Kimagure Orange Road "Lakeside Rhapsody" Volume 1, Story 5 WB Volume 1, Story 5 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi This script is based on the existent script by Enrique Conty. Translation by unknown (pencil annotations found in KOR Volume 1) Original typesetting by : Enrique Conty Additional translation by : Craig Nishida Compilation by : Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Peter Norby Last revision : 11-11-94 NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis() NOTE: Translation is done from BOTH the WB and normal manga. So depending on which one you have there may be a few extra items. Examples: The subtitles on page 105 (103) are only in the WB'S! The one-page "Character Profiles" at the ends of the first six chapters are omitted in the WB's! Comments on the revision (CN): A few missing lines and the wideban subtitles were translated, as well as many missing FXs, stutters, exclamations and honorifics. During editing, other lines were modified by the members of the translation team. For the purposes of translating, visual cues were also inserted to allow those without the manga to also contribute to the translation effort. [This script is not intended to be a substitute for the manga; you'd only be cheating yourself...] --------------------------------------------------- p 105 (103)--TITLE PAGE [Madoka, in school uniform, leans out from behind a translucent veil.] MAIN TITLE (at top) Lakeside Rhapsody SUB-TITLE (at bottom) The Mysterious Enigmatic Smile on the Other Side of a Secret Veil Troubles Me for Some Reason... --------------------------------------------------- p 106 (104) 1 [Madoka takes a shower.] Madoka shower FX: 2 [In front of the mirror, she closes her eyes and tosses back her hair.] faucet FX: 3 [She exits the bathroom...] door FX: 4 [...toweling her hair.] --------------------------------------------------- p 107 (105) 1 [Her body swathed in a towel, she opens the drapes of her bedroom window.] drapes FX: 2 [Madoka-with-wet-hair portrait.] 3 [She opens her desk drawer. Inside are 2 packs of cigarettes.] drawer FX: 4 [She puts an unlit cigarette in her mouth.] 5 Madoka: [eyes growing wide] AH! 6 [She takes the cigarette out of her mouth and stares at it...] 7 narration: Come to think of it, I haven't smoked since that day... [Madoka has a flashback to chapter 1.1--"The Red Straw Hat", normal manga page 32, panel 9.] Kyousuke: If you smoke cigarettes at your age, you won't give birth to healthy babies!! --------------------------------------------------- p 108 (106) 1 [She smiles in amusement.] Madoka: Heh! 2 narration: Funny. I've firmly kept to his word... 3 [She sits at her bed, now in underwear.] narration: Till now, teachers and others have told me much the same thing, but... 4 narration: ...I never listened... 5 [Kyousuke portrait.] narration: Kasuga Kyousuke... Weird guy... 6 [She pushes the cigarette back into the pack.] Madoka cigarette FX: 7 Madoka:[standing at window, looking out] What a nice day! I think I'll go to the park. --------------------------------------------------- p 109 (107) 1 [Shot of an electric tram-car at a station.] streetcar FX: sign: [left/cut-off by panel] ...chikku ...pan poster: [middle] I'm Assistant H of ... poster: [right] 2 [Some riders wait around; others purchase tickets.] 3 Kyousuke: [studying map above ticket machine] Let's see... Nakagawa Street... ticket machine sign [partial]: ...All Lines 4 Kyousuke: What's this? It's only the third station? I've got another two hours. Looks like I'm a bit early. 5 [Panels 5-7 have rounded corners, denoting a flashback. Here we have a shot of the fence that borders the school's soccer field.] Kyousuke: [off] Ehhhh?!! 6 [Kyousuke and Hikaru stand and talk next to a building.] Kyousuke: Ehhhh?!! A d-date?! W-with me...?! 7 Hikaru: [wide-eyed and very nervous] Yes! Are you free this Sunday? Hikaru FX: Kyousuke: Eh! W-well. Sorta, but... --------------------------------------------------- p 110 (108) 1 [Panels 1-5 continue the flashback.] Hikaru: [gleefully] All right! Lucky! I'm so happy!! 2 [Two guys walk by. One holds an open book.] guys FX: Hikaru: [blushing] Ah! book title: A Discussion of Capital 3 Hikaru: [flashing her "dark side"] Hey! Hey! What ya' lookin' at?! I'll kick your ass!! guys FX: 4 [Cute Hikaru portrait overlays this panel... She lifts a hand in farewell.] Hikaru: Bye. I'll be waiting in front of Nakagawa Street Station at one o'clock on Sunday! [In the panel itself, we see her running off.] Kyousuke: Ah. Just a minute, Hika... 5 narration: I was astonished because it was so unexpected... Kyousuke: ...but it was decided without any say-so from me... 6 [End flashback. Kyousuke walks down the station steps.] narration: I didn't feel bad. Kyousuke FX: narration: Because... 7 Kyousuke FX: Kyousuke: (...this is the first time a girl has asked me out...!) --------------------------------------------------- p 111 (109) 1 [He stops in surprise at something he sees off-panel.] Kyousuke observation FX: 2 [Ahead of him, Madoka has boarded the train.] sign on post: Keep the city beautiful... 3 [A closer view of Madoka. She stands in thought, gaze directed down.] overhead poster: [left] Mothers, be on the lookout for a suspicious... overhead ad: [middle/partially blocked] Today... Weekly publication, Shounen Ju... overhead poster: [top right/partially blocked] I'm Assistant H, the letterer... overhead poster: [bottom right] Important request!! 4 [Shot of Kyousuke, who stands frozen in surprise.] overhead sign: ...turn West entrance/exit narration: Th-that's... 5 [The doors of the train start to glide shut in front of Madoka...] door FX: 6 [...prompting Kyousuke to rush for the train.] narration: Wait a sec! Kyousuke FX: 7 narration: I'm not going to make it!! --------------------------------------------------- p 112 (110) 1 [He flashes with the Power.] narration: Arg, forced to use it!! 2 [Next to Madoka stands a woman with a handbag. The bag leaps and jams itself between the sliding halves of the door.] woman: Kyaa!! bag FX: 3 door FX: 4 [Doors now fully open, Kyousuke gets on the train.] Kyousuke: Thank you, lady. woman: ...?! N-not at all. You're welcome. 5 Madoka: HUH?! 6 Kyousuke: Hi. 7 Madoka: [averting her gaze] .......... Good morning. --------------------------------------------------- p 113 (111) 1 Kyousuke: Ah! G-good morning. 2 narration: I've got to s-somehow do something about this air of bad feeling that's been there since the disco... 3 Kyousuke: [smiling broadly] Nice day, isn't it? Madoka: [giving off arctic vapors] You think so? It seems to be getting cloudy... 4 [Kyousuke thinks dark thoughts.] 5 [He looks out the train and up at the sky.] Kyousuke: C-come to think of it, there are some clouds out. Yeah! Kyousuke: Let's see... 6 Kyousuke: Ah! That cloud! 7 [A view of the sky with 3 clouds.] Kyousuke: [off] It looks sorta like my sister Kurumi! And the two on the right look like an ice cream and a hamburger... 8 [Madoka looks out at the sky, too.] Kyousuke: Kurumi is a food freak. But she can't get to either one and is rapidly getting left behind. --------------------------------------------------- p 114 (112) 1 Kyousuke: [smiling up at the sky] What do you call that?! Uh, ah... Madoka: [warmly] "A person that goes after two rabbits won't even get one." overhead poster: [right/partly blocked] Kima Orange Road overhead poster: [middle] Grown-up stuff!! overhead poster: [top left] Letters re-cei-ved... overhead poster: [bottom left] "Jump" is awesome!! 2 Madoka: Giggle! Madoka: But it's not just your sister. All girls are food freaks! 3 [A shot of two clouds in the sky.] Kyousuke: [off] Hey! That cloud on the right looks like you... And the cloud that's chasing it... 4 [Kyousuke shuts up.] 5 Kyousuke: (...for some reason, looks like me.) Madoka: [beaming] That doesn't look like a face. It looks more like the sole of a foot. 6 Kyousuke: [blushing/indignant] Th-the sole of a foot?! Madoka: [smiling] ? 7 Kyousuke: By the way, where are you going? conductor: Front of the Park. Front of the Park... door opening FX: 8 Madoka: [walking off] Hmm? Well, right here! Kyousuke: Ah... --------------------------------------------------- p 115 (113) 1 [Exterior shot of a bridge and walkway in the park. 2 [Kyousuke and Madoka walk side-by-side.] Kyousuke: (In the end, I came along with her. I've sure done it now!) 3 [Guys everywhere begin staring at the lovely Madoka.] dude with girl FX: girl with dude: Grr! 4 balding man: Hey, great looking chick! Just my type. 5 [Kyousuke portrait--he looks back at some guys who stare at Madoka.] 6 guys FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 116 (114) 1 Kyousuke FX: 2 [His pov of Madoka, who ignores all the attention.] 3 [His view pans down her torso...centering on her miniskirt.] 4 Kyousuke: (Somehow, Ayukawa looks sexy today...) 5 narration: Is it because she's wearing normal clothes? Gee. No matter how you look at it, she doesn't look like a junior high school student! boy 1: She looks hot. boy 2: Who's that guy walking with her? Kyousuke FX: 6 narration: If we walk together like this... 7 narration: ...then no matter who looks, they'll get the impression of an older sister and younger brother. Oh god. 8 Madoka: [pointing off-panel] Why don't we go for a ride in that? Kyousuke: A b-boat? --------------------------------------------------- p 117 (115) 1 [A shot of two boats on the lake.] 2 [His pov of Madoka, who mans the oars.] Madoka: Well? Pretty good, huh? I used to come here when I was little to ride the boats. 3 Madoka: The hardest part about rowing a boat is to make it go straight. 4 Madoka: [offering the oars] Say, would you like to row? Kyousuke: N-no... Not today! 5 narration: She's quite cheerful today. When she's at school, she seems to be a different person! 6 [Madoka playfully pulls hard at the oars, sending Kyousuke tumbling backwards.] Madoka: Whoops, look out. Madoka rowing FX: Kyousuke: Wah!! 7 Kyousuke: Hey! That's bad for the heart! Madoka: Sorry, sorry. --------------------------------------------------- p 118 (116) 1 Madoka: [giving it some thought] Let's see... You're afraid of the water. [Direct hit!] Kyousuke: Oooh! 2 Kyousuke: [blushing/sweating] That's pretty harsh...! No... I'm not particularly... That is... 3 Madoka: You can't swim! Kyousuke: [in a snit] W-well! 4 Madoka: [teasingly] Don't be so vain! Kyousuke: [embarrassed] Heh heh heh. It's embarrassing...! 5 [Both turn at the sound of...] FX: woman: [off] Kyaaa! 6 [A little boy struggles in the water beneath a high bridge. On that bridge his mother leans over the rails and screams.] woman: Fumiki-chaaan! S-someone! --------------------------------------------------- p 119 (117) 1 Fumiki-chan in-water FX: 2 Kyousuke: I-in a lake this shallow his feet might touch the bottom? 3 Madoka: It gets pretty deep under the bridge. Kyousuke: But if we take the boat over... Madoka: No! The oars will get caught in the weeds over there. 4 Kyousuke: [swiveling his head] Th-then, somebody. Kyousuke FX: 5 Madoka remove-jacket FX: 6 Kyousuke: H-hey, w-wait! Madoka: [about to dive in] What are you talking about?! He's going to drown!! 7 Kyousuke: I'll go! [Madoka gives a look of astonishment.] --------------------------------------------------- p 120 (118) 1 Madoka: [yelling] But you can't swim! 2 Kyousuke: [with a serious expression] It's all right! That was a lie. Kyousuke FX: (i.e., caused by haste) 3 narration: Ayukawa is watching so I can't use the Power here! Madoka: Hmm! 4 [Kyousuke stands, resolute.] narration: But this isn't a job for a girl!! And she's watching me... Kyousuke FX: 5 Kyousuke: [diving in, flash thought] (OH GOD!!) 6 Kyousuke FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 121 (119) 1 [Madoka watches in concern.] 2 Kyousuke: [surfacing] Phew! 3 [He swims...] narration: During that time... 4 [...towards the boy...] narration: ...I don't know what happened... 5 [...and holds the struggling Fumiki-chan's head above water.] narration: I don't remember anything at all, but... Kyousuke: 6 [Above on the bridge, the mother and a crowd of watchers all smile.] woman: Fumiki-chan! 7 [Madoka looks on--it looks like he's gone up a notch in her estimation.] narration: Just... --------------------------------------------------- p 122 (120) 1 [Back on dry ground, Kyousuke stands in a puddle of water, Madoka behind him. A crowd, including boy and mother, greets him. The mother bows.] crowd FX: narration: When I realized it, the child's mother was thanking me and... 2 Madoka: [tossing her jacket on him] Hey, you'll catch a cold. Madoka jacket FX: narration: ...Ayukawa was nice, too. 3 [Kyousuke's and Madoka's pov looking down at a park walkway.] 4 [They sit at a window table in a 2nd-floor coffee shop that overlooks the park.] Madoka: How many lumps? Kyousuke: One, thank you! 5 Madoka: [cheek in hand, smiling] What was that? You said you couldn't swim, yet you swam perfectly well. 6 Kyousuke: W-well... Kyousuke coffee-drinking FX: Kyousuke: (I want to ask why I was able to swim.) --------------------------------------------------- p 123 (121) 1 [Madoka continues to gaze at him in silence.] narration: I certainly don't remember using the Power. Kyousuke coffee-drinking FX: 2 narration: Maybe the only way to explain it is to say, "because Ayukawa was watching." Madoka contemplation FX: [Kyousuke becomes self-conscious at her studious gaze.] 3 Kyousuke: What? Is there something on my face? 4 Madoka: [in merriment] Plankton. Kyousuke: [horrified, wiping at his face] Ehhh?! 5 Kyousuke: [rolling his eyes] ? Madoka FX: 6 Kyousuke: [indignant] What? You can't see that! Madoka: Ah ha ha! 7 Madoka: [smiling, gaze down, twirling her straw] But, being together like this makes it seem like a date! 8 Kyousuke: [going bug-eyed] D-date?! crows-in-the-background FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 124 (122) 1 Kyousuke: Huh?! Kyousuke: [getting up] Ahhh!! Th-that's right. The date with Hikaru-chan! Madoka: Hikaru...? 3 Kyousuke: [sweating] Eh! Ah! 4 Madoka: [giving him a piercing gaze] A date? ...... With Hikaru?! Kyousuke: [plopping back in his seat, mortified] I-I mean... That... 5 [She considers...] 6 Madoka: [smiling, tossing back her hair] Hmm! 7 Madoka: [smiling, getting up] That's right. I have to go home now! Madoka stand-up FX: 8 Madoka: [walking off] Bye. Kyousuke: Ah, your jacket...?! --------------------------------------------------- p 125 (123) 1 Madoka: [looking back, sparks glinting from her stern gaze] Wash it before you return it!! 2 [He watches her walk out the door.] narration: Ayukawa... 3 [Kyousuke races through the station.] narration: And as for the date with Hikaru-chan... Kyousuke running FX: sign: ...ta Street Station 4 narration: ...I'm three and a quarter hours late! Kyousuke FX: 5 Kyousuke: [seeing something off-panel] AH! 6 [It's the message board, dated April 9 <1984>.] narration: "A person that goes after two rabbits..." blackboard: [in huge characters] KYOUSUKE IS A JERK!! [He winces.] 7 Kyousuke: AH-CHOO! I caught a cold... narration: "...won't even get one!" --------------------------------------------------- p ** (124) <**This page does not appear in the wideban version.> [Manami stands in dress and jacket, hands in her pockets.] Title: Character Profile Manami: Kasuga Manami Kouryou Junior High School, 1st year. At present, there isn't a mother in our family. Therefore, I've become the family's homemaker. What? You want to see me with my glasses off? One of these days! who's cuter, me or Kurumi? Of course...! ...you want to say that but since we're identical twins, we look alike, huh? But I'm not the same as Kurumi! ---------------------------------------------------