Kimagure Orange Road "The Incoherent Feeling!" Volume 2, Story 5 WB Volume 1, Story 13 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Craig H. Nishida Compilation by : Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Matthew Klippenstein Ramon Galindo Last revision : 02-07-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis() NOTE: Translation is done from both the normal and WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having one or the other. Example: The subtitles on page 281 (95) are only in the WB's! --------------------------------------------------- p 281 (95)--TITLE PAGE [A view through a camera viewfinder at Madoka who stands outside, resting her elbow on the counter of a concession stand. A burger sits at her elbow, a soft drink in her hand.] MAIN TITLE (at top) The Incoherent Feeling! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) A Gentle Breeze Through the Green Growth Feels Wonderful... A Shot of Her in a Shaft of Sunlight! --------------------------------------------------- p 282 (96) 1 [Exterior shot of a school building.] 2 [Kyousuke peers into the classroom through a crack in the partly-opened door.] door FX: 3 [His eye scans the classroom.] 4 Matsuoka-sensei: [off] KASUGA-KUN. Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: Y-YES! 5 Matsuoka-sensei: [standing in the hall] What are you doing so early in the morning? Kyousuke: [blushing] Ah, no, it's nothing... 6 [He enters the class, behind Matsuoka-sensei.] Kyousuke FX: 7 [He sweats and peers about the room...] narration: But... --------------------------------------------------- p 283 (97) 1 [...and visualizes the slap he got the night he was drunk.] narration: How unpleasant! Considering what happened yesterday, I don't have the guts to face Ayukawa... 2 Kyousuke FX: 3 [Madoka is glaring at him.] Madoka contemplation FX: 4 [Kyousuke cringes.] Kyousuke FX: 5 [He puts on a nervous smile and waves to her.] Kyousuke: G-good morning. 6 Madoka avert-gaze FX: 7 [He looks down, in defeat.] narration: Aaaah! Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: (If I could, I'd rather be home today!) --------------------------------------------------- p 284 (98) 1 narration: But... I have to do something about this! 2 [His pov of Madoka, who sits at her desk and pointedly ignores him.] 3 [Exterior shot from ground level, looking up at the roof of a school building.] schoolbell FX: 4 [Madoka walks down the hall with her schoolbag.] Kyousuke: [off] AYUKAWA! 5 Kyousuke: [nervously] U-uh... About yesterday... 6 [She turns to look at him...] Kyousuke: [embarrassed] A-at the time, I... 7 [...then turns her back on him.] Madoka FX: 8 Kyousuke: (She won't even listen to anything I say... It's not going to be easy to solve this...) Madoka FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 285 (99) 1 [Exterior shot of ABCB.] Hikaru: [off] Huh? 2 Hikaru: I'm sure... 3 Hikaru: [lifting a steaming mug] I ordered ice tea. Madoka: Ah... 4 Madoka: Oh, that's right... Sorry, I'll make it again, right away. Hikaru: Oh, don't worry. 5 Hikaru: [musing] But... That's so strange. Madoka: Huh? 6 Hikaru: Oh, I mean, for you to make an absent-minded mistake... 7 [Madoka stops, wide-eyed...] 8 Hikaru: Did something happen? [Madoka's back is towards Hikaru, but we see the look of great surprise on her face.] --------------------------------------------------- p 286 (100) 1 Madoka: E-everything's fine! It was only an unsuccessful pass!! 2 Hikaru: WHAT? 3 Madoka: OH! 4 Hikaru: "Unsuccessful pass"...? What are you talking about? 5 [Madoka grows pensive, and visualizes Kyousuke the night he got drunk and tried to kiss her.] narration: Even though he said he hates delinquents, to then turn around and try something like that! Kyousuke: [flashback] You're different from them! 6 narration: What the heck was he trying to pull? At that moment, I might have... 7 Master: Speaking of strange, he hasn't come today, hmm? Kasuga-kun... --------------------------------------------------- p 287 (101) 1 Madoka: [blushing, gaze downcast] Here, Hikaru. Ice tea! ice-tea FX: 2 Hikaru: ? 3 [Master's pov of an obviously-flustered Madoka.] 4 [Madoka's pov of a concerned Master.] 5 [Exterior evening shot of ABCB.] --------------------------------------------------- p 288 (102) 1 [Madoka stops at the door as she leaves ABCB.] Madoka: So then... 2 Master: Ayukawa-kun. 3 [A view of a wall. A poster of a girl in sailor suit, saluting, is partly in view.] Master: [off] In the end, he never did show his face here. 4 [Madoka facial portrait.] 5 Madoka: [sternly] That has nothing to do with me. 6 Master: [smiling] ...... In that case, then it's okay, but... I mean, it's really nice to be young, hmm?! 7 Master: Since youths are frequently hot-headed and have too much energy, they get sidetracked... --------------------------------------------------- p 289 (103) 1 Master: But, as for him, there should also be times that call for seriousness! 2 [Madoka blushes slightly as she takes in his words.] 3 Master: [with a wink] Well, he's a regular customer and we should take good care of those! 4 [Madoka's features relax.] 5 [Exterior shot of ABCB.] Madoka: [off] I put you through an exhausting time.* <*Cultural note and commentary: A common phrase that doesn't translate well into English--something said in courtesy after a long day of work. It implies an apology for having put the other through such an ordeal.> door FX: sign: ABCB 6 [Madoka stands just outside the door, in thought.] 7 Madoka: [smiling] 'kay! 8 [She walks off.] --------------------------------------------------- p 290 (104) 1 [Shot of the sign outside classroom 3-A.] 2 [Kyousuke, at his desk, isn't aware of the approach of a female classmate...] Madoka: Excuse me... 3 Kyousuke: [looking up in surprise] EH?! 4 Madoka: [smiling] It's about yesterday... 5 Kyousuke: [leaping to attention] Y-yes!! Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: Wh-what is it? 6 [Komatsu hooks Kyousuke by the arm.] Komatsu: [grinning] Kasuga, let's go buy some bread!! 7 [View of Madoka, who stands, a bit unhappy.] Kyousuke: [off] Ah. Eh?! But... 8 Komatsu: [racing off with Kyousuke in tow] If we don't go early, we won't have the pleasure of meeting the illusive katsu-sand today. --------------------------------------------------- p 291 (105) 1 Komatsu: Wait for me, my little katsu-saaand. 2 [Madoka lets out a little puff of air.] 3 Madoka: [spinning about] (I'll eat lunch with Hikaru then.) 4 [A view of the usual mob outside the lunch concession. Kyousuke has emerged holding two items.] crowd FX: sign: Kyousuke: (Got 'em. Katsu-sand.) 5 Kyousuke: (I wonder what on earth Ayukawa wanted just then. Maybe she was going to forgive me...) sign: Concession crowd FX: Got some bread. Wahhh, ouch! [From off to the side, Hikaru spots him, her face lighting up.] 6 [She executes another neck-tackle of Kyousuke... He goes bug-eyed, as do many of the students around them.] crowd FX: OHHH! Hikaru: Kasuga-sempaaai!! 7 narration: As usual, Hikaru-chan's boldness overwhelms me... crowd FX: Kyousuke: J-just a minute, Hikaru-chan. --------------------------------------------------- p 292 (106) 1 Hikaru: [looking him in the eye] HUH? 2 Hikaru: Do you usually have bread , Sempai? Kyousuke: W-well... 3 Hikaru: [holding and glaring at a katsu-sand] That's no good!! During your growth years, you shouldn't only be eating this sort of stuff! 4 Hikaru: [brightly] I know! I'll share my box lunch with you and we'll eat it together on the rooftop! 5 [She gazes tenderly into his eyes.] Hikaru: RIGHT?! Darling. Kyousuke: [sweating, blushing] Y-yeah! 6 [She practically slings him over her back and drags him off down the hall.] Hikaru: That's good, that's good! Kyousuke foot-dragging FX: 7 Komatsu: [merrily eating] Kasugaaa. Go for it... --------------------------------------------------- p 293 (107) 1 [Ground view looking up towards the roof of a school building.] Kyousuke: [off] Ayukawa strange? 2 [They stand at the rail.] Hikaru: That's right. Madoka-san doesn't seem her usual self and is acting absent-minded. 3 Hikaru: [suddenly turning to look at him] Still... I wonder if something has happened? Kyousuke heartbeat FX: [The skies darken...] 4 Hikaru: [glaring at him] She's not talking about it, even to me. I'm sure something big must have happened! Kyousuke heartbeat FX: [The day turns pitch-black around him...] 5 [The sunlight returns...] Kyousuke: [nervously] (S-something big, huh...?) 6 Kyousuke: [closing his eyes in resolve] (Liquor is so frightening.) --------------------------------------------------- p 294 (108) 1 [Shot of the sign outside classroom 1-B.] 2 [A girl talks to Madoka.] Hikaru's classmate: Hikaru? Oh, if you mean Hiyama-san... 3 Hikaru's classmate: It looked as if she was going to the rooftop. Madoka: Rooftop? 4 [Hikaru smiles merrily as she lifts up a shrimp tempura with her chopsticks.] Hikaru: Here! Say "ahh". 5 Kyousuke: [opening wide] Ahh. 6 Kyousuke FX: 7 Hikaru: Taste good? Kyousuke: Y-yeah... 8 [View pulls back to show them kneeling and facing one another.] Hikaru: I wonder if I'll make a good wife? Kyousuke: [nervously looking up at the sky] W-well. I suppose. (But, is it okay for me to be doing something like this right now...) --------------------------------------------------- p 295 (109) 1 [Looking over Hikaru's shoulder, Kyousuke sees something off-panel.] Kyousuke: HUH? 2 [His pov of Madoka, who stands at the entrance to the rooftop.] 3 [He blushes.] narration: Ayukawa...!! 4 [She blushes.] 5 [Madoka spins around to leave. Hikaru smiles, not having noticed anything.] narration: O-oh no! Even though things were bad enough, with this I'm history!! --------------------------------------------------- p 296 (110) 1 Kyousuke: [yelling and pointing up at the sky] Look!! What's that? It's a ! with in katakana...> 2 [Hikaru turns to look up, shading her eyes from the sun.] Kyousuke FX: Hikaru: Huh? Where, where? 3 [In the stairwell, Kyousuke calls out to Madoka, who is headed down, one flight below him.] Kyousuke: W-wait, Ayukawa! 4 [He looks back out the door to the rooftop...] Kyousuke: (I'm sorry, Hikaru-chan!) 5 [...and flashes with the Power.] narration: Now. I can't very well let her know about Ayukawa! 6 door FX: 7 [Out on the rooftop, Hikaru stands and looks around.] Hikaru: That's strange. He's not here. Hikaru: Huh? Darling? --------------------------------------------------- p 297 (111) 1 [Shot of Kyousuke's feet as he heads down the stairs.] Kyousuke FX: 2 [He de-materializes in mid-stride.] Kyousuke teleport FX: narration: Arrrgh. I'll teleport on ahead of her! 3 [Madoka resolutely heads on down the stairs.] Madoka FX: 4 Madoka: (What?! That guy! I was finally going to let him off the hook.) (If he wants to get friendly with Hikaru, then fine!) 5 [Madoka pulls up in great surprise...] 6 [Kyousuke stands at the foot of the stairs, arms crossed.] Madoka FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 298 (112) 1 Kyousuke: Anyway, listen to what I have to say! 2 Madoka: What is it? If it can make me laugh, then fine... 3 [She continues on down the stairs toward him.] Madoka FX: 4 Kyousuke: [emphatically] Truly, it wasn't my intention to do that sort of thing. Everything I did and said then was because of the alcohol! 5 Madoka: Such an irresponsible person! 6 [Kyousuke pauses in shock.] 7 Madoka: [frowning] Kasuga-kun, just by getting drunk you're liable to do that sort of thing? 8 [Wide-eyed, he slaps a hand to his mouth.] Kyousuke: AH! --------------------------------------------------- p 299 (113) 1 Madoka: [walking past him down the stairs] I misjudged you, Kasuga-kun... 2 [Her pov of Kyousuke--he stands, looking down.] 3 [His pov of Madoka--she keeps her gaze forward as she passes him.] 4 [View of her foot on the stairs.] Madoka FX: 5 Madoka: Sayonara. Madoka FX: 6 [View shows Madoka's face, as she stops in surprise at hearing...] Kyousuke: I was drunk then, and don't really remember... But this much I'm sure of! --------------------------------------------------- p 300 (114) 1 Kyousuke: If it wasn't you, I wouldn't have done such a thing! 2 [She continues on down the stairs.] 3 Madoka: [facing away] Really? 4 Kyousuke: I'm not lying! 5 Madoka FX: 6 Madoka: [turning to face him] That's right! I still haven't eaten lunch. 7 Madoka: [soft smile] I'm pretty hungry. --------------------------------------------------- p 301 (115) 1 [Kyousuke is quite surprised by the sudden shift in mood.] 2 Madoka FX: 3 Kyousuke: [reaching into his pocket] Oh, yeah. Wait a minute! Kyousuke realization FX: 4 Kyousuke: [beaming] Then would you like to have this? narration: It looks as though Ayukawa's mood is cured... 5 Madoka: Isn't that the illusive...? 6 Kyousuke: [tossing it] Katsu-sand! Madoka: Thank you. [She catches it in her left hand.] narration: For the time being... Joy joy! 6 (inset) Hikaru: [sitting, smiling and eating] Huh? This is really delicious. ---------------------------------------------------