Kimagure Orange Road "Shopping Boogie!" Volume 2, Story 2 WB Volume 1, Story 10 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi Translation by : Craig H. Nishida Compilation by : Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Gary Kacmarcik Wes Shull Ramon Galindo Ka-Ping Yee Last revision : 02-07-95 Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.edu NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis() NOTE: Translation is done from both the normal and WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having one or the other. Example: The subtitles on page 215 (29) are only in the WB's! --------------------------------------------------- p 215 (29) [Madoka stands in a phonebooth, leaning back against the wall, dressed in shirt and shorts.] MAIN TITLE (at top) Shopping Boogie! SUB-TITLE (at bottom) That Cute Girl, out of a Page from My Heart! A Photograph of a Dazzling Start of Summer... --------------------------------------------------- p 216 (30) 1 [Half-page panel of Madoka, walking down the street, in minidress.] 2 [1/4 rearview as she walks past our pov. Guys walking in the opposite direction find their eyes strangely attracted to her...] 3 [A ball flies through the air...] 4 [...lands and rolls to a stop near Madoka.] ball FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 217 (31) 1 [Madoka looks off in slight surprise...] 2 [It's a small kid, who smiles and waves his baseball glove, inviting her to toss it to him.] kid: Sorry! 3 [She frowns slightly.] 4 [The kid loses his smile.] 5 Madoka FX: 6 [She picks up the ball...] 7 [...and throws a sparkling toss, as only Madoka can. ^_^] --------------------------------------------------- p 218 (32) 1 [The kid makes a rather unorthodox catch--well, go look at the pic!] kid: Thanks, oneechan! 2 [Madoka smiles cheerfully and waves...] 3 [...but stops suddenly to stare at her waving hand.] 4 [She inspects the hand closely.] narration: I never used to do this sort of thing before... 5 [She wipes her brow and looks off into the distance.] narration: I've been cheerful lately! 6 [Isolated shot of some downtown buildings.] 7 [Kyousuke waits on the sidewalk, leaning back against the side of a building. He is dressed semi-formally.] --------------------------------------------------- p 219 (33) 1 Madoka: [off] Waited long? 2 Kyousuke: N-no. I just got here. narration: Actually, I arrived 30 minutes ago... Madoka: Oh. 3 [Kyousuke's pov as Madoka leans in close and inspects his attire.] Madoka FX: Madoka: Hmm... 4 [Madoka's pov of Kyousuke tugging his coat on straight.] Kyousuke: Eh?! S-something... 5 Madoka: Pretty flashy, huh? Kyousuke: [nervous] I-is that so? 6 Madoka: But, that's okay! Kyousuke: (M-maybe I should have worn my regular clothes after all.) narration: Actually, yesterday... --------------------------------------------------- p 220 (34) 1 [Exterior shot of ABCB.] sign: Pub & Restaurant "Abakabu" 2 [Inside, Madoka and Master lean on the counter in discussion over a list she's holding.] 3 Kyousuke: Hello! [Master and Madoka turn to look at him without expression.] 4 [Master facial-portrait.] 5 Master: [smiling merrily] Kyousuke-kun, I hear that Ayukawa-kun wants to go on a date with you tomorrow. Kyousuke: [stunned] Da--?! Madoka: [indignant] Masterrrr!! 6 Master: Just joking. I'm sending Ayukawa-kun shopping tomorrow to buy the little things we use here in the restaurant... 7 Master: But it seems that the department store would take a week to have the things delivered... And I have to be here in the restaurant. So we were just saying that it would be nice to get a guy to lend a hand for this! 8 Master: [off] How's that sound, if I might ask?! --------------------------------------------------- p 221 (35) 1 Madoka: [angrily] I'll be fine by myself! Kyousuke: [ticked] I'll go! 2 Master: Oh, thank you! It's because you're a guy. Well, have a glass of cold sake. Kyousuke: [embarrassed] No... Ha ha ha. 3 Madoka: [seriously] Let me make it clear that we won't be going for fun! 4 [Isolated shot of a department store building.] 5 [Shot of various pans in a display case.] Madoka: [off] Then, this one, and... Oh, and that, too... store clerk: [off] Yes. Very well, Miss! 6 [Madoka points out her choices as a smiling female clerk looks on. Kyousuke watches in silence and wonder.] 7 narration: Ayukawa's so reliable. When she's like this no one would ever believe we're both in junior high. 8 store clerk: [handing a stack of packages to Kyousuke] Here you go! Please take this. --------------------------------------------------- p 222 (36) 1 store clerk: [smiling] How admirable... Helping your big sister today? 2 [Kyousuke stops in surprise.] crows-in-background FX: Madoka FX: 3 Kyousuke: [exploding] Y-you're mistaken! I-I'm...!! [The packages held in his arms jostle and fall to the floor.] packages FX: 4 Kyousuke: Ahhhhh! 5 [As Kyousuke kneels to pick up all the packages...] Madoka: [loudly] PULL YOURSELF TOGETHER, KYOUSUKE-CHAN! lady customers: Tee-hee. lady customer: Heh! 6 Kyousuke: [holding it in] (Sh-shit! If it's going to be like this, I shouldn't have come!) 7 [Kyousuke watches as Madoka points out more items to a different clerk.] 8 [Madoka looks back at the now somber Kyousuke.] --------------------------------------------------- p 223 (37) 1 Madoka: You're still bothered by what the salesclerk said a while back, aren't you. 2 Kyousuke: [meekly] .......... Do I look so immature? 3 Madoka: [forced smile] W-well... But on the other hand, isn't that your charm? Kyousuke: [quietly indignant] (In other words, you'd like to say that I'm a brat...!) 4 [Madoka portrait--she gives him a gentle smile.] 5 Madoka: [turning and smiling back at him] Well, we're done shopping... Let's go drink coffee or something. Today, it's my treat! 6 [Isolated shot of the cafe inside the department store building.] 7 [Two jerks spot Madoka sitting at a table.] --------------------------------------------------- p 224 (38) 1 [They approach Madoka from behind her. Kyousuke looks on with dismay.] jerk 1: You're cute... jerk 2: We're students at Nakagawa High School... Why don't we go on a date? 2 jerks FX: 3 Kyousuke: [standing] J-just a minute, you guys! Aren't you being rude?!! Kyousuke FX: 4 jerk 1: Who's this jerk?!! jerk 2: Oh, shouldn't you be going home for the November 15 Ceremony, kid? Kyousuke FX: 5 jerk 1: Hey, hey. Rather than hanging out with a little kid like this... Come with us...! jerk 2: Yes, that's right. Kyousuke: C-can't...let you say...! [Madoka sits quiet and stone-faced through all this...] 6 jerk 2: [sternly at Kyousuke] What's that? Kyousuke FX: 7 [Kyousuke sweats and glances at Madoka.] Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 225 (39) 1 [A hand waves the check at Kyousuke's cheek from over his shoulder...] bill FX: 2 [It's Madoka, who heads to the exit. Kyousuke clutches the check in his hand. ] Madoka: Thanks for the hospitality! Kyousuke: Ah, w-wait! 3 [The jerks frown as they watch Kyousuke chase after the departing Madoka.] jerk 1: Damn! 4 [Kyousuke, carrying the packages, walks 2 paces behind Madoka.] Kyousuke FX: 5 Madoka: [from inside elevator] What are you doing? If you don't hurry the doors will shut on you! Kyousuke: [running] R-right! 6 [Inside the elevator, Madoka stands with eyes closed, wearing a frown. Kyousuke studies her out of the corner of his eye.] narration: Ayukawa... She sure seems angry. Kyousuke FX: 7 Kyousuke: (How pathetic! If this keeps up--more and more, I'll be treated coldly like a little brother...) --------------------------------------------------- p 226 (40) 1 Madoka: Huh? 2 Madoka: That's odd. Don't you smell something burning? Kyousuke: N-now that you mention it... 3 [The elevator comes to an abrupt halt and the two go flying.] elevator FX: Kyousuke and Madoka: WAH!! 4 elevator lights-off FX: 5 elevator cabling FX: elevator lights-on FX: 6 Kyousuke: [spotting smoke entering the elevator from under the door] AH! --------------------------------------------------- p 227 (41) 1 Kyousuke: F-fire!! 2 Kyousuke: Wh-what'll we do?! Madoka: There's a telephone! 3 Kyousuke: [grabbing phone] Oh, yeah. Hello! 4 Kyousuke: Hello. Right now we're in an elevator... voice: [off] Okay. Be patient a little while longer. Help is definitely... 5 voice: [off] Wahhhhh! Smoke over here, too...! Kyousuke: Eh? [Kyousuke stares at the receiver in his hand.] voice FX: 6 Madoka: [concern on her face] What is it? Kyousuke: It's a fire after all... 7 Kyousuke: It looks as if it's out there as well, so they may not have time to rescue us... 8 Madoka: [wide-eyed] Oh... --------------------------------------------------- p 228 (42) 1 [Madoka holds her handkerchief to her mouth as smoke begins to fill the elevator.] Madoka FX: 2 Kyousuke: [reaching up] Even the ceiling panel won't open! 3 [He jumps back down. ] Kyousuke FX: 4 Madoka: It isn't going right, like the way it does in the movies. 5 [Kyousuke looks at her with concern.] 6 narration: If I use the Power, both of us could escape with ease... But, if I do, then that would mean Ayukawa... 7 Kyousuke: [flash thought] (Shit! What should I do?!) --------------------------------------------------- p 229 (43) 1 narration: But... If she thinks of me as a brat, then... I've no chance at a relationship with her. 2 Madoka: The smoke's this bad already... 3 Madoka FX: Kyousuke: A-are you all right?! 4 Madoka: I wonder... If we'll die... Kyousuke: Eh?! 5 Madoka: [gaze downcast] Kasuga-kun... I don't think of you as a kid brother. [Kyousuke goes wide-eyed.] 6 [Madoka looks up at the ceiling.] 7 narration: I'll have to change schools again. Kyousuke: Ayukawa... Don't be surprised, but please listen to me! I'm really... --------------------------------------------------- p 230 (44) 1 [Kyousuke begins to flash with the Power.] 2 Kyousuke: (I-I hear something!! Someone's voice?!) 3 Kyousuke: [flash thought] (That's it. If I concentrate the Power on my ears!) 4 Madoka: What? What's the matter? Kyousuke: [concentrating] Shh! Be quiet!! 5 [Madoka portrait--surprised and perplexed.] 6 Madoka: Kasuga-kun?! [Kyousuke continues to concentrate with eyes closed.] 7 [Their pov of the elevator doors, smoke wafting in the air.] narration: No mistake about it... I faintly hear... Someone's voice! narration: It's from outside the elevator! --------------------------------------------------- p 231 (45) 1 Kyousuke: [eyes popping wide] Eh?!! 2 [Kyousuke breathes a sigh of relief.] narration: G-good...! Kyousuke: Whew! 3 Kyousuke: [brightly] It's all right! I'm sure we'll be rescued!! 4 [Madoka looks at him.] 5 Kyousuke: [embarrassed] I-I mean, I feel that way for some reason... 6 Kyousuke: So let's be a little more patient. Look! Even the smoke isn't coming in anymore. --------------------------------------------------- p 232 (46) 1 [Madoka studies him...] 2 [...then gives a small hopeful smile.] Madoka: Uh-hmm! 3 Madoka: [gaze downcast, tossing her hair back] You're a guy after all, hmm, Kasuga-kun? 4 [Kyousuke portrait--bemused smile.] narration: Now... 5 Kyousuke: [forced smile] Really? I'm so happy you think so. Madoka: You're holding that against me, huh?! 6 Madoka: [sternly] Well, putting that aside, what were you about to say a little while ago? "Not to be surprised" about what? narration: I wonder if Ayukawa thinks a bit better of me now. Kyousuke: [placatingly] Eh?! N-no. That was... Don't worry about that. It wasn't important... --------------------------------------------------- p 233 (47) 1 Madoka: [gentle smile, another toss of her hair back] Whaaat? I was quite sure that... 2 Kyousuke: Quite sure... What? 3 Kyousuke: [leaning towards her] Hmmm?! 4 Madoka: [small smile] Nothing. Kyousuke: Ah, that's not fair! 5 [View looking down at Madoka talking to elevator repairmen/rescuers. Kyousuke exits the elevator carrying the packages. Two security guards stand nearby.] narration: And 10 minutes later... We were safely rescued from the elevator... sign: Chuugoku Department Store 7th Floor Romeo-20 Restaurant --------------------------------------------------- p 234 (48) 1 [Isolated shot of scorched table and chairs.] narration: The truth was... This disturbance originated at the restaurant inside the department store. Smoke from a small fire got into the ventilation and entered the elevator. That's all it was! 2 Madoka: Hey, Kasuga-kun... Kyousuke: Eh? 3 Madoka: [with angry expression] Because of that phone call, you knew it was no big deal, didn't you! 4 Kyousuke: EH?! 5 Madoka: [turning to go, looking back over shoulder] Unbelievable! Troubling someone like that. There's a limit to how far you can go! If you knew, why didn't you say so? That's sneaky! 6 [Madoka heads for the doors as Kyousuke chases after her, burdened by the packages.] Kyousuke: W-wait just a minute! I tell you I really didn't know! narration: Actually, I say that, but of course it's a lie... --------------------------------------------------- p 235 (49) 1 [Outside, he stumbles and the packages go flying.] Kyousuke: Wah! 2 [From high overhead we see Madoka walking away, Kyousuke chasing after.] Kyousuke: Wait! Ayukawaaa! sign: ...no Commercial Affairs Happy 5F Snack & Pub [But splashed over the left side of the page is a front view of Madoka. And we see that she is smiling.] ---------------------------------------------------