] MAIN TITLE (at top) Jealousy Rain SUB-TITLE (at bottom) They're Stopped by a Call: "I'll Walk You Home," and When They Turn, You Give an Embarrassed Laugh... They Like the You Who Stands in the Rain. --------------------------------------------------- p 328 (142) 1 Hikaru: What's wrong, Sempai...? 2 Kyousuke: That guy... [Hikaru also turns to look.] 3 Yuusaku: [zipping around a corner] Oops! Yuusaku FX: 4 Kyousuke: Someone was watching me. Hikaru: Huh? 5 [They return to the corner to look around.] Hikaru: But there's no one here! Kyousuke: Huh? That's weird... 6 [There is an open manhole just around the corner.] Yuusaku: [off] .......... 7 Yuusaku: [sitting in water with a cute rat on his knee] He's... Kasuga Kyousuke, eh? --------------------------------------------------- p 329 (143) 1 [Exterior shot of a school building. It starts to rain.] 2 [Kyousuke stands alone under a building, sheltered from the rain.] 3 Madoka: Why are you standing around with a blank look on your face? 4 Madoka: Aren't you going home? [Kyousuke looks up, nervously.] 5 Kyousuke: [forced smile] I'm not standing around because I *want* to... 6 Madoka: [looking back over her shoulder] I didn't think it possible to be so lame as to forget to bring an umbrella during the rainy season... But it's something like that, hmm? 7 Kyousuke: [wincing] It's like that. 8 [Madoka smiles...] --------------------------------------------------- p 330 (144) 1 [...and opens her umbrella.] umbrella FX: 2 Madoka: If you want, why don't we share mine? 3 Kyousuke: [smiling] Eh?! Sure it's okay?! 4 Madoka: [cheerfully] Please do. But using my umbrella will cost you. One cup of coffee isn't going to be enough. 5 [They walk off together.] Kyousuke: Thank you! 6 Hikaru: [off] SEMPAAAI! 7 [Madoka and Kyousuke suddenly move off in opposite directions. Kyousuke ends up in the rain.] Madoka/Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 331 (145) 1 Hikaru: [under an umbrella] Huh? Madoka-san, are you also going home now? 2 Hikaru: What's the matter, Sempai? Do you like the rain? Kyousuke FX: 3 Kyousuke: [forced laughter] Th-that's it. Ha ha ha. I have strange tastes. Hikaru: [sternly] That's a taste I can't really admire. 4 [Kyousuke notices something up above.] 5 [It's Yuusaku--watching from a 2nd-floor window of the school building.] 6 Kyousuke: (It's him again!) 7 Yuusaku contemplation FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 332 (146) 1 [Kyousuke's pov of his 2 lovely girlfriends. They smile and chat.] 2 [Kyousuke's pov of Yuusaku, staring at the 2 girls.] 3 narration: Huh? That guy's looking at... 4 narration: ...Ayukawa?! 5 Hikaru: I still have a little school business to take care of. Sempai, please give up your strange tastes and use this umbrella! [She extends it to him...] 6 [...and runs back into the building, waving back at them with a smile. Madoka waves back nervously.] Kyousuke: Th-thanks... --------------------------------------------------- p 333 (147) 1 [Kyousuke looks back up at Yuusaku.] 2 narration: That guy... Still looking this way. 3 Madoka: What? What are you looking at? [She looks up...] 4 [...and sees Yuusaku.] Madoka: Th-that boy. 5 Yuusaku: [wide-eyed and blushing] (Ah!) 6 [He walks away from the window.] Yuusaku: Hmmph. 7 Kyousuke: Who is he? Madoka: It's Yuu-kun. He's Hino Yuusaku, a neighborhood boy, who I'm sure should be in first-year now. --------------------------------------------------- p 334 (148) 1 [Shot looking up at an electric pole and the heavy, overcast skies.] Kyousuke: [off] So, a childhood friend? 2 Madoka: [cheerfully] Well, I guess it's like that. When we were little, the three of us, including Hikaru, often played together... Kyousuke: Hmm. 3 Madoka: [merrily] I had a good relationship with him--just like brother and sister. Now I remember. We often bathed together, too. 4 Kyousuke: B-BATHED?! 5 Madoka: [wide-eyed] What kinda face are you making?! Kyousuke: Eh?! 6 Madoka: We were little, of course! Kyousuke: Oh, th-that's right. Ha ha ha. 7 [They walk off in the rain.] narration: Like brother and sister, huh... --------------------------------------------------- p 335 (149) 1 [Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.] 2 [Kyousuke visualizes Yuusaku.] Kyousuke: (But he was certainly looking at Ayukawa!) (That's not the sort of look a kid brother gives to a big sister!) 3 [Kyousuke sits on the floor, with his back against the side of his bed.] Kyousuke: (Besides the fact they were childhood friends, how long has it been since they were together...) (He knows a side of Ayukawa that I don't know!) Kyousuke's T-shirt: Harada 4 [He visualizes Madoka and Yuusaku soaking in the bath.] narration: No, not just one side, but *all* sides!! 5 Kyousuke: THAT BASTARD!! 6 [He visualizes Yuusaku again.] narration: Maybe Ayukawa's the one he... --------------------------------------------------- p 336 (150) 1 [View of the sign outside classroom 3-A.] Yuusaku: [off] Hey, you. 2 [In the hall, Kyousuke is stopped from entering the classroom by Yuusaku.] Kyousuke: Eh? 3 Yuusaku: You're in the same class as Ayukawa-sempai, right? 4 narration: Ah, this guy... 5 Yuusaku: Is Ayukawa-sempai here? Kyousuke: Eh?! Ah, I think she's here... 6 Kyousuke: (What's this? For an underclassman, this guy sure talks cocky...) Kyousuke FX: 7 Yuusaku: Hey, tell her Hino wants to speak to her. Kyousuke: ........... All right... 8 Kyousuke/Yuusaku stare FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 337 (151) 1 Madoka: Huh? Yuu-kun. 2 Madoka: [smiling] You look as good as ever. Yuusaku: Yes! It's been a long while, Madoka-san! 3 Madoka: It's unusual. You asking to see me. 4 Yuusaku: [glaring at Kyousuke] Um, there's something I want to ask you, Madoka-san. Yuusaku FX: Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 5 Kyousuke: (Something he wants to ask...) 6 Madoka: ? Kyousuke/Yuusaku stare FX: 7 Yuusaku: Uhh, please come with me over there. Madoka: .......... Okay. [The two walk off.] 8 narration: S-sure enough, Ayukawa's the one he... --------------------------------------------------- p 338 (152) 1 [View looking up at the rooftop of a school building.] 2 [Kyousuke's pov from the stairwell door of Madoka and Yuusaku chatting together on the rooftop.] 3 [Yuusaku laughs.] 4 [Madoka laughs.] 5 Kyousuke: (Shit... What the heck are they talking about? Even Ayukawa seems happy. Dammit.) narration: Certainly, being an old childhood friend helps... Because he's known the Ayukawa from long ago, too. 6 [Yuusaku suddenly becomes vehement.] 7 [Madoka goes wide-eyed with surprise.] 8 [Kyousuke blushes and sweats.] narration: Wh-what? What did he say just now? --------------------------------------------------- p 339 (153) 1 [Yuusaku heads off towards the stairs, leaving Madoka behind.] 2 Kyousuke: (Oh no! He's coming this way.) Kyousuke teleport FX: 3 [Yuusaku descends the stairs.] Yuusaku footstep FX: 4 narration: Allll right. What say I give him a scare?! [Kyousuke flashes with the Power.] 5 [At the top of the stairs, behind Yuusaku, some buckets begin to move.] bucket FX: bucket labels: For Fire Prevention 6 [Yuusaku looks back to see the buckets falling toward him.] bucket FX: 7 Yuusaku: [tumbling down the stairs] WAHHH! [Kyousuke stands nonchalantly at the bottom of the stairs.] --------------------------------------------------- p 340 (154) 1 Yuusaku: Ow-ow-ow. Kyousuke: [off] Ha ha ha ha. 2 [The two glare at each other.] 3 Yuusaku: What's so funny? Kyousuke: Nothing. 4 Yuusaku: [glaring] You're an eyesore! 5 Kyousuke: [glaring] So are you! 6 Yuusaku: [smiling] I'm not one who likes excessive violence. Why do you think that is? 7 [With his right arm he demolishes a classroom door.] Yuusaku FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 341 (155) 1 Yuusaku: [looking at his fist] Oops, slipped! Did it again. 2 Yuusaku: [smirking ominously] In this way I can usually do great damage to my opponents. I'm not one who does karate half-heartedly! Kyousuke FX: 3 Yuusaku: If possible, please don't make me use this right hand of mine. [Kyousuke is wide-eyed and aghast.] Kyousuke FX: 4 Yuusaku: [spinning about] See ya. 5 Yuusaku: [looking back] Oh yeah, I forgot to say... Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 6 Yuusaku: [angrily] I *will* take her back from you!! --------------------------------------------------- p 342 (156) 1 [Kyousuke is surprised, but angered...] 2 [...and he watches Yuusaku walk away.] 3 narration: Th-that guy... 4 [A hand comes to rest on his shoulder.] Madoka: [off] Hi! Madoka touch FX: Kyousuke: Wah!! 5 Kyousuke: Ayukawa... Madoka: What kinda face are you making?! 6 Madoka: What are you gonna do, Kasuga-kun? 7 Kyousuke: "Wh-what am I gonna do," she asks. 8 Madoka: [smiling] He told me he's in love, after all. Kyousuke: EH!! --------------------------------------------------- p 343 (157) 1 Kyousuke: [flash thought] H-he likes... Ayukawa... 2 Madoka: From the way it looks, it's pretty serious. Kyousuke: EH!! 3 Madoka: [eyes closed, smiling] He really seems to like Hikaru. 4 [Kyousuke goes wide-eyed.] 5 Kyousuke: Hikaru-chan?! 6 Madoka: He says he's liked Hikaru for a long time. --------------------------------------------------- p 344 (158) 1 Madoka: [arms crossed] Just now, he came to ask me about your relationship to Hikaru... I'm not quite sure what's going on, either. 2 Kyousuke: Th-then. It isn't you... 3 Kyousuke: [beaming] Ohhhhh! I'm glad! 4 Madoka: HUH?! 5 Madoka: [demure] What's to be glad about? Kyousuke: Because I was convinced that you were the one he... 6 [He slaps a hand over his mouth.] Kyousuke: AH! 7 [Madoka smiles a smile of contentment.] --------------------------------------------------- p 345 (159) 1 narration: Somehow, I was greatly relieved that Ayukawa wasn't the object of his affections! 2 Kyousuke: [wincing] (Well... In any case, I'm glad...) 3 Madoka: C'mon, it's time for class. narration: But... Somehow, things were turning into a tangled web...! [They walk down the hall.] 4 Kyousuke: [looking off-panel] AH! 5 Madoka: What? 6 Kyousuke: Rain again... [Side-by-side, they both stop to look out the window.] narration: Does Hikaru-chan know about that guy's feelings? ---------------------------------------------------