Kimagure Orange Road "The Secret Part-Time Job" Volume 1, Story 8 WB Volume 1, Story 8 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi This script is based on the existent script by Enrique Conty. Translation by unknown (pencil annotations found in KOR Volume 1) Original typesetting by : Enrique Conty Additional translation by : Craig Nishida Compilation by : Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Peter Norby Last revision : 11-11-94 NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis() NOTE: Translation is done from BOTH the WB and normal manga. So depending on which one you have there may be a few extra items. Example: The subtitles on page 171 (169) are only in the WB'S! Comments on the revision (CN): A few missing lines and the wideban subtitles were translated, as well as many missing FXs, stutters, exclamations and honorifics. During editing, other lines were modified by the members of the translation team. For the purposes of translating, visual cues were also inserted to allow those without the manga to also contribute to the translation effort. [This script is not intended to be a substitute for the manga; you'd only be cheating yourself...] --------------------------------------------------- p 171 (169)--TITLE PAGE [Madoka stands in blouse and miniskirt, one hand on hip and the other hoisting a tray of food and drinks. The "whimsical drink" referred to below is 7-Up.] MAIN TITLE (at top) The Secret Part-Time Job SUB-TITLE (at bottom) How About Having a Whimsical Drink with Me...? --------------------------------------------------- p 172 (170) 1 [Exterior shot of a school building.] narration: At last, Golden Week starts tomorrow! sign: Kouryou School... narration: And since our school has consecutive holidays at midterm, it's become a vacation period... 2 [Kyousuke and Hikaru walk out the building together. Kyousuke looks glum, but Hikaru has her ever-present cheerful smile.] narration: It's like a nice, little vacation, but... Hikaru: Sempai, do you have something planned? 3 [She looks at his expression and is perplexed.] 4 Hikaru: What's wrong? You don't look so happy. 5 Kyousuke: [smiling at her] You look happy, Hikaru-chan. 6 Hikaru: [beaming] Yes, of course!! I'm going to Karuizawa by car with my family! --------------------------------------------------- p 173 (171) 1 Kyousuke: [forcing a smile] Ha ha ha. Technically, I was also invited to go to Hokkaido with my family... ...but instead, I refused, saying I'd rather spend the vacation lazing about at home! narration: Which is why I have the feeling that I won't seem to know what to do with my spare time... 2 Hikaru: [clinging to his arm] Then, Darling, maybe I'll take you along with me to Karuizawa. [Kyousuke shakes a bit.] narration: Making a mistake while going with Hikaru-chan would also be terrible. 3 Hikaru: Hey, won't you come with me? Kyousuke: W-well... B-but... 4 [Madoka exits the school gate, and Hikaru spots her.] Hikaru: Ah! 5 Hikaru: [waving while clinging on to Kyousuke's arm] Yoo-hoo! Madoka-sempaaai! 6 [Madoka turns, trying not to look too unhappy.] --------------------------------------------------- p 174 (172) 1 Hikaru: [clinging on with both arms] You're in such a hurry. What's wrong?! [Kyousuke stands stiff, and sweats.] narration: I always think... 2 narration: ...I don't want Ayukawa to see me like this!! [Kyousuke winces.] 3 [Madoka portrait--expressionless.] 4 Madoka: [smiling] Nothing special... So! 5 Madoka: [looking back over her shoulder] See you, Kasuga-kun. 6 [She walks off.] 7 [Kyousuke watches her receding back as Hikaru cheerfully rests her head on his shoulder.] narration: "Nothing special"? What in the world has happened to her? Ayukawa has been going home strangely early these past few days... For some reason, that worries me! --------------------------------------------------- p 175 (173) 1 [Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.] 2 [Kyousuke's pov of the TV screen. An idol singer does a cutesy act.] 3 [Kyousuke sits, bored and near comatose.] 4 [Another view of the idol singer. She does a little skirt-twirl...] 5 [He turns off the TV.] TV FX: 6 Kyousuke: Boring! Too boring... 7 [He lies back on the floor, amidst a "Jump" and "Nova" magazine and stacked bowls of ramen/saimin.] Kyousuke: A page from my dazzling youth... What am I doing in here? Kyousuke FX: 8 [This and the next 4 panels are round-cornered, denoting a flashback.] narration: It's my old man's fault... Takashi: [smiling] I'm going to Hokkaido to work for just a week... But we'll be in Golden Week then, so why don't you come along? 9 Kyousuke/Manami/Kurumi: [ecstatic] Ehhh?! Really?! All right!! --------------------------------------------------- p 176 (174) 1 [The twins chatter while Kyousuke merrily checks a travel guide.] Manami: Hey, Kurumi, what are you going to wear? Kurumi: Since I heard they have penguins in Hokkaido, I'd better have a coat or something, huh? Kyousuke's book: "Hokkaido's a Fine Place... Probably."--Dambe 2 Takashi: Except that... [The children pause in shock.] 3 Takashi: I was only able to get tickets for three people!! Kyousuke, you're the oldest, so give a ticket to your sisters! [Kyousuke is horror-struck.] Kyousuke reaction FX: 4 [Back to the present. Kyousuke still lies on his back on the floor. He frowns up at the ceiling.] Kyousuke: So cruel... He raised my hopes, then dashed them, dammit! 5 Kyousuke: Aaaah! If it's going to be like this, I really should have gone with Hikaru-chan to Karuizawa! 6 [Just a grey panel with overlaid FX bubble.] Kyousuke stomach FX: 7 Kyousuke: [sitting up] Oo-ooh. I'm hungry. I haven't eaten anything decent since morning. I get hungry even when I'm not doing anything! --------------------------------------------------- p 177 (175) 1 [Kyousuke walks down the sidewalk.] sign 1: KK <"komura"> sign 2: Top Brokerage sign 3: Top Brokerage 2 [He spies something.] 3 [Wow! It's a new restaurant! Hmm. Looks like "BCB"... ^_^] 4 Kyousuke: Hmmm?! "Restaurant and Pub"! This wasn't here the last time I passed by... 5 Kyousuke: [entering] (This place should have food.) 6 Kyousuke: [taking a seat at a table] (Ohh, this restaurant has a rather nice feel to it.) 7 [A waitress comes up. Our pov is from behind so we only see Kyousuke looking up at her.] waitress: What will it be? Kyousuke: Let's see, well... 8 [He looks up and his face falls.] --------------------------------------------------- p 178 (176) 1 Madoka: [surprised] Kasuga-kun...?! both: AH! 2 Kyousuke: [wide-eyed] Ayukawa... 3 [Madoka portrait.] 4 [A little later. Kyousuke eats while Madoka sits across from him and keeps him company.] Kyousuke: Really? You're working here all through the holiday? Madoka: A person I know runs this place, so I feel at ease! 5 Madoka: [smiling gently] But, don't tell the school. Because we're not allowed to work. 6 Madoka: But, Kasuga-kun, I was surprised to find you around here. Kyousuke: Really. 7 narration: So this is why she was going home so early, huh? Kyousuke: [smiling] Whew! --------------------------------------------------- p 179 (177) 1 [From behind the counter, the shop proprietor calls out to Madoka.] Master: Ayukawa-kuuun. Madoka: Yes. 2 Madoka: [to Kyousuke] Can you wait a minute? 3 [Kyousuke watches her and smiles.] narration: Even though it was a coincidence, and we're not going anywhere, this is a good thing! 4 [Madoka and Master confer. Kyousuke keeps smiling.] Kyousuke FX: 5 [Master approaches Kyousuke at his table.] Master: [smiling] I hear that you're Ayukawa-kun's classmate? 6 Master: [embarrassed and jovial] Phew, that's good. I was just short-handed, and I was at a loss what to do! Wah ha ha! I'm saved! 7 Kyousuke: EH?! Wh-what are you talking about?! 8 Master: As I hear it, you live around here, too. How about it? At least during just the middle of Golden Week, could I ask you...?! I'll pay you . Kyousuke: Huh?! --------------------------------------------------- p 180 (178) 1 Madoka: [standing next to his table] I'd like you to help out too, Kasuga-kun! 2 [Madoka portrait--how can you resist this face, Kyousuke...] 3 Kyousuke: [smiling, embarrassed] W-well... I wonder if I should... Master: [beaming] So you'll do it? Oh, I'm saved! 4 Master: [handing him stuff] If that's settled, then here you go! Your employee sweatshirt, duster and tray! Kyousuke: [incredulous] Ehh? Right now?! 5 [Later, in the employee dressing room...] Kyousuke: [removing his shirt] (I kind of feel forced into this job.) 6 Madoka: [poking her head in the room] Is the size okay? door FX: 7 Kyousuke: [facing locker, shirtless, back to door] Wait a minute, now... --------------------------------------------------- p 181 (179) 1 [Madoka goes wide-eyed.] 2 Kyousuke: [looking back at her with a surprised smile] ? 3 Madoka: I'll leave the apron right here. And hurry. The place is quite full. Kyousuke: Thank you. 4 door FX: [She leans back against the wall for a moment to compose herself...] 5 [...and lets out a sigh.] 6 [View of a busy restaurant.] 7 [Kyousuke apologizes to a customer who has just received a lapful of water. Madoka unsuccessfully tries to stifle her laughter in the background.] narration: And so, it started out on a strange note, and that's how I came to be working here... --------------------------------------------------- p 182 (180) 1 [Kyousuke waiters...] narration: Although this job is pretty tough, maybe because Ayukawa's here I'm not bothered at all! 2 [He drops a plate...] 3 [...but uses the Power to save it.] levitating plate FX: 4 [Kyousuke grabs the plate.] Madoka: [looking] ? narration: Nobody knows that I'm working with Ayukawa here. 5 [He sweeps the floor before opening time.] narration: Of course, it's a secret from Hikaru-chan, too. 6 [Madoka enters.] narration: It's just our secret!! 7 Kyousuke: [cheerfully] Good morning! 8 Kyousuke: [at the cash register] Thank you. narration: It's like I got a little closer to Ayukawa's mysterious private life... --------------------------------------------------- p 183 (181) 1 [Exterior night shot of ABCB.] narration: And before you know it, it's May 5th... Last day of work! 2 [Inside, the three share drinks at the counter. Master stands behind it, Madoka and Kyousuke sit side-by-side.] all: No-o-o... Ha ha ha. 3 Master: Thanks, Kasuga-kun! <*> Your help saved me. Was it hard? <*Translation note: This phrase is difficult to translate into English. Master here says "o-tsukare-san!"--said by one after a long day, and is sort of an apology plus offer of thanks to another for putting that person through such a long day.> 4 Kyousuke: [smiling] Yeah, but it was a lot of fun. Master: Is that because Ayukwawa-kun was here? 5 Kyousuke: EH?! 6 [Madoka portrait-a bit surprised, a bit contemplative.] 7 Madoka: [calculatingly] But Master, is it okay to be goofing off in a place like this? (lit., "to be selling oil/lard in a place like this") Isn't your wife waiting for you? --------------------------------------------------- p 184 (182) 1 Master: [heading out] Okay, okay. I can't win with you, Ayukawa-kun. Well, I'll be going so please lock up the place, okay? 2 door FX: narration: But what Master said is true... 3 narration: I took this job to be together with Ayukawa. [He looks at her. She's busy drinking.] 4 Madoka: Kasuga-kun, all I've seen you drink is juice. Kyousuke: B-but, after all I'm still in junior high. 5 Madoka: C'mon, it's okay! It's on the house. 6 Madoka: [smiling gently] Or are you such a serious boy? 7 Kyousuke: I-I'm not like that! Madoka: Probably so. --------------------------------------------------- p 185 (183) 1 Kyousuke: [stopping short] Eh? 2 Madoka: [focusing on her drink] Because--although you promised a date with Hikaru, you stood her up and went riding in a boat with me at the park. Kyousuke FX: 3 Madoka: [tossing back one] You're disgusting! Kyousuke FX: 4 narration: Th-that's harsh...! Madoka: [turning to look at him] Do you know what that's called? Kyousuke: [giving nervous look] Eh?! 5 Madoka: [smiling gently] A flirt. 6 [Madoka pours another one.] drink pouring FX: Kyousuke: (Sh-she's making strange digs at me tonight...) 7 Kyousuke: Ayukawa, don't you think that's enough? 8 Madoka: Do you honestly like her? Hikaru? --------------------------------------------------- p 186 (184) 1 [Kyousuke portrait--stopping short.] 2 Madoka: [hand over mouth] AH! 3 Madoka: [looking aside unhappily] Sorry. 4 Kyousuke: But... Madoka: [looking back] Huh? 5 Kyousuke: [gentle smile] This is the first time I've seen you talk as much as this. Madoka: [smile] Is that so? 6 Madoka: For some reason, I feel good tonight. 7 [Kyousuke portrait--he looks over at her.] 8 [Shot of a painting/poster on the wall depicting three of the "Fab Four", I think.] Kyousuke: [off] Ayukawa... Shouldn't you be going home? Madoka: [off] AH! --------------------------------------------------- p 187 (185) 1 [Exterior shot of the bus stop sign.] 2 [Overhead view looking down. Madoka and Kyousuke stand at the bus stop.] Madoka: Sure enough, I'm not in time for the last one... Kyousuke: Too bad. What'll we do? 3 [Kyousuke studies the bus schedule.] Madoka: Isn't...everyone at your house gone on a trip? Kyousuke: Yup! But they'll be back tomorrow afternoon. 4 [What she's driving at registers in his mind and he suddenly turns to look at her.] 5 [Madoka stands there, hands behind her back.] 6 Madoka: [flashing with a gentle smile] Won't you...let me stay for the night? --------------------------------------------------- p 188 (186) 1 [Kyousuke, wide-eyed.] 2 [Madoka portrait--Kyousuke's pov as she gazes directly into his eyes.] 3 [A view from down the street. They stand facing each other.] Kyousuke: Ah!... Ayukawa... 4 Madoka: [smiling playfully] I won't tell Hikaru. 5 [Kyousuke portrait--thinking really hard.] 6 [Madoka falls against him. He catches her and holds her against his chest.] --------------------------------------------------- p 189 (187) 1 narration: A-Ayukawa... 2 [Another view from down-the-street. In silhouette, they embrace...] 3 Kyousuke: Huh? 4 [He looks down at a dozing Madoka.] Madoka sleep FX: narration: She's asleep... 5 [From behind a car beeps its horn. Kyousuke looks back.] car horn FX: 6 Hikaru: [sticking her head out the car window] Yoo-hoooo, Sempaaai, Madoka-saaan!! 7 Kyousuke: [horrified] H-Hikaru-chan! Arg! narration: Uh-oh! 8 Hikaru: [beaming and waving] Did you just finish? With work? You must be exhausted! --------------------------------------------------- p 190 (188) 1 Kyousuke: [surprised] What?! 2 [Hikaru stands on the sidewalk near the two. Kyousuke still holds the sleeping beauty...] Kyousuke: Y-you knew? Hikaru: Yeah. I heard from Madoka-san over the phone that you were working with her. 3 Hikaru: [getting a closer look at Madoka] Oh? She got tired and fell asleep? 4 Hikaru: [holding up Madoka] I'll take her home. 5 Hikaru: [in passenger seat of car] See you later at school, Sempai!! 6 car driving-away FX: [Kyousuke is left to stare at the receding car.] 7 narration: Wh-what?! I thought the job was only our secret... What in the world was I getting all happy about then? --------------------------------------------------- p 191 (189) 1/2 [Panel 1--Kyousuke walks home.] narration: But those words weigh on my mind... 2 [He visualizes Madoka...] Madoka: [flashback] Won't you...let me stay for the night? 2/3 [Panel 3--He visualizes her falling against him.] narration: Ayukawa... What did she mean by it?! 4 [Pov looking up at his head and the starry sky overhead.] narration: Is it simply because she was drunk? 5 [View of the sleeping Madoka, in the back seat of the Hiyama's car.] 6 [View of the car on a street.] narration: Or...? ---------------------------------------------------