Kimagure Orange Road "The Lip Secret" Volume 1, Story 3 WB Volume 1, Story 3 Written and illustrated by Matsumoto Izumi This script is based on the existent script by Enrique Conty and Marvin Nakajima. Translation by unknown (pencil annotations found in KOR Volume 1) Original typesetting by : Enrique Conty Additional translation by : Marvin Nakajima, Craig Nishida Compilation by : Spencer C. Hastings Editing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Scott Henry Peter Norby Last revision : 11-11-94 NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis() NOTE: Translation is done from BOTH the WB and normal manga. So depending on which one you have there may be a few extra items. Examples: The subtitles on page 61 (59) are only in the WB'S! The one-page "Character Profiles" at the ends of the first six chapters are omitted in the WB's! Comments on the revision (CN): A few missing lines and the wideban subtitles were translated, as well as many missing FXs, stutters, exclamations and honorifics. During editing, other lines were modified by the members of the translation team. For the purposes of translating, visual cues were also inserted to allow those without the manga to also contribute to the translation effort. [This script is not intended to be a substitute for the manga; you'd only be cheating yourself...] --------------------------------------------------- p 61 (59)--TITLE PAGE [What appears to be a poster adorns this title page. Madoka and Kyousuke, dressed in evening wear, come perilously close to kissing.] MAIN TITLE (at top) The Lip Secret SUB-TITLE (at bottom) Bare Lips, Alluring... Lesson One of a Great Love! --------------------------------------------------- p 62 (60) 1 actress (Hori Chiemi): [teary-eyed] Teacher! (He's feeble-minded and stupid as Gamera but...) I love you! 2 actor: Machumoto! 3 [They embrace...] hug FX: 4 [...and kiss.] 5 [Cut to the 4 pairs of eyes that belong to the Kasuga clan... They goggle.] 6 background reaction-to-TV-show FX: Kurumi FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 63 (61) 1 TV announcer: Following "Elevator Girl Story" at this time... TV screen: End 2 Kurumi: Hey. Why do they say that kisses taste like lemons?! Kasuga family heartbeat FX: 3 Manami: Ah... Takashi: Oh... 4 Manami: [getting up] Oh, I still have to clear away the kitchen...! Takashi: [hiding behind his paper] Hmm... Choushuu vs. Fujinami , a no-contest again. 5 Kyousuke: Err... Ah... I... Uh... 6 [Kurumi stares intently at her brother.] Kurumi contemplation FX: Kyousuke: [embarrassed] Hahaha... 7 Kurumi: [getting up and walking off towards the kitchen] No matter how I look at it, it seems unlikely you have the experience, oniichan, so even if I ask you, you wouldn't know. Right, Manami-chaaan? Kyousuke: [thinking dark thoughts] .......... --------------------------------------------------- p 64 (62) 1 [Exterior shot looking up at a school building.] 2 Hatta: [bawling] Endurance will endure the falls, memories will bear the divergences, everyone. guys: [all bawling] Hey! Hey! Komatsu: [bawling] My friends, we must endure, we can do nothing else but endure! 3 Kyousuke: [curious] Something happened? Hatta: [still bawling] Shit! With my Chiemi... Komatsu: [also bawling] Crying is so disgraceful, Hatta! 4 Komatsu: [angrily] Didn't you see the "Elevator Girl Story" kiss scene yesterday?! Kyousuke: I saw it... Was there something wrong with it? 5 Hatta: [grabbing Kyousuke by the lapels] "Was there something wrong with it?" You bastaaaard! You traitor!! 6 Komatsu: To our Hori Chiemi Fan Club, that kiss scene was just about as serious as an A-bomb falling on us!! Kyousuke: Such overreacting... 7 Kyousuke: ...but isn't that acting? Komatsu: [enraged] The fact is that it was done!! --------------------------------------------------- p 65 (63) 1 [The guys turn their backs and walk off.] Komatsu: As for that bastard Kazama... Kyousuke: [miffed] (I'm not going to talk to them today.) 2 [He turns to watch Madoka, who stands alone at the open window, gazing out.] class jabber FX: 3 [View from behind of Madoka at the window...] student 1: [off] Ha ha ha. student 2: [off] That can't be true... student 3: [off] You don't believe me? It's true I tell you. 4 [Pov shifts so we can see her face. She is deep in thought.] 5 narration: Come to think of it... 6 narration: I've never seen Ayukawa talking with other classmates... --------------------------------------------------- p 66 (64) 1 narration: I wonder if the reason no one approaches her is because she is rebellious and everyone is scared of her, or because she is a classroom nuisance... 2 narration: At times like these Ayukawa seems so lonely. 3 [View from outside the window looking down at Madoka. She rests her chin in her hands and continues to gaze outside.] --------------------------------------------------- p 67 (65) [This page is bordered in black...] 1 [Kyousuke rests his hand on Madoka's shoulder. She turns around in surprise.] Kyousuke: [in a serious manner] You seem depressed... If you like you can let me listen to your problems, Ayukawa... Kyousuke hand-on-shoulder FX: 2 Madoka: Well... To tell the truth, I... 3 Madoka: ...from the first time we met at those steps... 4 Madoka: [rushing into his arms] ...I fell in love with you...! Kyousuke: [clasping her tightly] So that's how it was...! 5 [They gaze into each other's eyes...] Kyousuke: M-Madoka! Madoka: Kyousuke-san! 6 [...and kiss.] --------------------------------------------------- p 68 (66) 1 [End of daydream!] kiss FX: 2 [Kyousuke and Komatsu gaze into each other's eyes--from about 5-cm apart...] 3 Kyousuke and Komatsu: [leaping apart] Yeaargh!! 4 Komatsu: [pointing a finger] Kasuga! Y-you had those tendencies?! Kyousuke: [agitated] C-can't be. 5 [Both touch hands to lips and stare at each other calculatingly.] Kyousuke: Komatsu, what did you have for lunch...?! Komatsu: It was fried liver with leeks, and gyouza! : Yeah--a "pot-sticker"!> 6 [Both turn aside and look close to heaving.] Kyousuke and Komatsu: Bleaugh!! 7 Kyousuke and Komatsu: (Th-that was my first kiss...!!) Kyousuke: (Who says it tastes like lemons? Idiot!) --------------------------------------------------- p 69 (67) 1 [Both race out of the classroom, clamping hands to their mouths.] Komatsu: YAAAH! Kyousuke: PHOOEY! Kyousuke and Komatsu: I-I've got to wash out my mouth! 2 Kyousuke: [pausing to think] (I'm sure there was a water fountain around the corner.) 3 [He swivels his head to look.] Kyousuke FX: narration: What the hell, I'm going!! 4 Kyousuke: Nobody's looking. [He dematerializes...] Kyousuke teleport FX: 5 [...and rematerializes about 35 feet down the hall, near a corner.] Kyousuke teleport FX: 6 [He runs down the hall. From our vantage we see Hikaru walking just around the corner.] Kyousuke running FX: Hikaru walking FX: 7 [No art, just a lot of shooting stars...] collision FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 70 (68) 1 [More stars grace this panel...] narration: Wha... What's this...?! narration: What was that soft thing that touched by lips just now for a moment?! Hikaru: [off] Ouch. 2 [Our vision returns. Hikaru lies on her back with Kyousuke plastered on top of her. Kyousuke turns to look at her, from about 5-cm away.] Hikaru: Hey bozo! Watch where you're going!! Kyousuke heartbeat FX: Kyousuke: .......... 3 [She fastens her angry yet beautiful glare on him.] Hikaru: How long do you plan to be on top of me? 4 Kyousuke: [getting up on hands-and-knees] Ah! S-sorry!! narration: I-it's the same feeling I had when I kissed Komatsu! No, it seemed to feel better. 5 [Both pause in sudden thought.] Kyousuke and Hikaru: AH! --------------------------------------------------- p 71 (69) 1 [Hikaru visualizes the guy in the gym who tossed that miraculous one-armed shot. She blushes.] narration: Th-this is the guy who made that amazing shot in the gym...!! crows-in-background FX: 2 [Kyousuke visualizes the girl who was with Madoka that fateful day when he got slapped merely for pointing out the scientific link between cigarette smoke and fetal abnormalities.] Hikaru flashback: Eh? Whaaat? Ayukawa-san, is he your friend? narration: I'm certain this is the girl that was with Ayukawa the day I transferred here...!! 3 Kyousuke: [flash thought] (I-is it possible that I just kissed this girl?) Hikaru: [flash thought] (Wh-why am I blushing?) 4 [Still perched over Hikaru, Kyousuke forces a smile...] Kyousuke and Hikaru: U-uhh... 5 [From behind, a hand reaches out to touch Kyousuke on his shoulder.] hand FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 72 (70) 1 Kyousuke and Hikaru: [looking back and up] AHH! [It's a teacher...] 2 [Pov from behind Hikaru and Kyousuke, looking over their heads at what they see. Namely, Ootsuka-sensei, the PE teacher, who stands with arms crossed.] Ootsuka-sensei: What are you two doing?!! Kyousuke: [sitting back next to Hikaru] N-no... That is... Hikaru: [sitting up] (Arg! Ootsuka the P.E. teacher!!) 3 Kyousuke: (Th-that's right. This is a school hallway!!) Hikaru: [fearful] (Caught by the wrong guy.) 4 Hikaru: [getting up and racing off] See ya, Darling! Kyousuke: [yelling] Heyyy! 5 Kyousuke: [embarrassed] Uh... Ha ha ha ha. Ootsuka-sensei: [in Kyousuke's face] Da... Darrrling?! Ootsuka-sensei FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 73 (71) 1 [Exterior shot of a school building.] narration: After school... 2 sign: Faculty Room 3 Matsuoka-sensei: [seated, smiling] Ah, so it was just a misunderstanding, hmm... Kyousuke: [standing, embarrassed] I'm very sorry. 4 Matsuoka-sensei: You know, I had heard from Ootsuka-sensei that you were harassing a girl in a hallway in broad daylight, so... Kyousuke: Harassing...? Don't be absurd. 5 Kyousuke: Even I was surprised, too. I-I have no reason to do a thing like that. sign: School motto: Pureness Is Undoubtedly the Way to Employment. 6 [Madoka is seated in front of another teacher, but hidden from Kyousuke's view behind a blackboard partition. She registers surprise at hearing...] Matsuoka-sensei: [off] Kasuga-kun, you wouldn't be able to do a thing like that! Madoka: (I wonder what's meant by that?) --------------------------------------------------- p 74 (72) 1 Madoka: (Kasuga...) 2 Madoka: [turning to the left, towards the sound of voices] .......... teacher in front of Madoka: What are you looking at, Ayukawa-kun? 3 Ootsuka-sensei: [entering] But, Kasuga. You shouldn't get involved with that girl!! 4 Kyousuke: [surprised] Eh?! 5 Kyousuke: Why is that? Ootsuka-sensei: That girl is Hiyama Hikaru. 6 Madoka: [flash-thought] (HIKARU?!) 7 Ootsuka-sensei: [off] I haven't heard very many good things about her. [Madoka gives a displeased expression.] 8 Ootsuka-sensei: [forcefully] From what I've heard about her language, clothing, hair... She seems to be rebellious, and the average student appears to be afraid of getting close to her! --------------------------------------------------- p 75 (73) 1 [Kyousuke takes this all in...] Ootsuka-sensei: [off] Discos and arcades, etc, etc... 2 Kyousuke: Well.......... 3 Kyousuke: That girl only SEEMS LIKE a delinquent, but she isn't ACTUALLY one, right?! Ootsuka-sensei: Eh?! 4 Ootsuka-sensei: [taken aback] But... That is... Uh... Someone with those kinds of rumors floating around them can't be a straight person. 5 Kyousuke: [sternly] ...... Did she definitely do something bad? Matsuoka-sensei: [gently holding Kyousuke by the shoulder] K-Kasuga-kun... Kyousuke: Definitely! Ootsuka-sensei: No-o-o, not yet... 6 Kyousuke: [slamming his palms onto the desk] THEN THERE'S NO NEED TO CALL HER A DELINQUENT!! Kyousuke table-pounding FX: 7 Matsuoka- and Ootsuka-sensei: [cringing] Yow! --------------------------------------------------- p 76 (74) 1 [Matsuoka- and Ootsuka-sensei blush and sweat. Other teachers watch from the wings.] Matsuoka-sensei: Kasuga-kun... other teachers FX: 2 [Madoka sits behind the partition and listens, eyes wide.] Kyousuke: [off] But, isn't that so? 3 Kyousuke: [hopping mad] Listen closely. You too, Matsuoka-sensei! That girl really hasn't done anything that definitely leads to delinquency! Kyousuke jumping FX: Matsuoka-sensei: [placatingly] Oh! We got it! We got it, Kasuga! So... 4 Kyousuke: [forcefully] Is it okay for teachers who are in a position to guide people, to judge a person solely on the basis of rumors?!! 5 [Madoka facial portrait--stunned.] Kyousuke: [off] In that case... 6 Kyousuke: ...I feel sorry for her!! [Madoka smiles and tosses back her hair.] Madoka: Heh! --------------------------------------------------- p 77 (75) 1 [Behind Kyousuke, Madoka is shown to the door by the teacher she was with.] door FX: teacher: That's all for today, Ayukawa. [Kyousuke pauses in mid-lecture...] 2 [...and turns around.] narration: Ayukawa... Eh...?! 3 [Madoka looks back at him before she exits.] 4 [Kyousuke stands perplexed.] narration: Wh-why was Ayukawa in the faculty office?! 5 Madoka: [exiting] Excuse me! 6 [He watches her leave...] narration: Why in the world was she called in here...? 7 Kyousuke: [turning back to the now-chastened teachers] Ah, sensei, where was I? Matsuoka- and Ootsuka-sensei: [sitting huddled together at a desk] Come on... We got the point... 8 Kyousuke: [exiting] Excuse me...! door FX: --------------------------------------------------- p 78 (76) 1 [In the hall, he lets out a sigh.] Kyousuke: Phew. 2 [In reflection, he blushes and sweats...] narration: I did something pretty outrageous... I slipped up and lost my cool again!! door FX: 3 Ootsuka-sensei: [embarrassed] Wah ha ha! Oh boy, we were going to lecture him but I feel as if we got it instead, huh, Matsuoka-sensei?! Matsuoka-sensei: [looking exhausted] Ahh... 4 upper banner [partial]: Summoned Today... lower banner [partial]: [Something off-panel catches Kyousuke's eye.] Madoka: [off] Professor Kasuga, thank you for your great lecture! 5 [His pov of Madoka as she leans back against the wall, holding 2 book bags. She doesn't meet his eye.] 6 [Kyousuke facial portrait--no expression, slight blush.] 7 [Madoka turns to look at him.] 8 Madoka: [holding out his bag to him] Your bag is pretty light. Kyousuke: .......... --------------------------------------------------- p 79 (77) 1 Madoka: [beaming] I'll walk you to the gate! Madoka FX: 2 Kyousuke: [wide-eyed] You took the trouble... To wait here for me? 3 [Isolated shot of their feet as they walk down the hall.] Madoka: If you leave your bag in the classroom... It might get stolen! 4 [Pov from behind as they walk down the hall.] Madoka: A great, distinguished teacher made the fine remark that there seem to be delinquents in this school. Kyousuke: Ha ha ha. --------------------------------------------------- p 80 (78) 1 [Exterior shot of the school grounds, the open school gate, buildings in the distance, and the dusk sky.] narration: Ayukawa... Is a nice girl after all. narration: But even though it was only in a daydream, having the girl I kissed be next to me somehow makes me feel self-conscious! 2 [They head to the gate, still on school ground.] Madoka: You've got courage, Kasuga-kun! I was amazed... Kyousuke: [hand behind head] Aww... I'm embarrassed. 3 Madoka: [looking meaningfully at him] By the way... 4 Madoka: [bending at the waist to peer up at him] Kasuga-kun, have you ever really kissed someone? [Kyousuke stops and stares straight ahead.] Kyousuke heartbeat FX: 5 [He looks off into the distance, in thought...] narration: Kiss, hmm... 6 [...and visualizes facial portraits of Hikaru and Komatsu. Komatsu looks ill, sticking out his tongue and saying something...] narration: I think I've kissed 3 times today! My first kiss was with Komatsu... The second one was with that girl Hikaru, even though I don't know for sure if I really kissed her... And lastly, Ayukawa!! Komatsu: Bleah! --------------------------------------------------- p 81 (79) 1 Kyousuke: [looking up at the sky] Ahh... Have I or haven't I... Madoka: Hmmph. 2 Kyousuke: But I distinctly remember the one in my dream! [Madoka stops in surprise.] narration: Wah! What am I saying?! 3 Madoka: [smiling gently] Hmm... Shall I try and guess? it's a singer or something like that. 4 Madoka: [beaming] Hori Chiemi! narration: If I said it was you... Kyousuke: [pointing to Madoka] Ah! You're right! 5 narration: ...would I be slapped again?! Kyousuke: You saw it yesterday? Madoka: Yup. 6 [Dreamy facial portrait of Madoka, eyes closed, head tilted slightly down...] narration: If I dare to reach out my hand it seems I could touch your red lips which rest before my eyes... It's the dusk that makes me think like that! --------------------------------------------------- p ** (80) <**This page does not appear in the wideban version.> [Hikaru stands in coveralls and a man's shirt and tie.] Title: Character Profile Hikaru: Hiyama Hikaru Kouryou Junior High School, 1st year. Madoka-san and I are childhood friends. I'm a single child so Madoka-san is like a big sister to me and I rely on her. I might be a bit rebellious but deep down I'm a well-mannered girl. What do I like? Of coouuuuuurse! Kyousuke-sempai!! ---------------------------------------------------